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PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:02 pm
by Prolieum
The V O I D wrote:
Laurvier wrote:
Good stuff. Typical Sith. She's actually somewhat similar to Saevan in thinking. Although he thinks of his kills more as straight up battles and doesn't like hunting (that's what Charia is for). I'll reply soon.


Yeah. I feel like only Saevan would be able to "empathize" with Arctura, but even then she probably maybe wouldn't reciprocate such "empathy."

Prolieum wrote:
I rather liked it. I did not really get a traumatized vibe, but the hot/cold distinction was very well played out.


Thanks. I tried to hint at some form of trauma in her past because the "cold makes her feel safe." But maybe it was too subtle.


I thought of that line as more of a philosophical bent, the idea of her reservedness, separation, loss of emotion soothing the chaos of the galaxy, or something along those lines.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:10 pm
by The V O I D
Prolieum wrote:
The V O I D wrote:
Yeah. I feel like only Saevan would be able to "empathize" with Arctura, but even then she probably maybe wouldn't reciprocate such "empathy."



Thanks. I tried to hint at some form of trauma in her past because the "cold makes her feel safe." But maybe it was too subtle.


I thought of that line as more of a philosophical bent, the idea of her reservedness, separation, loss of emotion soothing the chaos of the galaxy, or something along those lines.


Perhaps. Anyways, posted. I'll post her arrival at Coruscant after Charia's response to getting a landing area prepared for Arctura and such... if that's alright, I mean. A few hours of semi-timeskip for arrival to happen isn't bad, right?

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:11 pm
by Prolieum
"The Jedi weren't all dead. And I'll kill them all., the Darkness murmured within her. Yes, she would"

Yes, precious. They takes it from us, but we kills them for it. Yes, we does!

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:15 pm
by Prolieum
The V O I D wrote:
Prolieum wrote:

I thought of that line as more of a philosophical bent, the idea of her reservedness, separation, loss of emotion soothing the chaos of the galaxy, or something along those lines.


Perhaps. Anyways, posted. I'll post her arrival at Coruscant after Charia's response to getting a landing area prepared for Arctura and such... if that's alright, I mean. A few hours of semi-timeskip for arrival to happen isn't bad, right?


Generally, but you may have to hold off of her interacting with the area around the temple, given that the Aerosteel and Temple Hall fights are both still ongoing.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:16 pm
by The V O I D
Prolieum wrote:"The Jedi weren't all dead. And I'll kill them all., the Darkness murmured within her. Yes, she would"

Yes, precious. They takes it from us, but we kills them for it. Yes, we does!


no come back lungs i need you

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:20 pm
by The V O I D
Actually going to respond/post again tomorrow. Tired now. Goodnight.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:25 pm
by Prolieum
Lauriver-for whatever it is worth in the "who gives a crap" category, it is actually Darth Baras who is the rep. for the Dark Council for the attack on Courscant rather than Jadus.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:27 pm
by Laurvier
Prolieum wrote:
Generally, but you may have to hold off of her interacting with the area around the temple, given that the Aerosteel and Temple Hall fights are both still ongoing.


Yeah, the Jedi/Republic people are gonna have to split since they can't actually win the fight. I mean, the Sith Empire controls Coruscant and they can bring in waves of reinforcements to any hot spot.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:30 pm
by The Imperium Empires
So what going on , on Alderaan right now
I'm planning of having my Crimelord character laucj an attack of the sith forces there.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:31 pm
by Laurvier
The Imperium Empires wrote:So what going on , on Alderaan right now
I'm planning of having my Crimelord character laucj an attack of the sith forces there.


Uhh, you'd probably get your ass handed to you but ok.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:32 pm
by Prolieum
The Imperium Empires wrote:So what going on , on Alderaan right now
I'm planning of having my Crimelord character laucj an attack of the sith forces there.


