The Ancient Ones: Age of Nothingness(Multiverse Xover)OOC

[The Dark Brotherhood of Deros]

By "traites" you mean the whole Half-blood thing?

Also all thoes Xs are triggering me.

Why, if I may inquire, do you not like them?

XoXo

No, I mean Jacob being somewhat of an all-loving selfless hero and being super strong, but I guess he does have flaws to balance that out.

Clairus, she's a nice girl with a tragic past and pretty attractive, giving her some sue points. But she's not really a sue, as she also is very believable as a character.

Jacob's not "all loving", but he does want to protect people. Also he's probably the weakest half-blood in the entire RP, at about human level power.

Also I'm glad I made a fox-girl a believable character.

Why, if I may inquire, do you not like them?

They just look irritating.

Also, that one time when somebody on the internet (not on NationStates) asked me if there are real nekogirls in Asia.

I uh... I don't know how to respond to that. XD
I can only assume that they were joking, but this is the internet so...

[Prusselanden]

Yep.

But in a few years Ackerman will be like to them. "And don't do the birds and the bees. Or else you'll get pregnant and die of childbirth fever, like my wife."

何が言ってる、お前？

Xer wife got sick after giving birth to their child, dying after a few days.

[Kaidou]

Not to mention that there are some times where the selflessness of the character delves straight into the realm of madness.

Take Seraph of the End, for example; the MC is selfless to the point that he's a complete idiot. Not to mention that he's also a complete idiot.

Like Ackerman

Is he the vampire with the red sword?

No, the green-eyed kid with the green sword.

He's quite possibly the most irritating MC I've ever encountered.

[Prusselanden]

XoXo

No, I mean Jacob being somewhat of an all-loving selfless hero and being super strong, but I guess he does have flaws to balance that out.

Clairus, she's a nice girl with a tragic past and pretty attractive, giving her some sue points. But she's not really a sue, as she also is very believable as a character.

Jacob's not "all loving", but he does want to protect people. Also he's probably the weakest half-blood in the entire RP, at about human level power.

Also I'm glad I made a fox-girl a believable character.

They just look irritating.

Also, that one time when somebody on the internet (not on NationStates) asked me if there are real nekogirls in Asia.

I uh... I don't know how to respond to that. XD
I can only assume that they were joking, but this is the internet so...

Don't worry, Konny's even weaker than him considering she's 12.

[Prusselanden]

Like Ackerman

Is he the vampire with the red sword?

No, the green-eyed kid with the green sword.

He's quite possibly the most irritating MC I've ever encountered.

Ugh, I know, right?

[Kaidou]

I uh... I don't know how to respond to that. XD
I can only assume that they were joking, but this is the internet so...

I once encountered a guy in the YT comment section who was so adamant that Star Wars 7 was a Marxist plot that he basically went on an all out nutty rage towards everybody else.

He said that nobody else ever provided evidence for their claims ergo they're all mentally disabled, but when pressured to provide evidence, he claimed that "None of you deserve to see the evidence".

It's this guy, if anybody's interested: https://www.youtube.com/user/woooudoo. The comments have long since been deleted, though.

何が言ってる、お前？

Xer wife got sick after giving birth to their child, dying after a few days.

なるほど。

[Kaidou]

No, the green-eyed kid with the green sword.

He's quite possibly the most irritating MC I've ever encountered.

Ugh, I know, right?

[Prusselanden]

I uh... I don't know how to respond to that. XD
I can only assume that they were joking, but this is the internet so...

I once encountered a guy in the YT comment section who was so adamant that Star Wars 7 was a Marxist plot that he basically went on an all out nutty rage towards everybody else.

He said that nobody else ever provided evidence for their claims ergo they're all mentally disabled, but when pressured to provide evidence, he claimed that "None of you deserve to see the evidence".

It's this guy, if anybody's interested: https://www.youtube.com/user/woooudoo. The comments have long since been deleted, though.

