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by New Gothica » Sat Jan 30, 2016 9:07 pm

by Imperial Idaho » Sat Jan 30, 2016 9:52 pm
I'm from the land of Coeur D'alene Idaho.
By Ballot or by Bullet, the Pub Party will win. The Pub Legacy Edition.Ifreann wrote:The Romans placated the people with panem et circenses, bread and circuses. We will placate our people with dank space weed and hyper-HD vidya.Tysoania wrote:You remind me of a mobster who gets things cleared out of the way.
Next up on the Sopranos...
Imperial "Slick" Idaho, the fixer.Bralia wrote:Oh my fucking god. Do it again, guys, you both chose the number 7.

by New Los Angelos » Sat Jan 30, 2016 9:54 pm
Imperial Idaho wrote:Bulgaria, you are allied to the Free State of Ireland, i know it gets confusing but your not allied to the "Republic"

by Imperial Idaho » Sat Jan 30, 2016 10:06 pm
I'm from the land of Coeur D'alene Idaho.
By Ballot or by Bullet, the Pub Party will win. The Pub Legacy Edition.Ifreann wrote:The Romans placated the people with panem et circenses, bread and circuses. We will placate our people with dank space weed and hyper-HD vidya.Tysoania wrote:You remind me of a mobster who gets things cleared out of the way.
Next up on the Sopranos...
Imperial "Slick" Idaho, the fixer.Bralia wrote:Oh my fucking god. Do it again, guys, you both chose the number 7.

by New Los Angelos » Sat Jan 30, 2016 10:19 pm

by Eodor » Sun Jan 31, 2016 12:36 am
Stralend wrote:Eodor wrote:Nation Name: Canadian Republic
Nation Leader: President Liam Davidson
Government Type: Republic
Population: 11 million
Territory: Canada
Active Military Personnel- 120,000
Active Ground Personnel: 95,000
Active Naval Personnel: 20,000
Active Air Personnel: 5000
Total Active Personnel: 95,000
Reserve Military Personnel- 25,000
Reserve Ground Personnel: 18,000
Reserve Naval Personnel: 5000
Reserve Air Personnel: 2000
Total Reserve Personnel: 30,000
RP Sample:
A Free Canadian Republic the papers virtually screamed out. The new President Liam Davidson looked out over the city of Ottawa. Row upon row of houses and shops lined the free streets. With the fall of the British Empire Canada had been freed from foreign rule. 'A free country at last' Liam thought. The Great War had affected Canada deeply with thousands of men lost in a foreign war. So Liam was determined not to get involved in large European wars. Canada's army was demobilised quickly, in only 4 months. Canada was lucky not to be have been crushed by the Central Powers. Liam's excuse to the Central Powers was "We were under the rule of a foreign King. We had no choice in joining in the war". He was lucky. Others weren't.
That goes against my history, I was here first so come on man. At least change your name. Cascadia is the remnants of the Canadian government. Your history will have to be different. Canada is meant to be divided between the former provinces with territorial changes. Anarchy is widespread and disorder is the norm. You can have Newfoundland and Labrador plus The maritimes which we do not claim but please don't take the other provinces, it will ruin the RP for me. Cascadias main goal is to reunite Canada. Please, this is the only RP I am interested in.

by Stralend » Sun Jan 31, 2016 3:45 am
Eodor wrote:Stralend wrote:That goes against my history, I was here first so come on man. At least change your name. Cascadia is the remnants of the Canadian government. Your history will have to be different. Canada is meant to be divided between the former provinces with territorial changes. Anarchy is widespread and disorder is the norm. You can have Newfoundland and Labrador plus The maritimes which we do not claim but please don't take the other provinces, it will ruin the RP for me. Cascadias main goal is to reunite Canada. Please, this is the only RP I am interested in.
Your goal is to unite Canada. Well I've done it for you. Aren't I nice.