You might actually be able to do that. If you make it to the surface, (not exactly easy, but possible) and to the conference, and link up with the Jedi there, you could bring down the Sith there.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:34 pm
by Laurvier
Prolieum wrote:
The Imperium Empires wrote:So what going on , on Alderaan right now
I'm planning of having my Crimelord character laucj an attack of the sith forces there.


You might actually be able to do that. If you make it to the surface, (not exactly easy, but possible) and to the conference, and link up with the Jedi there, you could bring down the Sith there.


The Jedi won't do that. They're subservient to the Republic and the Republic right now is desperate for a peace settlement.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:52 pm
by The Flutterlands
Character Name: Darth Malice (Jodom Fila)
Jedi Or Sith: Sith
Rank/Class: Sith Lord
Gender: Male
Age: 50 years old
Height: 6ft 10in
Race/Species Bith
Appearance: Darth Malice
Homeworld: Clakdor VII
Personality: Cunning, intelligent, treacherous, manipulative, patient, ruthless, charismatic, yet also secretly cowardly and insecure. His lust for power and knowledge is only rivaled by his love of music. He fights dirty with no sense of honor.
Biography: Jodom Feil was born to a wealthy and loving family of scientists on Clakdor VII. He grew in a luxurious lifestyle with an education greater than most of his fellow peers who he knew that he was very different from. However, despite all of this, the young bith wanted more, never satisfied with what he had, given or learned. As a child, Jodom would bully, manipulate, and harass his fellow peers for their possessions, while also being charismatic among them, and he got even more greedy, selfish and spiteful as he got older. Ultimately, at the age of fifteenteen, Jodom's father could no longer stand his rotten behavior and berated him over it. Outraged, Jodom unintentionally telekinetically slaughtered his family by unintentionally unlocking his force powers, leaving none of his family alive.
After being banished for his crimes, Jodom was founded by the muun sith lord, Darth Malevoleous. Darth Malevoleous trained him well in the ways of the dark side, naming the young bith 'Darth Malice'. Eventually, after years of being taught the ways of the force as well as muun science, Darth Malice killed Malevoleous, unhappy and spiteful with his position as 'apprentice'. A powerful and cunning warrior, Darth Malice fought along side his fellow sith lords, but, never happy no matter what rank he has been given, he secretly plots to overthrow the Sith Emperor and take his place as ruler.
Lightsaber: Darth Malice's Lightsaber
Midichlorian Count: 10,000
Strengths:Highly skilled with both a lightsaber and the force. Manipulative and charming. Greatly intelligent as well as agile and stealthy.
Weaknesses: Arrogant, greedy, and cowardly.
Quote: 'The cup a Sith chooses knows no bottom."
Starting Location: Coruscant
RP Sample: Awesome Pony Rp and it's reboots; Fallout: Equestria and it's many reboots; City that Lives.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 6:58 pm
by Prolieum
The Flutterlands wrote:Character Name: Darth Malice (Jodom Fila)
Jedi Or Sith: Sith
Rank/Class: Sith Lord
Gender: Male
Age: 50 years old
Height: 6ft 10in
Race/Species Bith
Appearance: Darth Malice
Homeworld: Clakdor VII
Personality: Cunning, intelligent, treacherous, manipulative, patient, ruthless, charismatic, yet also secretly cowardly and insecure. His lust for power and knowledge is only rivaled by his love of music. He fights dirty with no sense of honor.
Biography: Jodom Feil was born to a wealthy and loving family of scientists on Clakdor VII. He grew in a luxurious lifestyle with an education greater than most of his fellow peers who he knew that he was very different from. However, despite all of this, the young bith wanted more, never satisfied with what he had, given or learned. As a child, Jodom would bully, manipulate, and harass his fellow peers for their possessions, while also being charismatic among them, and he got even more greedy, selfish and spiteful as he got older. Ultimately, at the age of fifteenteen, Jodom's father could no longer stand his rotten behavior and berated him over it. Outraged, Jodom unintentionally telekinetically slaughtered his family by unintentionally unlocking his force powers, leaving none of his family alive.
After being banished for his crimes, Jodom was founded by the muun sith lord, Darth Malevoleous. Darth Malevoleous trained him well in the ways of the dark side, naming the young bith 'Darth Malice'. Eventually, after years of being taught the ways of the force as well as muun science, Darth Malice killed Malevoleous, unhappy and spiteful with his position as 'apprentice'. A powerful and cunning warrior, Darth Malice fought along side his fellow sith lords, but, never happy no matter what rank he has been given, he secretly plots to overthrow the Sith Emperor and take his place as ruler.
Lightsaber: Darth Malice's Lightsaber
Midichlorian Count: 10,000
Strengths:Highly skilled with both a lightsaber and the force. Manipulative and charming. Greatly intelligent as well as agile and stealthy.
Weaknesses: Arrogant, greedy, and cowardly.
Quote: 'The cup a Sith chooses knows no bottom."
Starting Location: Coruscant
RP Sample: Awesome Pony Rp and it's reboots; Fallout: Equestria and it's many reboots; City that Lives.


