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Should I make the IC?

Poll ended at Fri Dec 18, 2015 7:50 pm

Yes, if we wait then people will lost interest.
15
58%
No, we should wait for more nations.
8
31%
I don't care.
3
12%
 
Total votes : 26

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The Peoples East Africa
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Postby The Peoples East Africa » Wed Dec 16, 2015 3:52 pm

New Rnclave wrote:
The Peoples East Africa wrote:He's a fucking scout. It's his duty to leave in peace. Also why have you adopted him?


TG incoming

Yay!

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The Eastern Antarctic State
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Left-wing Utopia

Postby The Eastern Antarctic State » Wed Dec 16, 2015 3:58 pm

I use an ipad...
This ensues
The Republic of Eastern Antarctica is a country located on the Eastern portion of the Antarctic Continent, Has leftist policies, but is still capitalist.

NOTE: I am an Australian.
I enjoy playing/watching Cricket and Rugby League every now and then. Love me some history and paradox games. Studying at University. Catholic. You can call me TEAS or EAS

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The Peoples East Africa
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Postby The Peoples East Africa » Wed Dec 16, 2015 3:59 pm

The Eastern Antarctic State wrote:I use an ipad...

Peasant Cool stuff, iPads have their uses.

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Postby Sanabel » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:00 pm

The Eastern Antarctic State wrote:I use an ipad...

I'm on my cell
The interregnum is over- I am once again the OP of the Land of the Free RP


I am a Radical Centro-Transhumanist and a National Globalist.
If you don't have a high enough IQ to know what those are, then we can't be friends.

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Franco-Iberie
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Postby Franco-Iberie » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:02 pm

Sanabel wrote:
The Eastern Antarctic State wrote:I use an ipad...

I'm on my cell

I'm on a desktop, yet my posts are only "okay".

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Postby New Rnclave » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:03 pm

The Eastern Antarctic State wrote:I use an ipad...


Garlic Jr.:

"Why Claudia my dear, And you Garnet, you pretentious wretches, why fight you? Oh no your fate will be much worse." Garlic chuckled darkly, gauging Hiroshi's expression as he dropped the child, letting her bounce across the rocky surface.

Even as a bleeding wreck, that defiant, unbending look was still there. Black energies swirled around him as he began to float, the sky darkening and crackling with the black lightening, the epicenter coming from Garlic himself. Licking his teeth a second later, Garlic started to grin once again, staring down at them all before finally letting loose a howling cackle. This was going to be superb, the greatest example of his mercy on them all. They would all understand the suffering he endured, and they would all receive exactly what they deserved, but most of all, he would see Hiroshi punished for what he'd done to him. He deserved to be punished for believing he could stop him.

"I-I won't give up." Hiroshi huffed, a golden flame wrapping itself around him, sending dust scattering away from him. " No ones unbeatable, especially not someone who has to rely on tricks to win. Your a waste of my time. Your pathetic."

Pathetic?... They call me pathetic. I arrange for Abaddon to be taken out of the picture, and I'm pathetic. I manipulate them all into doing my bidding, and I'm pathetic. I collect the Seven Dragon Balls to obtain enough power to challenge these pitiful Saiyans, and I'm pathetic. I control the fabric of time and space through the Dead Zone... and I'm pathetic?

Rage flooded his veins, the feeling still uncomfortable, as new as these veins were. Everyone who challenged him was going to be punished as they deserved. Hiroshi and these fools would be sent into the abyss for their insolence, then they'd know who was pathetic.

"Every single one of you will pay your resistance." Garlic howled, his features contorted in fury. " You will all know the pain of being locked away for a decade. You will know my fury!"

Slowly, he started to growl as red energy brimmed at the edge of his skin. The world around him began to bend, as space and time were manipulated. In a swirl of blackened energy, the sky itself seemed to rot for a moment, before shards cracked through the very sky. His growl slowly turned into a full scream as he drew in from himself the power needed to not only open a gateway to the Dead Zone, but to open its terrible maw. He would see all of his enemies shown just how pathetic he was.

As if it were glass hit by a rock, the entirety of the sky seemed to shatter, stripping away the blue haze of the Earth's atmosphere, and replacing it with a sole, dark portal. The orb of darkness in the heart of it all began to suck everything in towards it, even light.

