In Memorial of the Fallen [RWBY RP|OOC 3|Open]

[Stormwrath]

Hate to break the hearty discussion, but we should wrap up the Dance by Sunday. Any last minute additions to the Mission teams? Afaik, Leika and Ulfric are still open.

[Kuhlfros]

Hate to break the hearty discussion, but we should wrap up the Dance by Sunday. Any last minute additions to the Mission teams? Afaik, Leika and Ulfric are still open.

Does CMCL have a mission? I forgot

[Former Citizens of the Nimbus System]

Hate to break the hearty discussion, but we should wrap up the Dance by Sunday. Any last minute additions to the Mission teams? Afaik, Leika and that other teacher are still open.

If so I must ask that you hasten Zimt's response once again, Ormata; I'd rather like to finish their discussion.

Regarding missions, I'm sure that CALC if established by that point would be up for embarking on something - a bit of a trial by fire for them. I apologise for my ignorance (or lack of online peripheral vision); what opportunities are available for sallying out?

[Ormata]

Hate to break the hearty discussion, but we should wrap up the Dance by Sunday. Any last minute additions to the Mission teams? Afaik, Leika and that other teacher are still open.

If so I must ask that you hasten Zimt's response once again, Ormata; I'd rather like to finish their discussion.

Regarding missions, I'm sure that CALC if established by that point would be up for embarking on something - a bit of a trial by fire for them. I apologise for my ignorance (or lack of online peripheral vision); what opportunities are available for sallying out?

I'm waiting on Lunas Legion, man.

[Stormwrath]

Hate to break the hearty discussion, but we should wrap up the Dance by Sunday. Any last minute additions to the Mission teams? Afaik, Leika and Ulfric are still open.

Does CMCL have a mission? I forgot

It doesn't at the moment.

[Kuhlfros]

Does CMCL have a mission? I forgot

It doesn't at the moment.

We'll take up Ulfric I guess, and see if the two C's in CMCL are game to keep going

[Stormwrath]

It doesn't at the moment.

We'll take up Ulfric I guess, and see if the two C's in CMCL are game to keep going

[Former Citizens of the Nimbus System]

Gotta get this out of the way before I disappear from NS again for the next two days. Blame homework and asthma.

We should wrap up the Dance Arc by next-next week at the earliest so that we can move on to the next portion of the IC: Missions. That's right, things are going to be a lot less casual.

The OP, Co-OPs, and Serah will be in charge of our respective missions since we control teacher characters. Each teacher will be assigned one team that they will be taking care of while they are on duty as Hunters, and some characters in the teams are controlled by different players. Therefore, this will require greater communication between all of the players involved. Worldbuilding, NPCs, and the Grimm will be mainly handled by the OP/Co-OPs, but you may place your input on stuff if you want. Just contact them if you have any ideas.

These are the following types of missions that Hunters can go in: Search and Rescue (look for missing people or supplies), Perimeter Defense (garrison the kingdom's borders), Search and Destroy (prevent Grimm populations from growing too large), Village Security (self-explanatory), Escort (guard civvies against Grimm while they're travelling) and Bounty (also self-explanatory). I would like it if we aren't all doing Search and Destroy missions, since everything's gonna get pretty repetitive after a while and it might confuse players doing similar missions.

So far I have gathered a list of teachers that teams may shadow (do field work) with. Their locations and purpose will be provided later once I can get a hold of the Co-OPs and Serah.

• Adelaide Silver (Search and Rescue) Team JACL
• Victoria Schenberg (Search and Destroy) Team FATE
• Adam Lewiston (Bounty) Team YAMA
• Leika (Escort) - open -
• Ulfric Orcson (Village Security) - open -
• Leonard Demeter Team HEAT (well, just Aria and Theriam)
• Reina de Mazelle (Bounty) - open -

EDIT: Changed Adelaide's mission type to Search and Rescue since I found a way to integrate it as a plot.

Found it!

