Ace Combat: Broken Line (OOC/Closed)

[Rupudska]

Name: mathias Lucius szymanski
Nationality: north point
Age 18:
Gender: male

Rank:0-1
Callsign:Odin

Appearance: handsome, strong featured, short, buckskin brown hair small scar over right eye medium build over a lanky frame
Height:6'2"
Weight:155 ilb.

Aircraft: F-20 tiger shark
Aircraft Appearance: snow camo with red tail and wingtips with "shark mouth" on the nose
Emblem: mjolnir (steel gray with leather brown handle) with wings rooted mid handle (white and cream) on light blue background with mjolinirII on calligraphy
Funds 5 million

Personality: happy, almost constantly smiling, very intelligent, technically adept, mostly calm but has a storm brewing underneath and when he fights he fights with the fury of Odin thus the name,
Strengths: technology
Weaknesses: not many really, possibly mental explosiveness
Likes: tweaking his aircraft, socializing with his comrades customizing
Dislikes: having to repair his own aircraft ( he pissed off most of his repair crew from heavy damage) getting shot down

Bio: born in 1975 into a rich aircraft manufacturing family. At an early age mathias, excelled in his studies and always dreamed of actually being in the air unlike his "grounded" family. at Age thirteen, mathias joined the north point air academy and later many others (all funded by his family of course) *NOTE* mathias (almost)ALWAYS carries a Colt M1911A1 and a Taurus judge (.45/.410) on either hip (1911 on right and Taurus on left) and a Mossberg 500 custom in his plane. He carries all of these because of a time when he was shot down toward the end of his training and without weapons, he was captured. he was released after it was found that his story was correct and was released after being paid compensation,( 5 million) and scraped together some money to go into the 13th squadron and have enough to get a fighter of his choice.

RP Example:

DO NOT REMOVE: 4242564

Denied until I see an RP sample of some sort. Either a link or at least one paragraph of in-character action will do.

Also you start with $5 million. The F-20 costs exactly $5 million, so you currently would have no funds.

[Planet hephestus]

weeell, is anyone going to accept it? because I feel like celebrating.

[Relikai]

Also, 6footplus IS NOT SHORT!!!

[Planet hephestus]

Also, 6footplus IS NOT SHORT!!!

no its not. I'm in R/L 5'9" but always wanted to be taller
also I'm terrible at proper English writing not grammar not spelling, well, typing though im not the best at and paragraphs, reports and similar things I am bad at.

[Rupudska]

weeell, is anyone going to accept it? because I feel like celebrating.

I'm a Co-OP, so my word has a fair bit of sway. Make the edits.

[Planet hephestus]

also what in surturs domain is a role-play example anyways?

[Rupudska]

also what in surturs domain is a role-play example anyways?

Either a link to a previous RP you've been in (in character) or at least one paragraph of in-character action will do.

[Planet hephestus]

also what in surturs domain is a role-play example anyways?

Either a link to a previous RP you've been in (in character) or at least one paragraph of in-character action will do.

personally, I don't think I want you to look into my past its something I don't like sharing but the in character things will do also I have to go I have to take care of my farm animals its freezing out right now

[Beiarusia]

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1. Change the funds. Should be $0.

2. List an RP Example or, at the very least, use your bio to demonstrate your writing skills.

3. As for the bio, 13 seems young to join a military academy, but maybe that's just me. Also, how would he have been shot down during a training exercise? If he was still in training he would be nowhere near a combat zone. Plus add more as to why he left North Point to join a merc squadron. No one goes through the trouble of going through a military academy only to leave country immediately after. Why did he leave the military?

4. Make sure you listen to the Co-Ops, Rupudska and Ubaria especially.

[Tayner]

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1. Change the funds. Should be $0.

2. List an RP Example or, at the very least, use your bio to demonstrate your writing skills.

3. As for the bio, 13 seems young to join a military academy, but maybe that's just me. Also, how would he have been shot down during a training exercise? If he was still in training he would be nowhere near a combat zone. Plus add more as to why he left North Point to join a merc squadron. No one goes through the trouble of going through a military academy only to leave country immediately after. Why did he leave the military?

4. Make sure you listen to the Co-Ops, Rupudska and Ubaria especially.

There's a military academy near me that does middle school through high school students.

[Relikai]

personally, I don't think I want you to look into my past its something I don't like sharing but the in character things will do also I have to go I have to take care of my farm animals its freezing out right now

You need to understand a few things.

