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Postby Schwabenreich » Sun Apr 10, 2016 7:49 pm

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Kyraina wrote:Yeah Half tempted to remove the language deal. I can't use half the colorful language Joseph actually Talks with


Star Wars has plenty of colorful substitutes to weave in. I put up a brief list a while back.



I agree, while I'm not personally offended by swearing the Star Wars universe has a multitude of in-universe swear words that would be more immersive than bringing in real world swearing.
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Postby Kyraina » Mon Apr 11, 2016 7:33 am

Schwabenreich wrote:
Prolieum wrote:
Star Wars has plenty of colorful substitutes to weave in. I put up a brief list a while back.



I agree, while I'm not personally offended by swearing the Star Wars universe has a multitude of in-universe swear words that would be more immersive than bringing in real world swearing.

Please post the list
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Postby Dernland » Mon Apr 11, 2016 7:35 am

Kyraina wrote:
Schwabenreich wrote:
I agree, while I'm not personally offended by swearing the Star Wars universe has a multitude of in-universe swear words that would be more immersive than bringing in real world swearing.

Please post the list


I've been using Mandalorian curses for a while, though there are a lot more in basic and huttese that I don't know.
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Postby Kyraina » Mon Apr 11, 2016 7:38 am

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Kyraina wrote:Please post the list


I've been using Mandalorian curses for a while, though there are a lot more in basic and huttese that I don't know.

i don't know any of the curses in any language for star wars. Only cuss words I know where the ones I picked up when I was in the Military, which is every cuss work in real life. Not being able to cuss takes away from Joseph's character a bit
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Character Name: Luna Fundelfrander
Jedi Or Sith: Jedi

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Gender: Female
Age: 47
Height: 6'3
Race/Species: Human
Appearance:(Picture or Detailed Description) Brown hair with sharp stature and thin limbs, tall
Home world: Hoth
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Biography:(At least a paragraph.) Luna was born on Hoth to a few nomads who were collecting precious gems and was captured by Tatoinne slave traders at age 6 for they were stealing jems from her parents and decided to take her. She managed to escaped by using the force and was found by some Jedi and was taken back to the temple. She was trained there and relized she was meant to be a jedi and completed it ready to serve. She has been fighting different enemies on Kayshakk along with Tatoinne and Sullust and is expected to take the place of the next dead jedi council member because of her experiance and power. She is also very polite and quiet leading them to believe they need tht on the council. She has been fighting different Sith and rogue Jedi.
Lightsaber:(Picture Or description) Yellow lightsaber that is normal but has black handle
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Strengths: Smart and fast and strong in the force
Weaknesses: Not very strong and is quite clumsy, lost all contact to other jedi's
Starting Location:(Where you will be at the start of the IC.) Kayshakk
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Character Name: Jarka Fundelfrafer
Jedi Or Sith: Sith

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Gender: Male
Age: 33
Height: 6'5
Race/Species: Human
Appearance:(Picture or Detailed Description) Brown hair with sharp stature and thin limbs, tall and strong
Home world: Naboo
Personality: Angry and Ruthless
Biography:(At least a paragraph.) After his mother left Hoth because his father was killed she fled to Naboo and they accepted her because she was pregnant. Jarka was born on Naboo to the same parents as Luna but grew up angry for his parents wished he was smarter and better. He hated his sister he never met and met a sith and became an apprentice because of his hatred for her. He was apprentice to a sith lord but the lord was killed when he fought Luna. His hatred grew from there. He then went free killing Jedi and has tracked his sister down on Kayshakk.
Lightsaber:(Picture Or description) Deep red with a large hilt.
Midichlorian Count:(4000-10000) 9640
Strengths: Smart, strong, stronger in the the force then Luna upper sith class hates him, lone wolf
Weaknesses: Not flexible and has not had full training.upper sith class hates him, lone wolf
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Postby Schwabenreich » Mon Apr 11, 2016 8:23 am

Kyraina wrote:
Schwabenreich wrote:
I agree, while I'm not personally offended by swearing the Star Wars universe has a multitude of in-universe swear words that would be more immersive than bringing in real world swearing.

Please post the list


I'm not sure what list they supplied but here's one with both slang and curse words. As usual the Legends tab is better and provides more examples. As well it offers a behind the scenes section with direct parallels of phrases.
List: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_ ... _and_slang
Legends: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_ ... ng/Legends

Can do a search of standard curse words which should direct you to equivalents, or you can browse the lifts for some that get quite exotic.
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Postby Kyraina » Mon Apr 11, 2016 8:36 am

Schwabenreich wrote:
Kyraina wrote:Please post the list


I'm not sure what list they supplied but here's one with both slang and curse words. As usual the Legends tab is better and provides more examples. As well it offers a behind the scenes section with direct parallels of phrases.
List: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_ ... _and_slang
Legends: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_ ... ng/Legends

Can do a search of standard curse words which should direct you to equivalents, or you can browse the lifts for some that get quite exotic.

sounds good and thanks
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Postby Setinel » Mon Apr 11, 2016 3:13 pm

Asgaer I'm not sure where to take your post...
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Postby Dernland » Mon Apr 11, 2016 3:30 pm

Do the Imperials plan on occupying Coruscant, or do they just want to mess it up?
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Postby Asgeirria » Mon Apr 11, 2016 6:42 pm

Setinel wrote:Asgaer I'm not sure where to take your post...


