Gods Among Us V4.0 [Superhero] (OOC|OPEN)

[Primordial Luxa]

Super Identity:
Real Identity: Issac Fontana
Is real identity known to the public: yes
Hero, Villain, Neutral: Neutral
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance: 6 "3", White, large frame, kinda muscular, short cropped brown hair, blond goatee and mustache ( kind of a teenage thing ), hazel eyes
Group Affiliation: none
Powers: Telekinesis which can affect all non-organic matter. So, he can chuck a car with his mind, but he can't move say a human being
Equipment: None so far
Weaknesses: His power only works on non-organic matter, also the larger the object the greater the physical strain on him. 100 lbs = shortness of breath as though he had run for a long time. General stress and exhaustion.
1000 lbs = can't breathe, limbs begin to feel weak. May not be able to stand.
Maxes out at 3000 lbs. Anything over this causes a heart attack. Can lift the average car but not a tank. Still dangerous but not superman level.
Background: Highschool kid, entering into Senior year, lives in ( what ever the city is in city thread ). Football player, speech kid, did theater a couple of times, reasonably popular, above average intelligence. Very normal kid. Then, one morning, as he made his way to catch the bus, his mutant gene kicked in and he ended up chucking through the air for some 300 ft. He is now currently held up in his room panicking as things in the room fly around him as he tries to coop with his new and uncontrolled powers.
Summary: Highschooler with newly found telekinetic abilities

Accepted

[Republic of the Cristo]

Alright, that's fine. I will edit. Will it then be acceptable?

If so, how are we gonna do this? Because he is pretty much just curled up in his room in an apartment complex as things are flying around him.

Yes, edit it in i'll accept it.
Make a post in the city thread about your character in the room. I'll have someone show up at the door, have his parents answer it and we'll just go back and forth.

Edited, will post in city

[Republic of the Cristo]

is there an archive of any kind?

[Primordial Luxa]

is there an archive of any kind?

What do mean by Archive? In the OP there is a Spoiler called Previous Arcs that has some of the important previous events.

[Republic of the Cristo]

I mean a list of all characters

[Primordial Luxa]

I mean a list of all characters

It the second post in each IC thread. Yours hasn't been added because I'm gonna reformat both to be pretty.

@Everyone I have significantly updated the OP and added some setting details theirs still a lot of WIP but give it a look.

[The Flutterlands]

Sorry I haven't been posting in the city thread. Anything I need to get to aside from helping Crimson? I was going have Andrew say that he'd need to be taken to the Knights' HQ...

[Primordial Luxa]

Sorry I haven't been posting in the city thread. Anything I need to get to aside from helping Crimson? I was going have Andrew say that he'd need to be taken to the Knights' HQ...

NUMB showed up so he's there to lend a hand.

[The Flutterlands]

Sorry I haven't been posting in the city thread. Anything I need to get to aside from helping Crimson? I was going have Andrew say that he'd need to be taken to the Knights' HQ...

NUMB showed up so he's there to lend a hand.

Okay, thanks. Still waiting on Ihrk to post for academy...

[Granis]

Ok, so just two things. One, Adrien transformed back as he was thrown into the streetlight, so he's not in his Diz form anymore. He's just regular old Adrien. Two, everyone keeps calling him Dez, but please call him Diz from now on, as that's the actual name.

[Remnants of Exilvania]

is there an archive of any kind?

You do know, that pure app archives are not allowed on NS Forums?
There's been a complaint recently about it, drawing mod attention, which ended in several archive locks because they were not following site rules.

[Serah]

Alright Cristo, I'm going to try and be nice, because I don't know if you posted to not lose a longer post, or if you simply post a one liner, which would in turn unnerve me quite a lot.

Do NOT, under any circumstances, post a one liner.
Even this one action is all the characters do, try to make it at least three to four lines minimum.
Make the characters think, do some side actions, speak of what they were doing before.

But again, do not post one liners. It's bad form and frankly it's just insulting.

[Remnants of Exilvania]

Alright Cristo, I'm going to try and be nice, because I don't know if you posted to not lose a longer post, or if you simply post a one liner, which would in turn unnerve me quite a lot.

Do NOT, under any circumstances, post a one liner.
Even this one action is all the characters do, try to make it at least three to four lines minimum.
Make the characters think, do some side actions, speak of what they were doing before.

But again, do not post one liners. It's bad form and frankly it's just insulting.

