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Galdius
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Postby Galdius » Wed May 25, 2016 8:27 pm

Sarejo wrote:
Galdius wrote:I don't think its the shortposters tbh, I'd say it's the shitposting that's going on in the OOC.

I'm unsure If I'm still going to app up, couldn't get anything I was happy with up, but I think I've got something in the works, depends on how fast I can get something up for another RP. If the door is still open by then I'll get it up.


I don't think positive reinforcement is that great.

Half the time my posts are garbage in comparison to everyone else's mainly through poor writing, when I try and get feedback on how I can improve them and pick up the standard I get nowhere. I'd rather have people call out what's wrong (in a friendly manner) than have them praise what is right. But that's perfectionism I suppose.


My problem isn't the criticism to let newer posters learn from their mistakes, it's the "Your posts suck" comments from the salty old-timers (This does not apply to anyone here btw), which provides no substance at all to improving the posting abilities of the newbies.


I agree with you on that front, although the "old timers" (At-least the ones I RPed with) where really welcoming and helpful considering the quality of my writing, at least in comparison to when I first started than P2TM is now (Excluding the pub mob, you guys are solid.) Then again, I'm coming up on my fourth year and I'm fairly like that at times, I can be a sarcastic condescending twat, but I do tell them what is wrong and how they can fix it.
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Altito Asmoro
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Wed May 25, 2016 8:29 pm

Galdius wrote:
Sarejo wrote:
My problem isn't the criticism to let newer posters learn from their mistakes, it's the "Your posts suck" comments from the salty old-timers (This does not apply to anyone here btw), which provides no substance at all to improving the posting abilities of the newbies.


I agree with you on that front, although the "old timers" (At-least the ones I RPed with) are really welcoming and helpful considering the quality of my writing, at least in comparison to when I first started than P2TM is now (Excluding the pub mob, you guys are solid.) Then again, I'm coming up on my fourth year and I'm fairly like that at times, I can be a sarcastic condescending twat, but I do tell them what is wrong and how they can fix it.


You're not the only one who goes into sarcastic condescending twat to the newbies, though I may be less or more harsh on the sarcasm. Already on my fourth year, too.

Damn, I feel old.
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Mondrova
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Postby Mondrova » Wed May 25, 2016 8:42 pm

That moment when you get home and suddenly there is 13 new OOC pages :shock:
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Postby Deramen » Wed May 25, 2016 8:44 pm

Mondrova wrote:That moment when you get home and suddenly there is 13 new OOC pages :shock:

Just trust me and skip them.
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Postby Vacif » Wed May 25, 2016 8:45 pm

Mondrova wrote:That moment when you get home and suddenly there is 13 new OOC pages :shock:

Mostly shit-posting. Also IC is up, check the OP.
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Mondrova
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Postby Mondrova » Wed May 25, 2016 8:45 pm

Deramen wrote:
Mondrova wrote:That moment when you get home and suddenly there is 13 new OOC pages :shock:

Just trust me and skip them.


Yeah I'ma take that advice. Just reading through the IC now.
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Postby New Neros » Wed May 25, 2016 9:47 pm

Mondrova wrote:
Deramen wrote:Just trust me and skip them.


Yeah I'ma take that advice. Just reading through the IC now.

Did the same thing and came to the last page, whatever happened between pages 24 and 35 are hopefully irrelevant.
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Postby Mondrova » Wed May 25, 2016 9:48 pm

New Neros wrote:
Mondrova wrote:
Yeah I'ma take that advice. Just reading through the IC now.

Did the same thing and came to the last page, whatever happened between pages 24 and 35 are hopefully irrelevant.


Well doesn't seem like anything happened based on other people's word. Either way, got a post up, so at least I'm on track now haha.
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Wed May 25, 2016 9:49 pm

New Neros wrote:
Mondrova wrote:
Yeah I'ma take that advice. Just reading through the IC now.

Did the same thing and came to the last page, whatever happened between pages 24 and 35 are hopefully irrelevant.


Except for the part when Reverend Norv exited this RP. :(
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Postby The Greater Gambia » Wed May 25, 2016 9:51 pm

Yo, Altito, my guys immortal, your guys immortal. Want to have them know each other?
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Postby New Neros » Wed May 25, 2016 9:54 pm

Altito Asmoro wrote:
New Neros wrote:Did the same thing and came to the last page, whatever happened between pages 24 and 35 are hopefully irrelevant.


Except for the part when Reverend Norv exited this RP. :(

It's all your fault, Alt. Apologize.
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Wed May 25, 2016 9:54 pm

The Greater Gambia wrote:Yo, Altito, my guys immortal, your guys immortal. Want to have them know each other?


I though we only have two immortals, which is me and Great Confederacy (GCOCS/James for short).

I mean, sure, why not?

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Altito Asmoro wrote:
Except for the part when Reverend Norv exited this RP. :(

It's all your fault, Alt. Apologize.


Hell no.

