Twilight of the Galaxy: Reloaded (OOC, Open)

[Zeon Refounded]

Waiting for you Zeon.

Am I supposed to be the people in the brown uniforms?

[The Moscow Metro Red Line]

Waiting for you Zeon.

Am I supposed to be the people in the brown uniforms?

Yeah, I can't remember what Zeon uniforms look like. Wait they were green right?

[The Greater Gambia]

Promission to build on a framework established by the data compiled here? Minus the galactic control part of course.

I'd say change some stuff about the Asari.

[Zeon Refounded]

Yeah, I can't remember what Zeon uniforms look like. Wait they were green right?

http://www.nationstates.net/nation=zeon_refounded/detail=factbook/id=642748

And I have two representatives at the Gala. Kitz is talking to the UNS (reply will be out soon) and Kotz is doing nothing.

[Taigawa]

Promission to build on a framework established by the data compiled here? Minus the galactic control part of course.

I'd say change some stuff about the Asari.

That was based on Mass Effect's actual lore. I can't really do that, as I tried to be faithful to the lore of the series they're from.

[Oscalantine]

Thanks for letting me know ^^

According to what you said... and based on the OP... I am limited by tech. So I either need to create a new civilization from scratch or ask OP if I can have slight exception to the rules.

I'll TG OP first before I give up ^^ FT is really rare, so I want to expand upon my already existing framework that I like rather than try to make entire lore from scratch.

See, this guy gets it!

Wait... Thafudge happened here that we consider common sense as signs of good neighbor again? I am still pretty clueless about what is going on in the RP XDDD

[The Greater Gambia]

I'd say change some stuff about the Asari.

That was based on Mass Effect's acual lore. I can't really do that.

One of the rules here is no pre-existing sci-fi nations. Taking aspects of various ones is okay, though.

[The V O I D]

I posted. The Conglomerate has generic messages with editable variables it sends to people. That's how little it actually cares about you; it just wants your money, profit, and in the case of the Covenant, it wants your big guns pointed at its enemies; or at least, not pointed at it.

Also, to decipher the message; if the Covenant accepts the meeting and such, they need to be at Sayran in 3 standard days IC wise; while for the UNS, it's in two standard weeks, I think I wrote.

Oh! And this should go without saying, but even when speaking to ambassadorial officers and those closest to them, the Board of Directors uses voice distortion on top of the silhouetting; makes biological sex, and general accents, indecipherable. All you hear are the words they say, as well as them being called a number.

[Taigawa]

That was based on Mass Effect's acual lore. I can't really do that.

One of the rules here is no pre-existing sci-fi nations. Taking aspects of various ones is okay, though.

Ah, I did'nt intend to actually have the Asari Republics in this. That's just in the factbooks and only applies to my OOC nation.

[Shadowwell]

Question

For a mercanary group would i just fill out a Faction app?
Also what is considered an unnatral ability race wise?

[The Greater Gambia]

Hey guys, I want you all to be honest. What do you think of my writing?

[The Moscow Metro Red Line]

Hey guys, I want you all to be honest. What do you think of my writing?

I'm very used to your writing at this point and I've always thought it was not only acceptable but very interesting most of the time. However with all these conversations I know it can be hard to pace things.

Update: Why do you ask?

[True Refuge]

Moscow, Gambia, I have returned from my 5 day camp without technology.

However, I am currently very, very tired and will hold off writing posts for anything for a short while. Sorry to keep you waiting further

[The Moscow Metro Red Line]

Moscow, Gambia, I have returned from my 5 day camp without technology.

However, I am currently very, very tired and will hold off writing posts for anything for a short while. Sorry to keep you waiting further

Take your time. I had all my wisdom teeth removed so that was fun all day.

[Maljaratas]

Question

For a mercanary group would i just fill out a Faction app?
Also what is considered an unnatral ability race wise?

