1937: Kaiserreich(ALTERNATE HISTORY, OPEN)

[Narandia]

Am I accepted or am I denied because I'm not "perfect"?

[SECP]

Am I accepted or am I denied because I'm not "perfect"?

I like this one can we keep him?

[Narandia]

Am I accepted or am I denied because I'm not "perfect"?

So...

[Eodor]

Am I accepted?

[Venachuwenshi]

I believe that my Nacionalikaro - Polithuanian equivalent to the army, will be capable of resisting USSR assault reliably by 1942. They're getting better gear and in one year (2 pages) we will have tank! (Based upon Czech tank, because they are closest country to Polithuania)

[South Naples]

When it's in:"" someone is talking. When it's in:** he's thinking

Use proper English grammar. Words in between ' ' represent thought, and writing is to be put in the 3rd person in roleplays. Also everytime a new speaker, new line. What do they teach you at school? I can barely read this because I don't know who is saying what. There's no paragraphs so I find I'm reading the same line over and over again, or I continously skip lines which could contain important information.

Are u like some English teacher?

[Eodor]

Am I accepted?

...

[Venachuwenshi]

Use proper English grammar. Words in between ' ' represent thought, and writing is to be put in the 3rd person in roleplays. Also everytime a new speaker, new line. What do they teach you at school? I can barely read this because I don't know who is saying what. There's no paragraphs so I find I'm reading the same line over and over again, or I continously skip lines which could contain important information.

Are u like some English teacher?

Nope. Just someone who gets very annoyed when people post in an incorrect fashion. 3rd person and grammatically correct posts are the normal thing in roleplays like this one - just read the IC and see how many which are well written there are.

[South Naples]

My new sample had a mistake, Tehran Was the city with the blown up building it also had the rebels

[South Naples]

Are u like some English teacher?

Nope. Just someone who gets very annoyed when people post in an incorrect fashion. 3rd person and grammatically correct posts are the normal thing in roleplays like this one - just read the IC and see how many which are well written there are.

Okay...but some people do theirs differently so u don't have to lecture them

[Eodor]

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[New Los Angelos]

The people who accept aren't on right now.

[Narandia]

I'd like to know whether or not I was accepted

[Narandia]

The people who accept aren't on right now.

Oh

[New Los Angelos]

Alright guys, welcome to WW2.

Sides: Germany, Polithuania, and Bulgaria vs. USSR and AFU

[Garwall]

I guess Italy misses out on all the Soviet-killing fun of WW2.

[Versail]

To all those who posted new samples please repost them so I may see them.

[Narintia]

I'm sure we can handle this.

[New Los Angelos]

I'm sure we can handle this.

Rosbif?

[New Los Angelos]

Sweden, I think we all have a question: Who do you consider Aryans/Honorary Aryans?

[Venachuwenshi]

Sweden, I think we all have a question: Who do you consider Aryans/Honorary Aryans?

Lithuanians and everyone we have in our country best be on that list E_E

[Arvenia]

Sweden, I think we all have a question: Who do you consider Aryans/Honorary Aryans?

Aryans
Swedes
Norwegians
Danes
Icelanders
French
Spanish
Portuguese
Italians (disputed due to the Italian occupation of Serbia)
Germans
English
Scottish
Welsh
Irish
Americans
Canadians
Dutch
Afrikaners
Japanese
Greeks
Romanians
Armenians
Indians
Persians

Honorary Aryans
Serbs
Bulgars
Poles
Lithuanians
Latvians
Estonians
Chinese
Korean
Turks
Mulattos (hybrids between whites and blacks)

[SECP]

Hey Garwall when do you want to arrive in Italy?

[Venachuwenshi]

Wow. That was easy. Free land. Yay.
Danke shen Sweden, meine Freunde.

[South Naples]

King Olaf Monunia VI was at his desk reading a book on a sunny Monday morning. King Olaf has been king for 3 years now. He took power when his father, King Olaf V died in a terrorist attack. Of course, everyone says it was of old age, since they keep their rebel and terrorist problems secret. King Olaf VI is a middle-aged portly man with dark skin, dark green eyes, black hair, and a lively personality.
King Olaf was finishing his chapter when his servant, James
strides in. James had been hired from Britain. He didn't know why he did it, there was plenty good servants here, he just thought British servants were the best. James gives Olaf the daily report, "More protests in Tehran and a building was blown up too." Olaf thought to himself 'What do those frickin terrorists want?' "What are you going to do sir?" James asked Olaf.
"Bring in General Ross please." Said Olaf and James scurried off. The more Olaf thought about it, the more he realized that it's only the Tehran citizens that are causing significant problems. 'I'll have General Ross enforce harsh punishments on cities which try to rebel, but we'd have to keep it secret, or else others would rebel,' Olaf thought slyly. General Ross walks in. Olaf says "There's something I need you to do." "And what is that?" Asks Ross. "Get your forces ready near Tehran" commands Olaf. Ross shuffles his feet in discomfort. "I am from Tehran you know." Ross says. Olaf glares at him. "But okay."he whispers.



That's my sample