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Favorite Writer in the Zone so far?

Refuge
2
13%
Ximea
2
13%
Monfrox
0
No votes
Beiarusia
1
7%
Wallenburg
1
7%
Kentucky
7
47%
Relikai
2
13%
Krytonus
0
No votes
 
Total votes : 15

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New Grestin
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Ex-Nation

Postby New Grestin » Fri Apr 22, 2016 5:24 pm

Chicago Heights wrote:RIP Alan Plot Device-
Didn't use a weapon

I actually didn't expect anyone to even notice that, and then I realized that half the gimmick of the RP is the OP changing.

Image


The Flame States wrote:The Nazi memes are on overdrive


Anne Frankly, they're out of Mein Kampfort zone.

The United Federation of Terrans wrote:Hey Gres how's it going? I'm in need of a new Rp. So before I start my app I was wondering if its alright to bring something like a Wolfenstein: New Order Nazi into the zone via a disruption of sorts. He wouldn't be a super soldier just a run of the mill redshirt so to speak.


It's going quite well. The RP has given me a chance to go absolutely apeshit in terms of ideas. Personally, I'm a little surprised it took this long for people to start apping weird characters, all things considered.

It is a pretty slow-going RP, if I'm honest, but it's moving at a decent enough clip for people to stay up to date.

Regarding the character, I don't see any reason why that wouldn't work. It would just need to remain a regular bloke, rather than some Deathshead super-soldier.
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
- Best Worldbuilding - 2016 (Community Choice)
- Best Horror/Thriller RP for THE ZONE - 2016 (Community Choice)

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Chicago Heights
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Postby Chicago Heights » Fri Apr 22, 2016 5:34 pm

New Grestin wrote:
Chicago Heights wrote:RIP Alan Plot Device-
Didn't use a weapon

I actually didn't expect anyone to even notice that, and then I realized that half the gimmick of the RP is the OP changing.

Image

And a good gimmick too, it gives the RP an extra little something.
My spidey-senses tingle whenever an unecessary plot device is made.
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New Grestin
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Postby New Grestin » Fri Apr 22, 2016 5:37 pm

Chicago Heights wrote:
New Grestin wrote:I actually didn't expect anyone to even notice that, and then I realized that half the gimmick of the RP is the OP changing.

Image

And a good gimmick too, it gives the RP an extra little something.
My spidey-senses tingle whenever an unecessary plot device is made.

It's actually not really a plot device. I wanted to have a place where I can expand the universe with supplemental material.

Similar to the SCP Foundation Wiki in the sense that it'll give people who want to read it more ideas on how the universe inside and outside the Zone works.

Besides, I like this universe enough that even when the RP ends, I intend to keep building on it.
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
Head Bartender for The Pub | The Para-Verse | Writing Advice from a Pretentious Jerk | I write stuff | Arbitrary Political Numbers
Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
- Best Worldbuilding - 2016 (Community Choice)
- Best Horror/Thriller RP for THE ZONE - 2016 (Community Choice)

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Chicago Heights
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Postby Chicago Heights » Fri Apr 22, 2016 5:49 pm

New Grestin wrote:
Chicago Heights wrote:And a good gimmick too, it gives the RP an extra little something.
My spidey-senses tingle whenever an unecessary plot device is made.

It's actually not really a plot device. I wanted to have a place where I can expand the universe with supplemental material.

Similar to the SCP Foundation Wiki in the sense that it'll give people who want to read it more ideas on how the universe inside and outside the Zone works.

Besides, I like this universe enough that even when the RP ends, I intend to keep building on it.