Xer wife got sick after giving birth to their child, dying after a few days.

なるほど。

And then the baby died a year later of smallpox.

I'm not sure if Ackerman or Fred's shitty past should count as a sue point because it was 1700s Prussia-life was pretty shitty there for everyone.

[Prusselanden]

Ugh, I know, right?

I mean, I love his color scheme but....argh...

[Kaidou]

I once encountered a guy in the YT comment section who was so adamant that Star Wars 7 was a Marxist plot that he basically went on an all out nutty rage towards everybody else.

He said that nobody else ever provided evidence for their claims ergo they're all mentally disabled, but when pressured to provide evidence, he claimed that "None of you deserve to see the evidence".

It's this guy, if anybody's interested: https://www.youtube.com/user/woooudoo. The comments have long since been deleted, though.



なるほど。

And then the baby died a year later of smallpox.

I'm not sure if Ackerman or Fred's shitty past should count as a sue point because it was 1700s Prussia-life was pretty shitty there for everyone.

Having a shitty backstory doesn't make you a sue.

It's when your shitty backstory is used primarily to score emotional points or to act as a half arsed explanation for a cool power.

[Kaidou]

I mean, I love his color scheme but....argh...

"My vampire friend is dying, so I'm gonna cut my own wrist and let him drink it."

[Kaidou]

Sum up your characters in just one quote.

Samuel IX
"In the name of freedom and righteousness, I'm going to rip out your eyes and sew your mouth to a rapist's anus."

Henry D. Saladass
"I don't know who you are, but if you try anything stupid, you're in yuuuge trouble. YUUUUUUUGE trouble."

Arjun Singh | अर्जुन सिंह
"Nobody is above the Law; not even you, my friend."

Ceiji
"Just shut the fuck up and get in the car, you squishy dumbasses."

Yuen Tse-kai | 袁澤凱
"That's strange; the evidence doesn't seem to stack up."

Sora Akita | 秋田　天空
"And what would you like for dinner tonight?"

Seishirō Akita | 秋田　世志郎
"Please, stop doing that!"

Yotsuha Ikegami | 池神　四葉
"So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past."

Ionian
"What did you say?"

Lam Jan-ci | 林恩池
"I want to fight ten people."

[DAFT Universe]

GLaDOS
"Oh, shut up."

Zeta
"None of this makes sense..."

Chell
"I'm not a monster."

Alpha, Beta, Omega, Delta, Theta
"We trust people too much."

Omni
"Look at you... Ugly human. I'd enjoy killing you."

[Naval Monte]

Even I'm confused...

There's nothing I can do, I guess. For some reason, James now brought someone who was impeding their plan with them to where the sword is, even though my post explicitly said that he took everyone except for Eridan through the gate, or the door, or whatever the hell it is.

There was a gate but after it was destroyed a force in the building created a barrier to keep the Guardian out because he failed on his mission to keep the party out until Eridan destroyed the gate, now he can appear and is now going to be the Nemesis of the arc; the unkillable purser that will hunt down the party until they finally reach the sword room.

Guys, just a small thing, but I don't think Draigo will be taking his armor off much (if at all) over the course of the RP. Not because he doesn't want to, but because he literally can't remove the armor on his own and would need a full team of Serfs to take it off for him.

Edit: he also might need a Techpreist or two to pray a few litanies during the procession.

That armor better be comfortable for him and have a portable bathroom.

Okay, for the uninitiated and the confused (including me)

The group was teleported inside The Citadel by James, excluding Eridan and The Guardian. The Guardian proceeded to attempt to enter, but was rebuffed by the barrier. Eridan obliterated several city blocks using Tzeentch's blessing and managed to break the barrier down, and ran into The Citadel. He caught up with the group, which was being attacked by alternate non-Tzeentch'd Eridan versions.

Eridan is currently attacking his clones due to his overpowering genocide complex and hatred of "imposters", and is also being motivated to gain the group's favour by defending them. He knows, or rather Tzeentch knows that the group's survival is vital to Tzeentch's plans.

