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Postby Asgeirria » Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:47 am

Zeinbrad wrote:,Asg, you need to stop taking control of my character, saying he got hit or is wounded or his attacks are feeble.

Just say 'tried to' and let me decide the outcome. Don't say it hit or what it did.

Also, you ignored the fact Joeda dropped rubble on Zabakk.


Bruv, I 'tried' and you completely ignored the attack, therefore it hit.
Again, if you'd looked at Cythraul's stats, he's huge compared to you. Dark side or not, size matters.
How are you taking a saber to the front, attacking Cythraul, force pushing Jadakk, AND dropping rubble on him? I call godmodding. I have three mains, you have one. This won't end well for you.

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Postby Asgeirria » Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:49 am

Asgeirria wrote:....He swept off the other handle, blocking with the first blade, igniting the second as he swung upwards under his adversary's blade with it....Then one of the two remaining officers fired three bolts at the Sith from his shred of cover, while the other returned fire at the advancing squad.
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Postby Prolieum » Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:52 am

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Zeinbrad wrote:,Asg, you need to stop taking control of my character, saying he got hit or is wounded or his attacks are feeble.[

Just say 'tried to' and let me decide the outcome. Don't say it hit or what it did.

Also, you ignored the fact Joeda dropped rubble on Zabakk.


Bruv, I 'tried' and you completely ignored the attack, therefore it hit.


He is right here, Zeinbrad. The attack was not countered, you only dodged Jadakk's

Again, if you'd looked at Cythraul's stats, he's huge compared to you. Dark side or not, size matters


Partially true. Juyo is an extraordinarily kinetic form, and enhancing one's strength with the Force can be more than enough to overpower even someone of Cythraul's size, however, it was not noted that he was enhancing it. In any case, describing attacks as feeble is generally fine, but that can be seen as a character's personal view.

How are you taking a saber to the front, attacking Cythraul, force pushing Jadakk, AND dropping rubble on him? I call godmodding. I have three mains, you have one. This won't end well for you.


Pushing Jadakk was fine, as noted, the rubble was not dropped.

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Verdict:


Cythraul's strike hit. Jadakk was Force pushed back, but was not hit by rubble. The blaster shot did not hit-it is considered still in-flight, Joeda retains a chance to react to it.
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Postby Zeinbrad » Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:55 am

Prolieum wrote:
Zeinbrad wrote:,Asg, you need to stop taking control of my character, saying he got hit or is wounded or his attacks are feeble.

Just say 'tried to' and let me decide the outcome. Don't say it hit or what it did.


Yes.

Also, you ignored the fact Joeda dropped rubble on Zabakk.


No, actually. He attempted to do so after pushing him, but was being attacked by Cythraul at the time, so said attempt was interrupted.

Ah. I see.

Als I would argue that Cade is...too perfectly dealing with being attacked on three sides with boasters and grenades.
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Postby Prolieum » Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:57 am

Zeinbrad wrote:
Prolieum wrote:

Yes.



No, actually. He attempted to do so after pushing him, but was being attacked by Cythraul at the time, so said attempt was interrupted.

Ah. I see.

Als I would argue that Cade is...too perfectly dealing with being attacked on three sides with boasters and grenades.


Admittedly, no comment was made on how well Cade was doing in the last post at all. He may not be doing too hot.
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Postby Zeinbrad » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:00 am

Prolieum wrote:
Asgeirria wrote:


Bruv, I 'tried' and you completely ignored the attack, therefore it hit.


He is right here, Zeinbrad. The attack was not countered, you only dodged Jadakk's

Again, if you'd looked at Cythraul's stats, he's huge compared to you. Dark side or not, size matters


Partially true. Juyo is an extraordinarily kinetic form, and enhancing one's strength with the Force can be more than enough to overpower even someone of Cythraul's size, however, it was not noted that he was enhancing it. In any case, describing attacks as feeble is generally fine, but that can be seen as a character's personal view.