Peachwood

Mrs. Fontana sat sniffling on the coach

Just so people know what he did before he tries to edit it.
gg lol

[Granis]

So... Uh... Perhaps I didn't make it completely clear, but when I said Adrien collapsed, I mean unconscious. He is not even awake to here NUMBs warning. He is also bleeding from his mouth.

Please don't let him die like this.

[Primordial Luxa]

So... Uh... Perhaps I didn't make it completely clear, but when I said Adrien collapsed, I mean unconscious. He is not even awake to here NUMBs warning. He is also bleeding from his mouth.

Please don't let him die like this.

You may want to ask someone else to save him. Perhaps Octavian, the Knights have a vested interest in seeing him die.

[Granis]

So... Uh... Perhaps I didn't make it completely clear, but when I said Adrien collapsed, I mean unconscious. He is not even awake to here NUMBs warning. He is also bleeding from his mouth.

Please don't let him die like this.

You may want to ask someone else to save him. Perhaps Octavian, the Knights have a vested interest in seeing him die.

I was actually hoping to see if I could insert myself into the free spot in the knights through this incident. You did say there was one, right?

[Primordial Luxa]

You may want to ask someone else to save him. Perhaps Octavian, the Knights have a vested interest in seeing him die.

I was actually hoping to see if I could insert myself into the free spot in the Knights through this incident. You did say there was one, right?

The NYC chapter might consider a recruit but there not likely to pick one up on the street and Diz does come across as the kind they would hire right off the application.

He's an unsanctioned vigilante and a pretty erratic one, the Knights might consider him later if he joins and goes through the process but I think it would be better for Whalestron and you and acquaint your characters at least right now.

[The Flutterlands]

Cristo, what kind of post is that suppose to be? It's a nothing burger!

[Serah]

Super Identity: Crusader
Real Identity: Balder Lucius Hofmann
Is real identity known to the public: Not entirely
Hero, Villain, Neutral: Hero, for the most part.
Age: 943
Gender: Male
Appearance: Looks noticeably different from his peers, round face, short brown, slightly graying hair, green eyes, 1M75, big stature, stern stare that somewhat softens when someone wishes to converse, mostly wears a modern suit but sometimes changes into his old armor for old time's sake. Somewhat large. Looks like he would be in his 50s.
Group Affiliation: Knights of America
Powers:
-Time has lost its hold on me: Un-aging, Balder does not feel the flow of time, nor disease or even natural woes, his body is constantly stuck in his mid fifties.
If dismembered, he will eventually regenerate, although the process is quite slow and unable to be used actively in combat.

-Weapons, armor, you name it, I've got it: Due to a rather tight link with magic and a noticeable knowledge over it, throughout the course of the years, Balder has created many weapons and still creates some to this day.
This power essentially allows him to imbue a weapon with magic so powerful it could be considered on par with mythological weapons, sometimes making people refer to him as Vulcan. He holds some of them on his person depending on his whim, but most of them remain safely locked within the Knights's fortress. Generally, he calls this power Forge. If near his forge, he will make weapons of rather noticeable strength, however, as some elements become rarer, some enchantments become nigh impossible to do.

-Now I may be an old man... : Despite his age, he knows much and remembers well and his body does the same. He is a fearsome fighter that is nothing to scoff at and even the most trained athletes can only hope to get on his level at any point in their lives. His speed, strength, memory, agility, reflexes and intelligence are all peak human.

Equipment:
-Silver/steel alloy longsword: While it has been reforged many times, it still remains largely non magical, however, it is strong enough to parry even artillery without breaking.

-Runes: With various effects, ranging from the usual immediate fireball to one-hit shields. However, he usually carries one rune only on his person at all times.
Force: A rune that is cast by hand an exerts a significant enough amount of force to crack a stone wall, with a low range, it needs to be cast almost at point blank to be lethal.

-Relics: They vary, and there are very little he can use on his own. As such, he doesn't use them very much, but still has some, hidden somewhere.

Weaknesses:
I regenerate, yes but certainly not fast enough: His regeneration is strong for any normal human being, but should his head be cut off, he would eventually die.
His regular regeneration, in the case of a dismemberment would take up six to eight months, assuming they had the missing limb. If Balder's heart or brain gets hit however, he will permanently die. Although surgical operations could save him in the former case.

I can't go forging if I don't have the proper tools: Balder, despite his skill won't be able to create enchants nearly as powerful as they would be directly on the field.
While they may be strong and can give an edge, they will be sub par at most. He also needs ingredients and such, which become rarer in the modern world.

