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Favorite Writer in the Zone so far?

Refuge
2
13%
Ximea
2
13%
Monfrox
0
No votes
Beiarusia
1
7%
Wallenburg
1
7%
Kentucky
7
47%
Relikai
2
13%
Krytonus
0
No votes
 
Total votes : 15

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True Refuge
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Postby True Refuge » Fri May 13, 2016 3:29 am

New Grestin wrote:Fucking christ. I swear, me saying "I'm going to try and write something" is a trigger word for the universe to take away my chill time.

I. Am. Going. To. Write. A goddamned post. Tonight.


I bet your boss calls you and asks you to help them to do work.

Unpaid, of course.
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ML, anarchism, co-operativism (known incorrectly as "Market Socialism"), Proudhonism, radical liberalism, utopianism, social democracy, national capitalism, Maoism, etc. are not communist tendencies. Read a book already.

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New Grestin
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Postby New Grestin » Fri May 13, 2016 3:34 am

True Refuge wrote:
New Grestin wrote:Fucking christ. I swear, me saying "I'm going to try and write something" is a trigger word for the universe to take away my chill time.

I. Am. Going. To. Write. A goddamned post. Tonight.


I bet your boss calls you and asks you to help them to do work.

Unpaid, of course.

Kind of. I got offered a new job today, and I had to go sign paperwork for a new car.

Productive, yes, but I intended to sit around and binge Archer while getting some writing done today. So, not exactly what I intended.
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
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True Refuge
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Postby True Refuge » Fri May 13, 2016 3:43 am

New Grestin wrote:
True Refuge wrote:
I bet your boss calls you and asks you to help them to do work.

Unpaid, of course.

Kind of. I got offered a new job today, and I had to go sign paperwork for a new car.

Productive, yes, but I intended to sit around and binge Archer while getting some writing done today. So, not exactly what I intended.


Noooo, not the binge-watching! How could you take this from me????

Nice work though :)
COMMUNIST
"If we have food, he will eat. If we have air, he will breathe. If we have fuel, he will fly." - Becky Chambers, Record of a Spaceborn Few
"One does not need to be surprised then, when 26 years later the outrageous slogan is repeated, which we Marxists burned all bridges with: to “pick up” the banner of the bourgeoisie. - International Communist Party, Dialogue with Stalin.

ML, anarchism, co-operativism (known incorrectly as "Market Socialism"), Proudhonism, radical liberalism, utopianism, social democracy, national capitalism, Maoism, etc. are not communist tendencies. Read a book already.

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New Grestin
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Postby New Grestin » Fri May 13, 2016 3:51 am

True Refuge wrote:
New Grestin wrote:Kind of. I got offered a new job today, and I had to go sign paperwork for a new car.

Productive, yes, but I intended to sit around and binge Archer while getting some writing done today. So, not exactly what I intended.


Noooo, not the binge-watching! How could you take this from me????

Nice work though :)

Indeed. It's nice to have a car with an engine that doesn't sound like it's dying, and with working air-conditioning, and a working radio, and working locks, and that doesn't stall, and...
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
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New Grestin
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Postby New Grestin » Fri May 13, 2016 4:49 am

There. Posted.

I know this comes through pretty easily, but Jen is still my favorite character I've created.
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
Head Bartender for The Pub | The Para-Verse | Writing Advice from a Pretentious Jerk | I write stuff | Arbitrary Political Numbers
Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
- Best Worldbuilding - 2016 (Community Choice)
- Best Horror/Thriller RP for THE ZONE - 2016 (Community Choice)

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Chicago Heights
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Postby Chicago Heights » Fri May 13, 2016 5:38 am

Ok, this time I WILL get a post up today. Hopefully...
I am a proud Libertarian!(among other things)
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Postby New Grestin » Fri May 13, 2016 6:24 am

Tiny update to Chapter Zero as well.
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
Head Bartender for The Pub | The Para-Verse | Writing Advice from a Pretentious Jerk | I write stuff | Arbitrary Political Numbers
Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
- Best Worldbuilding - 2016 (Community Choice)
- Best Horror/Thriller RP for THE ZONE - 2016 (Community Choice)

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Wallenburg
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Postby Wallenburg » Fri May 13, 2016 6:27 am

New Grestin wrote:Fucking christ. I swear, me saying "I'm going to try and write something" is a trigger word for the universe to take away my chill time.