How are you taking a saber to the front, attacking Cythraul, force pushing Jadakk, AND dropping rubble on him? I call godmodding. I have three mains, you have one. This won't end well for you.


Pushing Jadakk was fine, as noted, the rubble was not dropped.

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Verdict:


Cythraul's strike hit. Jadakk was Force pushed back, but was not hit by rubble. The blaster shot did not hit-it is considered still in-flight, Joeda retains a chance to react to it.

Hmm, thought I made it clear that Joeda jumped away from the two, as in, away from their blows.

I was imaging him in front of Zaddak and Cry. And used the force to push Zaddak while not being engaged. After he pushed Zaddak and threw rubble on him he engaged Cry.

Sorry for not being clear on that.
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Postby Zeinbrad » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:02 am

Shit, did I make a typo and not notice it?
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Postby Asgeirria » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:03 am

Zeinbrad wrote:
Prolieum wrote:

Yes.



No, actually. He attempted to do so after pushing him, but was being attacked by Cythraul at the time, so said attempt was interrupted.

Ah. I see.

Als I would argue that Cade is...too perfectly dealing with being attacked on three sides with boasters and grenades.


Boasting is overrated.

But in all seriousness, even common soldiers know to throw back grenades. With the force, and as attuned as Cade is, what he did is 'papitas' as one might say. Also, three sides? As far as I know you attacked from one direction at a PLATFORM, since you mentioned nothing else. There is one door from the access tunnels, so I assume you're climbing up. The fact that you mentioned a "first line of defense" makes me think you vastly overestimated how many CFS officers I had at my disposal. Originally I had 5 guys behind crates and rubble. Now I have two.
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Postby Prolieum » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:04 am

Zeinbrad wrote:
Prolieum wrote:


He is right here, Zeinbrad. The attack was not countered, you only dodged Jadakk's



Partially true. Juyo is an extraordinarily kinetic form, and enhancing one's strength with the Force can be more than enough to overpower even someone of Cythraul's size, however, it was not noted that he was enhancing it. In any case, describing attacks as feeble is generally fine, but that can be seen as a character's personal view.



Pushing Jadakk was fine, as noted, the rubble was not dropped.

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Verdict:


Cythraul's strike hit. Jadakk was Force pushed back, but was not hit by rubble. The blaster shot did not hit-it is considered still in-flight, Joeda retains a chance to react to it.

Hmm, thought I made it clear that Joeda jumped away from the two, as in, away from their blows.

I was imaging him in front of Zaddak and Cry. And used the force to push Zaddak while not being engaged. After he pushed Zaddak and threw rubble on him he engaged Cry.

Sorry for not being clear on that.


Well, two things. Firstly, Cythraul was moving to engage as Joeda moved in, so they were pretty much destined to meet before or at the same time as the push. If that comment was not made, you would be fine, in this case, not.

It will not be a killing blow, but it certainly sundered his armor.

Additionally, I need a number for the soldiers under you.
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Postby Prolieum » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:06 am

Asgeirria wrote:
Zeinbrad wrote:Ah. I see.

Als I would argue that Cade is...too perfectly dealing with being attacked on three sides with boasters and grenades.


Boasting is overrated.

But in all seriousness, even common soldiers know to throw back grenades. With the force, and as attuned as Cade is, what he did is 'papitas' as one might say. Also, three sides? As far as I know you attacked from one direction at a PLATFORM, since you mentioned nothing else. There is one door from the access tunnels, so I assume you're climbing up. The fact that you mentioned a "first line of defense" makes me think you vastly overestimated how many CFS officers I had at my disposal. Originally I had 5 guys behind crates and rubble. Now I have two.


The effectiveness will depend entirely on the fuse's timer. With no specific commentary as to this, I will assume a standard three-second fuse.
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Postby Zeinbrad » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:14 am

Prolieum wrote:
Zeinbrad wrote:Hmm, thought I made it clear that Joeda jumped away from the two, as in, away from their blows.

