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Postby Anglo Saxon-Franko » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:31 pm

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Anglo Saxon-Franko wrote:Haha so what does everyone think of the Adventures if Clique

I think they are great. You write pretty well and I like Clique's character.

Thank haha but I have the feeling somehow Clique is going to get himself in trouble lol just not sure how or when it's going to happen but I see it coming.
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Postby Dijen (Ancient) » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:33 pm

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Dijen wrote:What do you guys think about my post? I welcome all constructive criticism.


Rule V broken. Banned.

In all seriousness, I think you write rather like me, which is both good, and bad. It can get a little stunted, especially with brief bits of dialogue, but it does a generally good job of setting the scene, describing events, etc. Perhaps a bit more intracharacter dialogue, descriptions of feelings/motivations would help.

What is defined as "strong or intense language"? just for reference. Thanks for the advice.
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:37 pm

Dijen wrote:
Prolieum wrote:
Rule V broken. Banned.

In all seriousness, I think you write rather like me, which is both good, and bad. It can get a little stunted, especially with brief bits of dialogue, but it does a generally good job of setting the scene, describing events, etc. Perhaps a bit more intracharacter dialogue, descriptions of feelings/motivations would help.

What is defined as "strong or intense language"? just for reference. Thanks for the advice.


I, personally, describe it as any of the "letter" curse words, H-, D-, F-, etc., and also invectives directed at a certain group, fagg*t, sp*c, etc. Kyraina might be a bit lenient. There are a whole bunch of fun Star Wars non-curses, "Kriff", "Karabast" "Stang" "Frag" "Sithspawn/Sithspit" "Blast" "Poodoo" "Skrag" "Shavit", which are fun to use.
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Postby Dijen (Ancient) » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:39 pm

Prolieum wrote:
Dijen wrote:What is defined as "strong or intense language"? just for reference. Thanks for the advice.


I, personally, describe it as any of the "letter" curse words, H-, D-, F-, etc., and also invectives directed at a certain group, fagg*t, sp*c, etc. Kyraina might be a bit lenient. There are a whole bunch of fun Star Wars non-curses, "Kriffing", "Karabast" "Sithspawn/Sithspit" "Blast" "Poodoo", which are fun to use.

I will use those from now on.
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Postby Zeinbrad » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:41 pm

I would ask the same, but I don't think we've seen enough of my characters...character.
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Postby Kyraina » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:41 pm

Prolieum wrote:




Joseph Brightstar
Drekkie Kor
Nightshrike
Bella Adler
Bail Appo
Xalandra Nova
Charia
Arkrius
Samuel Hardy
Karl Rimmer
[url=http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?p=28187348#p28187348]Orville McDuck
[url=https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?p=28190209&sid=477be5e2edc70b4691fd29d337c1dc63#p28190209]Diera Shae

Galactic Republic
Jedi Order

Supreme Chancellor Berooken†
Jedi Master Orgus Din
Jedi Master Ven Zallow†
Jedi Master Kellian Jarro
Admiral Zale Barrows
General Var Suthra
Satele Shan
Senator Paran Am-Ris
Senator Paran Am-Ris

Sith Empire
Mandalorian Clans

Darth Angral
Darth Malgus
Darth Lachris
Darth Baras
Lord Adraas
Lord Praven
Lord Javis Koldor
Captain Rycus Kilran
Imperial admiral
Captain Jard
Captain Kerse
Officer Roon Neele
Officer Hesker



Updated character list. If I missed you-tell me.

Broke code on the last two Player characters on non Jedi list
Whiskey Tango Foxtrot is suppose to go here?
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:42 pm

Dijen wrote:
Prolieum wrote:

I, personally, describe it as any of the "letter" curse words, H-, D-, F-, etc., and also invectives directed at a certain group, fagg*t, sp*c, etc. Kyraina might be a bit lenient. There are a whole bunch of fun Star Wars non-curses, "Kriffing", "Karabast" "Sithspawn/Sithspit" "Blast" "Poodoo", which are fun to use.

I will use those from now on.