by New Los Angelos » Sun Jan 31, 2016 6:10 am

by Venachuwenshi » Sun Jan 31, 2016 6:15 am

by Narandia » Sun Jan 31, 2016 6:30 am

by Narandia » Sun Jan 31, 2016 6:31 am
Narandia wrote:Rp sample:There has been 10 years of war against Austria-Hungary and the Central European Union has scrapped a win. But Austria-Hungary has one last thing in stock...Katskinsk wasn't enjoying the morning paper. *Shows my country as a new threat to Germany.* He thought. He heard a quiet creaking. He didn't assume anything, as people constantly came in here to congratulate him of the victory. *But this quietly?* Katskinsk thought. *I'll get my pistol on my desk just in case.* He thought to himself putting the gun on his desk. He saw the shadow of the man. *Oh no.* He thinks to himself, *he has a gun.* "Halt! Or I shoot!" BANG! The man falls over. *The vice president?* He thinks to himself. His assistant comes running yelling "What the heck was that?!" The assistant comes into the room and stares at the scene. "We should call the Police." Said Katskinsk, still white with shock. On the news that night: "An assassination attempt on President Katskinsk failed. Vice president Forisnko Doratakno came into the room with a gun but the president shot first." Said the reporter. "The man was confirmed to be Austro-Hungarian. The assassination attempt was most likely rage upon the out come of the war. The government is currently handling the problem. Forinsko is sentenced to the death row" At the government meeting..." Why didn't you have a guard with you?" Asked one of the many senators. " Guards standing outside my door would be a good idea." Says Katskinsk."As long as they aren't invading my privacy." Another senator talks. "If he was Austro-Hungarian, then why don't we exterminate all Austro-Hungarians in our country?" "Because our country isn't evil." Says Katskinsk giving him a menacing glare. *Some people.* he thinks to himself. "I think all people should be thoroughly checked for any weapon before entering the building." Katskinsk says. "That is a good idea." says the new temporary vice president. "I think I will speak to Austria-Hungary about this incident." Says Katskinsk. At the meeting with Austria-Hungary..."I do not want war." Says the archduke. "Nor do I." Says Katskinsk. "But you must understand we are both endangered. Both sides are mad at each other. The Austro-Hungarians are mad at you for losing and mad at me for winning. That's true."Says the archduke. "While we remain a Anti-Central Powers country, I hope we can hate each other without war." Says Katskinsk smiling at his "funny" joke. "So do I." Says the archduke. They shake hands and leave the room.

by Stralend » Sun Jan 31, 2016 6:31 am

by South Naples » Sun Jan 31, 2016 6:50 am

by South Naples » Sun Jan 31, 2016 6:51 am
South Naples wrote:New sample: King Olaf Monunia VI was at his desk reading a book on a sunny Monday morning. King Olaf has been king for 3 years now. He took power when his father, King Olaf V died in a terrorist attack. Of course, everyone says it was of old age, since they keep their rebel and terrorist problems secret. King Olaf VI is a middle-aged portly man with dark skin, dark green eyes, black hair, and a lively personality.
King Olaf was finishing his chapter when his servant, James
strides in. James had been hired from Britain. He didn't know why he did it, there was plenty good servants here, he just thought British servants were the best. James gives Olaf the daily report, "More protests in Tehran and a building was blown up too." Olaf thought to himself 'What do those frickin terrorists want?' "What are you going to do sir?" James asked Olaf.
"Bring in General Ross please." Said Olaf and James scurried off. The more Olaf thought about it, the more he realized that it's only the Tehran citizens that are causing significant problems. 'I'll have General Ross enforce harsh punishments on cities which try to rebel, but we'd have to keep it secret, or else others would rebel,' Olaf thought slyly. General Ross walks in. Olaf says "There's something I need you to do." "And what is that?" Asks Ross. "Get your forces ready near Tehran" commands Olaf. Ross shuffles his feet in discomfort. "I am from Tehran you know." Ross says. Olaf glares at him "But okay."he whispers.

