Star Wars: The Fall Of Coruscant (OOC/Dead)

[Asgeirria]

Character Name: Cade Dunwell

Jedi Or Sith: Jedi

Rank/Class: Jedi Master

Gender: Male

Age: 38

Height: 6'2

Race/Species: Human

Appearance: Tall, strong, soft brown eyes, defined, masculine eyebrows, high cheekbones, prominant, strong nose, fiery red hair swept to the side and back.

Home world: Corellia

Personality: Driven, confident, brazen, gallant, youthful

Biography: Cade Dunwell was born on Corellia, and brought to the temple at a young age. He made friends with Cythraul, served with him on several missions. Cade was always favored by the council and was given the title of Jedi Master at a young age. He was sent on many important negotiation and raiding missions on underworld targets. He made many friends and enemies during this time, and did a lot of travelling. In his adventures he met several Sith, Dark Jedi, and Grey Jedi. His perspective on the Force changed considerably over the years, eventually until he was in constant conflict with the council. By this time, however, he already had a padawan.

Lightsaber: A simple blue blade on an unadorned hilt.

Midichlorian Count: 10,000

Strengths: Strong in the Force, well-rounded and experienced in combat, command, and piloting. He has connections in the underworld, and is street savvy. Fiercely intelligent, natural leader.

Weaknesses: He has enemies in politics and criminal organizations. He is dangerously close to the Dark side, and has grown resentful of the council and their methods. He is trapped by Sith and Sith troops and must escape or fight his way out.

Starting Location: Barricaded in a maintenance station in the ratways below the Temple




Character Name: Jadakk Khan

Jedi Or Sith: Jedi

Rank/Class: Jedi Knight

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Height: 6'4"

Race/Species: Zabrak

Appearance: Tall and burly. Two horns on his forehead, above his ears, and at the back of his had, symmetrical. Khaki skin, sharp, black facial tattoos, golden eyes.

Home world: Iridonia

Personality: Aggressive, reckless, compassionate, stubborn

Biography: Cade Dunwell rescued Jadakk from a raided homestead on Iridonia when he was just an infant. When Cade sensed the Force in Jadakk, he brought him back to the Temple and raised him as his own son. When Cade became a Master, he took on Jadakk as his padawan, and they served on missions across the galaxy together. When Jadakk became a Knight, they were inseparable. They were in the temple when it was attacked, and quickly rounded as many Jedi as they could, and tried to help a large group of padawans escape. The group was split up, with many casualties, and the duo found themselves barricaded into a room in the ratways, cut off from help and hope.

Lightsaber: A simple blue lightsaber with an unadorned hilt, and a vibroblade.

Midichlorian Count: 6,500

Strengths: Jadakk is strong and aggressive, formidable in combat and proficient in form VII Juyo, as well as in offensive Force powers.

Weaknesses: He is also a poor planner, especially defensively. Juyo has limitations in combat. His large stature makes him an easy target. He is attached to his adoptive father. He starts off in a defensive position, trapped with Cade.

Starting Location: Barricaded in a maintenance station in the ratways below the Temple

Well, the Sith are now outnumbered nearly 2-to-1 (more than 2-1 depending on how you count) by the Jedi, which is becoming a serious problem. Still, that does not preclude Accepting Khan, but Cade has an issue. Generally, one becomes a Master only through raising a Padawan to knighthood, exceptions being rare-given his Dark Side leanings, and the timing, it would seem that he would have to still be a Knight. He could also use another combat weakness. I should note that saying that Juyo has weaknesses is not really a weakness for Khan, though he is still acceptable.

Fixed the discrepancy, not 100% on my Jedi lore, lol. As to combat weaknesses, his weakness is that while he is well-rounded, he is not great at any one thing. Also he used form VI (not technically a weakness, but accentuates his all-roundedness). As to Juyo, it has weaknesses. Such as large groups of blasters, and large groups in general. It's a demanding form which drains energy.

[Asgeirria]

Well, the Sith are now outnumbered nearly 2-to-1 (more than 2-1 depending on how you count) by the Jedi, which is becoming a serious problem.

Would it help if we let the Sith characters take a small force of lower-ranked Sith and Troopers with them in order to even out the odds? Have them as expendable NPCs which the player controls and so actually have a chance of bringing down, or slowing down, a PC, rather than just being mooks.