I added all the rest that I could think of. Someone probably has a list somewhere, but those are certainly the most common ones. You can also, obviously, modify them- "Kriff" to "Kriffing" "Blast" to "Blasted" etc.
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:42 pm

Kyraina wrote:
Prolieum wrote:




Joseph Brightstar
Drekkie Kor
Nightshrike
Bella Adler
Bail Appo
Xalandra Nova
Charia
Arkrius
Samuel Hardy
Karl Rimmer
[url=http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?p=28187348#p28187348]Orville McDuck
[url=https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?p=28190209&sid=477be5e2edc70b4691fd29d337c1dc63#p28190209]Diera Shae

Galactic Republic
Jedi Order

Supreme Chancellor Berooken†
Jedi Master Orgus Din
Jedi Master Ven Zallow†
Jedi Master Kellian Jarro
Admiral Zale Barrows
General Var Suthra
Satele Shan
Senator Paran Am-Ris
Senator Paran Am-Ris

Sith Empire
Mandalorian Clans

Darth Angral
Darth Malgus
Darth Lachris
Darth Baras
Lord Adraas
Lord Praven
Lord Javis Koldor
Captain Rycus Kilran
Imperial admiral
Captain Jard
Captain Kerse
Officer Roon Neele
Officer Hesker



Updated character list. If I missed you-tell me.

Broke code on the last two Player characters on non Jedi list


Well, I guess you have to ban me then.
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:43 pm







Galactic Republic
Jedi Order

Supreme Chancellor Berooken†
Jedi Master Orgus Din
Jedi Master Ven Zallow†
Jedi Master Kellian Jarro
Admiral Zale Barrows
General Var Suthra
Satele Shan
Senator Paran Am-Ris


Sith Empire
Mandalorian Clans

Darth Angral
Darth Malgus
Darth Lachris
Darth Baras
Lord Adraas
Lord Praven
Lord Javis Koldor
Captain Rycus Kilran
Imperial admiral
Captain Jard
Captain Kerse
Officer Roon Neele
Officer Hesker


Too slow, ban window has passed!
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Postby Kyraina » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:43 pm

Prolieum wrote:





Galactic Republic
Jedi Order

Supreme Chancellor Berooken†
Jedi Master Orgus Din
Jedi Master Ven Zallow†
Jedi Master Kellian Jarro
Admiral Zale Barrows
General Var Suthra
Satele Shan
Senator Paran Am-Ris
Senator Paran Am-Ris

Sith Empire
Mandalorian Clans

Darth Angral
Darth Malgus
Darth Lachris
Darth Baras
Lord Adraas
Lord Praven
Lord Javis Koldor
Captain Rycus Kilran
Imperial admiral
Captain Jard
Captain Kerse
Officer Roon Neele
Officer Hesker


Too slow, ban window has passed!

Nope ban window is opened 24 hours 7 days a week and 365 days a year every year
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:45 pm

Kyraina wrote:
Prolieum wrote:





Galactic Republic
Jedi Order

Supreme Chancellor Berooken†
Jedi Master Orgus Din
Jedi Master Ven Zallow†
Jedi Master Kellian Jarro
Admiral Zale Barrows
General Var Suthra
Satele Shan
Senator Paran Am-Ris
Senator Paran Am-Ris

Sith Empire
Mandalorian Clans

Darth Angral
Darth Malgus
Darth Lachris
Darth Baras
Lord Adraas
Lord Praven
Lord Javis Koldor
Captain Rycus Kilran
Imperial admiral
Captain Jard
Captain Kerse
Officer Roon Neele
Officer Hesker


Too slow, ban window has passed!

Nope ban window is opened 24 hours 7 days a week and 365 days a year every year


When the Force opens a Ban window, it closes a Ban door.
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Postby Kyraina » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:46 pm

Prolieum wrote:
Kyraina wrote:Nope ban window is opened 24 hours 7 days a week and 365 days a year every year


When the Force opens a Ban window, it closes a Ban door.