Ah... Runes. Yes...: While the runes may be strong, if there are too much in one place and not isolated, they will attempt to passively influence each other and will simply start deactivating each other, so there must always be one recharging at all times, or far enough from the others so that they don't try to deactivate themselves. To call upon their power, a hand signal, unique to each type must be made, as such, if Balder or any other user of such runes loses their hands, they won't be able to use them.
His force rune in this case needs a hand sign that can basically used only once per fight. To activate his force rune for example, he needs to make a small triangle starting from the left side, then up, down, and a link at the base. He can also do it with his fingers only, but it requires concentration.

I've got relics, maybe too much: Due to his age and times forcing him to get used to different weapons, he simply knows his way around most weapons but is only a master of the sword. Other weapons he may handle well, but certainly not enough to equal a master.
He handles guns reasonably well but is essentially nothing more than an enthusiast as he never felt the need to fight with anything else beyond crossbows.

Magic grows tired of me: During his long life, Balder's exposition to magic progressively took a toll on him. While he has managed to vastly nullify it with his regeneration, if he chooses to handle some of the weapons he made in his earlier days, he may be unable to reverse the process. Some parts of him still bears scars of the times he let it grow too far. It takes form in some sort of body rust with the same color, a noticeable one can be seen on the back of his left arm.

Background: Born in the year 1074 in South Jutland , Balder Lucius Hofmann was born within nobility, he was essentially given everything a child of his rank at the time would be given, training, constant food... All this was very normal, save for one thing. His innate ability for magic. Considering the times he was living in, Balder kept it a secret, but eventually was taught how to use a forge to put his powers to good use. All this happened in the year 1083, his tutelage with his master ended promptly once he came of age and was appointed as a squire, as which point, due to the swords, armor and various objects he created, he was initially branded as a sorcerer and a heretic. His sentence was to be carried out immediately, if not for the intervention of his father that, for once in that time believed in him and hid the nature of his power under the 'Grace of God'

As the local priests and other members of the clergy eventually came to believe that it was indeed the case, that God had let his blessing upon him, they let him keep up his work and his career as a squire kept on.
On the year 1090 however, he was knighted for his services and became the next in line for the duchy of his family. Yet, Balder didn't wish for any of that, what he wanted was a fight, action. And with the Truce of God laws that came swiftly after the collapse of the Carolingian empire in France, he was found rather unable to satiate his thirst for battle and simply continued to forge on. Not even a year later, Pope Urban II came to appoint him as the Church's smith, an even more prestigious position than armorer of the king at the time.
He accepted, not without some semblance of regret, as he would need to leave his future title. Yet even his father pressed on and told him that if he didn't take the offer, he wouldn't ever take the title of duke anyway.
He continuously made armors, weapons, and all matters of similar objects to arm the crusade the Pope was thinking of calling the people of the Christian world to do.

He knew however, that once this day came, he would be ready.
And ready he was, when the Pope finally made the announcement.
He was among the first to get on the boats, but not exactly to go to war against the turks. Rather, he was to go to war against the Turkish mages and their demons.
Once the first crusade started, he was there to tear apart the Middle Eastern magical resistance that would be the only thing to be able to oppose the armies sent in. And that he did, he tore the majority of the mages apart with superior firepower, however, that was the only thing keeping him alive. At the end of the crusade, he was the only one alive out of his platoon, and while someone in his time might've simply thought that their souls would go to heaven, he was sure that he himself would never go there. And the pope never saw him again. He had suffered many wounds, both physical and mental, by fighting those mages and demons, and decided that this was the end.

Or at least, that's what he thought. Unbeknownst to him, a curse had been cast on him. After a few years of wandering, he discovered his body wouldn't age, and for the most part wouldn't take any damage.
Fifty years later, he returned to his home, only to find it destroyed. Having nothing to return to, Balder eventually started roaming the world, not feelings the effects nor of time, or even the ones of his own body.
He found himself effectively unable to die.
So he did the only logical thing he could do, he studied magic, studied everything he could, in any language he could.
Yet he also went to document every single non human being he came upon. As early as 1274, he already knew how to navigate Asia all the way to Japan and had explored parts of the Sahara.
Needless to say, he had also participated in a few wars as a neutral party and as he was still nobility, with the title eventually going to him as no one else stood to take the duchy that still remained, despite being destroyed, he managed to climb the social ladder all the way to royalty, even mingling with some Hapsburg at some point in the Renaissance.