Just observe and react in character.
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Postby Rannoria » Tue Apr 12, 2016 8:24 am

Dernland wrote:Do the Imperials plan on occupying Coruscant, or do they just want to mess it up?


If my memory serves correct, it's the latter
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Postby Kyraina » Tue Apr 12, 2016 8:40 am

Rannoria wrote:
Dernland wrote:Do the Imperials plan on occupying Coruscant, or do they just want to mess it up?


If my memory serves correct, it's the latter

It's the latter but for RP purposes and the fact that the Negotiations broke down still leaves Coruscant in the Hands of the Sith
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Postby Dernland » Tue Apr 12, 2016 11:18 am

Kyraina wrote:
Rannoria wrote:If my memory serves correct, it's the latter

It's the latter but for RP purposes and the fact that the Negotiations broke down still leaves Coruscant in the Hands of the Sith


Then it's time to organize a resistance. Make things interesting.
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Postby Kyraina » Tue Apr 12, 2016 11:41 am

Dernland wrote:
Kyraina wrote:It's the latter but for RP purposes and the fact that the Negotiations broke down still leaves Coruscant in the Hands of the Sith


Then it's time to organize a resistance. Make things interesting.

Ill be doing that with Polaris as soon as he drop the astrodroids off
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Postby The Flutterlands » Tue Apr 12, 2016 11:46 am

Dernland wrote:
Kyraina wrote:It's the latter but for RP purposes and the fact that the Negotiations broke down still leaves Coruscant in the Hands of the Sith


Then it's time to organize a resistance. Make things interesting.

Darth Malice and his cronies could play a hand in that as he is planning on using the crime organisations for his schemes. :twisted:
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Apr 12, 2016 12:19 pm

For regerence for the Arrow (I think this is in its description, but best to repeat it), it does not so much have a "cockpit" as a CIC, there is no helm with windows or anything, and the CIC is just right in the bowels of the ship, a step down from the corridor.
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Postby Dernland » Tue Apr 12, 2016 12:20 pm

Kyraina wrote:
Dernland wrote:Then it's time to organize a resistance. Make things interesting.

Ill be doing that with Polaris as soon as he drop the astrodroids off


I plan to rally the CSF and any other Republic soldiers using the officers that I picked up at the Temple. The Empire won't hold their city.
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Postby Kyraina » Tue Apr 12, 2016 12:24 pm

Prolieum wrote:For regerence for the Arrow (I think this is in its description, but best to repeat it), it does not so much have a "cockpit" as a CIC, there is no helm with windows or anything, and the CIC is just right in the bowels of the ship, a step down from the corridor.

Ok.


Dernland wrote:
Kyraina wrote:Ill be doing that with Polaris as soon as he drop the astrodroids off


I plan to rally the CSF and any other Republic soldiers using the officers that I picked up at the Temple. The Empire won't hold their city.


It's gonna be alot of dirty fighting though I will say that. A place like Coruscant Is a Soldier's worse nightmare. Not alot of open space and way to many rooms to clear and plenty of areas for the enemy to hide in, but I imagine the Imperial Troops feel the same


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Postby Spindle » Tue Apr 12, 2016 12:33 pm

Prolieum wrote:For regerence for the Arrow (I think this is in its description, but best to repeat it), it does not so much have a "cockpit" as a CIC, there is no helm with windows or anything, and the CIC is just right in the bowels of the ship, a step down from the corridor.


Sorry about that. I'll edit it in.
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Postby Kyraina » Tue Apr 12, 2016 12:37 pm

Ill have my post up in the morning tomorrow
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Postby Asgeirria » Tue Apr 12, 2016 12:57 pm

Dernland wrote:
Kyraina wrote:Ill be doing that with Polaris as soon as he drop the astrodroids off


I plan to rally the CSF and any other Republic soldiers using the officers that I picked up at the Temple. The Empire won't hold their city.


Cade, Jadakk, and Cythraul are planning something similar, but right now they're in the process of collecting funds. Perhaps you could catch wind of the movement through underworld contacts?
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Postby Prolieum » Tue Apr 12, 2016 1:05 pm

Spindle wrote:
Prolieum wrote:For regerence for the Arrow (I think this is in its description, but best to repeat it), it does not so much have a "cockpit" as a CIC, there is no helm with windows or anything, and the CIC is just right in the bowels of the ship, a step down from the corridor.


Sorry about that. I'll edit it in.


No problem-you did not do anything wrong. You can just call it a cockpit if you like, it still does have manual controls as a backup, so the terminology remains technically accurate, it just does not fit what most people think of.
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Postby Prolieum » Wed Apr 13, 2016 8:01 am

Zeinbrad wrote:Giving Pro a taste of his own medicine. :P


At first I was wondering what you were talking about, because I did not see a post, until I realized that that was the point. Very clever.
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