I. Am. Going. To. Write. A goddamned post. Tonight.

^^This

Fucking Christ, why does the universe hate amateur writers? I've barely even begun my next post. I just--I just...

*starts crying*
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Deramen
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Postby Deramen » Fri May 13, 2016 2:40 pm

Wallenburg wrote:
New Grestin wrote:Fucking christ. I swear, me saying "I'm going to try and write something" is a trigger word for the universe to take away my chill time.

I. Am. Going. To. Write. A goddamned post. Tonight.

^^This

Fucking Christ, why does the universe hate amateur writers? I've barely even begun my next post. I just--I just...

*starts crying*

Its okay buddy, Its okay.
You can call me Dera.
INFP-T.

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Scoochi2 wrote:I'm now being offered Filipino girlfriends...

You say that like it's a bad thing.

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New Grestin
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Postby New Grestin » Fri May 13, 2016 2:49 pm

Wallenburg wrote:
New Grestin wrote:Fucking christ. I swear, me saying "I'm going to try and write something" is a trigger word for the universe to take away my chill time.

I. Am. Going. To. Write. A goddamned post. Tonight.

^^This

Fucking Christ, why does the universe hate amateur writers? I've barely even begun my next post. I just--I just...

*starts crying*

There, there, Wally.

Do finish that post, though.
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
Head Bartender for The Pub | The Para-Verse | Writing Advice from a Pretentious Jerk | I write stuff | Arbitrary Political Numbers
Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
- Best Worldbuilding - 2016 (Community Choice)
- Best Horror/Thriller RP for THE ZONE - 2016 (Community Choice)

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Deramen
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Postby Deramen » Fri May 13, 2016 2:52 pm

New Grestin wrote:
Wallenburg wrote:^^This

Fucking Christ, why does the universe hate amateur writers? I've barely even begun my next post. I just--I just...

*starts crying*

There, there, Wally.

Do finish that post, though.

I might get a post up. It'll probably be short one though.
You can call me Dera.
INFP-T.

[violet] wrote:
Scoochi2 wrote:I'm now being offered Filipino girlfriends...

You say that like it's a bad thing.

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New Grestin
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Postby New Grestin » Fri May 13, 2016 2:55 pm

Deramen wrote:
New Grestin wrote:There, there, Wally.

Do finish that post, though.

I might get a post up. It'll probably be short one though.

You still doing alright after that ear incident?
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
Head Bartender for The Pub | The Para-Verse | Writing Advice from a Pretentious Jerk | I write stuff | Arbitrary Political Numbers
Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
- Best Worldbuilding - 2016 (Community Choice)
- Best Horror/Thriller RP for THE ZONE - 2016 (Community Choice)

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The Warriors of the Sun
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Postby The Warriors of the Sun » Fri May 13, 2016 7:05 pm

This looks really interesting and STALKER is one of my favorite games out there so I would love to join. But before I start working on my app for y'all to look at, I was wandering if there is anything I should know beforehand that may not be listed on the OP? Perhaps something important that happened in the IC at this point?

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Chicago Heights
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Postby Chicago Heights » Fri May 13, 2016 7:17 pm

The Warriors of the Sun wrote:This looks really interesting and STALKER is one of my favorite games out there so I would love to join. But before I start working on my app for y'all to look at, I was wandering if there is anything I should know beforehand that may not be listed on the OP? Perhaps something important that happened in the IC at this point?

Yeah, in Moapa there is a boss battle, essentially.
In Glendale someone else just showed up and the rest are being hunted by government agents.
In Overton everyone is setting up camp, and a Deramen's character, Giuseppe, is possessed by an entity we lovingly refer to as 'Piss Zalgo'
Also, [DATA REMOVED BY ADMINISTRATIVE REQUEST]
I am a proud Libertarian!(among other things)
Libertarian/Authoritarian: 1.79
Left/Right: 7.72

For: Capitalism, 2nd Ammendment, Fiscal Conservatism, Libertarianism, Border Control, Gay Marriage, Legalizing Drugs, Freedom of Religion, US Constitution

Against: Socialism, Abortion, Modern Feminism, Liberalism, Patriot Act, Political Correctness, Racism, Sexism, Other Illogical BS

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The Warriors of the Sun
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Postby The Warriors of the Sun » Fri May 13, 2016 7:19 pm

Chicago Heights wrote:Yeah, in Moapa there is a boss battle, essentially.
In Glendale someone else just showed up and the rest are being hunted by government agents.
In Overton everyone is setting up camp, and a Deramen's character, Giuseppe, is possessed by an entity we lovingly refer to as 'Piss Zalgo'
Also, [DATA REMOVED BY ADMINISTRATIVE REQUEST]


I see, that last part especially.