Speaking of which, I've been feeling a lack of abundance with entities within the Zone. I was wondering if we could have a ground-based enemy that attacks prey by burrowing underground or something along those lines and also list specific types of weather in the Zone, if that's not too much to ask.
EDIT: Don't 'weat her' please, autocorrect.
Last edited by Chicago Heights on Fri Apr 22, 2016 5:54 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Left/Right: 7.72

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Wallenburg
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Postby Wallenburg » Fri Apr 22, 2016 5:52 pm

Chapter Zero is quite well-written. I'd suggest you give it a once-over, though. You repeat landscape a little too much, and you describe a dead tree as a living thing. :)
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New Grestin
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Postby New Grestin » Fri Apr 22, 2016 5:59 pm

Chicago Heights wrote:
New Grestin wrote:It's actually not really a plot device. I wanted to have a place where I can expand the universe with supplemental material.

Similar to the SCP Foundation Wiki in the sense that it'll give people who want to read it more ideas on how the universe inside and outside the Zone works.

Besides, I like this universe enough that even when the RP ends, I intend to keep building on it.

Speaking of which, I've been feeling a lack of abundance with entities within the Zone. I was wondering if we could have a ground-based enemy that attacks prey by burrowing underground or something along those lines and also list specific types of weather in the Zone, if that's not too much to ask.
EDIT: Don't 'weat her' please, autocorrect.

I hadn't really thought of anything like that, but I can certainly see the idea of something like the Graboids from Tremors coming after a group.

Admitedly, I have been a little slacking in the bestiary department lately. I'll attempt to rectify that tonight.
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
- Best Worldbuilding - 2016 (Community Choice)
- Best Horror/Thriller RP for THE ZONE - 2016 (Community Choice)

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New Grestin
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Postby New Grestin » Fri Apr 22, 2016 6:01 pm

Wallenburg wrote:Chapter Zero is quite well-written. I'd suggest you give it a once-over, though. You repeat landscape a little too much, and you describe a dead tree as a living thing. :)

That was all absolutely intentional.

EDIT: Most of that was actually written in a couple hours, honestly, and I did a lot of it on the fly. I'm going to try and keep it updated with more stuff, mostly because I don't feel like I've fleshed out the world beyond the Zone very well.

It's really just "here's a weird, unsettling thing that happens in the Zone sometimes".

Does it have any bearing on the RP? Not really, no. I just like the universe and want to expand it.
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Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
Head Bartender for The Pub | The Para-Verse | Writing Advice from a Pretentious Jerk | I write stuff | Arbitrary Political Numbers
Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
- Best Worldbuilding - 2016 (Community Choice)
- Best Horror/Thriller RP for THE ZONE - 2016 (Community Choice)

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The United Federation of Terrans
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Psychotic Dictatorship

Postby The United Federation of Terrans » Fri Apr 22, 2016 6:10 pm

New Grestin wrote:
Chicago Heights wrote:RIP Alan Plot Device-
Didn't use a weapon

I actually didn't expect anyone to even notice that, and then I realized that half the gimmick of the RP is the OP changing.

Image


The Flame States wrote:The Nazi memes are on overdrive


Anne Frankly, they're out of Mein Kampfort zone.

The United Federation of Terrans wrote:Hey Gres how's it going? I'm in need of a new Rp. So before I start my app I was wondering if its alright to bring something like a Wolfenstein: New Order Nazi into the zone via a disruption of sorts. He wouldn't be a super soldier just a run of the mill redshirt so to speak.


It's going quite well. The RP has given me a chance to go absolutely apeshit in terms of ideas. Personally, I'm a little surprised it took this long for people to start apping weird characters, all things considered.

It is a pretty slow-going RP, if I'm honest, but it's moving at a decent enough clip for people to stay up to date.

Regarding the character, I don't see any reason why that wouldn't work. It would just need to remain a regular bloke, rather than some Deathshead super-soldier.

