The Elder Scrolls: Ascension [OOC 2 | CLOSED]

[Theodosiya]

God bless 'murica against the Communists.

am of callings in hind attack heli now

Seriously, though, Russian planes and helis just look way better :')

Very cute and childish flag, dutch. "I attack the metal box pow pow!"
In real life, the metal box would be doing the pow pow and probably render the soldier a red smear on the ground.

It's a pretty accurate representation of my real life hobbies

Could you guessed where I came from? No looking at other places.

[Greater Corea]

Didn't read that, I suppose it could serve as a sample. Is it possible however to have links to other RPs (if you've done any)?

Reading over it, I notice that his parents had a 'personal military force'? Are we saying something like 10? 20? because any larger would not bode well with the Empire. I'm guessing like any nation the Empire has laws against having a large personal army for obvious reasons. Correct me if i'm wrong.

Uuuh, as in 10.000 or 20-35.000?

To quote Dutch:

"Current Legion Strength:
128.000 Imperial Legion Soldiers
3200 Battle Mages
11.000 Mercenaries"

The Imperials have 142,200 Military personnel.

That makes your forces 7.0%-24.6% of the Legion's forces. That ain't gonna float, take those numbers way way down m9.

[Ameige]

I never did really understand why the concept of communism is seen as bad in the first place.

I mean all it is, is the idea of universal belonging. What most parents teach their kids when they are young,
on the concept of sharing. Its basically a whole form of lifestyle based on that.
Everything belongs to everyone and no one is higher up or any better than anyone else.
Equality. And yet, we see on the internet, communism being slandered.

I just don't get it.

[Zanera]

God bless 'murica against the Communists.

am of callings in hind attack heli now

Seriously, though, Russian planes and helis just look way better :')

[The Armed Republic of Dutch Coolness]

I never did really understand why the concept of communism is seen as bad in the first place.

I mean all it is, is the idea of universal belonging. What most parents teach their kids when they are young, on the concept of sharing. Its basically a whole form of lifestyle based on that.
Everything belongs to everyone and no one is higher up or any better than anyone else.
Equality. And yet, we see on the internet, communism being slandered.

I just don't get it.

It's a nice ideology that doesn't work out in reality

That's about it, apart from the Cold War mentality of everything communist ir Russian being evil

am of callings in hind attack heli now

Seriously, though, Russian planes and helis just look way better :')


It's a pretty accurate representation of my real life hobbies

Could you guessed where I came from? No looking at other places.

Going by the flag, Russia.

[Greater Corea]

I never did really understand why the concept of communism is seen as bad in the first place.

I mean all it is, is the idea of universal belonging. What most parents teach their kids when they are young, on the concept of sharing. Its basically a whole form of lifestyle based on that.
Everything belongs to everyone and no one is higher up or any better than anyone else.
Equality. And yet, we see on the internet, communism being slandered.

I just don't get it.

What you are describing is not what actual communism is. Of course it is an extremely idealistic ideology that is all about following Barneyism and what Barney teaches us; "Sharing is caring."

What actually happens is everyone starts asking, if we get the same amount of rice/money/septims/caps why work more than my neighbour? I would think a much better ideology is based off of meritocracy and not equality.

[The Armed Republic of Dutch Coolness]

am of callings in hind attack heli now

Seriously, though, Russian planes and helis just look way better :')

zanera pls

[Theodosiya]

Uuuh, as in 10.000 or 20-35.000?

that'd be larger than the forces of all of morrowind

Might tone it to 4.000 infantry, 1.000 Crossbowman,800 Archers and 400 Mages. Then 600 horse archers, 400 medium cavalry and 200 heavy cavalry.

[Zanera]

zanera pls

So mad right now.

[Greater Corea]

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zanera pls

Dutch Pls USSR all the way.

[The Armed Republic of Dutch Coolness]

that'd be larger than the forces of all of morrowind

Since Drageneve-Likenia influence are strong in Skyrim, influential in northern(read : Bruma,Kvatch,Skingard)Cyrodiil and quite noted both in High Rock and Hammerfell...

No.

zanera pls

So mad right now.

Madly in love with glorious Su-30, I assume.

[Ameige]

am of callings in hind attack heli now

Seriously, though, Russian planes and helis just look way better :')

Wow! Russians got some awesome sh*t!

[The Armed Republic of Dutch Coolness]

Those are American, though

[Zanera]

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Wow! Russians got some awesome sh*t!

That is American stuff...

zanera pls

Dutch Pls USSR all the way.