Any option catch your interest, provisional Team CALC? I'd imagine that Lucius Aurelius would want to sign up for either the 'Bounty' or 'Village Security' missions for the purpose of improving his ability to be stealthy - I'm tempted to go with the former, given the potential dynamic with Reina.

[Apror]

The only one I have to disagree with, the Battle of Pont Saint-Louis between 9 Frenchmen and more than 5,000 Italians ended in an armistice, and all 9 survived. They took down around 200 and wounded more than 600, with the total ratio being around 3:1700, meanwhile this is only 3:80. If we only take the amount they killed, that would be around 3:70.

That was while defending a fortified position.

They were defending, and I never specified the time it took. Also, the Grandfather was a powerful soldier.

[Apror]

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Here are my issues with your app so far, and some of them have been stated already by your colleagues:

Firstly, we're not gonna accept characters below the age of 16 in this RP. 17 is the minimum age. Primary reason is because from observation in other school-based RPs involving teenagers, players often write them ending up in the most animu situations ever like a shonen character groping a girl's boob(s), accidentally looking upskirt, fights breaking out almost every single chance they get, or poorly done romantic relationships. Besides that, students that are Coal's age would probably still be in combat schools as evidenced by Ruby's prior time as a sophomore at Signal, a combat school, before Ozpin accelerated her to Beacon freshman.

Second, I find the "behind the smile is a dark past" thing in his bio and personality overused in this RP. Surely you can come up with something that can make Coal stand out from the rest of the crowd and not just be another edgy teenage out to murder the fuck out of Grimm for murdering his/her significant loved ones. Same with how he fights. You don't have to make him as edgy as possible so that other characters aren't going to challenge the guy in a fight.

Your character's appearance needs some work on the wording as well.

Third, as Icrum said, your sword is cliched, being an "indestructible sword of ancient smithing". Nerf its capabilities a bit. I would also like to add that if ancient weapons are modified in any way to accommodate some kind of second form, its properties would most likely be diminished to a certain degree.

Lastly, your Semblance isn't a Semblance at all. With the right training and enough practice, anyone can analyze things faster than anyone else. Take a book report, for example. Before you have to make it, you have to read it, analyze it, throw out all the extra stuff, and put that into writing. Semblance is just your Aura manifesting itself physically as a kind of special ability.

I'll have to put your app on pending until you can rectify what has been brought up. If you need any questions just TG me or any of the Co-OPs, or visit our Discord.

@Everyone: I'll try to get a post up tonight if I'm feeling better. Why am I awfully sick this year? ;_;

It shall be done. I honestly am having trouble with a good Semblance, but I swear to god, it will be bloody amazing! And the history needs flavor?!??! By god! I will give it flavor! And I was joking about the Maiden part, but now that I heard it, I want it. But that's a different conversation. Also, I'm offended you would propose I'd say such things! I did his age because it's close to mine, and I'm 15, so I don't want it too close to Ruby's, but he is kindaofabadass.

[North Arkana]

That was while defending a fortified position.

They were defending, and I never specified the time it took. Also, the Grandfather was a powerful soldier.

I'm not amused.

[Yekrenia]

Gotta get this out of the way before I disappear from NS again for the next two days. Blame homework and asthma.

We should wrap up the Dance Arc by next-next week at the earliest so that we can move on to the next portion of the IC: Missions. That's right, things are going to be a lot less casual.

The OP, Co-OPs, and Serah will be in charge of our respective missions since we control teacher characters. Each teacher will be assigned one team that they will be taking care of while they are on duty as Hunters, and some characters in the teams are controlled by different players. Therefore, this will require greater communication between all of the players involved. Worldbuilding, NPCs, and the Grimm will be mainly handled by the OP/Co-OPs, but you may place your input on stuff if you want. Just contact them if you have any ideas.