Grinning down at the fools below, Garlic just smiled broadly as he started to chuckle.

"The Dead Zone will swallow you up and keep you for all eternity, there's no escape."

()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()

Hiroshi:

Moving quickly, Hiroshi snatched Tomia as quickly as he could, hurrying before Garlic noticed he lost his hold on her, just as he felt a great shift in the balance of the world. Everything seemed to almost be sucking him in towards Garlic, towards the beating black heart of the Dead Zone. It wasn't even that however, it was as if everything was displaced. The edge of the horizon on the 'hole', the sphere of darkness in the air, seem to almost make everything around it fall in towards it. It was as if physics were slowly breaking down, and the only thing unaffected by it, was Garlic himself. His maddened cackle swept out over the landscape as darkened energies rolled over his entire body, feeding into the maw, making it grow ever larger.

Even his maddened laughter seemed delayed and slowed, as though time around them was slowing, it was as though everything was being pulled towards the horrible void Garlic had opened.

Rocketing up, he cradled the girl in his arms, keeping her firmly held so he couldn't be pulled away. There was just shallow breathing from Tomia as she watched with terror filled eyes, she watched the world drain way. The rocks on the earth below, then the earth itself slowly, the rubble of the castle, all flew helplessly towards the void. The clouds themselves drained into the blackened hole, and with wide eyes, Hiroshi watched spirals of ocean water be drawn towards the void, all of these things being drawn towards the Earths new center of gravity.

All around them, beyond the delayed echo of Garlics chuckle, all could be heard was the intense wind. The atoms and energy in the air, as it was drawn towards the Dead Zone.

Looking beyond the blackness, Hiroshi couldn't looks beyond the opening of the void. It was more than a planet that could be destroyed by third class warriors, everything about it reminded him of a Black Hole. In his time as a Special operations warrior in his fathers army, he'd witnessed the devastation and destruction these things could cause. He'd watched an entire system be sucked in from something as simple as a miscalculation in orbit. It had destroyed everything within its orbit, before annihilating itself. What should have taken years, would inly take two days, and even fate couldn't stop the destruction it wrought. As the hole had burned in the galactic sky, a circle of superheated gas burning around it, all of it heated by sheer proximity to the collapsing star. A star with a black heart.

But now, as Earths atmosphere was drawn into it, like water down a drain, Hiroshi could truly understand the monster Garlic had unleashed upon not only them, but the entire planet. All noise ceased around them, beyond the howling of matter as it to was drawn in. All around the hole, nitrogen, oxygen, and carbon dioxide accelerated to insane speeds before being pulled into the other dimension. Being pulled so closely to one incredibly powerful point, pulled the matter together, lighting the edges of the hole itself, before it was surrounded by almost a golden fire. The light from the sun itself dimmed, as the brightness of the collision of gases nearly taking place around the core of this hole, took ownership of the sky. But still it grew.

Garlic's blackened energies fed into it more and more as it grew in size, more and more. More of the Earth's surface seemed to be sucked towards it. The seas themselves began to rise beyond just tendrils being drawn in, now it was as if the ocean itself was being lifted into the air. Swirling masses of clouds in the air began to wrapped together, pulling towards the Dead Zone.

Looking to his left, Hiroshi saw similar looks of awe upon the faces of his companions, everyone if them as scared and bewildered as he was. They were short on time, and they needed a plan, quickly.

"How do we stop it?" Hiroshi's mind reached out to Claudia, knowing voice would be useless lost in the vortex of noise now emerging along the surface of the Earth for as far as he could understand.

The entire energy of the Earth seemed to shift, and reality itself seemed to begin to lose control. It was as if the entire Earth and its orbit, as well as its rotation, began to shift and change. It was beginning to modify the entirety of the Earth. Everything would be drawn into the Event Horizon, piece by piece, and destroyed, before being cast into another universe.

"Think of something fast," Hiroshi urged himself, his own eyes scanning over the blinding light and eternal darkness, before seeing something beyond, and he knew Claudia must as seen it as well, or least had a basic understand of it.b

Its being held up, opened, and expanded by Garlic's power.