Likely yes.
Unnatural abilities for races are those that are rare for the individuals of the species to have. If your entire race/most of if are psionic, then it goes under traits or whatever. If only a small minority are, then unnatural.

[Maljaratas]

So. I will be contacting people via the gala, and I don't care who.

So far I have Moscow on the list. Anyone else? (You're all still free to contact them without telling me if you wish)

[Korhal IVV]

-Base Information-
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(Image)
Nation Name: United Federation of Races(U.F.R.)
Government Type: Parliamentary Democracy
National Leader(s): Grand Minister Dal'yth Primos
Population: 645 billion
Star Systems: 10,000
History Of Your Nation: The United Federation of Races is a massive alliance of various codependent races. Spread impossibly thin over the far western fringes of the Milky Way, it holds its power over 10,000 systems. Its denizens include the Dwarves, a subspecies of humans that have adapted to the high gravity conditions of their chosen colonies, Turanir, a race of psionically resistant humanoids that have attained high technlogical advancement after a mere 7,000 years after attaining full sentience, the octopid Octors, the impossibly ancient Karkeos, a race of medically immortal dragon like creatures, and amkng many others.

The founders of the Federation were the Karkeos, in the year 2498. The Karkeos saw the other races squabbling over petty things, and they determined to stop that. By diplomacy and skillful words, the Karkeos managed to unite the myriad races that were scattered near their own birthplace. This was a tenous task that took hundreds of years to complete.

The first group to agree to the Karkeos's ideals of unity were the Turanir. The Turanir knew full well that if the Turanir didn't unite in the middle of a disastrous civil war(mostly because of the Vurazans's alleged mind control abilities), they would have might as well led themselves to a slow racial suicide. Together, the Karkeos and the Turanir began efforts to unite the other races as well. Second came in the Dwarves. The Dwarves, for one, had no real interest in conflict; they'd rather live out their lives mining gold rather than wage war in some distant land. It is unknown whether the Dwarves are full members of the UFR or are simply trading partners or techno allies. However, it is known that many Dwarven worlds have fully integrated into the Federation, and more are expected to do so as well in the following years.

After several successful attempts, the real challenge came in when the Federation attempted to speak sense into the Octors. These highly advanced deep sea creatures, however, were prideful at first;they thought it better that they be on their own. It took a massive attack from a swarm of xenomorphs and the subsequent assistance of UFR forces for the Octors to realize that being alone is not a very good idea.