Alright thanks. I'll have the app up either tonight or tomorrow. Should be fun with an alternate history Nazi.
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Chicago Heights
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Postby Chicago Heights » Fri Apr 22, 2016 6:16 pm

New Grestin wrote:
Wallenburg wrote:Chapter Zero is quite well-written. I'd suggest you give it a once-over, though. You repeat landscape a little too much, and you describe a dead tree as a living thing. :)

That was all absolutely intentional.
RIP Plot Device Compooter.
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Left/Right: 7.72

For: Capitalism, 2nd Ammendment, Fiscal Conservatism, Libertarianism, Border Control, Gay Marriage, Legalizing Drugs, Freedom of Religion, US Constitution

Against: Socialism, Abortion, Modern Feminism, Liberalism, Patriot Act, Political Correctness, Racism, Sexism, Other Illogical BS

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Chicago Heights
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Postby Chicago Heights » Fri Apr 22, 2016 6:18 pm

New Grestin wrote:
Chicago Heights wrote:Speaking of which, I've been feeling a lack of abundance with entities within the Zone. I was wondering if we could have a ground-based enemy that attacks prey by burrowing underground or something along those lines and also list specific types of weather in the Zone, if that's not too much to ask.
EDIT: Don't 'weat her' please, autocorrect.

I hadn't really thought of anything like that, but I can certainly see the idea of something like the Graboids from Tremors coming after a group.

Admitedly, I have been a little slacking in the bestiary department lately. I'll attempt to rectify that tonight.

Sweet, but please nerf the Graboid. Please.
I am a proud Libertarian!(among other things)
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Left/Right: 7.72

For: Capitalism, 2nd Ammendment, Fiscal Conservatism, Libertarianism, Border Control, Gay Marriage, Legalizing Drugs, Freedom of Religion, US Constitution

Against: Socialism, Abortion, Modern Feminism, Liberalism, Patriot Act, Political Correctness, Racism, Sexism, Other Illogical BS

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New Grestin
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Postby New Grestin » Fri Apr 22, 2016 6:20 pm

Chicago Heights wrote:
RIP Plot Device Compooter.

RIP in Peace.
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
- Best Worldbuilding - 2016 (Community Choice)
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Sarejo
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Father Knows Best State

Postby Sarejo » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:21 pm

Is it okay if I bring Salk's freak-of-nature back towards the group or do you want me to edit that out?
Cheers mates.

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The Flame States
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Postby The Flame States » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:22 pm

Sarejo wrote:Is it okay if I bring Salk's freak-of-nature back towards the group or do you want me to edit that out?


It's on fire too

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Sarejo
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Father Knows Best State

Postby Sarejo » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:24 pm

The Flame States wrote:
Sarejo wrote:Is it okay if I bring Salk's freak-of-nature back towards the group or do you want me to edit that out?


It's on fire too


Then y'all best heed Damion's warning very, very much.

"A sergeant in motion outranks a lieutenant with no clue what's going on....

An ordnance technician at a dead sprint outranks everybody."
Cheers mates.

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Postby New Grestin » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:28 pm

Sarejo wrote:
The Flame States wrote:
It's on fire too


Then y'all best heed Damion's warning very, very much.

"A sergeant in motion outranks a lieutenant with no clue what's going on....

An ordnance technician at a dead sprint outranks everybody."

I don't see why you couldn't use it. It's an unstoppable rage machine thing that I just made up on the fly.

Have a goddamned ball with it.
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Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
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The Flame States
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Postby The Flame States » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:29 pm

Sarejo wrote:
The Flame States wrote:
It's on fire too


Then y'all best heed Damion's warning very, very much.

"A sergeant in motion outranks a lieutenant with no clue what's going on....

An ordnance technician at a dead sprint outranks everybody."

If it gets to you, you'll be a mauled schutzstaffel that's on fire

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Sarejo
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Father Knows Best State

Postby Sarejo » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:36 pm

The Flame States wrote:
Sarejo wrote:
Then y'all best heed Damion's warning very, very much.

"A sergeant in motion outranks a lieutenant with no clue what's going on....

An ordnance technician at a dead sprint outranks everybody."

If it gets to you, you'll be a mauled schutzstaffel that's on fire


I just have to run faster than you lot :P
Cheers mates.

