We Were Children | Survival RP | OOC | Open

[Anowa]

Basic Information
Name: April Ro'Meave
Age: 12
Sex: Female
Gender: Female
Birthplace: Ireland
Appearance:

(Image)

Skills: Jiu-Jitsu,Karate,Taekwando
Weakness: Dust
Personality:Kind,Determined,Hot-Headed
Biography:
April was born in 2004 (In April 16...heh heh) She She Was a Normal girl In London living a normal life Attending the most prestigious School in London Then the most prestigious Middle School Befeore The Sickness Was born her Parents fell ill she was left an Orphan Then The Sickness killed All Staff in the Orphanage Died Then she And all the other Orphans Left the Orphanage After Scavenging For Food they formed a gang Called The Orphans And Left To Windsor Castleo So far that is where They Stand And Fell in love with the Vice-Leader/Top General of the Orphans Garroth Perez

Equipment:Diary,Father's Axe,Father's Shotgun,Father's Pistol,Father's Map of London,Father's Sniper,Father's Knife,Clothes

Extra
RP Example:[url=http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?]f=31&t=375489&p=29045291#p29045291]Here[/url
Theme Song: Eye of the Tiger

Alright, bud. I've seen apps of yours before, and I'll admit I don't see much improvement.

[Relikai]

Dust could mean strong particles from Haze or so, or concentrations which affect internal respiratory systems.

But we would like to see more of a detailed explanation. Age 12 learning one Martial Art is hard enough, let alone 3.

[Castle Crashers]

Basic Information
Name: April Ro'Meave
Age: 12
Sex: Female
Gender: Female
Birthplace: Ireland
Appearance:

(Image)

Skills: Jiu-Jitsu,Karate,Taekwando
Weakness: Dust
Personality:Kind,Determined,Hot-Headed
Biography:
April was born in 2004 (In April 16...heh heh) She She Was a Normal girl In London living a normal life Attending the most prestigious School in London Then the most prestigious Middle School Befeore The Sickness Was born her Parents fell ill she was left an Orphan Then The Sickness killed All Staff in the Orphanage Died Then she And all the other Orphans Left the Orphanage After Scavenging For Food they formed a gang Called The Orphans And Left To Windsor Castleo So far that is where They Stand And Fell in love with the Vice-Leader/Top General of the Orphans Garroth Perez

Equipment:Diary,Father's Axe,Father's Shotgun,Father's Pistol,Father's Map of London,Father's Sniper,Father's Knife,Clothes

Extra
RP Example:[url=http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?]f=31&t=375489&p=29045291#p29045291]Here[/url
Theme Song: Eye of the Tiger

Alright, bud. I've seen apps of yours before, and I'll admit I don't see much improvement.

The lack of proper grammar is real in that app @.@

[The Landfish Colonies]

Basic Information
Name: April Ro'Meave
Age: 12
Sex: Female
Gender: Female
Birthplace: Ireland
Appearance:

(Image)

Skills: Jiu-Jitsu,Karate,Taekwando
Weakness: Dust
Personality:Kind,Determined,Hot-Headed
Biography:
April was born in 2004 (In April 16...heh heh) She She Was a Normal girl In London living a normal life Attending the most prestigious School in London Then the most prestigious Middle School Befeore The Sickness Was born her Parents fell ill she was left an Orphan Then The Sickness killed All Staff in the Orphanage Died Then she And all the other Orphans Left the Orphanage After Scavenging For Food they formed a gang Called The Orphans And Left To Windsor Castleo So far that is where They Stand And Fell in love with the Vice-Leader/Top General of the Orphans Garroth Perez

Equipment:Diary,Father's Axe,Father's Shotgun,Father's Pistol,Father's Map of London,Father's Sniper,Father's Knife,Clothes

Extra
RP Example:[url=http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?]f=31&t=375489&p=29045291#p29045291]Here[/url
Theme Song: Eye of the Tiger

I don't think I saw a single period in your bio, and while I'm not a sticler for perfect grammar, I'm going to have to ask you to rewrite that. Also, as mentioned, 3 types of martial arts for a 12 year old girl is a tad unrealistic. And I think English gun laws would have something to say about her father owning a pistol, shotgun and 'sniper'.