What was the Dead Zone? Where did it come from? That was the bolder question to ask. To answer it, would lead to something at least.

Killing Garlic jr. wouldn't solve anything, he would simply return, his power would never leave. Throwing him into the Dead Zone wouldn't do anything either. But there was a chance he could attack the Dead Zone itself, the very walls, the very structure of the nightmare could be assaulted. It was nothing but nothingness given form and mass. Even now, he tried to understand where it really was in the darkness, and how much it the event horizon was it. Where was the only structure the Dead Zone ever knew?

Turning his head, he looked at Tomia, who clung desperately as his shredded gi as they floated, gripping tightly with both arms, even her broken one. Despite his efforts, he felt himself hopelessly floating towards the vacuum, and even the brilliant golden fire around him was drawn towards it, itself brilliance paled in comparison to the void before them. There was no time anymore, a decision had to be made, for Tomia and the rest of Earth, and he made it. Staring into the void, he could almost see a demon within, looking past the physical of the vacuum.

'Tomia, Can you hear me?'

There was no response, she was to overwhelmed by the noise, the momentum, and the pure awe of all that was happening around her. But he knew she heard, the girl burying her face in his chest and tightening her eyes.

'Listen to me Tomia. I'm going to stop this here and now, but you need to hold onto my back no matter what, no matter how bad it hurts, you have to keep your grip. Trust me, it'll all be over soon.'

The wind was endless and relentless, his entire body was raw from friction, his ears ached from the ferocity of the noise around him, the howling of matter as it was forcibly drawn to the void. But it a sea of nothingness, he felt something familiar.

"What's this!? How can he just stand there?!"

Garlics words rang in his mind, like a slap to the face, unleashing memories long forgotten. No longer was he the warrior of legend, defending his daughter and his new home planet, he was a four year old, standing before this void once more, as his father battled endlessly against this monster, as well,as his late Uncle and mother. They hung onto life and this dimension for their lives, but they couldn't stop it, no one could.

Now this monster wanted to take everything he'd gained, wanted to destroy the universe, his own plaything in his own mind. And he'd kill Claudia, Garnet and Tomia to do so.

He could see the Dead zone for what it was, as he and before, the first time he'd defeated Garlic.

"Hiroshi!!"

His mothers desperate call echoed through him, his heart leaping in his chest, her and his uncles voices melting together, before becoming something more important.

"DADDY!!"

Even as he was drawn helplessly towards the swirling mass of gas and demonic energy, the Halfling put up his first sign of defiance before its power. Golden fire built around him as he used the vacuum of the void to pull himself into position. Orbiting around it, he felt the swirl grow unbearably hot, at this point it was near impossible to breath, and the wind whipped and cut his face, small insignificant cuts dotting his determined features. The noise grew more wild and rampant, and as it reached unbearable levels, Hiroshi anchored himself, a sphere of golden energies surrounding him, stopping his momentum.

Golden fire rolled off of him as he drew his hands to his center, both hands cupped agaisnt his forehead. All energy he had was drawn towards his center, the pain of defeat, driving him. The fear of death, drawing up into him. Rage at everything Garlic had done to him and the people of Earth, feeding the growing pool of power. And desperation to defend Tomia and Claudia rising past it all, his throat burning as he gulped down one final breath of scalding air.

Pulling back his hands, he was nearly overwhelmed by the burning sensation of the fiery power flowing down his arms. Lightening rolled over his form as his hair spiked backwards, his muscles twitching and expanding, veins pumping out around them, bio-electricity rolling over him, swirling around the sphere of golden fire.

Throwing both hands forward, Hiroshi prepared himself for the final release of power, his body twitching with power. The fate of Tomia, Garnet and Claudia all rode upon this attack, hitting Garlic and his hellish vacuum at the right place, and at the right time. The void swirled faster and faster as he drew closer, and for a second, Garlic, in all his confidence and boastful candling, froze in fear before the first Ascended Saiyan in all of history. And in that moment, Hiroshi sneered, before throwing everything he had with one final cry of hatred and fury.

A single sound broke through the the unbearable gusts around them, and for a second, the world slowed around them, as a new source of light was born, born of the hatred and anger of the into Saiyan-Kaioshin in existence.