Nice, a Bith, we could use another non human-faced alien. I am going to have to set a provision though-you are going to need some kind of weakness outside of just character traits, a super warrior/Force user/sneaker/thinker/manipulator is rather too much.

I suppose the name is the inevitable result of Star Wars nominal practices. Ah well.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 7:04 pm
by The Flutterlands
Character Name: Darth Malice (Jodom Fila)
Jedi Or Sith: Sith
Rank/Class: Sith Lord
Gender: Male
Age: 50 years old
Height: 6ft 10in
Race/Species Bith
Appearance: Darth Malice
Homeworld: Clakdor VII
Personality: Cunning, intelligent, treacherous, manipulative, patient, ruthless, charismatic, yet also secretly cowardly and insecure. His lust for power and knowledge is only rivaled by his love of music. He fights dirty with no sense of honor.
Biography: Jodom Feil was born to a wealthy and loving family of scientists on Clakdor VII. He grew in a luxurious lifestyle with an education greater than most of his fellow peers who he knew that he was very different from. However, despite all of this, the young bith wanted more, never satisfied with what he had, given or learned. As a child, Jodom would bully, manipulate, and harass his fellow peers for their possessions, while also being charismatic among them, and he got even more greedy, selfish and spiteful as he got older. Ultimately, at the age of fifteenteen, Jodom's father could no longer stand his rotten behavior and berated him over it. Outraged, Jodom unintentionally telekinetically slaughtered his family by unintentionally unlocking his force powers, leaving none of his family alive.
After being banished for his crimes, Jodom was founded by the muun sith lord, Darth Malevoleous. Darth Malevoleous trained him well in the ways of the dark side, naming the young bith 'Darth Malice'. Eventually, after years of being taught the ways of the force as well as muun science, Darth Malice killed Malevoleous, unhappy and spiteful with his position as 'apprentice'. A powerful and cunning warrior, Darth Malice fought along side his fellow sith lords, but, never happy no matter what rank he has been given, he secretly plots to overthrow the Sith Emperor and take his place as ruler.
Lightsaber: Darth Malice's Lightsaber
Midichlorian Count: 10,000
Strengths:Highly skilled with both a lightsaber and the force. Manipulative and charming. Greatly intelligent as well as agile and stealthy.
Weaknesses: Arrogant, greedy, and has an irrational belief that the universe is out to get him. Also, dispite being quite agile, he suffers from an injury in his leg that he gained in a battle, forcing him to limp as he walks.
Quote: 'The cup a Sith chooses knows no bottom."
Starting Location: Coruscant
RP Sample: Awesome Pony Rp and it's reboots; Fallout: Equestria and it's many reboots; City that Lives.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 7:12 pm
by Prolieum
The Flutterlands wrote:Character Name: Darth Malice (Jodom Fila)
Jedi Or Sith: Sith
Rank/Class: Sith Lord
Gender: Male
Age: 50 years old
Height: 6ft 10in
Race/Species Bith
Appearance: Darth Malice
Homeworld: Clakdor VII
Personality: Cunning, intelligent, treacherous, manipulative, patient, ruthless, charismatic, yet also secretly cowardly and insecure. His lust for power and knowledge is only rivaled by his love of music. He fights dirty with no sense of honor.
Biography: Jodom Feil was born to a wealthy and loving family of scientists on Clakdor VII. He grew in a luxurious lifestyle with an education greater than most of his fellow peers who he knew that he was very different from. However, despite all of this, the young bith wanted more, never satisfied with what he had, given or learned. As a child, Jodom would bully, manipulate, and harass his fellow peers for their possessions, while also being charismatic among them, and he got even more greedy, selfish and spiteful as he got older. Ultimately, at the age of fifteenteen, Jodom's father could no longer stand his rotten behavior and berated him over it. Outraged, Jodom unintentionally telekinetically slaughtered his family by unintentionally unlocking his force powers, leaving none of his family alive.
After being banished for his crimes, Jodom was founded by the muun sith lord, Darth Malevoleous. Darth Malevoleous trained him well in the ways of the dark side, naming the young bith 'Darth Malice'. Eventually, after years of being taught the ways of the force as well as muun science, Darth Malice killed Malevoleous, unhappy and spiteful with his position as 'apprentice'. A powerful and cunning warrior, Darth Malice fought along side his fellow sith lords, but, never happy no matter what rank he has been given, he secretly plots to overthrow the Sith Emperor and take his place as ruler.
Lightsaber: Darth Malice's Lightsaber
Midichlorian Count: 10,000
Strengths:Highly skilled with both a lightsaber and the force. Manipulative and charming. Greatly intelligent as well as agile and stealthy.
Weaknesses: Arrogant, greedy, and has an irrational belief that the universe is out to get him. Also, dispite being quite agile, he suffers from an injury in his leg that he gained in a battle, forcing him to limp as he walks.
Quote: 'The cup a Sith chooses knows no bottom."
Starting Location: Coruscant
RP Sample: Awesome Pony Rp and it's reboots; Fallout: Equestria and it's many reboots; City that Lives.