These are the following types of missions that Hunters can go in: Search and Rescue (look for missing people or supplies), Perimeter Defense (garrison the kingdom's borders), Search and Destroy (prevent Grimm populations from growing too large), Village Security (self-explanatory), Escort (guard civvies against Grimm while they're travelling) and Bounty (also self-explanatory). I would like it if we aren't all doing Search and Destroy missions, since everything's gonna get pretty repetitive after a while and it might confuse players doing similar missions.

So far I have gathered a list of teachers that teams may shadow (do field work) with. Their locations and purpose will be provided later once I can get a hold of the Co-OPs and Serah.

• Adelaide Silver (Search and Rescue) Team JACL
• Victoria Schenberg (Search and Destroy) Team FATE
• Adam Lewiston (Bounty) Team YAMA
• Leika (Escort) - open -
• Ulfric Orcson (Village Security) - open -
• Leonard Demeter Team HEAT (well, just Aria and Theriam)
• Reina de Mazelle (Bounty) - open -

EDIT: Changed Adelaide's mission type to Search and Rescue since I found a way to integrate it as a plot.

Found it!

Any option catch your interest, provisional Team CALC? I'd imagine that Lucius Aurelius would want to sign up for either the 'Bounty' or 'Village Security' missions for the purpose of improving his ability to be stealthy - I'm tempted to go with the former, given the potential dynamic with Reina.

Speaking of this given information, I was thinking of having team SHAD go with village security, since this would actually give Hannah some interesting triggers of her past (hopefully not triggering some terrible bouts of PTSD); however, if this mission type has already been taken, I could go alternatively with Lekia (Escort) if that's an option.

[Apror]

They were defending, and I never specified the time it took. Also, the Grandfather was a powerful soldier.

I'm not amused.

I said he was a legend for a very good reason! The dude is the fame of the family! The pride! The 'This bitch is my Grandpa!' Kinda if guy.

[Former Citizens of the Nimbus System]

I'm not amused.

I said he was a legend for a very good reason! The dude is the fame of the family! The pride! The 'This bitch is my Grandpa!' Kinda if guy.

I think that it's the over-the-top nature of the numbers involved that North Arkana is concerned about rather than the actual role of the background character; he can still be a war hero.

[Ormata]

For fear of having my application forgotten, it's still pending and is Here.

[Apror]

I said he was a legend for a very good reason! The dude is the fame of the family! The pride! The 'This bitch is my Grandpa!' Kinda if guy.

I think that it's the over-the-top nature of the numbers involved that North Arkana is concerned about rather than the actual role of the background character; he can still be a war hero.

Well, let's say he survived and routed a Battalion.

[Theyra]

I think that it's the over-the-top nature of the numbers involved that North Arkana is concerned about rather than the actual role of the background character; he can still be a war hero.

Well, let's say he survived and routed a Battalion.

By himself? He routed a whole battalion by himself?

[Stormwrath]

I think that it's the over-the-top nature of the numbers involved that North Arkana is concerned about rather than the actual role of the background character; he can still be a war hero.

Well, let's say he survived and routed a Battalion.

Makes it even more unrealistic tbh.

[Altito Asmoro]

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CHARACTER INFORMATION
Name: Albastru Nostradamus
Age: 20
Sex: Male
Race: [X] Human [ ] Faunus
Animal Traits (Omit if human): N/A

Biography: Born in Solitas, specifically within the Kingdom of Atlas, Albastru never knew his parents or lineage or even relatives, and thus spent his childhood at an orphanage in Atlas. While he was not personally the strongest kid nor the fastest and the orphanage was good enough to provide enough food and sufficient, somehow Albastru always wanted more, and more. He of course sometimes on the streets under the pretext of helping staffs bought food, stole things. At first it was just small things or objects, like an apple, and not every weeks. He never really understood why he did this but the fact that he lusted a life of adventure.