" GOD'S JUDGEMENT!"

A blindingly gold wave of pure energy cut through reality, more massive then any beam Hiroshi and any being he knew of had handled. The entire mass of swirling has simply stopped in place, it's motion freezing in time itself. The corona seemed to almost break, sending blazing hot gasses in billions of directions. And the wave pierced through the darkness at its core. All at once, the wind stopped and the physics that governed the Earth seemed to crash back into it . Billions of gallons of Water and thousands of tons of broken earth fell helplessly to the earth, scattering across thousands of miles. The rotation of the Earth returned to normal, the orbit seemingly stabilizing, making everything in the following seconds furious and violent.

At the heart of the blackened monster he'd created, Garlic only had time to look into the wave as it descended upon him, seeing the power he'd wanted Hiroshi to give him. It was everything he had, he poured all of his soul into it, and Garlic could reap what he sowed. As soon as it impacted the demon, the unbearable howl of the storm the demon had created was replaced by the immense pulsating noise of the what Garlic could only describe as Gods Judgment itself. A cry of agony, or screams, would have been lost in the wave in seconds.

Without any resistance, the wave continued to curve forward, spilling over the event horizon, and wildly spiraling down into the core of the beast, leaving a spiraling purple corona around the Dead Zone itself. Piercing into the heart of darkness, Hiroshi could feel the edges of reality burning away, as well as the edges of the very fabric of the Dead Zone. As the pillars which held up the dimension eroded, something terrible began to form on the other side of the Dead Zone itself. All of the matter it'd consumed in its very being, began to exist in a small, and smaller state, packing together more and more tightly as his beam cut into the darkness, burning away the only things which kept the emptiness in existence.

Looking on as the swirling purple and black mass began to become less and less stable, Hiroshi's eyes widened when he realized exactly what he'd done. There was so little energy left in his reserves however, he had no ability to raise his defenses. In a blur of motion, he felt someone appear in front of him, feeling a shield expand around him.

Suddenly, the storm of chaotic energy and a dead reality, turned from an eternally dark realm, to pure light. The last thing Hiroshi could remember seeing, was the air itself catching fire, and the seas coming ablaze, before the shock-wave hit the shield. It buckled, and suddenly everything went dark.


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What don't you understand? I CAN'T DIE!
As if that gives you an excuse to live.

In the end, there is light in the darkness

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Postby Franco-Iberie » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:04 pm

New Rnclave wrote:
The Eastern Antarctic State wrote:I use an ipad...


Garlic Jr.:

"Why Claudia my dear, And you Garnet, you pretentious wretches, why fight you? Oh no your fate will be much worse." Garlic chuckled darkly, gauging Hiroshi's expression as he dropped the child, letting her bounce across the rocky surface.

Even as a bleeding wreck, that defiant, unbending look was still there. Black energies swirled around him as he began to float, the sky darkening and crackling with the black lightening, the epicenter coming from Garlic himself. Licking his teeth a second later, Garlic started to grin once again, staring down at them all before finally letting loose a howling cackle. This was going to be superb, the greatest example of his mercy on them all. They would all understand the suffering he endured, and they would all receive exactly what they deserved, but most of all, he would see Hiroshi punished for what he'd done to him. He deserved to be punished for believing he could stop him.

"I-I won't give up." Hiroshi huffed, a golden flame wrapping itself around him, sending dust scattering away from him. " No ones unbeatable, especially not someone who has to rely on tricks to win. Your a waste of my time. Your pathetic."

Pathetic?... They call me pathetic. I arrange for Abaddon to be taken out of the picture, and I'm pathetic. I manipulate them all into doing my bidding, and I'm pathetic. I collect the Seven Dragon Balls to obtain enough power to challenge these pitiful Saiyans, and I'm pathetic. I control the fabric of time and space through the Dead Zone... and I'm pathetic?

Rage flooded his veins, the feeling still uncomfortable, as new as these veins were. Everyone who challenged him was going to be punished as they deserved. Hiroshi and these fools would be sent into the abyss for their insolence, then they'd know who was pathetic.

"Every single one of you will pay your resistance." Garlic howled, his features contorted in fury. " You will all know the pain of being locked away for a decade. You will know my fury!"

