Infinite Justice: Beyond (OOC 5, Always Open)

[Finland SSR]

And thus, the great Majin Buu Saga begins.

Much like Rob, I'd appreciate feedback.

[The Starlight]

And thus, the great Majin Buu Saga begins.

Much like Rob, I'd appreciate feedback.

As would I. Let's trade. I give feedback on your post and you do the same to the last three I posted.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

And thus, the great Majin Buu Saga begins.

Much like Rob, I'd appreciate feedback.

As would I. Let's trade. I give feedback on your post and you do the same to the last three I posted.

Reading-wise that's not even a fair trade.

[Finland SSR]

And thus, the great Majin Buu Saga begins.

Much like Rob, I'd appreciate feedback.

As would I. Let's trade. I give feedback on your post and you do the same to the last three I posted.

oy vey that's not fair


Aaand ninja'd.

[The Starlight]

I'll make it up by reading and reviewing any two posts of yours that you'd like feedback....

[Illica Falki]

Bonjour Mon Ami, I don't really have an idea on what to work on today...

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Oh yeah, I didn't post this joke yesterday because you weren't around, Star.

Valancy: *rants about immortality*
Necromancer: Welcome to the club! You want cookies?

I'll make it up by reading and reviewing any two posts of yours that you'd like feedback....

Since you're offering I'd like some criticism on Necro's Christmas post. -nods-

Bonjour Mon Ami, I don't really have an idea on what to work on today...

You could help us cover for Nico.

[The Starlight]

Oh yeah, I didn't post this joke yesterday because you weren't around, Star.

Valancy: *rants about immortality*
Necromancer: Welcome to the club! You want cookies?

lol. Speaking of that, I'm a bit surprised you haven't commented on a few things from the Craig and Valancy posts. One, a book char converted into a Artificer Absolute, and two, a little something about Craig and Etla at the end of Valancy's rant.

Since you're offering I'd like some criticism on Necro's Christmas post. -nods-

Sure, why not?

Bonjour Mon Ami, I don't really have an idea on what to work on today...

You could help us cover for Nico.[/quote]

[Illica Falki]

Oh yeah, I didn't post this joke yesterday because you weren't around, Star.

Valancy: *rants about immortality*
Necromancer: Welcome to the club! You want cookies?

I'll make it up by reading and reviewing any two posts of yours that you'd like feedback....

Since you're offering I'd like some criticism on Necro's Christmas post. -nods-

Bonjour Mon Ami, I don't really have an idea on what to work on today...

You could help us cover for Nico.

So attack Cat and Nico's parents, got it.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

lol. Speaking of that, I'm a bit surprised you haven't commented on a few things from the Craig and Valancy posts. One, a book char converted into a Artificer Absolute, and two, a little something about Craig and Etla at the end of Valancy's rant.

Oh, that, yeah, I noticed all of that.

When I read Kvothe, I facepalmed a little to be honest. I mean, it's not a bad thing, but still. Looked a bit silly how you took him and put him there.

The other thing was cute. Don't think I have a lot to say about that though. Not besides "go for it" I guess.

So attack Cat and Nico's parents, got it.

Well I was thinking their parents' goons, but go ahead.

[The Starlight]

lol. Speaking of that, I'm a bit surprised you haven't commented on a few things from the Craig and Valancy posts. One, a book char converted into a Artificer Absolute, and two, a little something about Craig and Etla at the end of Valancy's rant.

Oh, that, yeah, I noticed all of that.

When I read Kvothe, I facepalmed a little to be honest. I mean, it's not a bad thing, but still. Looked a bit silly how you took him and put him there.

The other thing was cute. Don't think I have a lot to say about that though. Not besides "go for it" I guess.

Star: Shameless Plagiarizer and Thief of Intellectual Property. It was something I put in on a whim, really. Any other comments about the Cyberspace?

Well, we'll see where that goes.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Oh, that, yeah, I noticed all of that.

When I read Kvothe, I facepalmed a little to be honest. I mean, it's not a bad thing, but still. Looked a bit silly how you took him and put him there.

The other thing was cute. Don't think I have a lot to say about that though. Not besides "go for it" I guess.

Star: Shameless Plagiarizer and Thief of Intellectual Property. It was something I put in on a whim, really. Any other comments about the Cyberspace?

Well, we'll see where that goes.

Other comments? Well, I think it's an interesting take on the technological world, really, to make such direct parallels with the magical world. The part about the roles of the Artificers Absolute was intriguing as well. At first I thought the others were all dead or something (the start was a bit confusing), but that cleared up later. I definitely want to see where it goes from there.

I'll tell you more once I actually scrutinize the post.

[Illica Falki]

lol. Speaking of that, I'm a bit surprised you haven't commented on a few things from the Craig and Valancy posts. One, a book char converted into a Artificer Absolute, and two, a little something about Craig and Etla at the end of Valancy's rant.

Oh, that, yeah, I noticed all of that.

When I read Kvothe, I facepalmed a little to be honest. I mean, it's not a bad thing, but still. Looked a bit silly how you took him and put him there.

The other thing was cute. Don't think I have a lot to say about that though. Not besides "go for it" I guess.

So attack Cat and Nico's parents, got it.

Well I was thinking their parents' goons, but go ahead.