Well his hatred towards his alternative selves is useful for the group but no one is going to like him instantly just because he is killing himself a hundred and thousand times.

They just look irritating.

Also, that one time when somebody on the internet (not on NationStates) asked me (repeatedly) if there are real nekogirls in Asia.

Did someone actually tell you that?

Ugh, I know, right?

https://i.imgflip.com/1lfgk0.jpg

What anime is this?

I uh... I don't know how to respond to that. XD
I can only assume that they were joking, but this is the internet so...

I once encountered a guy in the YT comment section who was so adamant that Star Wars 7 was a Marxist plot that he basically went on an all out nutty rage towards everybody else.

He said that nobody else ever provided evidence for their claims ergo they're all mentally disabled, but when pressured to provide evidence, he claimed that "None of you deserve to see the evidence".

It's this guy, if anybody's interested: https://www.youtube.com/user/woooudoo. The comments have long since been deleted, though.

The sheer feat of stupidity of some people never cease to amaze me.


As for the sue debates I usually work on not getting any character to that level. Any time they grow in power new weakness emerge and even with the new powers their old flaws will still be around.

[Kaidou]

What anime is this?

Seraph of the End. A military themed anime where the authors clearly have no idea how militaries work. Plus an irritating and unbelievably stupid MC, lots of pretty boys (said MC being one of them), vampires, angels, artificially created demons, and all sorts of weirdness.

I occasionally check on the manga when I have nothing better to do; it's getting more and more convoluted and incoherent every time a new chapter comes out.

[The Intergalactic Russian Empire]

Guys, just a small thing, but I don't think Draigo will be taking his armor off much (if at all) over the course of the RP. Not because he doesn't want to, but because he literally can't remove the armor on his own and would need a full team of Serfs to take it off for him.

Edit: he also might need a Techpreist or two to pray a few litanies during the procession.

That armor better be comfortable for him and have a portable bathroom.

I think it actually does. It is designed to be worn for days on end with little to no breaks.

Also, I saw some of you talking about the Mary Sue-ish traits of your characters. Do you think any of mine have any Mary Sue-ish traits? Barring Kaldor Draigo, I'm actually nerfing him from his in universe Mary Sue status.

[Naval Monte]

That armor better be comfortable for him and have a portable bathroom.

I think it actually does. It is designed to be worn for days on end with little to no breaks.

Also, I saw some of you talking about the Mary Sue-ish traits of your characters. Do you think any of mine have any Mary Sue-ish traits? Barring Kaldor Draigo, I'm actually nerfing him from his in universe Mary Sue status.

Nah. I know some people like to say that if a character has a tragic past they are sues but that is not the case. After all conflict is what drives a story and the most fascinating ones is the conflict within a character. One just needs to know how to use drama and tension well which for the most part I seem to know how to do thankfully. I do worry about my characters being sues but than I remember that I always focus on creating good weakness for them even if said weakness are down to their personality.

[The Intergalactic Russian Empire]

I think it actually does. It is designed to be worn for days on end with little to no breaks.

Also, I saw some of you talking about the Mary Sue-ish traits of your characters. Do you think any of mine have any Mary Sue-ish traits? Barring Kaldor Draigo, I'm actually nerfing him from his in universe Mary Sue status.

Nah. I know some people like to say that if a character has a tragic past they are sues but that is not the case. After all conflict is what drives a story and the most fascinating ones is the conflict within a character. One just needs to know how to use drama and tension well which for the most part I seem to know how to do thankfully. I do worry about my characters being sues but than I remember that I always focus on creating good weakness for them even if said weakness are down to their personality.

Tragic past being a Mary Sue thing seems pretty dumb.

[Prusselanden]

Ignis: "I'm beyond redemption, seriously"
Quetz: "It's time for me to stop running from the past."
Fred: "Showing your true feelings and words is a vulnerability."
Ackerman: "I don't care if I die to protect you."
Uska: "Speaking too much is wasteful."
Possibility: "I've never cared for mortals, but..."
Eigenpower: "YOu. Can't. Limit. Meeee!"