Which wasn't going to happened in the near future, sadly. When he was 12, the orphanage was engulfed in flames when one of the staffs hurriedly left the kitchen because of illness on his stomach and accidentally left the stove on. Albastru was one of the few survivors, but he was unable to saved many and it affected him mentally, and we meant a lot of affected mentally. Albastru was no longer the excited and adventurous, but now suffered from extreme delusions and paranoia. He felt that someone did this on purpose because of his unknown lineage. He picked a random surname to changed his fate, whatever coming of it. And he got a scar on his right eye.

He spent nearly 5 years in sanitarium, and when he was 17 he was able to got out from the place, his mental health has been recovered but still not very healthy. He no longer suffered from extreme doses of delusions and paranoia but still lingered in his mental health from time to time and able to hide it well. One of his sponsor at the time who sponsored the recovery of the children at the orphanages secured him an entry to Vale and to Beacon Academy, but before then Albastru spent a year to trained himself physically to endured such exams. Under the pretense as a relative to a high-ranked in Schnee Dust Company (because his sponsor is) who wants a different life from Atlas, he entered the entrance exam at the age of 18 and passed. For the next 2 years he spent his life inside the academy, trained well, still taking medicines periodically.

He is determined to starts a new life, but can he?

Personality: Reserved and calm and yet also somewhat cheerful, since he still affected psychologically, he suffered from minor delusions (often seeing his dead friends from his orphanage life) and paranoia (fearful of strangers, for start, with little bit extreme) and itchy on things, forcing him to not acting courageously. He's not coward, but let just say he's cautious and cheerful. When you are insane, you can be everyone.

Appearance:

COMBAT INFORMATION
Weapon: Overseer
Appearance: Overseer
Capabilities: Capable of turning from its default battle rifle appearance into a dual short sword and a sniper rifle.

Semblance:

Telekinesis : The ability to influence objects without the need for physical interactions. He cannot lift an object as big as a medium-sized ships, smaller than that is possible. However, if he uses the power for too long or too much, he's going to put pressure on his mind and he would be physically exhausted as a result.

OOC INFORMATION
RP Activity: Often, on weekdays it's not really spotty but usually afternoon. On weekends, more common of sort.
RP Example (link or one shot): OUTBREAK
Did you read the rules? Yes, I think I read it well.

#RWBY RP Application
Do not remove this tag. It helps us find apps.

[Stormwrath]

-snip-

I would accept Bleu in, I really would, except that he had two Semblances. Moving objects with your mind is one thing, lifting yourself up is another. Both are Aura-intensive on their own and can drain his Aura level pretty quickly. So I'm gonna have to let you pick one, unless you can explain more in detail how these are not two Semblances but actually one Semblance.

[Apror]

Well, let's say he survived and routed a Battalion.

By himself? He routed a whole battalion by himself?

He lead the efforts to. And he did kick a lot ass, but no he wasn't doing it on his own.

[Stormwrath]

By himself? He routed a whole battalion by himself?

He lead the efforts to. And he did kick a lot ass, but no he wasn't doing it on his own.

Okay, but you're going to have to make it more realistic on your app's editing. Icrum can help you out with that, he knows a lot of stuff about backstories.

[Apror]

He lead the efforts to. And he did kick a lot ass, but no he wasn't doing it on his own.

Okay, but you're going to have to make it more realistic on your app's editing. Icrum can help you out with that, he knows a lot of stuff about backstories.

Help me! Can he TG me so we can talk about it?

[Altito Asmoro]

-snip-

I would accept Bleu in, I really would, except that he had two Semblances. Moving objects with your mind is one thing, lifting yourself up is another. Both are Aura-intensive on their own and can drain his Aura level pretty quickly. So I'm gonna have to let you pick one, unless you can explain more in detail how these are not two Semblances but actually one Semblance.

Ah, I was though we could have two Semblances at the same time.

I already edited it, and here's the link to the app of Bleu Nostradamus

[The Olog-Hai]

So, if I rejoin this, I'm gonna go back over my app and redo it.
Because I acknowledge that my writing was sub-par when I wrote it, but it's improved.