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MEGA ULTRA DESTRUCTO LORD TOPIA wrote:

Sindrya wrote:I smell lolis.

Altito Asmoro wrote:

Sindrya wrote:
THE HERO IS HERE~!

MURICA~!



Your sheer cuteness alone had killed me. How can you kill something that's already dead?

Pardon me, Sin, but Robert is no hero.

Altito Asmoro wrote:

MEGA ULTRA DESTRUCTO LORD TOPIA wrote:
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Stop the pic spamming, MUD. It tends to attract the attentions of moderators. At least put spoilers for the pictures.

Mirakai wrote:

MEGA ULTRA DESTRUCTO LORD TOPIA wrote:

I am completely fine with this turn of events

Sindrya wrote:

Altito Asmoro wrote:
Pardon me, Sin, but Robert is no hero.

I was referring to the picture.

You know, Alfred F. Jones.

Altito Asmoro wrote:
Stop the pic spamming, MUD. It tends to attract the attentions of moderators. At least put spoilers for the pictures.

Are you platinum mad?

Altito Asmoro wrote:

Mirakai wrote:I am completely fine with this turn of events

I never said I'm not fine.

But the picspamming without spoilers, is worrying.

Sindrya wrote:
I was referring to the picture.

You know, Alfred F. Jones.



Are you platinum mad?

Never watch Hetalia, so no idea.

I'm not mad. Stressed, perhaps, but not mad.

Sindrya wrote:

Altito Asmoro wrote:
I never said I'm not fine.

But the picspamming without spoilers, is worrying.



Never watch Hetalia, so no idea.

I'm not mad. Stressed, perhaps, but not mad.

.... Mate..

Did you just miss a Monogatari reference?

Altito Asmoro wrote:

Sindrya wrote:
.... Mate..

Did you just miss a Monogatari reference?

If you really want some surprising truth, apart from SAO, Log Horizon, Kuroko no Basuke, and Attack of Titan and Aldnoah.Zero, I haven't watch anime for about...3-4 years.

So if I missing Monogatari reference, then yes.

Altito Asmoro wrote:

Sindrya wrote:
.... Mate..

Did you just miss a Monogatari reference?

If you really want some surprising truth, apart from SAO, Log Horizon, Kuroko no Basuke, and Attack of Titan and Aldnoah.Zero, I haven't watch anime for about...3-4 years.

So if I missing Monogatari reference, then yes.

Mirakai wrote:

Altito Asmoro wrote:
If you really want some surprising truth, apart from SAO, Log Horizon, Kuroko no Basuke, and Attack of Titan and Aldnoah.Zero, I haven't watch anime for about...3-4 years.

So if I missing Monogatari reference, then yes.

You should watch Shimoneta

Sindrya wrote:

Mirakai wrote:You should watch Shimoneta

No.

Alti, by God, please don't listen to what Mira said.

Sindrya wrote:

Altito Asmoro wrote:
If you really want some surprising truth, apart from SAO, Log Horizon, Kuroko no Basuke, and Attack of Titan and Aldnoah.Zero, I haven't watch anime for about...3-4 years.

So if I missing Monogatari reference, then yes.

You only watch trending anime, huh?

Mirakai wrote:

Altito Asmoro wrote:
If you really want some surprising truth, apart from SAO, Log Horizon, Kuroko no Basuke, and Attack of Titan and Aldnoah.Zero, I haven't watch anime for about...3-4 years.

So if I missing Monogatari reference, then yes.

You should watch Shimoneta

Charlia wrote:

Free Empire of the Low Isles wrote:
Is okay.

You can just write stories all day that conform only to tropes, and you'll be happy.

Won't make money, but you'll be happy.

I just wish tropes were more applicable to real life. It would make things so much easier.

I'm so Genre Savvy that at this point I can often guess where a story is going. Correctly. On the first try. I've done it quite a few times. And yet in life...


Ah well. I made up for it. Now there really is a shipper on deck.

Mirakai wrote:

Sindrya wrote:
No.

Alti, by God, please don't listen to what Mira said.

What?

Its a story about an overly restrictive government and students banding together to protest

Sindrya wrote:

Mirakai wrote:What?

Its a story about an overly restrictive government and students banding together to protest

Oh.

I thought you were trying to get Alti to learn dirty jokes.

Well carry on then.

Mirakai wrote:

Sindrya wrote:
Oh.

I thought you were trying to get Alti to learn dirty jokes.

Well carry on then.

And what would possibly make you think that?

Tracian Empire wrote:

Mirakai wrote:Will finish my app once I get back home. Which won't be for awhile

And Tracian...

Kurumi apperance is mine

No, no, no.

It's mine

I won't give up Kurumi

I can't

Altito Asmoro wrote:

Irregular Occurrences Application

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Name: Robert McAllister

Alias: The Kleptomaniac

Age: 26

Sex:Male

Biography:Born in an upstart family (upstart is a person who has had a sudden rise to a new class and lacks the social skills and grace that would be appropriate to the new position) since his father is a well-known upstart businessman, he spent his childhood until teenagehood learned all sorts of skills and abilities a rich person always needs, and sometimes involved in hunting games, using rifles as the method to hunt.

