1937: Kaiserreich(ALTERNATE HISTORY, OPEN)

[South Naples]

Okay: King Olaf VI was drinking his morning coffee when his servant stormed in. "Sir,sir" cried the servant. "What is it?!" Yelled Olaf. "I'm enjoying myself here". "The rebels have control of Tehran!" Shouted the servant. "WHAT!?" Screamed Olaf. Olaf starts striding the room. " We had 1,500 soldiers in the city, how were we defeated!?". The servant sat down. " GET GENERAL TOBUK NOW!!!" Yelled Olaf at the servant. The servant scurried off.
2 minutes later

General Tobuk trudged in. "I'd like to ask you a few questions." Said Olaf calmly. "First off, what happened in Tehran?" General Tobuk looked very embarrassed. "We were outnumbered and surrounded, we barely made our way out of the city." Olaf stares at Geeneral Tobuk with anger. " Send 15,000 troops to Tehran NOW!!! I expect the city back under our control in 2 weeks" yells Olaf.


Is that good?

Hmm....
Versail, my British Butler, is it good?

...

[South Naples]

Hmm....
Versail, my British Butler, is it good?

...

Is that yes or no

[Stralend]

Nation Name: Canadian Republic
Nation Leader: President Liam Davidson
Government Type: Republic
Population: 11 million
Territory: Canada
Active Military Personnel- 120,000
Active Ground Personnel: 95,000
Active Naval Personnel: 20,000
Active Air Personnel: 5000
Total Active Personnel: 95,000
Reserve Military Personnel- 25,000
Reserve Ground Personnel: 18,000
Reserve Naval Personnel: 5000
Reserve Air Personnel: 2000
Total Reserve Personnel: 30,000
RP Sample:
A Free Canadian Republic the papers virtually screamed out. The new President Liam Davidson looked out over the city of Ottawa. Row upon row of houses and shops lined the free streets. With the fall of the British Empire Canada had been freed from foreign rule. 'A free country at last' Liam thought. The Great War had affected Canada deeply with thousands of men lost in a foreign war. So Liam was determined not to get involved in large European wars. Canada's army was demobilised quickly, in only 4 months. Canada was lucky not to be have been crushed by the Central Powers. Liam's excuse to the Central Powers was "We were under the rule of a foreign King. We had no choice in joining in the war". He was lucky. Others weren't.

That goes against my history, I was here first so come on man. At least change your name. Cascadia is the remnants of the Canadian government. Your history will have to be different. Canada is meant to be divided between the former provinces with territorial changes. Anarchy is widespread and disorder is the norm. You can have Newfoundland and Labrador plus The maritimes which we do not claim but please don't take the other provinces, it will ruin the RP for me. Cascadias main goal is to reunite Canada. Please, this is the only RP I am interested in.

[Narandia]

Nation Name: Union of Central Europe
Nation leader: Katskinsk Merisnko
Government: Democracy
Territory:Central Europe
Active ground personnel: 650 thousand soldiers
Active naval personnel: 0
Active air personnel: 200 aircraft
Total active troops: 650,200
Reserve ground personnel: 30,000 soldiers
Reserve naval personnel: 0
Reserve air personnel: 50 aircraft
Total reserve personnel: 30,050
Rp sample: "Stability to central Europe at last!" Says Katskinsk Merisnko as the crowd cheers. "The Union of Central Europe will bring peace to central Europe and it's people."
The crowd cheers as he walks off stage. " Are you sure about the choice to be anti
Germany?" Asks five star general Alstotzk Serinsk. "No going back now." Says Katskinsk as he gets some hot tea. " Those Germans will crush us if they invade us!" Yells Alstotsk hastily. " I have one quote that I truly believe in", says Katskinsk as he fills up the bathtub, "Think with your heart not your head. The Germans are greedy. Now shoo shoo I'm going to take a bath." Alstotzk walks out of the room cursing under his breath.

[Versail]

Okay: King Olaf VI was drinking his morning coffee when his servant stormed in. "Sir,sir" cried the servant. "What is it?!" Yelled Olaf. "I'm enjoying myself here". "The rebels have control of Tehran!" Shouted the servant. "WHAT!?" Screamed Olaf. Olaf starts striding the room. " We had 1,500 soldiers in the city, how were we defeated!?". The servant sat down. " GET GENERAL TOBUK NOW!!!" Yelled Olaf at the servant. The servant scurried off.
2 minutes later

General Tobuk trudged in. "I'd like to ask you a few questions." Said Olaf calmly. "First off, what happened in Tehran?" General Tobuk looked very embarrassed. "We were ioutnumbered and surrounded, we barely made our way out of the city." Olaf stares at General Tobuk with anger. " Send 15,000 troops to Tehran NOW!!! I expect the city back under our control in 2 weeks" yells Olaf.


Is that good?

Hmm....
Versail, my British Butler, is it good?

This guy?
Not really.

[New Los Angelos]

What should I post about? I need ideas.

[South Naples]

Hmm....
Versail, my British Butler, is it good?

This guy?
Not really.

Am I denied then? ...

[New Los Angelos]

This guy?
Not really.

Am I denied then? ...

I guess. Just work on the RP. Also, you should try. I like the idea, and brings a rival for the Ottomans.