Should I make it so my character is just entering the zone or is it better if I implant myself already in the zone with my bio?

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Chicago Heights
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Postby Chicago Heights » Fri May 13, 2016 7:33 pm

The Warriors of the Sun wrote:
Chicago Heights wrote:Yeah, in Moapa there is a boss battle, essentially.
In Glendale someone else just showed up and the rest are being hunted by government agents.
In Overton everyone is setting up camp, and a Deramen's character, Giuseppe, is possessed by an entity we lovingly refer to as 'Piss Zalgo'
Also, [DATA REMOVED BY ADMINISTRATIVE REQUEST]


I see, that last part especially.

Should I make it so my character is just entering the zone or is it better if I implant myself already in the zone with my bio?

Based on the current situations, I suggest you are already in the Zone.
I am a proud Libertarian!(among other things)
Libertarian/Authoritarian: 1.79
Left/Right: 7.72

For: Capitalism, 2nd Ammendment, Fiscal Conservatism, Libertarianism, Border Control, Gay Marriage, Legalizing Drugs, Freedom of Religion, US Constitution

Against: Socialism, Abortion, Modern Feminism, Liberalism, Patriot Act, Political Correctness, Racism, Sexism, Other Illogical BS

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The Warriors of the Sun
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Postby The Warriors of the Sun » Fri May 13, 2016 9:02 pm

Name: Patrick Ausman
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Occupation: Unemployed, soon to be Scavenger
Appearance:
Image

Equipment:
  • Single set of clothing and a coat
  • Model 870 Remington Shotgun
  • Beretta M9
  • Basic First Aid Kit
  • Minimal Rations
  • Gas Mask
  • Two Water Bottles
  • Duct tape
  • Scarf
  • Knife
Skills:
  • Hunting
  • Rifle Experience
  • Physical Strength
  • Strong Will
Weaknesses:
  • Extremely Trusting
  • Poor melee combat ability
  • Clumsy
  • Extremely Kind
Personality: Friendly, compassionate, and optimistic are how most would describe him after meeting him. Insecure, easily manipulated, and desperate for companionship and praise are what the few people who knew him well would describe him as.
Biography: Patrick was the second child of four in his family to be born. He was born on a US Navy base in Japan, but quickly moved all over the US as his parents were stationed in various military bases throughout the US. Patrick grew up playing the role of support to his siblings, he was never as physically skilled as his older sister or as smart as his younger siblings, so he did his best in helping them succeed in their talents. This behavior reflected in school as well, he was on friendly terms with just about everyone at his school and they all knew him as someone to count on for assistance. But Patrick never went home with any friends, never texted or called anybody he knew, and by time he graduated high school he realized he had never had a friend or girlfriend, just countless acquaintances. Even in his own family he felt like an outsider, his parents focusing their attention on his much more talented siblings.

Patrick went off to college with the goal of fixing this issue of a lack of social experience and friends, but quickly found he was inexperienced. All he knew how to do was wear a smile and say "yes" to whatever request was made of him. He began to fall into a dark place within himself as he realized he was merely existing. And when he found out his parents were falling into a difficult financial situation, Patrick left college and his home. He hoped his leaving would make it easier for his parents to pay for his sibling's college expenses.

He had heard rumors that you could make some fast money in The Zone if you could find a way, so he told himself he was going to go and pay off college for his siblings with what he could find. But in truth Patrick never expected to make it to the border, fully expecting to be shot down by the guards before he made it. But by some miracle or curse Patrick now finds himself in the alien world of The Zone. Not expecting to get as far as he has, Patrick finds himself without a plan besides surviving and perhaps trying to find himself in this world.
Roleplay Experience:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=363875, but I haven't been on in months so I might be rusty.
ID CODE: 1997 (DO NOT REMOVE)
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Deramen
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Postby Deramen » Sat May 14, 2016 6:10 am

New Grestin wrote:
Deramen wrote:I might get a post up. It'll probably be short one though.