I know I am being a bit hard, but he needs at least one thing he is not good at while fighting -perhaps he is rather physically weak, or a little slow with the blade, but still skilled, or he relies on his agility and the Force and lacks technical skill, or that leg injury does affect him, unaware of his surroundings-something along those lines.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 7:13 pm
by The Flutterlands
Prolieum wrote:
The Flutterlands wrote:Character Name: Darth Malice (Jodom Fila)
Jedi Or Sith: Sith
Rank/Class: Sith Lord
Gender: Male
Age: 50 years old
Height: 6ft 10in
Race/Species Bith
Appearance: Darth Malice
Homeworld: Clakdor VII
Personality: Cunning, intelligent, treacherous, manipulative, patient, ruthless, charismatic, yet also secretly cowardly and insecure. His lust for power and knowledge is only rivaled by his love of music. He fights dirty with no sense of honor.
Biography: Jodom Feil was born to a wealthy and loving family of scientists on Clakdor VII. He grew in a luxurious lifestyle with an education greater than most of his fellow peers who he knew that he was very different from. However, despite all of this, the young bith wanted more, never satisfied with what he had, given or learned. As a child, Jodom would bully, manipulate, and harass his fellow peers for their possessions, while also being charismatic among them, and he got even more greedy, selfish and spiteful as he got older. Ultimately, at the age of fifteenteen, Jodom's father could no longer stand his rotten behavior and berated him over it. Outraged, Jodom unintentionally telekinetically slaughtered his family by unintentionally unlocking his force powers, leaving none of his family alive.
After being banished for his crimes, Jodom was founded by the muun sith lord, Darth Malevoleous. Darth Malevoleous trained him well in the ways of the dark side, naming the young bith 'Darth Malice'. Eventually, after years of being taught the ways of the force as well as muun science, Darth Malice killed Malevoleous, unhappy and spiteful with his position as 'apprentice'. A powerful and cunning warrior, Darth Malice fought along side his fellow sith lords, but, never happy no matter what rank he has been given, he secretly plots to overthrow the Sith Emperor and take his place as ruler.
Lightsaber: Darth Malice's Lightsaber
Midichlorian Count: 10,000
Strengths:Highly skilled with both a lightsaber and the force. Manipulative and charming. Greatly intelligent as well as agile and stealthy.
Weaknesses: Arrogant, greedy, and has an irrational belief that the universe is out to get him. Also, dispite being quite agile, he suffers from an injury in his leg that he gained in a battle, forcing him to limp as he walks.
Quote: 'The cup a Sith chooses knows no bottom."
Starting Location: Coruscant
RP Sample: Awesome Pony Rp and it's reboots; Fallout: Equestria and it's many reboots; City that Lives.