1) Regarding IC RP for the RP example, it's just an example for us to observe how you'd post in the IC. It's not about you, it's about your character. Nothing I posted is about me, it is about Shinden. So an example will show us how grounded you are in RPing, and we can also guide you along accordingly from the level you are at.

You can check out our char apps, there are many excellent examples listed.

2) Height weight and all, in the OOC and IC, when we talk about Apps, it's all about the character app. When I mentioned the contradiction, you posted that your character is short. 8 Ft 2 In is hardly 'short' in my opinion.

3) I did some research, North Point has no military force till 1993, meaning no military academy at all, but to contend this is up to OP.

4) Regarding strengths and weaknesses, it's more of RPing stuff, but also for us to create a profile from how to look at each other. Personally, I do not understand the Strength called 'Technology'. Is it Math? Physics? For weakness, maybe you can expand more on it. No one's perfect, but we can all work on it.

[Rupudska]

personally, I don't think I want you to look into my past its something I don't like sharing but the in character things will do also I have to go I have to take care of my farm animals its freezing out right now

You need to understand a few things.

1) Regarding IC RP for the RP example, it's just an example for us to observe how you'd post in the IC. It's not about you, it's about your character. Nothing I posted is about me, it is about Shinden. So an example will show us how grounded you are in RPing, and we can also guide you along accordingly from the level you are at.

You can check out our char apps, there are many excellent examples listed.

2) Height weight and all, in the OOC and IC, when we talk about Apps, it's all about the character app. When I mentioned the contradiction, you posted that your character is short. 8 Ft 2 In is hardly 'short' in my opinion.

3) I did some research, North Point has no military force till 1993, meaning no military academy at all, but to contend this is up to OP.

4) Regarding strengths and weaknesses, it's more of RPing stuff, but also for us to create a profile from how to look at each other. Personally, I do not understand the Strength called 'Technology'. Is it Math? Physics? For weakness, maybe you can expand more on it. No one's perfect, but we can all work on it.

Well put and well handled. I would have answered with snark.

[Beiarusia]

personally, I don't think I want you to look into my past its something I don't like sharing but the in character things will do also I have to go I have to take care of my farm animals its freezing out right now

You need to understand a few things.

1) Regarding IC RP for the RP example, it's just an example for us to observe how you'd post in the IC. It's not about you, it's about your character. Nothing I posted is about me, it is about Shinden. So an example will show us how grounded you are in RPing, and we can also guide you along accordingly from the level you are at.

You can check out our char apps, there are many excellent examples listed.

2) Height weight and all, in the OOC and IC, when we talk about Apps, it's all about the character app. When I mentioned the contradiction, you posted that your character is short. 8 Ft 2 In is hardly 'short' in my opinion.

3) I did some research, North Point has no military force till 1993, meaning no military academy at all, but to contend this is up to OP.

4) Regarding strengths and weaknesses, it's more of RPing stuff, but also for us to create a profile from how to look at each other. Personally, I do not understand the Strength called 'Technology'. Is it Math? Physics? For weakness, maybe you can expand more on it. No one's perfect, but we can all work on it.

That's a pretty good way to put it. I'm pretty blunt in terms of these things.

The RP Example is pretty much a way of seeing how well a writer you are. Though it's pretty rare an App may be denied if I feel they're writing skills are not what they should be, but one would have to be pretty terrible for that to happen, and in any case we're all more than willing to help out. I'm not super strict, but if all you post is one-liners then I'd be wary of accepting you.

As for his height, I think he may have been referring to his hair but the comma made things a bit jumbled.

It wasn't that they didn't have a military, it was stuck primarily in a defensive role and even then it was not up to par with some of the more powerful nations.

[The United Remnants of America]

You need to understand a few things.

1) Regarding IC RP for the RP example, it's just an example for us to observe how you'd post in the IC. It's not about you, it's about your character. Nothing I posted is about me, it is about Shinden. So an example will show us how grounded you are in RPing, and we can also guide you along accordingly from the level you are at.

You can check out our char apps, there are many excellent examples listed.

2) Height weight and all, in the OOC and IC, when we talk about Apps, it's all about the character app. When I mentioned the contradiction, you posted that your character is short. 8 Ft 2 In is hardly 'short' in my opinion.

3) I did some research, North Point has no military force till 1993, meaning no military academy at all, but to contend this is up to OP.

4) Regarding strengths and weaknesses, it's more of RPing stuff, but also for us to create a profile from how to look at each other. Personally, I do not understand the Strength called 'Technology'. Is it Math? Physics? For weakness, maybe you can expand more on it. No one's perfect, but we can all work on it.

Well put and well handled. I would have answered with snark.