I 100% concur.

[Dijen (Ancient)]

I'm going to ask this every time, but what do you think of my newest post?

[Spindle]

I'm going to ask this every time, but what do you think of my newest post?

I like it (The preface of doom, I know), but it's tiring to read. You need to paragraph when you're starting a new piece of dialogue: it makes it far easier on the eyes. Other than that, it looks perfectly fine.

[Prolieum]

Well, the Sith are now outnumbered nearly 2-to-1 (more than 2-1 depending on how you count) by the Jedi, which is becoming a serious problem. Still, that does not preclude Accepting Khan, but Cade has an issue. Generally, one becomes a Master only through raising a Padawan to knighthood, exceptions being rare-given his Dark Side leanings, and the timing, it would seem that he would have to still be a Knight. He could also use another combat weakness. I should note that saying that Juyo has weaknesses is not really a weakness for Khan, though he is still acceptable.

Fixed the discrepancy, not 100% on my Jedi lore, lol. As to combat weaknesses, his weakness is that while he is well-rounded, he is not great at any one thing. Also he used form VI (not technically a weakness, but accentuates his all-roundedness). As to Juyo, it has weaknesses. Such as large groups of blasters, and large groups in general. It's a demanding form which drains energy.

I can accept that, though if he is using Niman with that midichlorian count, he is going to be a big Force user. I know the weaknesses of Juyo, what I am saying is that, since every form has weaknesses, you cannot really list it as one unless they modified it so the weakness is even bigger. For example, Emilgotha is a Form V user, but lack of mobility is not listed as a weakness. By contrast, Zeres is a Form II user, but since he both has a specialized hilt, and a specialized manner of dueling in it, his weakness to blasterfire does count, while it would not if he was just standard Makashi.

[Dijen (Ancient)]

I'm going to ask this every time, but what do you think of my newest post?

I like it (The preface of doom, I know), but it's tiring to read. You need to paragraph when you're starting a new piece of dialogue: it makes it far easier on the eyes. Other than that, it looks perfectly fine.

Should I make them shorter to?

[Spindle]

I like it (The preface of doom, I know), but it's tiring to read. You need to paragraph when you're starting a new piece of dialogue: it makes it far easier on the eyes. Other than that, it looks perfectly fine.

Should I make them shorter to?

Break them down first, then we can see if there's anything that's too long. My gut says there won't be, but we'll find out.

[Dijen (Ancient)]

Should I make them shorter to?

Break them down first, then we can see if there's anything that's too long. My gut says there won't be, but we'll find out.

I broke it down, what do you think?

[Spindle]

Break them down first, then we can see if there's anything that's too long. My gut says there won't be, but we'll find out.

I broke it down, what do you think?

Yep, that's fine. There aren't any paragraphs which are so short as to seem extraneous, and none are too long as to be tiring.

[Spindle]

Well, the Sith are now outnumbered nearly 2-to-1 (more than 2-1 depending on how you count) by the Jedi, which is becoming a serious problem.

Would it help if we let the Sith characters take a small force of lower-ranked Sith and Troopers with them in order to even out the odds? Have them as expendable NPCs which the player controls and so actually have a chance of bringing down, or slowing down, a PC, rather than just being mooks.

[Anglo Saxon-Franko]

Hey guys lol did o screw something up with my last post when Clique arrived at the temple haha I've seemed to be over looked or o screwed something up lol

[Kyraina]

Hey guys lol did o screw something up with my last post when Clique arrived at the temple haha I've seemed to be over looked or o screwed something up lol

You were a little late with Clique.

[Anglo Saxon-Franko]

Hey guys lol did o screw something up with my last post when Clique arrived at the temple haha I've seemed to be over looked or o screwed something up lol

You were a little late with Clique.

Ah lol I'll have him stuble into the council chamber haha or idk stalk something

[Kyraina]

You were a little late with Clique.

Ah lol I'll have him stuble into the council chamber haha or idk stalk something

Don't forget to post with Saxon

[Prolieum]

Well, the Sith are now outnumbered nearly 2-to-1 (more than 2-1 depending on how you count) by the Jedi, which is becoming a serious problem.