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New Grestin
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Postby New Grestin » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:42 pm

Sarejo wrote:
The Flame States wrote:If it gets to you, you'll be a mauled schutzstaffel that's on fire


I just have to run faster than you lot :P

*trips Damion and runs away*
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Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
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Deramen
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Postby Deramen » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:44 pm

Deramen wrote:
Gah, It feels good to get this out the door. This was writen at night, so ignore any spelling mistakes as Insomnia. ( ;) )

Name: Giuseppe Mann
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Occupation: Police Officer, Scavenger
Appearance: (Image)
Equipment: Beretta M9, A pocket knife, Ammo, Hiking backpack, A small meal, special Insomnia pills.
Skills: Great scavenger, Alright with a gun, Alright Athletics.
Weaknesses: Suffers insomnia and isn't smart.
Personality: He's a nice lovable dork whenever he has his sleep but when he doesn't he becomes frantic, nervous and can not concentration or remember much afterward.
Biography: Giuseppe was born in Carson City Nevada. He was born to Ada and Bruce Mann. His father was a construction worker and his mother was a worker for the government in Las Vegas. As he grew up, he lived a relatively normal life besides the fact that his mother was always at work and hotels. He had varying interests But he was always very jingoistic about America. He moved through the years and graduated high school, but it was discovered that he had a brain problem which caused Insomnia. He had to get special pills to deal with it, but they were very expensive. He had to get a job and eventually and abandoned any dreams of collage. He became an officer of the law. Giuseppe worked for awhile until the day came. They called it "The Zone". They managed to evacuate people, but his mother. She went missing and they couldn't find her before they had to seal it off.

He worked off the pain for awhile until he learned that the government was allowing people to go into The Zone as long as they get a cut. He immediately left his job and took what he had on him from his job and some supplies and headed down to The Zone. The government let him go in and cleared him of the crimes that he committed to come to The Zone. He walked down a road until a vortex appeared. It sucked him in and then it was silent and black.
Roleplay Experience: PubDrunk, Oh wait wrong code. Um, uh Spooky Scary Space Nazis?
ID CODE: 1997 (DO NOT REMOVE)

*comedic popcorn consumption*
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Chicago Heights
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Ex-Nation

Postby Chicago Heights » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:46 pm

Deramen wrote:
Deramen wrote:
Gah, It feels good to get this out the door. This was writen at night, so ignore any spelling mistakes as Insomnia. ( ;) )

Name: Giuseppe Mann
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Occupation: Police Officer, Scavenger
Appearance: (Image)
Equipment: Beretta M9, A pocket knife, Ammo, Hiking backpack, A small meal, special Insomnia pills.
Skills: Great scavenger, Alright with a gun, Alright Athletics.
Weaknesses: Suffers insomnia and isn't smart.
Personality: He's a nice lovable dork whenever he has his sleep but when he doesn't he becomes frantic, nervous and can not concentration or remember much afterward.
Biography: Giuseppe was born in Carson City Nevada. He was born to Ada and Bruce Mann. His father was a construction worker and his mother was a worker for the government in Las Vegas. As he grew up, he lived a relatively normal life besides the fact that his mother was always at work and hotels. He had varying interests But he was always very jingoistic about America. He moved through the years and graduated high school, but it was discovered that he had a brain problem which caused Insomnia. He had to get special pills to deal with it, but they were very expensive. He had to get a job and eventually and abandoned any dreams of collage. He became an officer of the law. Giuseppe worked for awhile until the day came. They called it "The Zone". They managed to evacuate people, but his mother. She went missing and they couldn't find her before they had to seal it off.

He worked off the pain for awhile until he learned that the government was allowing people to go into The Zone as long as they get a cut. He immediately left his job and took what he had on him from his job and some supplies and headed down to The Zone. The government let him go in and cleared him of the crimes that he committed to come to The Zone. He walked down a road until a vortex appeared. It sucked him in and then it was silent and black.
Roleplay Experience: PubDrunk, Oh wait wrong code. Um, uh Spooky Scary Space Nazis?
ID CODE: 1997 (DO NOT REMOVE)

*comedic popcorn consumption*

LET'S GET ROOOOOOIGHT INTO THE NEWS!
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Deramen
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Postby Deramen » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:48 pm

Chicago Heights wrote:
Deramen wrote:*comedic popcorn consumption*

LET'S GET ROOOOOOIGHT INTO THE NEWS!

