Mana Academy (OOC) (Semi-Open, Fantasy/Slice of Life)

[Prusselanden]

So much burn it made Bruno Mars and Mark Ronson call the police and the fireman.

So much burn the Devil turned to ice when he heard her speak.

So much burn it burned down the Fire Nation.

McGonagall is the Queen of Burn.

A dragon is already asking for retirement.

And so is Moltres.

[Chrome Legion]

Oh, Rabbit is very Mary Sue. Soliel, eh, not really.

Ignis is just a mess.

[Charlia]

Soleil is a 48. Ouch. I dunno, does anyone else think he's a Trauma Sue/Mary Sue? I think his tragic character is about as standard as any tragic character.

Rabbit is a 55. Even more ouch. This is a problem.

Man, what site did you even use? I use the Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test, or occasionally the Writer's Mary Sue Test when I feel lazy.

[Chrome Legion]

Soleil is a 48. Ouch. I dunno, does anyone else think he's a Trauma Sue/Mary Sue? I think his tragic character is about as standard as any tragic character.

Rabbit is a 55. Even more ouch. This is a problem.

Man, what site did you even use? I use the Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test, or occasionally the Writer's Mary Sue Test when I feel lazy.

I used the first one.

[Saleon]

Man, what site did you even use? I use the Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test, or occasionally the Writer's Mary Sue Test when I feel lazy.

I used the first one.

I liked the second one. The first one takes years to finish, but is good. I think the first one is a little harsh just because of how many "points" you can amass, along with how harsh the point system is. The second one is nice, and I feel it is lenient enough.

[Hetland 2]

Soleil is a 48. Ouch. I dunno, does anyone else think he's a Trauma Sue/Mary Sue? I think his tragic character is about as standard as any tragic character.

Rabbit is a 55. Even more ouch. This is a problem.

Man, what site did you even use? I use the Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test, or occasionally the Writer's Mary Sue Test when I feel lazy.

Solomon got 13.

[Charlia]

I used the first one.

I liked the second one. The first one takes years to finish, but is good. I think the first one is a little harsh just because of how many "points" you can amass, along with how harsh the point system is. The second one is nice, and I feel it is lenient enough.

But... the De-Suifiers work quite well.


I actually once got negative points for a character because of all the De-Suifiers. ^-^

[Saleon]

I liked the second one. The first one takes years to finish, but is good. I think the first one is a little harsh just because of how many "points" you can amass, along with how harsh the point system is. The second one is nice, and I feel it is lenient enough.

But... the De-Suifiers work quite well.


I actually once got negative points for a character because of all the De-Suifiers. ^-^

true, true.

[Chrome Legion]

I liked the second one. The first one takes years to finish, but is good. I think the first one is a little harsh just because of how many "points" you can amass, along with how harsh the point system is. The second one is nice, and I feel it is lenient enough.

But... the De-Suifiers work quite well.


I actually once got negative points for a character because of all the De-Suifiers. ^-^

Catherine was either a 0 or -1 depending on some question.

Now I'm doing the second test for all my characters.

[Prusselanden]

Oh, Rabbit is very Mary Sue. Soliel, eh, not really.

Ignis is just a mess.

She's an anti-sue

[Charlia]

But... the De-Suifiers work quite well.


I actually once got negative points for a character because of all the De-Suifiers. ^-^

true, true.

...it was actually Hikari.

Kasumi was more of a Mary Sue than Hikari. I do not understand. XD

But... the De-Suifiers work quite well.


I actually once got negative points for a character because of all the De-Suifiers. ^-^

Catherine was either a 0 or -1 depending on some question.

Now I'm doing the second test for all my characters.

A second opinion is always useful!

[Kingdom of Irhk]

true, true.

...it was actually Hikari.

Kasumi was more of a Mary Sue than Hikari. I do not understand. XD

Catherine was either a 0 or -1 depending on some question.

Now I'm doing the second test for all my characters.

A second opinion is always useful!

I don't even know what a Mary Sue is.

[Hetland 2]

Shit, now I really want to bring in solomon's sister. Have her be a polar opposite of him.

[Chrome Legion]

Second test:
Annice 28

Catherine: 21

Hailey: 14

Tsukuyomi: 26

Hmm, second test was much more harsh on Annice than Tsukuyomi. Interesting.