Would it help if we let the Sith characters take a small force of lower-ranked Sith and Troopers with them in order to even out the odds? Have them as expendable NPCs which the player controls and so actually have a chance of bringing down, or slowing down, a PC, rather than just being mooks.

They can certainly have them about, but it is not so much as they are all fighting in a big brawl, just that the story focus shifts heavily towards the Jedi.

[Anglo Saxon-Franko]

Ah lol I'll have him stuble into the council chamber haha or idk stalk something

Don't forget to post with Saxon

Is there a post that requires my attention? Lol last one I saw was last night when I made my last post

[Kyraina]

Don't forget to post with Saxon

Is there a post that requires my attention? Lol last one I saw was last night when I made my last post

Ahhhh look at the last couple post of mine.

[Anglo Saxon-Franko]

Will do

[Spindle]

Aha! A fight has erupted! There is only one thing for me to do!

*Goes off and steals the engine*

[Kyraina]

Would it help if we let the Sith characters take a small force of lower-ranked Sith and Troopers with them in order to even out the odds? Have them as expendable NPCs which the player controls and so actually have a chance of bringing down, or slowing down, a PC, rather than just being mooks.

They can certainly have them about, but it is not so much as they are all fighting in a big brawl, just that the story focus shifts heavily towards the Jedi.

Remember Pavish Force pushed the ramp off in the last fight with the Sith

[Asgeirria]

Fixed the discrepancy, not 100% on my Jedi lore, lol. As to combat weaknesses, his weakness is that while he is well-rounded, he is not great at any one thing. Also he used form VI (not technically a weakness, but accentuates his all-roundedness). As to Juyo, it has weaknesses. Such as large groups of blasters, and large groups in general. It's a demanding form which drains energy.

I can accept that, though if he is using Niman with that midichlorian count, he is going to be a big Force user. I know the weaknesses of Juyo, what I am saying is that, since every form has weaknesses, you cannot really list it as one unless they modified it so the weakness is even bigger. For example, Emilgotha is a Form V user, but lack of mobility is not listed as a weakness. By contrast, Zeres is a Form II user, but since he both has a specialized hilt, and a specialized manner of dueling in it, his weakness to blasterfire does count, while it would not if he was just standard Makashi.

I'm open to suggestions as far as weaknesses. I would think their close path to the Dark side would be pretty big flaws. For all intents and purposes, they are fairly well balanced. Cade has a very passive lightsaber form paired with high force sensitivity, while Jadakk has the opposite. They are a good team, though when separated they lose a certain amount of functional ability.

So.... Accepted, or...?

[Prolieum]

Aha! A fight has erupted! There is only one thing for me to do!

*Goes off and steals the engine*

Buy'ce=Bucket Kovid=Head. It is Mando'a.

[Spindle]

Aha! A fight has erupted! There is only one thing for me to do!

*Goes off and steals the engine*

Buy'ce=Bucket Kovid=Head. It is Mando'a.

Okay. I'll edit that in then.

[Prolieum]

I can accept that, though if he is using Niman with that midichlorian count, he is going to be a big Force user. I know the weaknesses of Juyo, what I am saying is that, since every form has weaknesses, you cannot really list it as one unless they modified it so the weakness is even bigger. For example, Emilgotha is a Form V user, but lack of mobility is not listed as a weakness. By contrast, Zeres is a Form II user, but since he both has a specialized hilt, and a specialized manner of dueling in it, his weakness to blasterfire does count, while it would not if he was just standard Makashi.

I'm open to suggestions as far as weaknesses. I would think their close path to the Dark side would be pretty big flaws. For all intents and purposes, they are fairly well balanced. Cade has a very passive lightsaber form paired with high force sensitivity, while Jadakk has the opposite. They are a good team, though when separated they lose a certain amount of functional ability.

So.... Accepted, or...?

Khan was already Accepted, Cade is Accepted as well.

[Prolieum]

Buy'ce=Bucket Kovid=Head. It is Mando'a.

Okay. I'll edit that in then.

The term is a half-joking, sort of affectionate insult one that Mandos call each other sometimes, basically just another term for Mandalorian, but one which indicates she has some familiarity with their culture.

Sort of like "Jarhead" I suppose, though a bit different.