To be fair, she'd go after the biggest risk, which is likely the mother with that grenade launcher of hers...

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Oh, that, yeah, I noticed all of that.

When I read Kvothe, I facepalmed a little to be honest. I mean, it's not a bad thing, but still. Looked a bit silly how you took him and put him there.

The other thing was cute. Don't think I have a lot to say about that though. Not besides "go for it" I guess.



Well I was thinking their parents' goons, but go ahead.

To be fair, she'd go after the biggest risk, which is likely the mother with that grenade launcher of hers...

Fair enough, nobody's stopping you.

[The Starlight]

Necromancer Xmas Post
Shouldn't it be "an alien to death"? I'm not too sure about that though... And don't doors receive knocks, not people? But I'm nitpicking a bit here...
Wait, is he doing this because he's bored? Because if so, -200 respects points. But that makes sense, though. Anyway, on to compliments now. I think you captured the spirit and feel of Christmas superbly, and I think you got the feel down for Travenios as well.
I'm not quite sure about the denonyms though, whether it's Travenion/Travenions or Travenian. But Travenion makes sense because of how the city is spelled.
Also loved the Marvin part and his "This...isn't scientifically possible!"

You never did say, however, who was the soul that got killed. Was it Garnet's mother?

And man, Hadrimmelis is arrogant! "You see all those stars up there son?"
Addraku: "Yep"
Hadrimmelis: "I made them."

[Finland SSR]

Tomorrow Today
Cyberspace

So, I'll review one of Star's posts. Only one, because I'm a greedy little piggy.

What we see right here is Craig Thomsen, the blatant Tony Stark ripoff billionaire philanthropist, entering a world of what I believe to be a mix between dreams and the Internet, called Cyberspace. And to be fair, the writer, that is Star, does his job well at making it feel like a dream - everything feels like it's written with a thick shade of fog, imagination and magic. All cloudy, mysterious and vague, or at least that's how the prose felt to me. Nice way to introduce people to a supposedly pretty important concept.

There were a few punctuation mistakes I noticed, but don't take that to heart, it's barely noticeable. Nice and long post, albeit a bit dragging itself for a few times. Good work.

...now get to reviewing.

[The Starlight]

Tomorrow Today
Cyberspace

So, I'll review one of Star's posts. Only one, because I'm a greedy little piggy.

What we see right here is Craig Thomsen, the blatant Tony Stark ripoff billionaire philanthropist, entering a world of what I believe to be a mix between dreams and the Internet, called Cyberspace. And to be fair, the writer, that is Star, does his job well at making it feel like a dream - everything feels like it's written with a thick shade of fog, imagination and magic. All cloudy, mysterious and vague, or at least that's how the prose felt to me. Nice way to introduce people to a supposedly pretty important concept.

There were a few punctuation mistakes I noticed, but don't take that to heart, it's barely noticeable. Nice and long post, albeit a bit dragging itself for a few times. Good work.

...now get to reviewing.

You forgot mutant, inventor, city-builder, Artificer Absolute, and savior of the Universe in that list of titles. *nods*
I'll get to reviewing one of your posts.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Necromancer Xmas Post
Shouldn't it be "an alien to death"? I'm not too sure about that though... And don't doors receive knocks, not people? But I'm nitpicking a bit here...
Wait, is he doing this because he's bored? Because if so, -200 respects points. But that makes sense, though. Anyway, on to compliments now. I think you captured the spirit and feel of Christmas superbly, and I think you got the feel down for Travenios as well.
I'm not quite sure about the denonyms though, whether it's Travenion/Travenions or Travenian. But Travenion makes sense because of how the city is spelled.
Also loved the Marvin part and his "This...isn't scientifically possible!"

You never did say, however, who was the soul that got killed. Was it Garnet's mother?

And man, Hadrimmelis is arrogant! "You see all those stars up there son?"
Addraku: "Yep"
Hadrimmelis: "I made them."

I used Travenion because you used Travenion.

He's pretty much doing it because he's bored, yeah. That, and because it's a tradition of sorts for him (a tradition created in order to keep him from thinking about his own plight, so, in essence, it all goes back to being bored I suppose). I'll probably delve deeper into his thoughts at some other point, I have a bit of a speech in time already. But as far as the Christmas thing goes, boredom, yeah.

The soul was more or less a reference to Otis' mother, who went and got killed after being brought back for Christmas. I can always just pretend it's someone else if there's a problem though. -shrug- doesn't really matter, it was just to show a bit more of him.

Can you blame her for being a little bit arrogant? At least she's not comic-book-character level arrogant,

[Tomia]

Are we doing some kind of post reviewing thing again?

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Are we doing some kind of post reviewing thing again?

Blame Fin.

[Finland SSR]

Are we doing some kind of post reviewing thing again?

Blame Fin.

I never asked for this.

[Imperial Avantia]

Is there a batman?

[The Templar High Council]

You missed the joke.

And it's definitely on your end. Everything is right over here.

Well, It might just be Microsoft Edge that is causing the problem, Google Chrome works perfectly fine.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Blame Fin.

I never asked for this.

But you started it.

Is there a batman?

If you mean someone playing as Batman, no. But you can only play original characters.

[Tomia]

Are we doing some kind of post reviewing thing again?

Blame Fin.

Lol, wasn't trying to blame anyone was just curious.