EDIT: And out of curiosity, what do you mean, "Dust"?

[Altito Asmoro]

Dust could mean strong particles from Haze or so, or concentrations which affect internal respiratory systems.

But we would like to see more of a detailed explanation. Age 12 learning one Martial Art is hard enough, let alone 3.

Ah, I kind of having the similar weakness. Except I would snooze repeatedly if I got it.

Alright, bud. I've seen apps of yours before, and I'll admit I don't see much improvement.

The lack of proper grammar is real in that app @.@

He/she needs some serious improvement on grammar and commas and spaces.

[Flarbinia]

Dust could mean strong particles from Haze or so, or concentrations which affect internal respiratory systems.

But we would like to see more of a detailed explanation. Age 12 learning one Martial Art is hard enough, let alone 3.

It could be an allergy.

[Beiarusia]

It could be an allergy.

Allergy or not it's still a pretty subpar weakness.

I will try to get a post up tomorrow after I wake up. It's been a trying day.

[Relikai]

Doubt it's gonna be accepted anyway tbh.

[Beiarusia]

Doubt it's gonna be accepted anyway tbh.

It's not the worst app I've ever seen, it just needs a lot of polish.

[Corrian]

Cheers, here is a rough draft of what I've got so far. Had an issue with finding a map that was big enough and covered the same ground that the RP does. If anyone else needs added feel free to ask.

That's why I screenshotted the exact area on Google Maps.

Looks good, though

[Corrian]

Oh god brain, why, no, why in your half asleep state did you come up with a way to try to make another old favorite character of yours work in this RP? Just no brain.

[Grande Republic of Arcadia]

Do you think we should have a faction on the old British navy ship in london?

[The Federation of Democratic Regions]

Do you think we should have a faction on the old British navy ship in london?

I was the first to bring that up; I'm pretty sure the cadets or one of the groups suggested it afterwards if they expanded.

[Corrian]

You know, life is really made easier when it seems that Google Street View covers the entirety of London.

[Anowa]

(the only things pyromaniacs can think about is how much they can burn with a single flame)

Didn't know you knew more about my character than I did. That's pretty weird.

[Relikai]

(the only things pyromaniacs can think about is how much they can burn with a single flame)

Didn't know you knew more about my character than I did. That's pretty weird.

^

Yeah.

[Grande Republic of Arcadia]

Do you think we should have a faction on the old British navy ship in london?

I was the first to bring that up; I'm pretty sure the cadets or one of the groups suggested it afterwards if they expanded.

i am tempted to start my own faction there whose main goal is to try to get the ship running at all costs and sail to france to see if thing are better there

[Anowa]

I was the first to bring that up; I'm pretty sure the cadets or one of the groups suggested it afterwards if they expanded.

i am tempted to start my own faction there whose main goal is to try to get the ship running at all costs and sail to france to see if thing are better there

*Looks at the docks literally right next to the Tower*

I think they have better opportunities, y'know, with sailboats.

[Corrian]

Excuse me while in my next post I'm going to be acting like I understand how pregnancy works.

[Terintania]

Yay! Working computer. At least, I have chrome, anyway. So I will try to post later.

[The Vekta-Helghast Empire]

Do you think we should have a faction on the old British navy ship in london?

I was thinking about securing the Maritime museum so that we'd have access to spare parts, schematics and equipment for sailing, etc. The Greenwich Imperium shall rise.

[Flarbinia]

(the only things pyromaniacs can think about is how much they can burn with a single flame)

Didn't know you knew more about my character than I did. That's pretty weird.

I was talking about his gang.

[Anowa]

Didn't know you knew more about my character than I did. That's pretty weird.

I was talking about his gang.

Allow me to reiterate: Assumptions make you look like an asshat.

[Russian people of america]

Anyone up for a little sub-plot in light of the larger Zombie attack? (Assuming Landfish is okay with it)

I'm thinking that some crazy zookeeper let all the animals in the London Zoo free before 'dying'. Yay or nay?

[Terintania]

What all to I have to reply to? Fell behind a bit yesterday