Slowly, he started to growl as red energy brimmed at the edge of his skin. The world around him began to bend, as space and time were manipulated. In a swirl of blackened energy, the sky itself seemed to rot for a moment, before shards cracked through the very sky. His growl slowly turned into a full scream as he drew in from himself the power needed to not only open a gateway to the Dead Zone, but to open its terrible maw. He would see all of his enemies shown just how pathetic he was.

As if it were glass hit by a rock, the entirety of the sky seemed to shatter, stripping away the blue haze of the Earth's atmosphere, and replacing it with a sole, dark portal. The orb of darkness in the heart of it all began to suck everything in towards it, even light.

Grinning down at the fools below, Garlic just smiled broadly as he started to chuckle.

"The Dead Zone will swallow you up and keep you for all eternity, there's no escape."

()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()

Hiroshi:

Moving quickly, Hiroshi snatched Tomia as quickly as he could, hurrying before Garlic noticed he lost his hold on her, just as he felt a great shift in the balance of the world. Everything seemed to almost be sucking him in towards Garlic, towards the beating black heart of the Dead Zone. It wasn't even that however, it was as if everything was displaced. The edge of the horizon on the 'hole', the sphere of darkness in the air, seem to almost make everything around it fall in towards it. It was as if physics were slowly breaking down, and the only thing unaffected by it, was Garlic himself. His maddened cackle swept out over the landscape as darkened energies rolled over his entire body, feeding into the maw, making it grow ever larger.

Even his maddened laughter seemed delayed and slowed, as though time around them was slowing, it was as though everything was being pulled towards the horrible void Garlic had opened.

Rocketing up, he cradled the girl in his arms, keeping her firmly held so he couldn't be pulled away. There was just shallow breathing from Tomia as she watched with terror filled eyes, she watched the world drain way. The rocks on the earth below, then the earth itself slowly, the rubble of the castle, all flew helplessly towards the void. The clouds themselves drained into the blackened hole, and with wide eyes, Hiroshi watched spirals of ocean water be drawn towards the void, all of these things being drawn towards the Earths new center of gravity.

All around them, beyond the delayed echo of Garlics chuckle, all could be heard was the intense wind. The atoms and energy in the air, as it was drawn towards the Dead Zone.

Looking beyond the blackness, Hiroshi couldn't looks beyond the opening of the void. It was more than a planet that could be destroyed by third class warriors, everything about it reminded him of a Black Hole. In his time as a Special operations warrior in his fathers army, he'd witnessed the devastation and destruction these things could cause. He'd watched an entire system be sucked in from something as simple as a miscalculation in orbit. It had destroyed everything within its orbit, before annihilating itself. What should have taken years, would inly take two days, and even fate couldn't stop the destruction it wrought. As the hole had burned in the galactic sky, a circle of superheated gas burning around it, all of it heated by sheer proximity to the collapsing star. A star with a black heart.

But now, as Earths atmosphere was drawn into it, like water down a drain, Hiroshi could truly understand the monster Garlic had unleashed upon not only them, but the entire planet. All noise ceased around them, beyond the howling of matter as it to was drawn in. All around the hole, nitrogen, oxygen, and carbon dioxide accelerated to insane speeds before being pulled into the other dimension. Being pulled so closely to one incredibly powerful point, pulled the matter together, lighting the edges of the hole itself, before it was surrounded by almost a golden fire. The light from the sun itself dimmed, as the brightness of the collision of gases nearly taking place around the core of this hole, took ownership of the sky. But still it grew.

Garlic's blackened energies fed into it more and more as it grew in size, more and more. More of the Earth's surface seemed to be sucked towards it. The seas themselves began to rise beyond just tendrils being drawn in, now it was as if the ocean itself was being lifted into the air. Swirling masses of clouds in the air began to wrapped together, pulling towards the Dead Zone.

Looking to his left, Hiroshi saw similar looks of awe upon the faces of his companions, everyone if them as scared and bewildered as he was. They were short on time, and they needed a plan, quickly.

"How do we stop it?" Hiroshi's mind reached out to Claudia, knowing voice would be useless lost in the vortex of noise now emerging along the surface of the Earth for as far as he could understand.

