Cainesland wrote:Pacific Brotherhood of Steel wrote:Name: Colonel Arch Dornan Jr.
Age: 42
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://pre03.deviantart.net/394f/th/pre ... 3imeai.jpg
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Political Alignment: Loyal to the western Enclave.
Skills:
Motivator: Just like his father Dornan Jr has a penchant for long winded rants that put his troops into gear.
Extensive Weapons Experience: A life in the Enclave has given Dornan extensive knowledge with weaponry.
Diplomat: Dornan Jr, after a long time in the infantry, was eventually picked out for his way with words to become a diplomat for the the Enclave.
Connections: Dornan's father was a well known man and an eye was kept on his son. Since becoming a diplomat for the Enclave he has used the Dornan name to gather connections across Enclave territory.
Weaknesses:
Blindly Ambitious: Dornan is a man of ambitions. He knows what he wants and how he wants to get it but sometimes he gets ahead of himself.
Moral Ambiguity: Dornan at times has problems distinguishing right from wrong, most likely due to his parents being the Enclave old guard.
You're out of uniform soldier!: Dornan is know for his harshness and some troopers loathe to be under his command.
Weapons: Pulse Rifle
Other Items: Long Range Radio. Squad of troopers.
Bio: Dornan was born in the year 2241. One year before the total defeat of the Enclave on the west coast. By the year 2242 the oil rig was gone and the Enclave was in shambles. He was spirited away by one of the last vertibird transports out. His parents weren't as lucky and perished at Navarro. Orphaned, his life seemed grim, but luckily a man by the name of Captain Adrian Winters adopted him.
Winters raised him out east in Raven Rock. He instilled Dornan at a young age with hatred because of his stories. Though unintentional, Winters stories impressed on Dornan hard. Dornan was also trained by Winters personally making Dornan a superb fighter. Eventually Dornan joined the infantry and he was noted as an excellent soldier with a penchant for excessive violence. Though he never knew his real father, he did gain something from him. Dornan was just as brash and hard as his father. His speeches were known for their condescending demeanor and long windedness. Though they always seemed to inspire most of the troops. Eventually Dornan was pulled from the infantry because of this and made into a diplomat for the Enclave. He gained a reputation as a ruthless diplomat who gave no ground. Now he uses his talents to not only further himself but the Enclave as well.
Questions:
[****Keep For Tracking****]
Denied for now.
You should change loyalty to east coast as you said he is loyal to Autumns Enclave.
I am hoping to leave Dornan possibly alive for potential future interactions so that should be changed.
Navarro was fairly new in 2241 and it fell in 2248 from what I can tell. Seeing as the Ncr-Enclave war started in 2246.
You must not have understood the app.
He IS loyal to Autumn's Enclave, but that doesn't mean he wasn't raised in the West and retreated East.