I know I am being a bit hard, but he needs at least one thing he is not good at while fighting -perhaps he is rather physically weak, or a little slow with the blade, but still skilled, or he relies on his agility and the Force and lacks technical skill, or that leg injury does affect him, unaware of his surroundings-something along those lines.

His injury has made him a poorer fighter than he has been prior, but it only makes him fight more dirty.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 7:19 pm
by Prolieum
The Flutterlands wrote:
Prolieum wrote:
I know I am being a bit hard, but he needs at least one thing he is not good at while fighting -perhaps he is rather physically weak, or a little slow with the blade, but still skilled, or he relies on his agility and the Force and lacks technical skill, or that leg injury does affect him, unaware of his surroundings-something along those lines.

His injury has made him a poorer fighter than he has been prior, but it only makes him fight more dirty.


Eh, I suppose I can accept that. Welcome to the thread-the IC link is on the first post, and you can jump in whenever you like.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 7:36 pm
by Laurvier
I have no idea what just happened or what was happening. They crashed their ship on Coruscant. What was the point in coming their in the first place? How is the ship repaired enough now?

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 7:45 pm
by Kyraina
Laurvier wrote:I have no idea what just happened or what was happening. They crashed their ship on Coruscant. What was the point in coming their in the first place? How is the ship repaired enough now?

I'll edit. That was my bad.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 7:53 pm
by Kyraina
Kyraina wrote:
Laurvier wrote:I have no idea what just happened or what was happening. They crashed their ship on Coruscant. What was the point in coming their in the first place? How is the ship repaired enough now?

I'll edit. That was my bad.

Fixed. Sorry haven't had much sleep today.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 7:54 pm
by The Flutterlands
So can I have a summary of what's happening on Coruscant? I know there's fightung, but it's rather hard to make out. Anyway, I'm going to be with a post in the works.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 7:58 pm
by Kyraina
The Flutterlands wrote:So can I have a summary of what's happening on Coruscant? I know there's fightung, but it's rather hard to make out. Anyway, I'm going to be with a post in the works.

Bunch of Sith Engaged two Jedi and a Republic Spec Ops soldier outside the temple after the three crash landed on the planet, who the fled into the underworld of Coruscant after one of the Jedi were severally injured. While inside two Sith were engaged with a Jedi and a merc.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2016 8:11 pm
by Prolieum
It is kind of funny, just with how the characters played out. In terms of skillsets, Zeres is basically perfectly suited to fight all three main Jedi, but is probably going to get punked by the non-Jedi and some Sith.

PostPosted: Sat Mar 26, 2016 4:09 am
by Spindle
Wait...is Bella the only non-Sith character on Coruscant? Now might be a good time to exit stage left, pursued by Sith...