by South Naples » Sun Jan 31, 2016 6:53 am

by New Los Angelos » Sun Jan 31, 2016 7:19 am

by New Los Angelos » Sun Jan 31, 2016 7:20 am

by Venachuwenshi » Sun Jan 31, 2016 7:20 am
Narandia wrote:Narandia wrote:Rp sample:There has been 10 years of war against Austria-Hungary and the Central European Union has scrapped a win. But Austria-Hungary has one last thing in stock...Katskinsk wasn't enjoying the morning paper. *Shows my country as a new threat to Germany.* He thought. He heard a quiet creaking. He didn't assume anything, as people constantly came in here to congratulate him of the victory. *But this quietly?* Katskinsk thought. *I'll get my pistol on my desk just in case.* He thought to himself putting the gun on his desk. He saw the shadow of the man. *Oh no.* He thinks to himself, *he has a gun.* "Halt! Or I shoot!" BANG! The man falls over. *The vice president?* He thinks to himself. His assistant comes running yelling "What the heck was that?!" The assistant comes into the room and stares at the scene. "We should call the Police." Said Katskinsk, still white with shock. On the news that night: "An assassination attempt on President Katskinsk failed. Vice president Forisnko Doratakno came into the room with a gun but the president shot first." Said the reporter. "The man was confirmed to be Austro-Hungarian. The assassination attempt was most likely rage upon the out come of the war. The government is currently handling the problem. Forinsko is sentenced to the death row" At the government meeting..." Why didn't you have a guard with you?" Asked one of the many senators. " Guards standing outside my door would be a good idea." Says Katskinsk."As long as they aren't invading my privacy." Another senator talks. "If he was Austro-Hungarian, then why don't we exterminate all Austro-Hungarians in our country?" "Because our country isn't evil." Says Katskinsk giving him a menacing glare. *Some people.* he thinks to himself. "I think all people should be thoroughly checked for any weapon before entering the building." Katskinsk says. "That is a good idea." says the new temporary vice president. "I think I will speak to Austria-Hungary about this incident." Says Katskinsk. At the meeting with Austria-Hungary..."I do not want war." Says the archduke. "Nor do I." Says Katskinsk. "But you must understand we are both endangered. Both sides are mad at each other. The Austro-Hungarians are mad at you for losing and mad at me for winning. That's true."Says the archduke. "While we remain a Anti-Central Powers country, I hope we can hate each other without war." Says Katskinsk smiling at his "funny" joke. "So do I." Says the archduke. They shake hands and leave the room.
When it's in:"" someone is talking. When it's in:** he's thinking

by Venachuwenshi » Sun Jan 31, 2016 7:20 am
New Los Angelos wrote:Oh, Polithuania, you will need to get the military ready.

by Narandia » Sun Jan 31, 2016 7:34 am
Venachuwenshi wrote:Narandia wrote:When it's in:"" someone is talking. When it's in:** he's thinking
Use proper English grammar. Words in between ' ' represent thought, and writing is to be put in the 3rd person in roleplays. Also everytime a new speaker, new line. What do they teach you at school? I can barely read this because I don't know who is saying what. There's no paragraphs so I find I'm reading the same line over and over again, or I continously skip lines which could contain important information.

by South Naples » Sun Jan 31, 2016 7:35 am
Venachuwenshi wrote:Narandia wrote:When it's in:"" someone is talking. When it's in:** he's thinking
Use proper English grammar. Words in between ' ' represent thought, and writing is to be put in the 3rd person in roleplays. Also everytime a new speaker, new line. What do they teach you at school? I can barely read this because I don't know who is saying what. There's no paragraphs so I find I'm reading the same line over and over again, or I continously skip lines which could contain important information.

by New Los Angelos » Sun Jan 31, 2016 7:38 am
South Naples wrote:Venachuwenshi wrote:Use proper English grammar. Words in between ' ' represent thought, and writing is to be put in the 3rd person in roleplays. Also everytime a new speaker, new line. What do they teach you at school? I can barely read this because I don't know who is saying what. There's no paragraphs so I find I'm reading the same line over and over again, or I continously skip lines which could contain important information.
You don't have to put in third person cuz in first person u can tell the reader what they are thinking
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