Now, the Federation never ceases to find out races that it may integrate into itself;it believes that unity is the only option. The Karkeos leads the UFR from their halls of plasma and fire, and they shall do so till the very end.
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-Military Information-
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Military Information:
s)
Military Population: 30 billion
Military Branches:
Military Strengths:
Military Weaknesses: Managing such a racially diverse military is no easy task.
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-Diplomatic/Economic Information-
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Languages:
Foreign Policy: (Ranges from First Encounter Policy to anything else of Importance)
Number Of Species: 49
Economic Strengths:
Economic Weaknesses:
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-Other-
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Technological Bases: Starcraft, Warhammer
Activity on NS: (Something that everyone can use so that they know when to reply to your Posts and such)
RP Example: (You can either link a past post or even create an Example for the Op and Co-Ops to refer to)
Supporting Factions within your Nation: (Some Nations also have factions that support your nation, Optional)
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Species Name: Dwarves
Appearance: They have a human-like appearance, but with notable difference. They are much shorter in height, and their muscular and skeletal systems are much stronger and thicker. They usually brandish stylish beards.
Biology/Anatomy: Having decended from humans that adapted to the high gravity conditions of their mineral rich colony planets, they have deviated little from the original human form;of all the subspecies of humans they resemble normal humans the most. The notable differences is that they are much shorter in height(they never get taller than 4 feet), and have much thicker and more powerful bodies.
Natural Abilities: Dwarves are inherently masters of machinery and can fix broken machines with the greatest of ease.
Unnatural abilities: Robotic control - Certain Dwarves are capable of controlling robots using only their minds. They are called Machinarium Magisters.
Breathable Gas: Oxygen
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Life Span: 150 - 200 years.
Reproduction: Sexual
Intelligence Level: Sentient
Species Type: Humanoid
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Population Percentage: 98%
Notable Individuals: (If Any)
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Brief Description of Species: The Dwarves are a race of abhumans that have adapted to the harsh conditions on their chosen colonies for many centuries. They, together with the rest of the UF.R.'s races, stand as one.
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Species Name: Turanir
Appearance: The Turanir are humanoid. Their skin is blue, and their skin exudes almost no moisture. Their faces are flat and lack noses. For a nose they have what looks like a Y-shaped breathing slit in where a nose would be. They have hoofed feet, and on average stand as tall as an average human, but are slightly physically weaker due to the weaker gravity of their homeworld.
Biology/Anatomy: Their bodies exude almost no moisture. In addition, there are three main types of Turanir, which stem from what conditions have their ancestors have adapted in. The Flame Turanir are taller and physically stronger than other Taugranaths, and are descended from those Turanir that stayed in the arid plains of their homeworld. The Earth Turanir are those who went to the river valleys to build cities, and are shorter and stockier than the others, but have superior technical intellects. The Air Turanir are those in the mountains, and are very tall and slender, and act as pilots and crew for ships and space stations, as ever since the Turanir have reached to the stars, the Air Turanir have spent entire generations in zero-gravity conditions, rendering them very vulnerable to injury when placed even momentarily in medium gravity.
Natural Abilities: Naturally resistant to psionic attacks. They are also very highly adaptive in a technological level.
Unnatural abilities: Another type of Turanir called the Vurazans are caoable of some kind ofmind control; all Turanir seem to have an iresistible compulsion to follow every order of a Vurazan. The Vurazans, for one, are responsible for the Turanir's intergration into the UFR.
Breathable Gas: Oxygen, CO2
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Life Span: 125-150
Reproduction: Sexual
Intelligence Level: Sentient
Species Type: Humanoid
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Population Percentage: 100%
Notable Individuals: (If Any)
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Brief Description of Species: The Turanir are a race of humanoids that follow every order of their higher
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[Yekrenia]

Species Name:
- (Chinese Name): 大漢斯
- (Pinyin Transliteration): Dà hàn sī
- (English Name): Dasian
Appearance:
- Example Image #01
- Example Image #02
Biology/Anatomy: In a basic description, Dasian anatomy is quite identical to Homo Sapien anatomy; however, the Dasians are notable for four features that considerably rare in the Homo Sapien species. Compared to the average Homo Sapien, Dasians are rather distinctively lightweight (45kg to 55kg) and short (140cm to 160cm), and with their long and lean limbs, Dasians can be mistaken for a kind of abominable form of Gibbon Apes upon first glance. In addition, due to the Dasian's short body and small frame, Dasians are skinny yet fit; however, because of their ectomorph body type and low body fat, Dasians are surprisingly difficult to distinguish between both male and female. Elsewhere, Dasians do not retain any nostrils or a nose, there is instead a small bump that naturally serves a tiny cavity (which acts as a secondary lung, and provides heat and isolation to both the brain and mouth). Lastly, because of the temperate climate and natural habitat of the Dasian's homeplanet (Dasan 01), Dasians typically have white coloured skin; however, with over 9,570 star systems in the Union of Sovereign Dasian Republics (or simply known as, the Dasian Union), Dasians can have various skin colours, such as, tanned or dark.
Natural Abilities:
- High Fertility Rate (2 to 10 Children per average Dasian female)
- Incredible Agility
- Incrediably Adaptive
Unnatural Abilities: N/A
Breathable Gas:
- Dry Nitrogen (Air)
- Oxygen
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Life Span: 32 to 49 Years
Reproduction: Sexually
Intelligence Level: Sentient
Species Type: Mammalian
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Population Percentage: 100%
Notable Individuals: Ai Jian Peng (and so much more)
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Brief Description of Species: The Dasians are a collective, tightly-knit, industrious, and proud species who are fighting in their military obligation to secure the future and security of their own kind.
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PART 2 / PART 3