It's not mine.
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Postby The Greater Gambia » Wed May 25, 2016 9:55 pm

Altito Asmoro wrote:
The Greater Gambia wrote:Yo, Altito, my guys immortal, your guys immortal. Want to have them know each other?


I though we only have two immortals, which is me and Great Confederacy (GCOCS/James for short).

I mean, sure, why not?



Alright, I can get a post out shortly. Should we be rivals or friends?
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Altito Asmoro
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Wed May 25, 2016 9:58 pm

The Greater Gambia wrote:
Altito Asmoro wrote:
I though we only have two immortals, which is me and Great Confederacy (GCOCS/James for short).

I mean, sure, why not?



Alright, I can get a post out shortly. Should we be rivals or friends?


Up to you. I'll respond appropriately considering Leonid's a sarcastic and devil-may-care attitudes.
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Altito Asmoro wrote:You people can call me...AA. Or Alt.
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I'm calling you "non-aligned comrade."

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Sarejo
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Postby Sarejo » Wed May 25, 2016 10:34 pm

I will be proud of this post so much when I get it up, and I truly believe it to be my best post of yet in all my year long tenure on the forums.

I apologize if anyone finds the love prelude boring or gag-worthy, but I felt establishing a backstory that Finian is reluctant to join on the fact that he doesn't actually want to leave his life behind, just let his alias make a name for itself instead, feels better than the basic "I want to leave everything behind because humanity is worth it."

Finian honestly gives a fuck less about humanity, he just wants to keep his friends, family, and girlfriend safe from harm. If anyone else is saved in the process, that's a bonus.

EDIT:

Closest thing I have to a masterpiece.
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Cheers mates.

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Postby New Neros » Wed May 25, 2016 10:50 pm

Sarejo wrote:I will be proud of this post so much when I get it up, and I truly believe it to be my best post of yet in all my year long tenure on the forums.

I apologize if anyone finds the love prelude boring or gag-worthy, but I felt establishing a backstory that Finian is reluctant to join on the fact that he doesn't actually want to leave his life behind, just let his alias make a name for itself instead, feels better than the basic "I want to leave everything behind because humanity is worth it."

Finian honestly gives a fuck less about humanity, he just wants to keep his friends, family, and girlfriend safe from harm. If anyone else is saved in the process, that's a bonus.

EDIT:

Closest thing I have to a masterpiece.


It was very nice, I enjoyed it.

I only remembered to write for the IC a few minutes ago, lest I be left completely behind. ;_;
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Sarejo
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Postby Sarejo » Wed May 25, 2016 10:53 pm

New Neros wrote:
Sarejo wrote:I will be proud of this post so much when I get it up, and I truly believe it to be my best post of yet in all my year long tenure on the forums.

I apologize if anyone finds the love prelude boring or gag-worthy, but I felt establishing a backstory that Finian is reluctant to join on the fact that he doesn't actually want to leave his life behind, just let his alias make a name for itself instead, feels better than the basic "I want to leave everything behind because humanity is worth it."

Finian honestly gives a fuck less about humanity, he just wants to keep his friends, family, and girlfriend safe from harm. If anyone else is saved in the process, that's a bonus.

EDIT:

Closest thing I have to a masterpiece.


It was very nice, I enjoyed it.

I only remembered to write for the IC a few minutes ago, lest I be left completely behind. ;_;


Thank you :)
Cheers mates.

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The Warriors of the Sun
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Postby The Warriors of the Sun » Wed May 25, 2016 10:54 pm

Sarejo wrote:I will be proud of this post so much when I get it up, and I truly believe it to be my best post of yet in all my year long tenure on the forums.

I apologize if anyone finds the love prelude boring or gag-worthy, but I felt establishing a backstory that Finian is reluctant to join on the fact that he doesn't actually want to leave his life behind, just let his alias make a name for itself instead, feels better than the basic "I want to leave everything behind because humanity is worth it."


Well, I didn't gag...it was kinda cute.

Was about to say, if you and your girlfriend lived in an apartment maybe my character and yours could unknowingly live int he same one. And the girl my character saw could have been your girlfriend...but now that I realize your character is very protective and my guy's awkwardness and shyness makes him come off as a creep, plus I think Zedekiah may be one of the weaker ones here, so I am not so sure I want him put out of commission immediately :P

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Postby Aghrabia » Thu May 26, 2016 12:03 am

Deramen wrote:
Mondrova wrote:That moment when you get home and suddenly there is 13 new OOC pages :shock:

Just trust me and skip them.

I regret the fact I have a compulsion to read everything... I hate myself sometimes.
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Postby Beiarusia » Thu May 26, 2016 12:19 am

Aghrabia wrote:
Deramen wrote:Just trust me and skip them.

I regret the fact I have a compulsion to read everything... I hate myself sometimes.

As OP I feel required to read through everything, both IC and OOC. It's an adventure to say the least.

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Postby Derelldia » Thu May 26, 2016 1:30 am

I hate to say it but I'm close to sitting out for a while because a flu had a very sudden onset last night and its killing my ability to do much of anything other than complain about it.
Basically, getting a bio for my guy might be an extra while longer than I would like it to be.