It was at this point, during the renaissance that he made several lifelong friends, and several lifelong enemies, some much stronger than others.

As an explorer, he quickly wished to embark on the boats to America and found himself appreciating the place, so much so that he lived there from 1520 to 1646 to study the local version of magic. At which point he decided to go back to Europe to clear the monsters again.
The rest of his life beyond that point has been mostly uneventful beyond the point where he eventually came back to America in 1852 and has continued living there, studying magic from all over the world until the present day, at which point he joined the Knights pretty much as a de facto member due to his knowledge of all eras past.
Summary: A very old, immortal medieval man that managed to keep up with the times and survived to tell the tale. Also an enchanter mage. DEUS VULT? Only sometimes. For old time's sake.

I have something planned with him, and the next guy.
Just give me maybe a day more, it was sort of tiring to make Balder a thing.

[Primordial Luxa]

Balder looks very good just a few things
1. He can regen lost limbs? This needs to be more specific is this a full wolverine healing factor? Does he heal from burns? Bullets? Just a little more than just loosing limbs because he might get hurt in other ways.
2. Tonedown / better define the forging ability. You haven’t explained what it actually does to his weapons besides make them “magic” which in and of its self means nothing. He could make a sword magic but it wouldn’t make it stronger, sharper or more efficient. How EXACTLY does he improve weapons.
3. The pockets are too much, he’s already got plenty of powers.
4. Steel Sword: It might be able to parry artillery but that shell will still explode hard enough to kill him and even with peak human speed it will be moving too fast to actually parry in the first place. Just keep that in mind.
5. These runes are too much. Regen, Peak Human, Vague Magic weapons, super sword and now runes? Drop them they are basically three extra powers.
6. Axe. Same as the runes it’s another superweapon on top of a character already filled with tricks and abilities.
7. His sword being a sword isn’t an actually weakness, a weakness needs to be unique to the character not something that would apply to anyone in a similar situation.

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He’s a super cool character but he’s got too many powers and many are very good. He’s both a sorcerer and fight. Having both isn’t a problem but having both at full does create some issues. I recommend Making him more of a magical scholar. Someone who knows a lot about magical things but doesn’t actually use it all that much.
My Suggestion for editing powers equipment and tools. Then either choose option A or B
Power & Skill 1: Immortality: No Aging, can regen if his heart and brain are still intact.
Power & Skill 2: Peak human condition: Captain America Special
Power & Skill 3: Magical Knowledge; knows a lot about monsters and magical arts, basically a magical thesaurus.
Equipment 1: Supersword; Magical Sword that heals and doesn’t age like him, maybe has some minor gimmick can can’t hurt those pure of heart or something like that.

Weakness 1: Cannot regenerate if heart or brain is damaged.
Weakness 2: Items made in the year of his birth or earlier ignore his regenerative abilities.
Weakness 3: His knowledge of magic is about its effects and abilities, not its nature, he can tell you what a spell does but not how a spell is cast. Cannot cast himself. Not aware of magic not native to this earth.
Note: If you have a better suggestion please let me know this is just one thought of mine so feel free to make something else up. Just though I might offer a suggestion. Good work though. If I cut out something key feel free to TG me or something and well discuss how we can make things work.

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Also don’t know if you cared by I ran into this today and thought of this character. I’m a pretty visual guy so I personally find it helpful to have art go with a character but that’s just me.
EDIT: Heres something for Professor Invisible, I know you already have a pic but this one is also cool.

[Serah]

Balder looks very good just a few things
1. He can regen lost limbs? This needs to be more specific is this a full wolverine healing factor? Does he heal from burns? Bullets? Just a little more than just loosing limbs because he might get hurt in other ways.
2. Tonedown / better define the forging ability. You haven’t explained what it actually does to his weapons besides make them “magic” which in and of its self means nothing. He could make a sword magic but it wouldn’t make it stronger, sharper or more efficient. How EXACTLY does he improve weapons.
3. The pockets are too much, he’s already got plenty of powers.
4. Steel Sword: It might be able to parry artillery but that shell will still explode hard enough to kill him and even with peak human speed it will be moving too fast to actually parry in the first place. Just keep that in mind.
5. These runes are too much. Regen, Peak Human, Vague Magic weapons, super sword and now runes? Drop them they are basically three extra powers.
6. Axe. Same as the runes it’s another superweapon on top of a character already filled with tricks and abilities.
7. His sword being a sword isn’t an actually weakness, a weakness needs to be unique to the character not something that would apply to anyone in a similar situation.