REQUESTING CRITICAL ASSESSMENTS AND CRITIQUE

[Veroxia]

Species Name:
- (Chinese Name): 大漢斯
- (Pinyin Transliteration): Dà hàn sī
- (English Name): Dasian
Appearance:
- Example Image #01
- Example Image #02
Biology/Anatomy: In a basic description, Dasian anatomy is quite identical to Homo Sapien anatomy; however, the Dasians are notable for four features that considerably rare in the Homo Sapien species. Compared to the average Homo Sapien, Dasians are rather distinctively lightweight (45kg to 55kg) and short (140cm to 160cm), and with their long and lean limbs, Dasians can be mistaken for a kind of abominable form of Gibbon Apes upon first glance. In addition, due to the Dasian's short body and small frame, Dasians are skinny yet fit; however, because of their ectomorph body type and low body fat, Dasians are surprisingly difficult to distinguish between both male and female. Elsewhere, Dasians do not retain any nostrils or a nose, there is instead a small bump that naturally serves a tiny cavity (which acts as a secondary lung, and provides heat and isolation to both the brain and mouth). Lastly, because of the temperate climate and natural habitat of the Dasian's homeplanet (Dasan 01), Dasians typically have white coloured skin; however, with over 9,570 star systems in the Union of Sovereign Dasian Republics (or simply known as, the Dasian Union), Dasians can have various skin colours, such as, tanned or dark.
Natural Abilities:
- High Fertility Rate (2 to 10 Children per average Dasian female)
- Incredible Agility
- Incrediably Adaptive
Unnatural Abilities: N/A
Breathable Gas:
- Dry Nitrogen (Air)
- Oxygen
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Life Span: 32 to 49 Years
Reproduction: Sexually
Intelligence Level: Sentient
Species Type: Mammalian
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Population Percentage: 100%
Notable Individuals: Ai Jian Peng (and so much more)
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Brief Description of Species: The Dasians are a collective, tightly-knit, industrious, and proud species who are fighting in their military obligation to secure the future and security of their own kind.
#Twilight2 - Do Not Remove, as this is to track all Applications

PART 2 / PART 3

REQUESTING CRITICAL ASSESSMENTS AND CRITIQUE

Just my opinion, but I see the application so far as excellent. I'm curious as to know why they have a low lifespan; is it due to stature or some other reason?

[Shadowwell]

Question

For a mercanary group would i just fill out a Faction app?
Also what is considered an unnatral ability race wise?

Likely yes.
Unnatural abilities for races are those that are rare for the individuals of the species to have. If your entire race/most of if are psionic, then it goes under traits or whatever. If only a small minority are, then unnatural.

Well most of the race will have been Psionic, but not all of the race used the abilities the same way. While some could bolster their already impressive physical abilities others could bend the elements to their whim, albeit in different ways and to different degrees.

[Taigawa]

-Base Information-
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Nation Name: Thessian Ecumene
Government Type: Representative monarchy
National Leader(s): Empress Neyla Haijira Patalia
Population: 945 billion
Star Systems: 15,000
History Of Your Nation: The people that would become the Ecumene were once hunter-gathers who sought only to survive. Eventually however, they discovered alien ruins on their home planet and were thus able to evole sooner then they would have otherwise. The Ecumene long ago found out how to reverse-engineer the alien ruins on their home planet, leading to a technological ascendacy early in it's history. The people went from primitive hunter-gathers to an industrial society in a little over two thousand years. From that basis, the people, who at this stage fought very few wars began to form first republic-based governments centered around powerful city-states. These city-states later became regional powers and later through diplomacy, nations.