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Postby Derelldia » Thu May 26, 2016 2:18 am

Derelldia wrote:NAME: Avery Fent
ALIAS: Spectre
NATIONALITY: British
ETHNICITY: Caucasian
AGE: 33
APPEARANCE: He also would be carrying with him a black umbrella.


ALIGNMENT: Lawful Neutral
OCCUPATION: Gentleman, Scoundrel, Scholar.

ABILITIES: Avery is able to quickly unleash a large amount of a thick black fog that can easily cover a 15m squared area. Within the fog he is able to move well above average human speed as well as be able to sense anything within the fog itself.
SKILLS: If very polite counts as a skill, then he god damn well has it. Other than that Avery is skilled with a sword.
WEAKNESS: The weakness of any average human. The fog can easily be dispersed.
GOALS: Just to have a good time.
FEARS: Making a fool of himself, everything going absolute shit, running out of tea so much tea.

EQUIPMENT: A sword, which is sheathed in an umbrella (the sword being almost as long as the umbrella, about 28 inches). Flask of whiskey.

PERSONALITY: Exceedingly polite fellow that's very willing to work along with anyone. Comes off like he cares, when most of the time he really doesn't care at all.
LIKES: Whiskey (any whiskey at all), Tea So much tea
DISLIKES: Not having a good time. Not having any whiskey or tea.

BIO: Avery was not born a rich man. He wasn't even born a man. He is, in fact, a very regular human being. Well, as regular one can be while they're perpetually seeping a black fog as they grow up. Due to this abnormality Avery had while growing up, he never actually went to a school. He mostly was at his home being taught by his parents, even when he could control the fog and have it stop seeping off him he was still home schooled. It wasn't until he had moved away from his family did he realise that his whole life was the way it was because of both his powers and the fact his parents were actually quite poor. Somehow, he managed to get a job that gained him enough money to start a life of his own. Occasionally hearing on the news about the Variants existing and having abnormal powers, he soon knew what he was. At that time he received an email from The Benefactor requesting his presence in Seattle.

RP EXAMPLE: This or This

THEME: (OPTIONAL)

I motivated myself to at least get something written down for a Bio. Something basic. God this flu is gonna be the death of me it feels.

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New Neros
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Postby New Neros » Thu May 26, 2016 5:23 am

Derelldia wrote:
Derelldia wrote:NAME: Avery Fent
ALIAS: Spectre
NATIONALITY: British
ETHNICITY: Caucasian
AGE: 33
APPEARANCE: He also would be carrying with him a black umbrella.


ALIGNMENT: Lawful Neutral
OCCUPATION: Gentleman, Scoundrel, Scholar.

ABILITIES: Avery is able to quickly unleash a large amount of a thick black fog that can easily cover a 15m squared area. Within the fog he is able to move well above average human speed as well as be able to sense anything within the fog itself.
SKILLS: If very polite counts as a skill, then he god damn well has it. Other than that Avery is skilled with a sword.
WEAKNESS: The weakness of any average human. The fog can easily be dispersed.
GOALS: Just to have a good time.
FEARS: Making a fool of himself, everything going absolute shit, running out of tea so much tea.

EQUIPMENT: A sword, which is sheathed in an umbrella (the sword being almost as long as the umbrella, about 28 inches). Flask of whiskey.

PERSONALITY: Exceedingly polite fellow that's very willing to work along with anyone. Comes off like he cares, when most of the time he really doesn't care at all.
LIKES: Whiskey (any whiskey at all), Tea So much tea
DISLIKES: Not having a good time. Not having any whiskey or tea.

BIO: Avery was not born a rich man. He wasn't even born a man. He is, in fact, a very regular human being. Well, as regular one can be while they're perpetually seeping a black fog as they grow up. Due to this abnormality Avery had while growing up, he never actually went to a school. He mostly was at his home being taught by his parents, even when he could control the fog and have it stop seeping off him he was still home schooled. It wasn't until he had moved away from his family did he realise that his whole life was the way it was because of both his powers and the fact his parents were actually quite poor. Somehow, he managed to get a job that gained him enough money to start a life of his own. Occasionally hearing on the news about the Variants existing and having abnormal powers, he soon knew what he was. At that time he received an email from The Benefactor requesting his presence in Seattle.

RP EXAMPLE: This or This

THEME: (OPTIONAL)

I motivated myself to at least get something written down for a Bio. Something basic. God this flu is gonna be the death of me it feels.

Get well soon friend, the bio looks decent enough to me!
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Postby Kuhlfros » Thu May 26, 2016 6:31 am

Hope everyone doesn't mind if I freeze time and move everyone into a circle to start introductions..because that's what I plan to do :D
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Postby Rupudska » Thu May 26, 2016 6:57 am

Kuhlfros wrote:Hope everyone doesn't mind if I freeze time and move everyone into a circle to start introductions..because that's what I plan to do :D


I very much mind.
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