Bashur.

*Eats popcorn*
You can call me Dera.
INFP-T.

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Scoochi2 wrote:I'm now being offered Filipino girlfriends...

You say that like it's a bad thing.

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Chicago Heights
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Postby Chicago Heights » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:54 pm

Deramen wrote:
Chicago Heights wrote:LET'S GET ROOOOOOIGHT INTO THE NEWS!

Bashur.

*Eats popcorn*

[INSERT DANK MEME HERE]
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Ex-Nation

Postby Tayner » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:57 pm

Chicago Heights wrote:
Deramen wrote:Bashur.

*Eats popcorn*

[INSERT DANK MEME HERE]

Welcome to The Zone, where the memes are Dank and the nightmares caused by this RP are even Danker.

Maybe the group can use the missing highway to get to Groom Lake/Area 51/Hell
If anyone askes where we were Saturday at 14:30, we were at The Pub, understand?

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Postby New Grestin » Fri Apr 22, 2016 8:08 pm

Deramen wrote:
Deramen wrote:
Gah, It feels good to get this out the door. This was writen at night, so ignore any spelling mistakes as Insomnia. ( ;) )

Name: Giuseppe Mann
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Occupation: Police Officer, Scavenger
Appearance: (Image)
Equipment: Beretta M9, A pocket knife, Ammo, Hiking backpack, A small meal, special Insomnia pills.
Skills: Great scavenger, Alright with a gun, Alright Athletics.
Weaknesses: Suffers insomnia and isn't smart.
Personality: He's a nice lovable dork whenever he has his sleep but when he doesn't he becomes frantic, nervous and can not concentration or remember much afterward.
Biography: Giuseppe was born in Carson City Nevada. He was born to Ada and Bruce Mann. His father was a construction worker and his mother was a worker for the government in Las Vegas. As he grew up, he lived a relatively normal life besides the fact that his mother was always at work and hotels. He had varying interests But he was always very jingoistic about America. He moved through the years and graduated high school, but it was discovered that he had a brain problem which caused Insomnia. He had to get special pills to deal with it, but they were very expensive. He had to get a job and eventually and abandoned any dreams of collage. He became an officer of the law. Giuseppe worked for awhile until the day came. They called it "The Zone". They managed to evacuate people, but his mother. She went missing and they couldn't find her before they had to seal it off.

He worked off the pain for awhile until he learned that the government was allowing people to go into The Zone as long as they get a cut. He immediately left his job and took what he had on him from his job and some supplies and headed down to The Zone. The government let him go in and cleared him of the crimes that he committed to come to The Zone. He walked down a road until a vortex appeared. It sucked him in and then it was silent and black.
Roleplay Experience: PubDrunk, Oh wait wrong code. Um, uh Spooky Scary Space Nazis?
ID CODE: 1997 (DO NOT REMOVE)

*comedic popcorn consumption*

Mann, I can't believe I missed that.

Accepted.
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Kentucky Fried Land wrote:I should have known Grestin was Christopher Walken the whole time.
ThePub wrote:New Grestin: "I will always choose the aborable lesbians over an entire town."
Imperial Idaho wrote:And with 1-2 sentences Grestin has declared war on the national pride of Canada.
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Deramen
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Ex-Nation

Postby Deramen » Fri Apr 22, 2016 9:02 pm

New Grestin wrote:
Deramen wrote:*comedic popcorn consumption*

Mann, I can't believe I missed that.

Accepted.

YES!
So do I just show up by the magic of plot devices and vortexes?
Last edited by Deramen on Fri Apr 22, 2016 9:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.
You can call me Dera.
INFP-T.

[violet] wrote:
Scoochi2 wrote:I'm now being offered Filipino girlfriends...

You say that like it's a bad thing.

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