Task Force Phoenix(MT-OOC-Open)

[Vanquaria]

think the Austrian combat engineer guy above us is our new fireteam 4 mate (stevens would like everything except the fact that he is a ''kid'')

Should we haze him?? XD

lol if by haze you mean going under way which means that cruise sock thingy...well Stevens wouldnt even know what that is, Australian Army not US Navy lol

[Socialist Republic of Andrew]

Should we haze him?? XD

lol if by haze you mean going under way which means that cruise sock thingy...well Stevens wouldnt even know what that is, Australian Army not US Navy lol

XD
You can take the man out of the army, but can't the soldier out of the man
You can take the man out of the air force, but can't the airmen out of the man
You can take a man out of the Navy, but you can't take the seaman out of the man

[Vanquaria]

lol if by haze you mean going under way which means that cruise sock thingy...well Stevens wouldnt even know what that is, Australian Army not US Navy lol

XD
You can take the man out of the army, but can't the soldier out of the man
You can take the man out of the air force, but can't the airmen out of the man
You can take a man out of the Navy, but you can't take the seaman out of the man

this guy

well lets try not to pick on him becos he is 24, young soldiers need time to grow

stevens: lets do a bit of good ol squad initiation eh? *grabs blindfold and duct tape*

[Socialist Republic of Andrew]

XD
You can take the man out of the army, but can't the soldier out of the man
You can take the man out of the air force, but can't the airmen out of the man
You can take a man out of the Navy, but you can't take the seaman out of the man

this guy

well lets try not to pick on him becos he is 24, young soldiers need time to grow

stevens: lets do a bit of good ol squad initiation eh? *grabs blindfold and duct tape*

XD oh i understand!

Andrew: Here's what the instructors did in the SEALs for initiation...-pulls out a pillowcase full of soap and spins it- >:D

[Krugeristan]

XD
You can take the man out of the army, but can't the soldier out of the man
You can take the man out of the air force, but can't the airmen out of the man
You can take a man out of the Navy, but you can't take the seaman out of the man

this guy

well lets try not to pick on him becos he is 24, young soldiers need time to grow

stevens: lets do a bit of good ol squad initiation eh? *grabs blindfold and duct tape*

Akarah's 21. But, no one wants to fuck around with him.

[Vanquaria]

this guy

well lets try not to pick on him becos he is 24, young soldiers need time to grow

stevens: lets do a bit of good ol squad initiation eh? *grabs blindfold and duct tape*

XD oh i understand!

Andrew: Here's what the instructors did in the SEALs for initiation...-pulls out a pillowcase full of soap and spins it- >:D

Stevens: Crazy Yank...lets do it! xD

[Vanquaria]

this guy

well lets try not to pick on him becos he is 24, young soldiers need time to grow

stevens: lets do a bit of good ol squad initiation eh? *grabs blindfold and duct tape*

Akarah's 21. But, no one wants to fuck around with him.

Cos he isnt in the awesome Fireteam 4, where a crazy SEAL and a SASR old school think up ways of introducing uh...newbies to the special world of special operations lol

besides stevens is kinda sexist and rascist lol

[Socialist Republic of Andrew]

Akarah's 21. But, no one wants to fuck around with him.

Cos he isnt in the awesome Fireteam 4, where a crazy SEAL and a SASR old school think up ways of introducing uh...newbies to the special world of special operations lol

besides stevens is kinda sexist and rascist lol

Yeeeaaaaahhhhh!!! Fireteam 4 rules! Other teams drool!! -team pride increased...-

And as for hate on Akarah, i ain't got no hate for the man! Heck in one of the RP samples i put on the app was similar to this, but it was mercenaries fighting in a war between NATO and Russia and we had a Russian in our squad....now that was true hate...XD

[Illuminati of Asia]

I've reposted again but if its not good could you give some advice on how to improve itSorry about that but it's worked in most of other rps so here is the version with some links.
Name: John O'Connor
Age: 29
Rank:Ard-Mhion-Oifigeach
Physical Description/Picture:

At a Irish Military demonstration

Nation/State of Origin:Ireland
Combat Experience:MINURCAT Protection for Queen Elizabeth's visit Protection for President Obama's visit Operation Atalanta UN Peace Keeping in the Middle East
Specialties:Sharpshooting languages Irish English German
Weapons of Choice:Accuracy International Arctic Warfare,Heckler & Koch MP5,SIG Sauer P226
RP Experience: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=382581http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=383194
Personal History/Bio:(More than 4 Sentences please) Born in Naas County Kildare, John had very uneventful childhood. He moved to New Bridge at the age of 8 as his farther need to be closer to his work in Dublin. Newbridge was close to the headquarters of the Army Ranger Wing at Curragh Camp. Once he got to go on tour of the place and there he decided he wanted to be become one of them. He did not know how to but he would.
During his teenage years he got a pilots and boaters license. He got arrested for underage drinking but he was let out with light charges as this is not enforce much in Ireland. He joined Irish Naval Service at age 20. He worked mostly on the patrol missions and made it to Naval Service Diving Section where he proved very promising. His main job here was search and rescue as Ireland wasn't in many wars. One day he was approached by a recruiter from the Army Ranger Wing. He was at the naval base as the Rangers were looking for some new recruits for their maritime division. He accepted immediately. He went to training and most of the aquatic operation easily though he needed to work on stealth tactics. He underwent additional training to become part of the sniper section. He went on as a member of the Wing and was deployed to foreign country once Operation Atlanta.

[Krugeristan]

Cos he isnt in the awesome Fireteam 4, where a crazy SEAL and a SASR old school think up ways of introducing uh...newbies to the special world of special operations lol

besides stevens is kinda sexist and rascist lol

Yeeeaaaaahhhhh!!! Fireteam 4 rules! Other teams drool!! -team pride increased...-

And as for hate on Akarah, i ain't got no hate for the man! Heck in one of the RP samples i put on the app was similar to this, but it was mercenaries fighting in a war between NATO and Russia and we had a Russian in our squad....now that was true hate...XD

Akarah's done some impressive shit, I'll tell you that.

[Socialist Republic of Andrew]

Yeeeaaaaahhhhh!!! Fireteam 4 rules! Other teams drool!! -team pride increased...-

And as for hate on Akarah, i ain't got no hate for the man! Heck in one of the RP samples i put on the app was similar to this, but it was mercenaries fighting in a war between NATO and Russia and we had a Russian in our squad....now that was true hate...XD

Akarah's done some impressive shit, I'll tell you that.

For his young age, that's even more impressive! But Andrew has done some impressive things as well!

[Krugeristan]

Akarah's done some impressive shit, I'll tell you that.

For his young age, that's even more impressive! But Andrew has done some impressive things as well!

Has Andrew met President Assad and President Putin?

[Socialist Republic of Andrew]

For his young age, that's even more impressive! But Andrew has done some impressive things as well!

Has Andrew met President Assad and President Putin?

Afraid not. He has operated in Syria while as a Navy SEAL a number of times to combat ISIS and such, but he's never met the leader.

[Krugeristan]

Has Andrew met President Assad and President Putin?

Afraid not. He has operated in Syria while as a Navy SEAL a number of times to combat ISIS and such, but he's never met the leader.

Well . . . I'm afraid your argument of impressiveness is invalid.

[Socialist Republic of Andrew]

Afraid not. He has operated in Syria while as a Navy SEAL a number of times to combat ISIS and such, but he's never met the leader.

Well . . . I'm afraid your argument of impressiveness is invalid.

Psh please! He once flew in on the back of a giant bald eagle mounted with a MK19 grenade launcher and blasted away an entire ISIS compound in mere seconds and then drank a six pack while bringing democracy all at once!!! XD

But i think Andrew and Akarah's first meeting is definitely gonna be an amusing one!