And this is why Rups is my kind of people.

[Relikai]

You need to understand a few things.

1) Regarding IC RP for the RP example, it's just an example for us to observe how you'd post in the IC. It's not about you, it's about your character. Nothing I posted is about me, it is about Shinden. So an example will show us how grounded you are in RPing, and we can also guide you along accordingly from the level you are at.

You can check out our char apps, there are many excellent examples listed.

2) Height weight and all, in the OOC and IC, when we talk about Apps, it's all about the character app. When I mentioned the contradiction, you posted that your character is short. 8 Ft 2 In is hardly 'short' in my opinion.

3) I did some research, North Point has no military force till 1993, meaning no military academy at all, but to contend this is up to OP.

4) Regarding strengths and weaknesses, it's more of RPing stuff, but also for us to create a profile from how to look at each other. Personally, I do not understand the Strength called 'Technology'. Is it Math? Physics? For weakness, maybe you can expand more on it. No one's perfect, but we can all work on it.

That's a pretty good way to put it. I'm pretty blunt in terms of these things.

The RP Example is pretty much a way of seeing how well a writer you are. Though it's pretty rare an App may be denied if I feel they're writing skills are not what they should be, but one would have to be pretty terrible for that to happen, and in any case we're all more than willing to help out. I'm not super strict, but if all you post is one-liners then I'd be wary of accepting you.

As for his height, I think he may have been referring to his hair but the comma made things a bit jumbled.

It wasn't that they didn't have a military, it was stuck primarily in a defensive role and even then it was not up to par with some of the more powerful nations.

Aye, I've yet to catch up with the AC Lore, especially when I did not play AC4, makes me feel detached from the universe.

Anyway, the weekend has come and gone too quickly. See ya'll in 7 hours, it's gonna be a night as busy as Doc Yoshima's.

[Rupudska]

Anowa pls do not post in first person.

[Planet hephestus]

That's a pretty good way to put it. I'm pretty blunt in terms of these things.

The RP Example is pretty much a way of seeing how well a writer you are. Though it's pretty rare an App may be denied if I feel they're writing skills are not what they should be, but one would have to be pretty terrible for that to happen, and in any case we're all more than willing to help out. I'm not super strict, but if all you post is one-liners then I'd be wary of accepting you.

As for his height, I think he may have been referring to his hair but the comma made things a bit jumbled.

It wasn't that they didn't have a military, it was stuck primarily in a defensive role and even then it was not up to par with some of the more powerful nations.

Aye, I've yet to catch up with the AC Lore, especially when I did not play AC4, makes me feel detached from the universe.

Anyway, the weekend has come and gone too quickly. See ya'll in 7 hours, it's gonna be a night as busy as Doc Yoshima's.

dude I know how you feel just started watching the belkan war and I only have played halfway through AC-4

[Auremena]

Would now be a good (and by good I mean dreadful) time for Luna to arrive? Everything on fire, no radar, would freak everyone out.

[Beiarusia]

Would now be a good (and by good I mean dreadful) time for Luna to arrive? Everything on fire, no radar, would freak everyone out.

They would be on edge, but until the runway is cleared you wouldn't be able to land.

[Auremena]

Would now be a good (and by good I mean dreadful) time for Luna to arrive? Everything on fire, no radar, would freak everyone out.

They would be on edge, but until the runway is cleared you wouldn't be able to land.

Right, forgot about the crap on the runway.
Makes me sad to see a dead Vark, even if it is a Raven.

[Beiarusia]

They would be on edge, but until the runway is cleared you wouldn't be able to land.

Right, forgot about the crap on the runway.
Makes me sad to see a dead Vark, even if it is a Raven.

Unless you arrive an hour or so after the attack. Runway should likely be cleared and everyone would still be on edge. You'd likely show on radar and be intercepted by local fighters (J-7's).

[Planet hephestus]

Hey guys I have to go for a while I have some other work to I'll finish that application later as soon as I'm done with my work bye!

[Anowa]

Anowa pls do not post in first person.

*Grumbles* Okay...

[Kassaran]

I laughed hysterically reading your post Rup. When I get back home tonight (did I mention I just got into a new apartment?), I'll be making another post. As for the two lovely young ladies, while I initially planned to have accidentally shoved them into a broom closet, I think shoving them into a room with a fellow pilot, nevertheless a female, is loads funnier. I was rolling and people were staring while I'm here at work laughing.

[Ubaria]

Rup, mind if Noel *ahem* handles the escorts? Gives him something to do in the infirmary in the meanwhile.