I was imaging him in front of Zaddak and Cry. And used the force to push Zaddak while not being engaged. After he pushed Zaddak and threw rubble on him he engaged Cry.

Sorry for not being clear on that.


Well, two things. Firstly, Cythraul was moving to engage as Joeda moved in, so they were pretty much destined to meet before or at the same time as the push. If that comment was not made, you would be fine, in this case, not.

It will not be a killing blow, but it certainly sundered his armor.

Additionally, I need a number for the soldiers under you.

Hmm...Joeda was pushing the rubble on Zabakk before he moved in. It was force push-rubble-and then attacking Cry.

Arg-I wrote that two teams positioned themsleves on the sides of Cade. It's one team in front, one team on the right and one on the left.

Also four squads of about...20 combined.
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Postby Zeinbrad » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:17 am

Also, I had an entirely different image of the location. I was picturing a hallway type thing with rubble all around and down that hallway was your characters. I wrote the entire assault asuminv it was some kind of hallway was leading to your guys.
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Postby Prolieum » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:18 am

Zeinbrad wrote:
Prolieum wrote:

Well, two things. Firstly, Cythraul was moving to engage as Joeda moved in, so they were pretty much destined to meet before or at the same time as the push. If that comment was not made, you would be fine, in this case, not.

It will not be a killing blow, but it certainly sundered his armor.

Additionally, I need a number for the soldiers under you.

Hmm...Joeda was pushing the rubble on Zabakk before he moved in. It was force push-rubble-and then attacking Cry.


No, Joeda ducked his attack, remember? The Force Push was after the distress call, which itself was after the ducking.

Arg-I wrote that two teams positioned themsleves on the sides of Cade. It's one team in front, one team on the right and one on the left.

Also four squads of about...20 combined.


Sith Empire squads are 5-10, so four of five each fits.
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Postby Prolieum » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:22 am

Zeinbrad wrote:Also, I had an entirely different image of the location. I was picturing a hallway type thing with rubble all around and down that hallway was your characters. I wrote the entire assault asuminv it was some kind of hallway was leading to your guys.


The platform's height is never mentioned, and there is a hallway leading to it, so I assumed that it was simply a step up, especially given that it was clearly right against the door.

Also, Asgeirra pegs the troopers at "several dozen", so you can either assume he miscounted, or bump up your number. I think I will cap it at one platoon of fifty.
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Postby Asgeirria » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:22 am

Zeinbrad wrote:Also, I had an entirely different image of the location. I was picturing a hallway type thing with rubble all around and down that hallway was your characters. I wrote the entire assault asuminv it was some kind of hallway was leading to your guys.


Do you want to start over again? :) if so I'll give you a very exact description of the place. If you want to keep going from here that's fine too.
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Postby Zeinbrad » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:23 am

"Joeda ducked under Jadakks blade, the blade scrapping his shoulder pad as he [b]jumped[\b] back from the Jedi"

This is what I mean he jumped back to get some distance.
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Postby Dijen (Ancient) » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:24 am

Rannoria, you aren't supposed to control other people's characters. You don't need to delete the last post, but don't do that from now on. (It just isn't in Karl's character to be small-talking with them)

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Postby Kyraina » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:25 am

Prolieum wrote:
Zeinbrad wrote:Also, I had an entirely different image of the location. I was picturing a hallway type thing with rubble all around and down that hallway was your characters. I wrote the entire assault asuminv it was some kind of hallway was leading to your guys.


The platform's height is never mentioned, and there is a hallway leading to it, so I assumed that it was simply a step up, especially given that it was clearly right against the door.

Also, Asgeirra pegs the troopers at "several dozen", so you can either assume he miscounted, or bump up your number. I think I will cap it at one platoon of fifty.