[Vanquaria]

Yeeeaaaaahhhhh!!! Fireteam 4 rules! Other teams drool!! -team pride increased...-

And as for hate on Akarah, i ain't got no hate for the man! Heck in one of the RP samples i put on the app was similar to this, but it was mercenaries fighting in a war between NATO and Russia and we had a Russian in our squad....now that was true hate...XD

Akarah's done some impressive shit, I'll tell you that.

yeh but so have all of the rest of us i can tell you that lol so you aint gonna catch the eyes of stevens and hall just yet mate

the only thing that separates my character from the rest is that he is quite possibly the oldest here lol

[Socialist Republic of Andrew]

Akarah's done some impressive shit, I'll tell you that.

yeh but so have all of the rest of us i can tell you that lol so you aint gonna catch the eyes of stevens and hall just yet mate

the only thing that separates my character from the rest is that he is quite possibly the oldest here lol

Physically speaking, yes, but combat certainly does have its way of making you look much older! And Andrew since he was 18, has been doing this, so that's over 11 and a half years...he is up there.

[Vanquaria]

yeh but so have all of the rest of us i can tell you that lol so you aint gonna catch the eyes of stevens and hall just yet mate

the only thing that separates my character from the rest is that he is quite possibly the oldest here lol

Physically speaking, yes, but combat certainly does have its way of making you look much older! And Andrew since he was 18, has been doing this, so that's over 11 and a half years...he is up there.

17 years lol

[Socialist Republic of Andrew]

Physically speaking, yes, but combat certainly does have its way of making you look much older! And Andrew since he was 18, has been doing this, so that's over 11 and a half years...he is up there.

17 years lol

17 when he started or his service is a total of 17 years?

[Australian Antarctica]

Ankara may have done some epic stuff, but he also had an ND within two minutes of the RP

Just teasing you.

[Krugeristan]

Ankara may have done some epic stuff, but he also had an ND within two minutes of the RP

Just teasing you.

Ankara? What does the capital of Turkey have to do with this?

*epic gasp* DO WE GET TO KIDNAP ERDOGAN?!!!

[Vanquaria]

17 years lol

17 when he started or his service is a total of 17 years?

total service of 17 years not counting up to task force phoenix

in australia enlistment is 18-19 yrs of age and for Australian special forces it is required for 4 years minimum service before trialling and even then the rough average age of special forces of any country in early thirties so 30 or 32. the youngest are on average 27 or 28 so Stevens began his selection tests at age 26 and took over 2 years including 18 months initial employment training before he saw first hand combat as a operator. overall quite a realistic scenario for a operator in australia

but all because your special forces and see alot of combat dosent mean you are wiser or have a more experienced mind than say a sergeant serving in conventional forces. in the military its all about experience and maturity. for Chief Petty Halls the average age of a A-team Navy SEAL is according to military.com 32 and true potential for spec ops is reached after over a decade so he is quite young but could be an emerging, insane impact player and all these 22 yr old characters out there are just hotshot rare talent nothing more lol, give em some bit of age and theyll be the best soldiers in the world im serious if they are this good at such an age. for halls it isnt rare in usa for someone so young to be in spec ops already, for example in csar operators can be 22 or 20!

and finally another reason why stevens is so pissed, he got taken off his unit and is now working with operators from different branches of other countries! thatll take adjustment time lol

[Socialist Republic of Andrew]

Ankara may have done some epic stuff, but he also had an ND within two minutes of the RP

Just teasing you.

Ankara? What does the capital of Turkey have to do with this?

*epic gasp* DO WE GET TO KIDNAP ERDOGAN?!!!

KIDNAPPING WORLD LEADERS?? THAT'S OUTRAGEOUS.....I LOVE IT!!!

[Australian Antarctica]

Here goes my app.