I don't see that thing flying for any number of meters.

[Theodosiya]

Since Drageneve-Likenia influence are strong in Skyrim, influential in northern(read : Bruma,Kvatch,Skingard)Cyrodiil and quite noted both in High Rock and Hammerfell...

No.

So mad right now.

Madly in love with glorious Su-30, I assume.

Changed.

[The Armed Republic of Dutch Coolness]

Wow! Russians got some awesome sh*t!

That is American stuff...

Dutch Pls USSR all the way.

I don't see that thing flying for any number of meters.

You clearly don't know a thing about Slav magic

[Zanera]

Since Drageneve-Likenia influence are strong in Skyrim, influential in northern(read : Bruma,Kvatch,Skingard)Cyrodiil and quite noted both in High Rock and Hammerfell...

No.

So mad right now.

Madly in love with glorious Su-30, I assume.

That is American stuff...



I don't see that thing flying for any number of meters.

You clearly don't know a thing about Slav magic

Pagan magic?

[Glasgia]

Theodosiya, I gave editing your app a go to make it a bit easier to read, as well as to give a general example of how to improve it. They're just suggestions, so ignore if you want, but I'm just trying to give you an idea of how to tweak it - I haven't changed any of the actual content. Still needs more though.

Red additions are my suggestions.

Ivar Drageneve
Race: Nord
Gender/Sex: Male
Appearance: An imposing figure at 6'5", Ivar is still just 23 and handsome with hints of mixed ancestry in his braided raven black hair. His facial hair consists of a thinly trimmed moustache above a more traditionally Nordic beard.
Class: Battlemage
Equipment: An Akaviri katana paired with a Akaviri dagger, Imperial Bow with Steel arrow, a maskless Akaviri helmet and a complete suit of customized Akaviri armor
Skills:Dual wielding, archery, basic healing, heavy armor, speech
Weaknesses: Destruction magic [Maybe add more personal weakness? What about his personality? He's a human, not a legend]
Bio: Born to a Nordic general of the Legion, Ragnar Drageneve, and Battlemage Legate Raasiya Likenia, Ivar's ancestry consisted of various sources - With grandparents of Nordic, Cyrodiilic, Breton and Redguard ethnicity. As a young lad, Ragnar [Ivar?] was surprisingly down to earth, often seen mingling with the commoners, lower ranks and younger soldiers than many of the high class. His parents never minded, for they wanted him to be a good leader that was respected and understand the hardship of the army. Despite their noble statuses, both the Drageneve and Likenia lines tracing their lineage to the early Empire itself, both firstly and foremostly considered themselves as officers of Imperial Legion.
[Alright, I cleaned up a fair bit of this but it still needs a lot of work. Detail Ivar's childhood - Where did he grow up? What was he like as a boy? As a teenager? What he did he do as a young man? Why is he now venturing out into the world?]
RP Sample: [Chuck that bit you did earlier in here]
Personality: Friendly, curious, patient, calm, thoughtful, brave [Maybe add some negative traits. Giving your characters significant weaknesses make them appear more human, as well as far more interesting]
Likes: Studying history, singing and playing music, reading books, poetry
Dislikes: Senseless murder and killing, dishonourable [Is that the word you were looking for?] tactics
Theme song: Hector's Death - James Horner - Troy
Voice: Kazunari Ninomiya(Saigo from Letters From Iwo Jima)

[Greater Corea]

that'd be larger than the forces of all of morrowind

Might tone it to 4.000 infantry, 1.000 Crossbowman,800 Archers and 400 Mages. Then 600 horse archers, 400 medium cavalry and 200 heavy cavalry.

Still not comfortable with that large a number.

[The Armed Republic of Dutch Coolness]

Might tone it to 4.000 infantry, 1.000 Crossbowman,800 Archers and 400 Mages. Then 600 horse archers, 400 medium cavalry and 200 heavy cavalry.

Still not comfortable with that large a number.

^

Stellar advice by Glasgia as well.

[Zanera]

Tone it down to a large personal bodyguard maybe. Under 100.

[The Intergalactic Russian Empire]

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zanera pls

Nothing beats Murican Tanks

[The Armed Republic of Dutch Coolness]

zanera pls

Nothing beats Murican Tanks

https://www.rt.com/files/news/39/37/b0/ ... orm.si.jpg

LAV > BTR, tho

[Zanera]

zanera pls

Nothing beats Murican Tanks

'Murica.

[Theodosiya]

Uuh,glasgia,corea already reviewed it. And that is the early one.Might fix and Retcon it though