So... um...
By any chance, does Ackerman have an application form?
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by Prusselanden » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:18 pm

by Prusselanden » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:20 pm

by Kaidou » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:30 pm


by Prusselanden » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:33 pm

by Prusselanden » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:34 pm
Kaidou wrote:One of my old character designs for this RP, which I eventually scrapped. Perhaps I could bring him in in the future?
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Fei Ji-chang (which means "airplane runway", but is also a slang for women with flat breasts) is an assassin. His weapon of choice is a tiny needle, which he dips in poison and kills people with, by pricking them in the veins. He can also use it to do sword fighting (how, nobody can quite describe).
He is incapable of saying anything except the phrase "Xue Ye Jin Bu" (學業進步 / 学业进步), which means "May you improve in your studies". His interpreter is able to tell exactly what he wants to say simply by listening to the tone, speed, and timbre of his voice when he says the phrase, helping to translate his speech for clients.

by Kaidou » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:35 pm
Prusselanden wrote:Kaidou wrote:One of my old character designs for this RP, which I eventually scrapped. Perhaps I could bring him in in the future?
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Fei Ji-chang (which means "airplane runway", but is also a slang for women with flat breasts) is an assassin. His weapon of choice is a tiny needle, which he dips in poison and kills people with, by pricking them in the veins. He can also use it to do sword fighting (how, nobody can quite describe).
He is incapable of saying anything except the phrase "Xue Ye Jin Bu" (學業進步 / 学业进步), which means "May you improve in your studies". His interpreter is able to tell exactly what he wants to say simply by listening to the tone, speed, and timbre of his voice when he says the phrase, helping to translate his speech for clients.
Frederick would pee himself laughing while saying that name.

by Prusselanden » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:37 pm

by Prusselanden » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:40 pm

by Prusselanden » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:43 pm

by The Dark Brotherhood of Deros » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:45 pm
"Don't curse the darkness, light a candle! When freaky aliens give you lemons, make freaky alien lemonade!" - Hades
The Four Swords of the Guild
Respect for nature, Life as a community, Crafting from nature, and Prosperity from nature.
Kaidou wrote:We Asian millennials are like bananas. Our skin is yellow, but on the inside, we're pretty much white.

by Prusselanden » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:47 pm
The Dark Brotherhood of Deros wrote:Hey Prus, what does Ackerman even look like?
Also I have a question for both you and Kaido. So you know how you were talking about your characters and whether they were Mary Sues? Do you think any of my characters are too sueish? I'd like to avoid that if possible.

by Kaidou » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:49 pm
The Dark Brotherhood of Deros wrote:Hey Prus, what does Ackerman even look like?
Also I have a question for both you and Kaido. So you know how you were talking about your characters and whether they were Mary Sues? Do you think any of my characters are too sueish? I'd like to avoid that if possible.

by The Dark Brotherhood of Deros » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:53 pm
Prusselanden wrote:The Dark Brotherhood of Deros wrote:Hey Prus, what does Ackerman even look like?
Also I have a question for both you and Kaido. So you know how you were talking about your characters and whether they were Mary Sues? Do you think any of my characters are too sueish? I'd like to avoid that if possible.
Actually, no.
Jacob and Clairus have some traits or sues, but in all they are well rounded.
Ackerman looks mixed white/Asian, xe is 6'0", Xe wears xer long dark hair in a 'Prussian braid', and dresses in a long black coat, jeans, and boots usually.
Kaidou wrote:The Dark Brotherhood of Deros wrote:Hey Prus, what does Ackerman even look like?
Also I have a question for both you and Kaido. So you know how you were talking about your characters and whether they were Mary Sues? Do you think any of my characters are too sueish? I'd like to avoid that if possible.
I've not read through your posts in really great detail thus far, but I can't seem to see anything that's really glaring. Normally, Sue characters will piss me off to the extent that I have urges to throw glass objects at glass windows.
Perhaps the closest is Clairus, but I think that's partly my unfair bias, because I don't like cat/fox girls.
"Don't curse the darkness, light a candle! When freaky aliens give you lemons, make freaky alien lemonade!" - Hades
The Four Swords of the Guild
Respect for nature, Life as a community, Crafting from nature, and Prosperity from nature.
Kaidou wrote:We Asian millennials are like bananas. Our skin is yellow, but on the inside, we're pretty much white.

by Prusselanden » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:54 pm
Kaidou wrote:Prusselanden wrote:Indeed.
"Kids be back before midnight, no drinking, no going to wild nightclubs."
I shall have to time-skip in order to further their relations; Yotsuha is still 13, way too early for any of that nonsense.The Dark Brotherhood of Deros wrote:Hey Prus, what does Ackerman even look like?
Also I have a question for both you and Kaido. So you know how you were talking about your characters and whether they were Mary Sues? Do you think any of my characters are too sueish? I'd like to avoid that if possible.
I've not read through your posts in really great detail thus far, but I can't seem to see anything that's really glaring. Normally, Sue characters will piss me off to the extent that I have urges to throw glass objects at glass windows.
Perhaps the closest is Clairus, but I think that's partly my unfair bias, because I don't like cat/fox girls.

by Kaidou » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:54 pm
The Dark Brotherhood of Deros wrote:Why, if I may inquire, do you not like them?

by Kaidou » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:56 pm
Prusselanden wrote:Kaidou wrote:
I shall have to time-skip in order to further their relations; Yotsuha is still 13, way too early for any of that nonsense.
I've not read through your posts in really great detail thus far, but I can't seem to see anything that's really glaring. Normally, Sue characters will piss me off to the extent that I have urges to throw glass objects at glass windows.
Perhaps the closest is Clairus, but I think that's partly my unfair bias, because I don't like cat/fox girls.
Yep.
But in a few years Ackerman will be like to them. "And don't do the birds and the bees. Or else you'll get pregnant and die of childbirth fever, like my wife."

by Prusselanden » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:56 pm
The Dark Brotherhood of Deros wrote:Prusselanden wrote:Actually, no.
Jacob and Clairus have some traits or sues, but in all they are well rounded.
Ackerman looks mixed white/Asian, xe is 6'0", Xe wears xer long dark hair in a 'Prussian braid', and dresses in a long black coat, jeans, and boots usually.
By "traites" you mean the whole Half-blood thing?
Also all thoes Xs are triggering me.
Kaidou wrote:
I've not read through your posts in really great detail thus far, but I can't seem to see anything that's really glaring. Normally, Sue characters will piss me off to the extent that I have urges to throw glass objects at glass windows.
Perhaps the closest is Clairus, but I think that's partly my unfair bias, because I don't like cat/fox girls.
Why, if I may inquire, do you not like them?

by Kaidou » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:58 pm
Prusselanden wrote:-

by Prusselanden » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:59 pm
Kaidou wrote:Prusselanden wrote:-
Not to mention that there are some times where the selflessness of the character delves straight into the realm of madness.
Take Seraph of the End, for example; the MC is selfless to the point that he's a complete idiot. Not to mention that he's also a complete idiot.

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