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He’s a super cool character but he’s got too many powers and many are very good. He’s both a sorcerer and fight. Having both isn’t a problem but having both at full does create some issues. I recommend Making him more of a magical scholar. Someone who knows a lot about magical things but doesn’t actually use it all that much.
My Suggestion for editing powers equipment and tools. Then either choose option A or B
Power & Skill 1: Immortality: No Aging, can regen if his heart and brain are still intact.
Power & Skill 2: Peak human condition: Captain America Special
Power & Skill 3: Magical Knowledge; knows a lot about monsters and magical arts, basically a magical thesaurus.
Equipment 1: Supersword; Magical Sword that heals and doesn’t age like him, maybe has some minor gimmick can can’t hurt those pure of heart or something like that.

Weakness 1: Cannot regenerate if heart or brain is damaged.
Weakness 2: Items made in the year of his birth or earlier ignore his regenerative abilities.
Weakness 3: His knowledge of magic is about its effects and abilities, not its nature, he can tell you what a spell does but not how a spell is cast. Cannot cast himself. Not aware of magic not native to this earth.
Note: If you have a better suggestion please let me know this is just one thought of mine so feel free to make something else up. Just though I might offer a suggestion. Good work though. If I cut out something key feel free to TG me or something and well discuss how we can make things work.

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Also don’t know if you cared by I ran into this today and thought of this character. I’m a pretty visual guy so I personally find it helpful to have art go with a character but that’s just me.
EDIT: Heres something for Professor Invisible, I know you already have a pic but this one is also cool.

1. His healing ability is somewhat similar to Haegler's in the regeneration sense.
He feels wounds, he bleeds, but it goes a little bit further in the sense that he doesn't get affected by disease.
If he gets shot, cut or something like that, depending on where it was, it'll take a few days, or some weeks to heal.
Assuming he gets shot in the heart, he'll survive, but he'll need to sleep it off for a week or two. Same goes if he gets stabbed. If he gets crushed through enough force, it'll take about a month to regen it all.

2. The forging is mainly adding an element that will lash out once the weapon is used, or just the usual 'Make it sharper, make it longer, lighter, make it hurt more' Or adding some form of resistance to it.

3. I can get rid of the pockets, it was when I thought of him having more than one relic.

4. That I knew, I just forgot to put it in.

5. I thought the cooldown would make it somewhat better. 10 to 20 seconds is a lot, not mentioning the fact that they deactivate each other if one isn't always on cooldown.
Essentially, he wouldn't be able to fully concentrate on the fight, since he'd need to keep in mind dozens of things.
But if I can't keep them all, can I at least keep one of them? Ideally the force burst one.

6. I guess I can get rid of the axe, it was mostly to give him something else to rely on, should his sword not be efficient enough.
Can I replace it with a tome? It was my initial idea. A tome filled with spells but ones that actually need incantations and similar things.

7. I meant it mostly in the sense that if he needs more reach, more power or something else, he won't be able to get it. It's the same thing with Johanna in that sense.

I like the weaknesses, for the most part, except that I find the second one hard to understand as a whole since... Well, he wasn't immortal at first.
It's a curse that he got during the First crusade.

The third weakness I don't like in its entirety. Why would someone that had nothing else to do besides honing his knowledge and magic not know how to cast the spells he studied for?
It's like saying the three big mages that Brookes spoke about would literally be the same?
Plus, his knowledge dates back from a time where magic was more understood in its nature. I think he would understand it slightly more than someone from the current time. Though of course, he doesn't know anything about magic from other worlds. If Heamet were to talk about Teos, he wouldn't know anything.

Keep in mind that he is almost a full millennia old, he's not Brookes, he went way further.

Also the picture is a bit too lich like, it looks more like a spacemarine rather than an old crusader.

[Remnants of Exilvania]

Balder looks very good just a few things
1. He can regen lost limbs? This needs to be more specific is this a full wolverine healing factor? Does he heal from burns? Bullets? Just a little more than just loosing limbs because he might get hurt in other ways.
2. Tonedown / better define the forging ability. You haven’t explained what it actually does to his weapons besides make them “magic” which in and of its self means nothing. He could make a sword magic but it wouldn’t make it stronger, sharper or more efficient. How EXACTLY does he improve weapons.
3. The pockets are too much, he’s already got plenty of powers.
4. Steel Sword: It might be able to parry artillery but that shell will still explode hard enough to kill him and even with peak human speed it will be moving too fast to actually parry in the first place. Just keep that in mind.
5. These runes are too much. Regen, Peak Human, Vague Magic weapons, super sword and now runes? Drop them they are basically three extra powers.
6. Axe. Same as the runes it’s another superweapon on top of a character already filled with tricks and abilities.
7. His sword being a sword isn’t an actually weakness, a weakness needs to be unique to the character not something that would apply to anyone in a similar situation.