You still doing alright after that ear incident?

Yep, besides for some muffledness and the occasional ear pain, im doing good.

Edit: I literally just passed a place called Overton...
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You can call me Dera.
INFP-T.

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Scoochi2 wrote:I'm now being offered Filipino girlfriends...

You say that like it's a bad thing.

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New Grestin
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Postby New Grestin » Sat May 14, 2016 8:44 am

Deramen wrote:
New Grestin wrote:You still doing alright after that ear incident?

Yep, besides for some muffledness and the occasional ear pain, im doing good.

Edit: I literally just passed a place called Overton...

*cue Twilight Zone music*
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
Head Bartender for The Pub | The Para-Verse | Writing Advice from a Pretentious Jerk | I write stuff | Arbitrary Political Numbers
Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
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- Best Horror/Thriller RP for THE ZONE - 2016 (Community Choice)

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Postby New Grestin » Sat May 14, 2016 8:46 am

The Warriors of the Sun wrote:Name: Patrick Ausman
ID CODE: 1997 (DO NOT REMOVE)

ACCEPTED
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
Head Bartender for The Pub | The Para-Verse | Writing Advice from a Pretentious Jerk | I write stuff | Arbitrary Political Numbers
Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
- Best Worldbuilding - 2016 (Community Choice)
- Best Horror/Thriller RP for THE ZONE - 2016 (Community Choice)

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The Warriors of the Sun
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Postby The Warriors of the Sun » Sat May 14, 2016 9:07 am

New Grestin wrote:
The Warriors of the Sun wrote:Name: Patrick Ausman
ID CODE: 1997 (DO NOT REMOVE)

ACCEPTED


Great! When I get home tonight I'll try to find a good spot to throw Patrick in and get to work on a post.

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New Grestin
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Postby New Grestin » Sat May 14, 2016 9:10 am

The Warriors of the Sun wrote:
New Grestin wrote:ACCEPTED


Great! When I get home tonight I'll try to find a good spot to throw Patrick in and get to work on a post.

Sounds good, comrade.
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
Head Bartender for The Pub | The Para-Verse | Writing Advice from a Pretentious Jerk | I write stuff | Arbitrary Political Numbers
Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
- Best Worldbuilding - 2016 (Community Choice)
- Best Horror/Thriller RP for THE ZONE - 2016 (Community Choice)

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Postby Tayner » Sat May 14, 2016 9:49 am

So, I'm really considering having Spencer sneak up behind Winston and knock him out with the butt of his rifle. Is that ok with you Kentucky?
If anyone askes where we were Saturday at 14:30, we were at The Pub, understand?

-If it's stupid, but it works, it ain't stupid.
-No Combat Ready unit has ever passed inspection.
-No Inspection Ready unit has ever passed combat.
-There is nothing more satisfying to you then having the enemy shoot at you, and miss.
-Remember, your weapon was made by the lowest bidder.
Disclaimer: The sig is out of date and I probably won't update it

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Chicago Heights
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Postby Chicago Heights » Sat May 14, 2016 10:03 am

New Grestin wrote:
The Warriors of the Sun wrote:
Great! When I get home tonight I'll try to find a good spot to throw Patrick in and get to work on a post.

Sounds good, comrade.

Yis comrade, go back home to Soviet Russia!
I am a proud Libertarian!(among other things)
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Left/Right: 7.72

For: Capitalism, 2nd Ammendment, Fiscal Conservatism, Libertarianism, Border Control, Gay Marriage, Legalizing Drugs, Freedom of Religion, US Constitution

Against: Socialism, Abortion, Modern Feminism, Liberalism, Patriot Act, Political Correctness, Racism, Sexism, Other Illogical BS

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Postby Kentucky Fried Land » Sat May 14, 2016 10:29 am

Tayner wrote:So, I'm really considering having Spencer sneak up behind Winston and knock him out with the butt of his rifle. Is that ok with you Kentucky?


Sounds cool to me. Would it be fine if he just got knocked down hard though, instead of fully unconscious?
I don't know what I'm s'posed to do.


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