I meant more in regards to the whole immortality thing. I wasn't exactly thinking everyone and their mother would make one.
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by The Greater Gambia » Sat May 21, 2016 9:05 pm
by Kuhlfros » Sat May 21, 2016 9:08 pm
by Beiarusia » Sat May 21, 2016 9:10 pm
The Greater Gambia wrote:I meant more in regards to the whole immortality thing. I wasn't exactly thinking everyone and their mother would make one.
by Deramen » Sat May 21, 2016 9:15 pm
by Beiarusia » Sat May 21, 2016 9:22 pm
Deramen wrote:NAME: Victoria Mann
by Drakmah » Sat May 21, 2016 9:32 pm
Beiarusia wrote:Drakmah wrote:...
Put the pic in a spoiler, and this is nitpicking but as an art graduate it annoys me that in the drawing the right hand is backwards (EDIT: upon further inspection the left hand is backwards as well). As for his ability, I take it that he can manipulate metal/machinery in order to reshape it into something else. Is he able to warp metal to the right shape or does he have to work with what he has available? I also assume that he is limited to whatever he can get his hands on, meaning unless he has something large to work with size will be generally on a smaller scale.
Quazin the Great wrote:Rules
9. Title stuff so Drakmah doesn't burst into flame. This rule may not matter because Drakmah
has grown old and tired and no longer trifles with such inflammatory conduct.
by Deramen » Sat May 21, 2016 9:39 pm
Beiarusia wrote:Deramen wrote:NAME: Victoria Mann
How dare you bring Kanye in here?!?! That aside, it looks good, though power weaknesses should be kept under Abilities. Weaknesses is anything that is not related to your power, such as being bad at cooking or something. Also, Medium class = Middle class. Otherwise ACCEPTED. Just fix the weakness thing.
by Beiarusia » Sat May 21, 2016 9:42 pm
Drakmah wrote:...
Deramen wrote:The song fits though.
by Deramen » Sat May 21, 2016 9:48 pm
Beiarusia wrote:Drakmah wrote:...
No offense to the artist. I was just pointing it out as a form of constructive criticism (though I may have sounded a bit harsh). How you explained it just now makes so much more sense so I have no problem with it.Deramen wrote:The song fits though.
Your song can be anything you want. The song isn't even that important really, but as a superhero RP I figured it would be a fun little addition. As for Kanye, well, Kanye is Kanye.
by New Neros » Sat May 21, 2016 9:49 pm
Reploid Productions wrote:I have had to read a lot of erotic RP telegrams in the past four months and it does all start to run together into one giant mass of penises, vaginas, breasts, tentacles, dildos, bodily fluids and so on.
by Drakmah » Sat May 21, 2016 9:50 pm
Quazin the Great wrote:Rules
9. Title stuff so Drakmah doesn't burst into flame. This rule may not matter because Drakmah
has grown old and tired and no longer trifles with such inflammatory conduct.
by Beiarusia » Sat May 21, 2016 9:56 pm
Drakmah wrote:Beiarusia wrote:No offense to the artist. I was just pointing it out as a form of constructive criticism (though I may have sounded a bit harsh). How you explained it just now makes so much more sense so I have no problem with it.
It's all good! And wonderful, I'll still link two instances where it was used, one will be the one I described and one will be where he used a pile of stray materials along with several experimental machines to make an electrically powered 4x4 vehicle. I wanted to do this to show both the lower and upper levels of his ability.
by Drakmah » Sat May 21, 2016 9:59 pm
Beiarusia wrote:Drakmah wrote:It's all good! And wonderful, I'll still link two instances where it was used, one will be the one I described and one will be where he used a pile of stray materials along with several experimental machines to make an electrically powered 4x4 vehicle. I wanted to do this to show both the lower and upper levels of his ability.
Ability looks a lot more useful but not overpowered now.
Quazin the Great wrote:Rules
9. Title stuff so Drakmah doesn't burst into flame. This rule may not matter because Drakmah
has grown old and tired and no longer trifles with such inflammatory conduct.
by Drakmah » Sat May 21, 2016 10:26 pm
NAME: Shane Daughtry
ALIAS: None - He’d prefer to just use his own name
NATIONALITY: Japanese
ETHNICITY: Caucasian
AGE: 22
APPEARANCE:
- Art Curtasy of Castle Crashers
ALIGNMENT: Chaotic Good
OCCUPATION: Delivery man - Shane has a large well of experience navigating crowded and complex cities on a bicycle. His many years delivering paper messages and packages to some of the underground elite in Tokyo has shaped him into a concise, quick, and dependable deliverer. In Seattle he chose to take up the same profession, and now runs messages and packages to people within the city.
ABILITIES: Shane has the ability to psychically manipulate metal in a way that allows him to construct and deconstruct machinery. When actually using his power he goes into an immobile state, and is able to move around metal and plastics in order to make things. His eyes begin to glow blue, and the pieces of machinery that he is manipulating take on the same blue hue. In order to create complex machinery he needs to know and understand the process in which it would be pieced together manually, which he uses his advanced knowledge in engineering to determine.