[New Los Angelos]

Nation Name: Union of Central Europe
Nation leader: Katskinsk Merisnko
Government: Democracy
Territory:Central Europe
Active ground personnel: 650 thousand soldiers
Active naval personnel: 0
Active air personnel: 200 aircraft
Total active troops: 650,200
Reserve ground personnel: 30,000 soldiers
Reserve naval personnel: 0
Reserve air personnel: 50 aircraft
Total reserve personnel: 30,050
Rp sample: "Stability to central Europe at last!" Says Katskinsk Merisnko as the crowd cheers. "The Union of Central Europe will bring peace to central Europe and it's people."
The crowd cheers as he walks off stage. " Are you sure about the choice to be anti
Germany?" Asks five star general Alstotzk Serinsk. "No going back now." Says Katskinsk as he gets some hot tea. " Those Germans will crush us if they invade us!" Yells Alstotsk hastily. " I have one quote that I truly believe in", says Katskinsk as he fills up the bathtub, "Think with your heart not your head. The Germans are greedy. Now shoo shoo I'm going to take a bath." Alstotzk walks out of the room cursing under his breath.

You could be the Pan-Slavic Union, but that is just Serbia, and maybe Montenegro and Kosovo.

[Narandia]

Nation Name: Union of Central Europe
Nation leader: Katskinsk Merisnko
Government: Democracy
Territory:Central Europe
Active ground personnel: 650 thousand soldiers
Active naval personnel: 0
Active air personnel: 200 aircraft
Total active troops: 650,200
Reserve ground personnel: 30,000 soldiers
Reserve naval personnel: 0
Reserve air personnel: 50 aircraft
Total reserve personnel: 30,050
Rp sample: "Stability to central Europe at last!" Says Katskinsk Merisnko as the crowd cheers. "The Union of Central Europe will bring peace to central Europe and it's people.
"
The crowd cheers as he walks off stage. " Are you sure about the choice to be anti
Germany?" Asks five star general Alstotzk Serinsk. "No going back now." Says Katskinsk as he gets some hot tea. " Those Germans will crush us if they invade us!" Yells Alstotsk hastily. " I have one quote that I truly believe in", says Katskinsk as he fills up the bathtub, "Think with your heart not your head. The Germans are greedy. Now shoo shoo I'm going to take a bath." Alstotzk walks out of the room cursing under his breath.

You could be the Pan-Slavic Union, but that is just Serbia, and maybe Montenegro and Kosovo.

Sure.

[South Naples]

Am I denied then? ...

I guess. Just work on the RP. Also, you should try. I like the idea, and brings a rival for the Ottomans.

I'll tell you what. I'll work on a better sample and if u like it, u accept me okay?

[New Los Angelos]

You could be the Pan-Slavic Union, but that is just Serbia, and maybe Montenegro and Kosovo.

Sure.

I didn't accept you, but that does solve map problems.

Also, I CANNOT ACCEPT!

[South Naples]

The guy above me is sadly just below standards.

Read my post before this, is it a deal?
Oh, well if I am denied anyway can I still work on my sample and have my land reserved until I'm done?

[Narandia]

I was talking about Narandia when I said just below standards.

What do you mean by "just below my standards?"

[Versail]

I was talking about Narandia when I said just below standards.

What do you mean by "just below my standards?"

The RP example you gave was not up to standard.
Ergo: It was bad.

[Narandia]

What do you mean by "just below my standards?"

The RP example you gave was not up to standard.
Ergo: It was bad.

Screw you!!! Leaves

[Narandia]

What do you mean by "just below my standards?"

The RP example you gave was not up to standard.
Ergo: It was bad.

I mean did you expect Shakespeare!?!?!?

[Versail]

The RP example you gave was not up to standard.
Ergo: It was bad.

I mean did you expect Shakespeare!?!?!?

No I do not expect "Shakespeare" however, The Op said that your example was below standard and I explained what that meant when you asked.

[Narandia]

What do you mean by "just below my standards?"

The RP example you gave was not up to standard.
Ergo: It was bad.

If I make a better sample, can I stay?

[Versail]

The RP example you gave was not up to standard.
Ergo: It was bad.

If I make a better sample, can I stay?

Yes.
Would you like a prompt?

[Narandia]

The RP example you gave was not up to standard.
Ergo: It was bad.

If I make a better sample, can I stay?

Also, how can I make it better?

[Narandia]

If I make a better sample, can I stay?

Yes.
Would you like a prompt?

Yes

[Narandia]

...

[Narandia]

...

Reserve my land until I make a better sample.

[Versail]

Nation Name: Union of Central Europe
Nation leader: Katskinsk Merisnko
Government: Democracy
Territory:Central Europe
Active ground personnel: 650 thousand soldiers
Active naval personnel: 0
Active air personnel: 200 aircraft
Total active troops: 650,200
Reserve ground personnel: 30,000 soldiers
Reserve naval personnel: 0
Reserve air personnel: 50 aircraft
Total reserve personnel: 30,050
Rp sample: "Stability to central Europe at last!" Says Katskinsk Merisnko as the crowd cheers. "The Union of Central Europe will bring peace to central Europe and it's people."
The crowd cheers as he walks off stage. " Are you sure about the choice to be anti
Germany?" Asks five star general Alstotzk Serinsk. "No going back now." Says Katskinsk as he gets some hot tea. " Those Germans will crush us if they invade us!" Yells Alstotsk hastily. " I have one quote that I truly believe in", says Katskinsk as he fills up the bathtub, "Think with your heart not your head. The Germans are greedy. Now shoo shoo I'm going to take a bath." Alstotzk walks out of the room cursing under his breath.

If I make a better sample, can I stay?

Also, how can I make it better?

Well you could portray your leader a bit more realistically (No leader would speak to their general while filling up a bathtub), You could make the speech longer and put in the leaders thoughts as he is speaking.

Yes.
Would you like a prompt?

Yes

Your has been at war for the past 10 years, your current leader is old but the heir (Or Vice-President) is young. The Heir (Or Vice-President) tries to kill the current leader and fails.
Give me the aftermath of the Assassination attempt.