[Cruxa]

Name: Adrian Eldensson

Ancient One Half blood?(yes/no): No

Species(if a half-blood this would be their other half): Elf

Age: 314

Appearance: https://www.pinterest.com/zurncentral/order-elves/

Gender: Male.

Powers/abilities: Magic user (can conjure the four basic elements, fire powerful bolts of energy, and summon creatures such as wolves or other magical beings, can create more arrows, also has the ability to summon a magic hand or a ball of burning acid), strong swordsman

Weaknesses: Weapons and pure iron.

Destructive Capacity: 3 on the power scale.

Equipment: Longsword, shield, shortsword, bow and arrows, three throwing knives, hunting knife, gutknife, spell component pouch, spellbook

Universe of Origin: D&D, baby!

Affiliation(Good/Evil/Neutral): Good. (Lawful Good?)



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[The Intergalactic Russian Empire]

For summarizing characters in a quote.
Eric: "How did I even get such a great life? I'm a total loser!"
Pobeda: "You don't know the things I dream." (From my Sig quote)
Kadoor: "I will help you in any way possible, even if it hurts."
Kaldor: "Imperator Vult!"

[Naval Monte]

Nah. I know some people like to say that if a character has a tragic past they are sues but that is not the case. After all conflict is what drives a story and the most fascinating ones is the conflict within a character. One just needs to know how to use drama and tension well which for the most part I seem to know how to do thankfully. I do worry about my characters being sues but than I remember that I always focus on creating good weakness for them even if said weakness are down to their personality.

Tragic past being a Mary Sue thing seems pretty dumb.

I agree with you since by that logic every character with a tragic past is a Mary Sue.

[The Intergalactic Russian Empire]

Tragic past being a Mary Sue thing seems pretty dumb.

I agree with you since by that logic every character with a tragic past is a Mary Sue.

I must say, the closest I have to a Mary Sue would be Eric for the sheer fact that his personality is inspired by myself.

[Mundeo]

Name: Adrian Eldensson

Ancient One Half blood?(yes/no): No

Species(if a half-blood this would be their other half): Elf

Age: 314

Appearance: https://www.pinterest.com/zurncentral/order-elves/

Gender: Male.

Powers/abilities: Magic user (can conjure the four basic elements, fire powerful bolts of energy, and summon creatures such as wolves or other magical beings, can create more arrows, also has the ability to summon a magic hand or a ball of burning acid), strong swordsman

Weaknesses: Weapons and pure iron.

Destructive Capacity: 3 on the power scale.

Equipment: Longsword, shield, shortsword, bow and arrows, three throwing knives, hunting knife, gutknife, spell component pouch, spellbook

Universe of Origin: D&D, baby!

Affiliation(Good/Evil/Neutral): Good. (Lawful Good?)

I apologize that the OP or other Co-ops missed this earlier. Accepted!

[Cruxa]

Name: Adrian Eldensson

Ancient One Half blood?(yes/no): No

Species(if a half-blood this would be their other half): Elf

Age: 314

Appearance: https://www.pinterest.com/zurncentral/order-elves/

Gender: Male.

Powers/abilities: Magic user (can conjure the four basic elements, fire powerful bolts of energy, and summon creatures such as wolves or other magical beings, can create more arrows, also has the ability to summon a magic hand or a ball of burning acid), strong swordsman

Weaknesses: Weapons and pure iron.

Destructive Capacity: 3 on the power scale.

Equipment: Longsword, shield, shortsword, bow and arrows, three throwing knives, hunting knife, gutknife, spell component pouch, spellbook

Universe of Origin: D&D, baby!

Affiliation(Good/Evil/Neutral): Good. (Lawful Good?)

I apologize that the OP or other Co-ops missed this earlier. Accepted!

It's okay! Thanks!