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He’s a super cool character but he’s got too many powers and many are very good. He’s both a sorcerer and fight. Having both isn’t a problem but having both at full does create some issues. I recommend Making him more of a magical scholar. Someone who knows a lot about magical things but doesn’t actually use it all that much.
My Suggestion for editing powers equipment and tools. Then either choose option A or B
Power & Skill 1: Immortality: No Aging, can regen if his heart and brain are still intact.
Power & Skill 2: Peak human condition: Captain America Special
Power & Skill 3: Magical Knowledge; knows a lot about monsters and magical arts, basically a magical thesaurus.
Equipment 1: Supersword; Magical Sword that heals and doesn’t age like him, maybe has some minor gimmick can can’t hurt those pure of heart or something like that.

Weakness 1: Cannot regenerate if heart or brain is damaged.
Weakness 2: Items made in the year of his birth or earlier ignore his regenerative abilities.
Weakness 3: His knowledge of magic is about its effects and abilities, not its nature, he can tell you what a spell does but not how a spell is cast. Cannot cast himself. Not aware of magic not native to this earth.
Note: If you have a better suggestion please let me know this is just one thought of mine so feel free to make something else up. Just though I might offer a suggestion. Good work though. If I cut out something key feel free to TG me or something and well discuss how we can make things work.

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Also don’t know if you cared by I ran into this today and thought of this character. I’m a pretty visual guy so I personally find it helpful to have art go with a character but that’s just me.
EDIT: Heres something for Professor Invisible, I know you already have a pic but this one is also cool.

1. His healing ability is somewhat similar to Haegler's in the regeneration sense.
He feels wounds, he bleeds, but it goes a little bit further in the sense that he doesn't get affected by disease.
If he gets shot, cut or something like that, depending on where it was, it'll take a few days, or some weeks to heal.
Assuming he gets shot in the heart, he'll survive, but he'll need to sleep it off for a week or two. Same goes if he gets stabbed. If he gets crushed through enough force, it'll take about a month to regen it all.

Ugh, in case you didn't notice, Haegler is not anymore at mere regenerative ability.
I reposted the app with immortality I believe.
Or well, I edited that in because I accidentally deleted the overworked app and posted the old one.

And hm, Haegler doesn't exactly feel the pain of the wound. He feels that there's something different from how it should be. Thinking about this, I think I'll add diminshed sensory functions, especcially in terms of touch, taste and smell as a weakness for him.

[Republic of the Cristo]

Cristo, what kind of post is that suppose to be? It's a nothing burger!

Pretty much it's just Issac's mom inviting the men into her home and beginning some dialogue which then leads to the actual meeting between the men and Issac.

[Republic of the Cristo]

Alright Cristo, I'm going to try and be nice, because I don't know if you posted to not lose a longer post, or if you simply post a one liner, which would in turn unnerve me quite a lot.

Do NOT, under any circumstances, post a one liner.
Even this one action is all the characters do, try to make it at least three to four lines minimum.
Make the characters think, do some side actions, speak of what they were doing before.

But again, do not post one liners. It's bad form and frankly it's just insulting.

I didn't mean to post just that one line, it's just that I put that done as a base so that I could go and do something else real quick - then when I came back to finish the post my Wifi dropped and I couldn't fix it.

[Serah]

Alright Cristo, I'm going to try and be nice, because I don't know if you posted to not lose a longer post, or if you simply post a one liner, which would in turn unnerve me quite a lot.

Do NOT, under any circumstances, post a one liner.
Even this one action is all the characters do, try to make it at least three to four lines minimum.
Make the characters think, do some side actions, speak of what they were doing before.

But again, do not post one liners. It's bad form and frankly it's just insulting.

I didn't mean to post just that one line, it's just that I put that done as a base so that I could go and do something else real quick - then when I came back to finish the post my Wifi dropped and I couldn't fix it.

Alright, that's good. It just gave me bad memories of my early days of Rping.