But in actuality, he also hides the fact that he's suffering from kleptomania, always preferring things that is shiny to steal and keeping it forever. He is quite good at hiding it, but the fact that he couldn't used the excuse of "buying jewelry" as it was weird for a male to bought jewelries for himself, forcing him to committed crimes. Under the guise of rich person, he usually placed big order on jewelries, using his father's connections to knows when the order came, and then stole it, but has yet to leads to death. Armed with a rifle, boxing, and fencing skills, he managed to did this all alone. Eventually the alias came up, and he decided it was the time to went away to another place to hid his crime that could be revealed any time.

From Leicester, he went to London, where he settled on one of his father's business as the owner of a small coffee & tea shop, masquerading as the Kleptomaniac on weekend, when he closed his shop earlier.

Methodology: Using his father's connections, bribing police patrols to look another way, and assaults with fencer, firearms, and his martial arts.

Skills: Basic boxing, basic fencing, and expert use on rifle and revolver for a civilian, as well as normal academic intelligence and the calculating personality to hide the evidences, or at least some of it after the assault. And bribery.

Classification: Criminal? But he's just suffering . He's working independently.

RP Example: You know me, dear Charlia.

Theme Song:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wylkSUS9Ofs

MEGA ULTRA DESTRUCTO LORD TOPIA wrote:

Irregular Occurrences Application

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Name: Arietty Compasse De’fleur

Alias:Faerie

Age: 14

Sex: Female

Biography: Locked away In a castle basement for the first 12 years of her life, Arietty Compasse De’fleur developed strange habits. Born a female she was the unwanted child of a lord who ruled over trades in a smaller outskirt of London desiring to pass on his wealth to a strong young boy. She was allowed to live solely because her mother’s persistent refusal to let her die. With nothing else to do Arietty was allowed to read books secretly taken from her father’s library by her mother. Being raised in an underground cell with nothing to do other than read books led Arietty to develop an incredible mind that absorbed information at an astounding rate. She taught herself of politics, literature and all forms of knowledge others would see as… Unnecessary. At the age of 8 her mother passed away leaving only her cruel father and 7 year old brother to care for her. Arietty’s father kept her locked away leaving her less and less food each and every day, even forgetting to feed her at times. Her younger brother however was a kind child who supported everything his older sister would do. He snuck food into her cell every day and thanks to him she was able to survive. At the age of 12 a riot began outside the castle, her father’s workers and farmers staged a revolt unsatisfied with their treatment. They slaughtered everyone in the castle, disregarding the cell that held Arietty. Once the castle was ransacked the farmers and workers left leaving poor Arietty behind, alone once again. After sitting in her cell for hours she heard footsteps coming down the corridor. A Mr Sherlock Holmes had approached her cell and said one thing to her. That one thing she would never forget. “I think I just found myself a fountain of wisdom.” Those few words held a deeper meaning, a meaning that Mr Holmes had left for her to discover. After being freed from her cell she walked out for the first time into the outside world. Mr Holmes brought her back to London as one of his “Irregulars”. He brought her to a library run by people he knew and told her that it was to become her home. Overjoyed she accepted the offer and began to live there. Every so often if Mr Holmes needed a bit of uncanny knowledge he would come to her for advice. Every so often he brought her along as support for one of his mysteries. Although she may be classified as a genius, her ability to solve mysteries or simple puzzles is somewhat… Lacking.

Methodology: Does not commit crimes. She is incredibly smart and knows very uninteresting things that would be normally considered unhelpful or irrelevant. However, when put to work with someone else she can provide all the pieces of information needed to solve a mystery. Kind of like a walking talking encyclopedia.

Skills: Is incredibly smart but lacks common sense. She has for the most part an eidetic memory but does not cope well under pressure. She cannot for the life of her, solve a mystery, even simple puzzles prove too difficult for her. She has what you would call a failed memory. She unconsciously helps solve many mysteries as her knowledge is vast.

Classification: Irregular. Support. Well of knowledge. Archive.

RP Example: Watchers(I’m not sure how to link posts soz)

Theme Song: Senbon Sakura(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5HslkDV ... l=okiagiri)

Kyraina wrote:

Irregular Occurrences Application
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Name: Joseph Elmo Knight

Alias: Soldier

Age: 18

Sex: Male

Biography: Joseph was born in Texas, USA to a English Ranch Hand and a Apache Native American woman. He was bullied in both the town that was near the ranch where his father worked and in the Apache Village for being a Half-breed. He eventually took a stand for himself and beat the crap out of the bullies at age 8. At age 9 he started to help his dad's employer on the ranch and was trained in the use of the bull whip, revolvers, and rifles. When he was 13 His dad took Joseph's mom and Joseph to meet Joseph's grandparents. A few weeks after arriving in England his parents and grandparents were gun down. Mr. Holmes worked the case and even used Joseph to help solve it. From that point on he worked as a Irregular. He was called Soldier by both Holmes and Watson for willing to follow suggestions like orders and to do his best a assigned task, no matter what it was. He was a Irregular till he was 16, when he lied about his age and joined the Military of The British Empire. After 2 years of service and fighting, Joseph was discharged and returned to England after he got into a fist fight with a Officer. With a bad reputation for disobeying orders and getting into fights with people appointed over him, Joseph has decided to go back to Holmes and Watson and ask to be a Irregular again, not knowing that Holmes is dead/missing.

