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by Chicago Heights » Thu May 05, 2016 3:37 pm
by Scienticia » Thu May 05, 2016 5:16 pm
Scienticia wrote:Scienticia wrote:Name:John Smith
Gender:Male
Age:32
Occupation:Forensic pathologist
Appearance:Tall, muscular, sharp features, small beard, black hair
Equipment:Beretta M9, Colt M4, combat knife, tomahawk, first aid kit, binoculars, journal, pen, backpack, phone, zippo
Skills:Intelligent, marksmanship, and martial arts
Weaknesses:curiosity, bad knee(excruciatingly painful if put under a lot of stress), needs glasses(basically blind without them)
Personality:Stern, manipulative, constantly surveying his surroundings
Biography: This MUST be at least two paragraphsBorn into a relatively wealthy military family John was forced to learn martial arts(Krav Maga, escrima, jujitsu, and parkour) from a young age along with being forced to learn marksmanship. Despite hating these activities his parents never allowed him to quit. When he was 16 they expected him to go into the military, not wanting to he fled and moved to the city. From there he applied to university and was accepted almost immediately.
After recovering his MD and forensic pathology fellowship, John worked with the police. He was there for a year and a half before the disaster struck. He began to scavenge supplies while attempting to get to the outskirts. It was then he injured his knee when he fell off the roof of a small house. He dragged himself to the car he had hijacked and drove away, forgetting about the supplies. When he got to the suburbs he broke into a house and barricaded himself inside, slowly nursing himself back to health.
Roleplay Experience:2016-a realistic roleplay, crime city
ID CODE: 1997 (DO NOT REMOVE)
by Beiarusia » Thu May 05, 2016 7:30 pm
Scienticia wrote:...
by Scienticia » Thu May 05, 2016 7:37 pm
Beiarusia wrote:Scienticia wrote:...
Are you really wanting to go with that name? I mean, there is probably someone with that name unfortunately but John Smith is as generic as one can be. Might as well be John Doe. He's almost a soldier character without actually having been enlisted. Due to a general dislike of soldiers maybe you could tweak that part of his past and focus more on his police career? Lastly, I assume he's LVPD. If so, how did he manage to survive for three years or was he caught in some anomaly? In general I feel that the bio could be explored further and that he knows maybe too many martial arts. On that not why would Parkour be considered a martial art and why would his father force him to learn it?
by Monfrox » Thu May 05, 2016 7:39 pm
by Wallenburg » Thu May 05, 2016 7:47 pm
by Tayner » Thu May 05, 2016 7:50 pm
Scienticia wrote:Beiarusia wrote:Are you really wanting to go with that name? I mean, there is probably someone with that name unfortunately but John Smith is as generic as one can be. Might as well be John Doe. He's almost a soldier character without actually having been enlisted. Due to a general dislike of soldiers maybe you could tweak that part of his past and focus more on his police career? Lastly, I assume he's LVPD. If so, how did he manage to survive for three years or was he caught in some anomaly? In general I feel that the bio could be explored further and that he knows maybe too many martial arts. On that not why would Parkour be considered a martial art and why would his father force him to learn it?
Parkour was invented by the French military in the 1800s as a method of escape and evasion, it is considered a martial art
by Chicago Heights » Thu May 05, 2016 8:24 pm
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by True Refuge » Sat May 07, 2016 9:13 pm
Chicago Heights wrote:I'm waiting for True Refuge to post.
"One does not need to be surprised then, when 26 years later the outrageous slogan is repeated, which we Marxists burned all bridges with: to “pick up” the banner of the bourgeoisie. - International Communist Party, Dialogue with Stalin.
by True Refuge » Sat May 07, 2016 9:43 pm
"One does not need to be surprised then, when 26 years later the outrageous slogan is repeated, which we Marxists burned all bridges with: to “pick up” the banner of the bourgeoisie. - International Communist Party, Dialogue with Stalin.
by True Refuge » Sat May 07, 2016 10:05 pm
"One does not need to be surprised then, when 26 years later the outrageous slogan is repeated, which we Marxists burned all bridges with: to “pick up” the banner of the bourgeoisie. - International Communist Party, Dialogue with Stalin.
by Deramen » Sat May 07, 2016 10:07 pm
True Refuge wrote:Deramen wrote:True Refuge is a woman
True Refuge is an alien
True Refuge is a massive youtuber
One down, two left.
Well, once I did have a youtube channel with a friend that died really quickly because his video editor subscription expired. It had like 10 subs though, if that's your definition of 'massive'
by True Refuge » Sat May 07, 2016 10:09 pm
"One does not need to be surprised then, when 26 years later the outrageous slogan is repeated, which we Marxists burned all bridges with: to “pick up” the banner of the bourgeoisie. - International Communist Party, Dialogue with Stalin.
by Tayner » Sat May 07, 2016 10:28 pm
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