When the OP opens up a ban window it also opens up a Ban Bank
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:48 pm

Kyraina wrote:
Prolieum wrote:
When the Force opens a Ban window, it closes a Ban door.

When the OP opens up a ban window it also opens up a Ban Bank


Unfortunately, poor Federal regulations led to the Ban Bank closing down in the Ban Crash of 72', and the house with the Ban window was foreclosed.
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Postby Zeinbrad » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:49 pm

Heh Pro...Alderaan....
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:50 pm

Zeinbrad wrote:Heh Pro...Alderaan....


Still need to get Kyraina to sign off on whatever happens to Jurius, he has magic OOC invulnerability.

Are we going to do the cut out the window thing?
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Postby Kyraina » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:50 pm

Prolieum wrote:
Kyraina wrote:When the OP opens up a ban window it also opens up a Ban Bank


Unfortunately, poor Federal regulations led to the Ban Bank closing down in the Ban Crash of 72', and the house with the Ban window was foreclosed.

And unfortunately for you there is a untraceable black market bank called ban bank so Ban window is opened
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Postby Zeinbrad » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:52 pm

Prolieum wrote:
Zeinbrad wrote:Heh Pro...Alderaan....


Still need to get Kyraina to sign off on whatever happens to Jurius, he has magic OOC invulnerability.

Are we going to do the cut out the window thing?

Hmm?
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:52 pm

Kyraina wrote:
Prolieum wrote:
Unfortunately, poor Federal regulations led to the Ban Bank closing down in the Ban Crash of 72', and the house with the Ban window was foreclosed.

And unfortunately for you there is a untraceable black market bank called ban bank so Ban window is opened


But if the Black Market Bank un-forecloses the house, everyone will know about it, and it will be metamorphosed into a White Market Bank, Gandalf-style.
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Postby Kyraina » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:53 pm

Prolieum wrote:
Zeinbrad wrote:Heh Pro...Alderaan....


Still need to get Kyraina to sign off on whatever happens to Jurius, he has magic OOC invulnerability.

Are we going to do the cut out the window thing?

I did sign off on it. You did the same with The NPC Jedi that attacked Jurius. And no I liken the window thing
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:53 pm

Zeinbrad wrote:
Prolieum wrote:
Still need to get Kyraina to sign off on whatever happens to Jurius, he has magic OOC invulnerability.

Are we going to do the cut out the window thing?

Hmm?


*Waves hand* OP business. These are not the posts you are looking for. Move along.
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Postby Kyraina » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:54 pm

Prolieum wrote:
Kyraina wrote:And unfortunately for you there is a untraceable black market bank called ban bank so Ban window is opened


But if the Black Market Bank un-forecloses the house, everyone will know about it, and it will be metamorphosed into a White Market Bank, Gandalf-style.

No it would still be a grey market. Its one massive Grey area
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:54 pm

Kyraina wrote:
Prolieum wrote:
Still need to get Kyraina to sign off on whatever happens to Jurius, he has magic OOC invulnerability.

Are we going to do the cut out the window thing?

I did sign off on it. You did the same with The NPC Jedi that attacked Jurius. And no I liken the window thing



Why are we talking about the NPC Jedi again? I am just trying to get Jurius out of the way.
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:54 pm

Kyraina wrote:
Prolieum wrote:

But if the Black Market Bank un-forecloses the house, everyone will know about it, and it will be metamorphosed into a White Market Bank, Gandalf-style.

No it would still be a grey market. Its one massive Grey area


Our puns have gottenly horribly stale.
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Postby Zeinbrad » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:55 pm

Prolieum wrote:
Kyraina wrote:I did sign off on it. You did the same with The NPC Jedi that attacked Jurius. And no I liken the window thing



Why are we talking about the NPC Jedi again? I am just trying to get Jurius out of the way.

Have Baras kill him.
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:56 pm

Zeinbrad wrote:
Prolieum wrote:

Why are we talking about the NPC Jedi again? I am just trying to get Jurius out of the way.

Have Baras kill him.


He has a magic OP shield, so he has to live.
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