These nations consolidated their power and as communication and tranportation technology advanced. After a few centuries of this, these nations reached the space age and as globalization advanced, adopted a single, unifying identity. People were no longer identified as a nationality, but as a single, unified people. This unifying of nationalities allowed them to slowly expand over the centuries and to continue their technological advancement. Within a century, the home system had been fully colonized. Within the next thousand years the Ecumene spread to it's fullest extent, using it's technology to aid in this. For the past Malinium, the Ecumene has been content to remain aloof from the other powers and consolidate it's power and continue to advance technologically.
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-Military Information-
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Military Information:
Weapons
Viehicles
Starships
Military Population: 50 billion
Military Branches: Imperial Army, Imperial Navy, Honor Guard, Huntress Cadres, Commandos, Warrior-Servents (AI-controlled machines and drones)
Military Strengths: Highly advanced and powerful weapons, highly-durable spaceships, united identity, AI-based military units, very accurate and fast FTL transit
Military Weaknesses: Unified military doctrine, weaknesses to lazer/plasma weapons, High reliance on AI
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-Diplomatic/Economic Information-
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Languages:
Foreign Policy: (Ranges from First Encounter Policy to anything else of Importance) The Mantle of Responsibility is seen as a benchmark on dealing with other nations and less-advanced civilizations. That being said, the Ecumene is isolationist.
Number Of Species: 4
Economic Strengths: Unified currency, stable market
Economic Weaknesses: Stagnating economy due to isolationalism
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Technological Bases: Halo, Mass Effect, Xenonauts, Stargate, Resistance: Fall of Man
Activity on NS: (Something that everyone can use so that they know when to reply to your Posts and such) On every day
RP Example: (You can either link a past post or even create an Example for the Op and Co-Ops to refer to) You guys know me
Supporting Factions within your Nation: (Some Nations also have factions that support your nation, Optional)
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Species Name: Thessian feline
Appearance: Humanoid, though raging in appearearance from house-cat-like to tiger-like
Biology/Anatomy: Anatomy is similar to humans, though they have fur and tails. Cat-like features predominate. They are stronger, faster, and more agile then humans.
Natural Abilities: Night vision, resistance to cold, ability to safely eat raw meat.
Unnatural abilities: Magic- A few individuals are capable of using elemental magic.
Breathable Gas: Oxygen
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Life Span: 250 - 400 years.
Reproduction: Sexual
Intelligence Level: sapiant
Species Type: Humanoid
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Population Percentage: 78%
Notable Individuals: (If Any) Empress Neyla
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Brief Description of Species: The feline race are a slim, cat-baced race that are able to subtily convey emotions via their tails. Their bodies predepose them to wearing only light clothing due to their natural fur.
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Species Name: Asari
Appearance:
Biology/Anatomy: All asari are biologically female, and have anatomy similar to human females. They have a complection ranging from blue to purple, and crests on their heads composed of fused cartilege
Natural Abilities: All Asari are natural Biotics, the older an individual Asari is, the more powerful of a biotic she becomes. Matriarchs are the strongest; these powers are comparable to PK abilities. Asari can mate with any race or gender by attuning their nervous systems to that of their partner. Reguardless of their partner's race, the resulting offspring will always be asari.
Unnatural abilities: A few Asai are born as an Ardat-Yakshi. These Asari are sterile, but are plagued with an insatiable, almost predatory desire to mate. However, every time they succeed in doing so, their partner dies. They also become more powerful biotics after each successful mating, and as such a young Ardat-Yakshi could potentially rival a matriarch in biotic power.
Breathable Gas: Oxygen,
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Life Span: 1,000 years
Reproduction: Asexual, though sexual reproduction is possible
Intelligence Level: Sapiant
Species Type: Humanoid
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Population Percentage: 22%
Notable Individuals: (If Any)
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Brief Description of Species: Asari are long-lived race that value coroperation. Due to their long life spans, the Asari are capable of organizing and managing tasks that may take decades or even centuries to pay off.
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[The Orson Empire]

Yekrenia's app and Taigawa's app are accepted.