SKILLS: Shane has advanced knowledge in mechanical engineering, knowing how to take apart and put together a plethora of contraptions. He can think very quickly concerning the ability to come up with new things to make, and uses his creative and inventive mind to his advantage when using his power.
WEAKNESS: Through his years he has learned to trust very few people, however when he does finally come to trust someone he does so with a fierce loyalty. This makes him very distant, until he becomes very overly invested. This leaves him open to betrayal, should someone be able to gain his trust.
GOALS: He wants to make a better life for himself. After getting a new start in the US, he only wants to escape his past and make something better.
FEARS: His past. While he had many good times his knows he made some enemies back there, and he is mortified of the day they choose to track him down.
EQUIPMENT: He carries a few odds and ends in his pockets, just in case he needs to make something in a clutch situation. Other than that and the clothes on his back he doesn’t carry much.
PERSONALITY: Shane is an avid conversationalist, enjoying calm and relaxed encounters with fairly anyone. He learned when to listen and when to speak, and in situations he can’t shoot his way out of he is normally able talk his way out of them instead. He finds his power a trivial part of himself as he has grown used to having it and only using it in non important ways. It has been years since he has attempted a mass construction of anything and so he normally lays his power on the back burner, preferring to learn more about who people are rather than what they can do. He has a heavy touch of sarcasm tossed into him, however underneath all of his barriers he is truly a dependable person and friendship is something that he values greatly.
LIKES: Good people, conversation, canned soup, sarcasm, and honesty.
DISLIKES: Being betrayed, led on, or lied to. He also dislikes arrogance and is constantly attempting to keep his own ego in check, never wanting it to get in the way of what is important.
BIO: Born in the U.S, Shane was taken to Japan at a young age. His mother and father had gotten into one final final fight that broke up the family and with his father’s blind rage that fateful night his mother had won custody of Shane who was 4 at the time. She moved to Tokyo, and he was raised there with her. He went to Japanese schools, learned the language as his own, and had Japanese friends despite his different skin color. His mother worked every job she could find and so Shane, as he became older, began to become aware of his mother’s struggles to put food on the table.
With a feeling of guilt in his heart and want for something more for his mother he began to seek work at the age of 14, finding his way unknowingly into the underground workings of the city. He took a job delivering messages and packages for one of the minor drug lords, and the community began to recognize him for his talents at being quick and concise, however this would all change when he was 15.
The incident happened when was returning from the delivery of a package. A car was fleeing the authorities, and in the driver's panic the car was set on an irreversible path toward a older woman. Shane was unable to anything as he watched the car speed toward her slow and frail body, or so he thought. Without even thinking his hand shot up toward the car, unchecked energy flowing from him. The car was then deconstructed midway through its path before the pieces were dropped on the ground. Shane, unsure of what had happened, fled the scene and became determined to discover more.
He used the money he made from delivering to keep him and his mother fed, clothed, and warm, using his spare time to study for school and to work on his power. He discovered quickly that not only could he take things apart, but that he could put them back together. Once graduated from high school at the age of 18 he went to college on the money he made, going for a major of mechanical engineering He made it out of there at the top of his class, and at that point decided to do more with his life.
Once out of college he told his crime bosses that he was done delivering packages, and that he was leaving. Only a few in the system knew of his power, and so when the time came to leave they were the ones who convinced their bosses to let him go, not wanting to risk confrontation. He moved back to the U.S. and has come to Washington to make a new life for himself, hoping to escape any who might follow him from Japan. He has cut all ties with his prior employers, and has no intention of ever trying to go back to them, nor to use any of their resources.
When he reached Seattle, he picked up a job running messages and packages to people, however he chose to do so with legal organisations this time. He does only simple deliveries that they wish to keep out of U.S. Postal Service as they are within the city, and receives only meager pay for it. He wants more but doesn’t know where to start, as his is scared to use his power to achieve wealth and fortune.
RP EXAMPLE:
Basic Usage of Power
More Expansive Usage of Power
THEME: From a Cage - Envoi
Quazin the Great wrote:Rules
9. Title stuff so Drakmah doesn't burst into flame. This rule may not matter because Drakmah
has grown old and tired and no longer trifles with such inflammatory conduct.
by The Warriors of the Sun » Sat May 21, 2016 10:38 pm
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by Wenglesy » Sun May 22, 2016 1:12 am
The Olog-Hai wrote:You don't see any hands in the cookie jar.
Other than your NPCs, of course.
Your NPCs stole the cookies while you were away.
Somehow.
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Ben M wrote:ALIAS: The Hebrew Hammer
The Nuclear Fist wrote:Transoxthraxia confirmed for shit taste
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The Nuclear Fist wrote:Transoxthraxia confirmed for shit taste
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