Methodology: While he does look for clues, he is no where good at it as Holmes was, but he believes this is best course of action to take.

Skills: Excellent shot with rifles (Prefers to use the Winchester 1866), Excellent shot with Revolvers (Prefers to use the Colt Single Action Army), Good with a bull whip, Also Knows how to Box, fight with a knife (Bowie Style Knife) and Wrestle. He is also fast and strong. On the Mental side of things, he has common sense, and can see ways in and out of a area, but has trouble piecing those things in with the clues that are found

Classification: Irregular
RP Example: The Struggle of The Grey Platoon

Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ScNNfyq3d_w

Kyraina wrote:

Irregular Occurrences Application
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Name: Joseph Elmo Knight

Alias: Soldier

Age: 18

Sex: Male

Biography: Joseph was born in Texas, USA to a English Ranch Hand and a Apache Native American woman. He was bullied in both the town that was near the ranch where his father worked and in the Apache Village for being a Half-breed. He eventually took a stand for himself and beat the crap out of the bullies at age 8. At age 9 he started to help his dad's employer on the ranch and was trained in the use of the bull whip, revolvers, and rifles. When he was 13 His dad took Joseph's mom and Joseph to meet Joseph's grandparents. A few weeks after arriving in England his parents and grandparents were gun down. Mr. Holmes worked the case and even used Joseph to help solve it. From that point on he worked as a Irregular. He was called Soldier by both Holmes and Watson for willing to follow suggestions like orders and to do his best a assigned task, no matter what it was. He was a Irregular till he was 16, when he lied about his age and joined the Military of The British Empire. After 2 years of service and fighting, Joseph was discharged and returned to England after he got into a fist fight with a Officer. With a bad reputation for disobeying orders and getting into fights with people appointed over him, Joseph has decided to go back to Holmes and Watson and ask to be a Irregular again, not knowing that Holmes is dead/missing.

Methodology: While he does look for clues, he is no where good at it as Holmes was, but he believes this is best course of action to take.

Skills: Excellent shot with rifles (Prefers to use the Winchester 1866), Excellent shot with Revolvers (Prefers to use the Colt Single Action Army), Good with a bull whip, Also Knows how to Box, fight with a knife (Bowie Style Knife) and Wrestle. He is also fast and strong. On the Mental side of things, he has common sense, and can see ways in and out of a area, but has trouble piecing those things in with the clues that are found

Classification: Irregular
RP Example: The Struggle of The Grey Platoon

Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ScNNfyq3d_w

Kyraina wrote:.

Kyraina wrote:

Irregular Occurrences Application
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Name: Joseph Elmo Knight

Alias: Soldier

Age: 18

Sex: Male

Biography: Joseph was born in Texas, USA to a English Ranch Hand and a Apache Native American woman. He was bullied in both the town that was near the ranch where his father worked and in the Apache Village for being a Half-breed. He eventually took a stand for himself and beat the crap out of the bullies at age 8. At age 9 he started to help his dad's employer on the ranch and was trained in the use of the bull whip, revolvers, and rifles. When he was 13 His dad took Joseph's mom and Joseph to meet Joseph's grandparents. A few weeks after arriving in England his parents and grandparents were gun down. Mr. Holmes worked the case and even used Joseph to help solve it. From that point on he worked as a Irregular. He was called Soldier by both Holmes and Watson for willing to follow suggestions like orders and to do his best a assigned task, no matter what it was. He was a Irregular till he was 16, when he lied about his age and joined the Military of The British Empire. After 2 years of service and fighting, Joseph was discharged and returned to England after he got into a fist fight with a Officer. With a bad reputation for disobeying orders and getting into fights with people appointed over him, Joseph has decided to go back to Holmes and Watson and ask to be a Irregular again, not knowing that Holmes is dead/missing.

Methodology: While he does look for clues, he is no where good at it as Holmes was, but he believes this is best course of action to take.

Skills: Excellent shot with rifles (Prefers to use the Winchester 1866), Excellent shot with Revolvers (Prefers to use the Colt Single Action Army), Good with a bull whip, Also Knows how to Box, fight with a knife (Bowie Style Knife) and Wrestle. He is also fast and strong. On the Mental side of things, he has common sense, and can see ways in and out of a area, but has trouble piecing those things in with the clues that are found

Classification: Irregular
RP Example: The Struggle of The Grey Platoon

Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ScNNfyq3d_w

Rejected.

Charlia wrote:

Kyraina wrote:.Rejected.

What do I need to fix?

Kyraina wrote:

Charlia wrote:What do I need to fix?

I'm afraid there's nothing to be fixed. It's not a mistake in the application so much as it is the style you're working with...