[The Fallen Jedi]

ALL Applications to the Archive please, survey is pending.

[Yekrenia]

Species Name:
- (Chinese Name): 大漢斯
- (Pinyin Transliteration): Dà hàn sī
- (English Name): Dasian
Appearance:
- Example Image #01
- Example Image #02
Biology/Anatomy: In a basic description, Dasian anatomy is quite identical to Homo Sapien anatomy; however, the Dasians are notable for four features that considerably rare in the Homo Sapien species. Compared to the average Homo Sapien, Dasians are rather distinctively lightweight (45kg to 55kg) and short (140cm to 160cm), and with their long and lean limbs, Dasians can be mistaken for a kind of abominable form of Gibbon Apes upon first glance. In addition, due to the Dasian's short body and small frame, Dasians are skinny yet fit; however, because of their ectomorph body type and low body fat, Dasians are surprisingly difficult to distinguish between both male and female. Elsewhere, Dasians do not retain any nostrils or a nose, there is instead a small bump that naturally serves a tiny cavity (which acts as a secondary lung, and provides heat and isolation to both the brain and mouth). Lastly, because of the temperate climate and natural habitat of the Dasian's homeplanet (Dasan 01), Dasians typically have white coloured skin; however, with over 9,570 star systems in the Union of Sovereign Dasian Republics (or simply known as, the Dasian Union), Dasians can have various skin colours, such as, tanned or dark.
Natural Abilities:
- High Fertility Rate (2 to 10 Children per average Dasian female)
- Incredible Agility
- Incrediably Adaptive
Unnatural Abilities: N/A
Breathable Gas:
- Dry Nitrogen (Air)
- Oxygen
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Life Span: 32 to 49 Years
Reproduction: Sexually
Intelligence Level: Sentient
Species Type: Mammalian
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Population Percentage: 100%
Notable Individuals: Ai Jian Peng (and so much more)
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Brief Description of Species: The Dasians are a collective, tightly-knit, industrious, and proud species who are fighting in their military obligation to secure the future and security of their own kind.
#Twilight2 - Do Not Remove, as this is to track all Applications

PART 2 / PART 3

REQUESTING CRITICAL ASSESSMENTS AND CRITIQUE

Just my opinion, but I see the application so far as excellent. I'm curious as to know why they have a low lifespan; is it due to stature or some other reason?

Dasians have a low lifespan primarily due to both cardiovascular-related diseases and blood disorders as well. For a humanoid species that can easily generate an enormous native population, Dasian females are on the receiving end of hazardous childbirth complications, such as, spontaneous abortions, toxemia, hypertension, placenta previa, miscarriage, chromosomal problems, and so much more. Worst still, due to the naturally small size and lightweight of the average Dasian, cardiovascular diseases are the most common cause of death found in the entire Dasian race; however, it should be noted that not all Dasians die from cardiovascular illnesses (as some if not all Dasians are fortunate to die from old age). Dasian females are especially prone to such cardiovascular diseases as childbirth complications place enormous strain upon the body and internal organs of the average Dasian female (especially the heart and arteries); therefore, Dasian females can contract heart attacks, cardiac arrest, high blood pressure, and strokes very early in their lifetimes.

On the other hand, Dasian males are except from such internal complications; however, this does not mean that Dasian males are an exception either. Although much stronger and durable than the females, Dasian males contract cardiovascular diseases just as easily to females due to the partly greater muscle density and mass found on males (though do take note that because of the ectomorph body type found in the Dasian species, distinguishing the difference between male and female is surprisingly difficult since both genders share the same body type). On top of that, with low body fat and a small body frame (as found in the entire Dasian species), the blood vessels found in Dasian males are reasonably strained with having to provide heat and energy to the muscles through the body. Therefore, blood disorders, like hemophilia and anemia, are a common disease found especially in Dasian males.

[The Fallen Jedi]

Well good news everyone, I'll be able to get a post up after 5:00 tonight.