Good God that is a massive Platoon, that's almost company size
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Postby Zeinbrad » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:26 am

Also, I'll go to more detail on the troopers weapons.
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Postby Prolieum » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:29 am

Kyraina wrote:
Prolieum wrote:
The platform's height is never mentioned, and there is a hallway leading to it, so I assumed that it was simply a step up, especially given that it was clearly right against the door.

Also, Asgeirra pegs the troopers at "several dozen", so you can either assume he miscounted, or bump up your number. I think I will cap it at one platoon of fifty.

Good God that is a massive Platoon, that's almost company size


That is the smallest Platoon, 50-100 is standard size. A Company is 100-300.
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Postby Prolieum » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:30 am

Zeinbrad wrote:"Joeda ducked under Jadakks blade, the blade scrapping his shoulder pad as he [b]jumped[\b] back from the Jedi"

This is what I mean he jumped back to get some distance.
Asg-Frankly I thinks it best at this point. Sorry.


If possible, I would prefer for you to do so by doing a full re-edit of your previous posts, rather than making new ones, or things will get very confusing.
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Postby Zeinbrad » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:35 am

Prolieum wrote:
Zeinbrad wrote:"Joeda ducked under Jadakks blade, the blade scrapping his shoulder pad as he [b]jumped[\b] back from the Jedi"

This is what I mean he jumped back to get some distance.
Asg-Frankly I thinks it best at this point. Sorry.


If possible, I would prefer for you to do so by doing a full re-edit of your previous posts, rather than making new ones, or things will get very confusing.

Can we just edit in *retcon?
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Postby Prolieum » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:37 am

Zeinbrad wrote:
Prolieum wrote:
If possible, I would prefer for you to do so by doing a full re-edit of your previous posts, rather than making new ones, or things will get very confusing.

Can we just edit in *retcon?


Ah, fine, but make it obvious.

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Postby Asgeirria » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:40 am

Zeinbrad wrote:"Joeda ducked under Jadakks blade, the blade scrapping his shoulder pad as he [b]jumped[\b] back from the Jedi"

This is what I mean he jumped back to get some distance.
Asg-Frankly I thinks it best at this point. Sorry.


No problem. :) I'm not here to win, just to have fun.

Okay, there is rubble piled up to about three feet in front of the door, with two troopers behind it firing at anyone who advances. A few feet behind them is Cythraul. To his left flank there is a trooper behind two square 4-foot crates, with some rubble piled on his side of it. To cythraul's right flank is a trooper behind a single 3.5 foot crate, with some rubble on either side. Directly behind Cythraul are two 4 foot crates with a 3.5 crate in between. The fifth trooper is behind this. The platform itself is 70 feet long and 100 wide. It juts out from the diagonal slope of the temple's side, far below the temple itself. About 15 feet of it are covered by the sides of the temple, forming conclave. The lift is at the far right, about 30 feet from the entrance. Cade is on the side closest to the door, down on one knee. Jadakk is in the center left of the platform scanning the sky and adjacent buildings, standing about 15 feet away from Cythraul and 40 from Cade. There is at least two squads at the end of the hall, hiding behind a corner. The hallway is L shaped, with the corner about 80 meters from the barricade. The corridor itself is very wide, about 16×10 feet. (Wider than it is higher)

All the troopers are in Imperial armor, with Imperial gear, including blasters, grenades and (I think) vibroblades? Not familiar with sith infantry equipment.
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Galactic Republic
Jedi Order

Supreme Chancellor Berooken†
Jedi Master Orgus Din
Jedi Master Ven Zallow†
Jedi Master Kellian Jarro
Admiral Zale Barrows
General Var Suthra
Satele Shan
Senator Paran Am-Ris

Sith Empire
Mandalorian Clans

Darth Angral
Darth Malgus
Darth Lachris
Darth Baras
Lord Adraas
Lord Praven
Lord Javis Koldor
Captain Rycus Kilran
Imperial admiral
Captain Jard
Captain Kerse
Officer Roon Neele
Officer Hesker
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