Name: Carl "Otacon" Rayford
Age: 27
Rank: Sergeant
Physical Description/Picture:
(Image)
Nation/State of Origin: United States of America
Combat Experience: Two missions in Afghanistan, three in Iraq, three in Somalia, one in Indonesia, and one in Cambodia.
Specialties: Infiltration, camouflage and disguises, Close-Quarters Combat, and fluent in German, Russian, Arabic, and Japanese.
Weapons of Choice: Any type of silenced handgun or SMGs (preferably P90, KRISS Vector K10, or H&K MP7), and his tanto. Nobody asked what kind of military-grade tanto was that.
RP Experience: Here ya go.
Personal History/Bio: You've never met an otaku working in a special force, have you? Well, meet Carl Rayford, also known as "Otacon", "Otaku Ninja", and "Weeblord". Nothing much is known about his early life, as he preferred to hide it (will reveal in the IC), except that he was born in Germany and lived in Japan during his teens. During his late teens (somewhere between 16 and 18) he lived in the United States, joining a PMC, and quickly rose to fame by taking on and completing missions that focus on infiltration and disguises, two things that he exceptionally excels on. He also did a few assassination missions, mostly aimed at rebel groups in Somalia, Afghanistan, Iraq, and most recently, Cambodia. However, his latest mission was a failure. He claimed that it was because he was being distracted by this lovely lady from the JSDF, not knowing that the lady was assigned to assassinate the same target.

All that bright track record was accompanied by his weird quirks as an otaku, constantly comparing the moments he was in to one of the animes he watched ("This is just like one of my Japanese animes!"), or posing like some anime character, or even repeating lines from any anime (the line he repeated the most was "I miss my sensei!"), which annoys most people that grouped with him. During missions, though, all those quirks disappeared, leaving only his skills as an infiltrator and master of disguise. It was this that made the Task Force "Phoenix" sent him an invitation to join their ranks.

Approved?

Repostin' the fixed version.

Accepted

I've reposted again but if its not good could you give some advice on how to improve itSorry about that but it's worked in most of other rps so here is the version with some links.
Name: John O'Connor
Age: 29
Rank:Ard-Mhion-Oifigeach
Physical Description/Picture:

(Image) At a Irish Military demonstration

Nation/State of Origin:Ireland
Combat Experience:MINURCAT Protection for Queen Elizabeth's visit Protection for President Obama's visit Operation Atalanta UN Peace Keeping in the Middle East
Specialties:Sharpshooting languages Irish English German
Weapons of Choice:Accuracy International Arctic Warfare,Heckler & Koch MP5,SIG Sauer P226
RP Experience: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=382581http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=383194
Personal History/Bio:(More than 4 Sentences please) Born in Naas County Kildare, John had very uneventful childhood. He moved to New Bridge at the age of 8 as his farther need to be closer to his work in Dublin. Newbridge was close to the headquarters of the Army Ranger Wing at Curragh Camp. Once he got to go on tour of the place and there he decided he wanted to be become one of them. He did not know how to but he would.
During his teenage years he got a pilots and boaters license. He got arrested for underage drinking but he was let out with light charges as this is not enforce much in Ireland. He joined Irish Naval Service at age 20. He worked mostly on the patrol missions and made it to Naval Service Diving Section where he proved very promising. His main job here was search and rescue as Ireland wasn't in many wars. One day he was approached by a recruiter from the Army Ranger Wing. He was at the naval base as the Rangers were looking for some new recruits for their maritime division. He accepted immediately. He went to training and most of the aquatic operation easily though he needed to work on stealth tactics. He underwent additional training to become part of the sniper section. He went on as a member of the Wing and was deployed to foreign country once Operation Atlanta.

Look, I apologize. You seem like a nice guy and willing to improve, but I've reviewed your past RP experience and it just is below the quality level expected here. If you would like to post a sample post in your next application, more to the standards that we have here, you are more than welcome to.

[Krugeristan]

Ankara? What does the capital of Turkey have to do with this?

*epic gasp* DO WE GET TO KIDNAP ERDOGAN?!!!

KIDNAPPING WORLD LEADERS?? THAT'S OUTRAGEOUS.....I LOVE IT!!!

Are we twins?!