[Saleon]

Those who know Unyan, she somehow got 39 on the second test. I don't know... Nothing about her is a mary sue, and things which may be attributed to that are used as a comedic gag. Her odd name looks like onion, but is pronounced "oon-yawn." She has magical powers to summon creepy teddy bears... and she comes from a magical kingdom that is technologically superior from the rest of the world. I am confuse.

[Luminesa]

Oh, Rabbit is very Mary Sue. Soliel, eh, not really.

Ignis is just a mess.

Well, can I make him better? What can I do to make him better?

[Luminesa]

true, true.

...it was actually Hikari.

Kasumi was more of a Mary Sue than Hikari. I do not understand. XD

Catherine was either a 0 or -1 depending on some question.

Now I'm doing the second test for all my characters.

A second opinion is always useful!

It's because Kasumi is Rei and Hikari is Asuka. Rei is a borderline Mary Sue who does very questionable things and never gets told-off for them, who is unnaturally beautiful, and who is essentially Commander Ikari's fantasy. Asuka is a normal teenager who is a brat with an unusual backstory, but she's not allowed to get away with as much.

That being said, I still prefer Rei, only because I feel it's not completely her fault. Anno didn't do a good job, in my opinion, of developing her, and she could have been a much better character.

Overall, Misato is best NGE girl (and I will always stand by this), because she's the in-between.

[Luminesa]

...it was actually Hikari.

Kasumi was more of a Mary Sue than Hikari. I do not understand. XDA second opinion is always useful!

I don't even know what a Mary Sue is.

TvTropes will explain it better, but essentially a character who is a.) OP, b.) has flaws but is never criticized for them, and/or c.) is considered perfect by mostly everyone.

[Chrome Legion]

Oh, Rabbit is very Mary Sue. Soliel, eh, not really.

Ignis is just a mess.

Well, can I make him better? What can I do to make him better?

Well, he's mostly a Mary Sue, because you've been using him to forward the plot, so for now I'd just leave it alone. Most of the Mary Sue things he does is to move along the plot or character interaction, so it's kind of necessary.

[Luminesa]

Well, can I make him better? What can I do to make him better?

Well, he's mostly a Mary Sue, because you've been using him to forward the plot, so for now I'd just leave it alone. Most of the Mary Sue things he does is to move along the plot or character interaction, so it's kind of necessary.

Well...I will admit I have been using Rabbit for a lot...I have a tendency to panick when my RPs slow down. Sorry. XD

But like, is the character bad? I'm worried now, I've never been told a character is a Mary Sue, and I wanna make them better.

[Kingdom of Irhk]

I don't even know what a Mary Sue is.

TvTropes will explain it better, but essentially a character who is a.) OP, b.) has flaws but is never criticized for them, and/or c.) is considered perfect by mostly everyone.

Ooooooh. Now I get it.

Now I shall make the test to see my characters' score.

[Luminesa]

TvTropes will explain it better, but essentially a character who is a.) OP, b.) has flaws but is never criticized for them, and/or c.) is considered perfect by mostly everyone.

Ooooooh. Now I get it.

Now I shall make the test to see my characters' score.

I wouldn't think any of yours are too bad...

[Saleon]

only 30 on the first test, hit some desueifiers fortunately, but I am still high on mary sue. I ask how.

[Charlia]

...it was actually Hikari.

Kasumi was more of a Mary Sue than Hikari. I do not understand. XDA second opinion is always useful!

It's because Kasumi is Rei and Hikari is Asuka. Rei is a borderline Mary Sue who does very questionable things and never gets told-off for them, who is unnaturally beautiful, and who is essentially Commander Ikari's fantasy. Asuka is a normal teenager who is a brat with an unusual backstory, but she's not allowed to get away with as much.

That being said, I still prefer Rei, only because I feel it's not completely her fault. Anno didn't do a good job, in my opinion, of developing her, and she could have been a much better character.

Overall, Misato is best NGE girl (and I will always stand by this), because she's the in-between.

...I didn't make them as Rei and Asuka though. I made them as Kasumi and Hikari. I only realized the similarities after the fact and then started using it as a running gag.

It's not like Katelyn, who was Kyoko at first and then became her own character. I don't understand it.

[Sky-TheLandOfNekos]

There is no Mary Sue greater than this.



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