The entire energy of the Earth seemed to shift, and reality itself seemed to begin to lose control. It was as if the entire Earth and its orbit, as well as its rotation, began to shift and change. It was beginning to modify the entirety of the Earth. Everything would be drawn into the Event Horizon, piece by piece, and destroyed, before being cast into another universe.

"Think of something fast," Hiroshi urged himself, his own eyes scanning over the blinding light and eternal darkness, before seeing something beyond, and he knew Claudia must as seen it as well, or least had a basic understand of it.b

Its being held up, opened, and expanded by Garlic's power.

What was the Dead Zone? Where did it come from? That was the bolder question to ask. To answer it, would lead to something at least.

Killing Garlic jr. wouldn't solve anything, he would simply return, his power would never leave. Throwing him into the Dead Zone wouldn't do anything either. But there was a chance he could attack the Dead Zone itself, the very walls, the very structure of the nightmare could be assaulted. It was nothing but nothingness given form and mass. Even now, he tried to understand where it really was in the darkness, and how much it the event horizon was it. Where was the only structure the Dead Zone ever knew?

Turning his head, he looked at Tomia, who clung desperately as his shredded gi as they floated, gripping tightly with both arms, even her broken one. Despite his efforts, he felt himself hopelessly floating towards the vacuum, and even the brilliant golden fire around him was drawn towards it, itself brilliance paled in comparison to the void before them. There was no time anymore, a decision had to be made, for Tomia and the rest of Earth, and he made it. Staring into the void, he could almost see a demon within, looking past the physical of the vacuum.

'Tomia, Can you hear me?'

There was no response, she was to overwhelmed by the noise, the momentum, and the pure awe of all that was happening around her. But he knew she heard, the girl burying her face in his chest and tightening her eyes.

'Listen to me Tomia. I'm going to stop this here and now, but you need to hold onto my back no matter what, no matter how bad it hurts, you have to keep your grip. Trust me, it'll all be over soon.'

The wind was endless and relentless, his entire body was raw from friction, his ears ached from the ferocity of the noise around him, the howling of matter as it was forcibly drawn to the void. But it a sea of nothingness, he felt something familiar.

"What's this!? How can he just stand there?!"

Garlics words rang in his mind, like a slap to the face, unleashing memories long forgotten. No longer was he the warrior of legend, defending his daughter and his new home planet, he was a four year old, standing before this void once more, as his father battled endlessly against this monster, as well,as his late Uncle and mother. They hung onto life and this dimension for their lives, but they couldn't stop it, no one could.

Now this monster wanted to take everything he'd gained, wanted to destroy the universe, his own plaything in his own mind. And he'd kill Claudia, Garnet and Tomia to do so.

He could see the Dead zone for what it was, as he and before, the first time he'd defeated Garlic.

"Hiroshi!!"

His mothers desperate call echoed through him, his heart leaping in his chest, her and his uncles voices melting together, before becoming something more important.

"DADDY!!"

Even as he was drawn helplessly towards the swirling mass of gas and demonic energy, the Halfling put up his first sign of defiance before its power. Golden fire built around him as he used the vacuum of the void to pull himself into position. Orbiting around it, he felt the swirl grow unbearably hot, at this point it was near impossible to breath, and the wind whipped and cut his face, small insignificant cuts dotting his determined features. The noise grew more wild and rampant, and as it reached unbearable levels, Hiroshi anchored himself, a sphere of golden energies surrounding him, stopping his momentum.

Golden fire rolled off of him as he drew his hands to his center, both hands cupped agaisnt his forehead. All energy he had was drawn towards his center, the pain of defeat, driving him. The fear of death, drawing up into him. Rage at everything Garlic had done to him and the people of Earth, feeding the growing pool of power. And desperation to defend Tomia and Claudia rising past it all, his throat burning as he gulped down one final breath of scalding air.

Pulling back his hands, he was nearly overwhelmed by the burning sensation of the fiery power flowing down his arms. Lightening rolled over his form as his hair spiked backwards, his muscles twitching and expanding, veins pumping out around them, bio-electricity rolling over him, swirling around the sphere of golden fire.

Throwing both hands forward, Hiroshi prepared himself for the final release of power, his body twitching with power. The fate of Tomia, Garnet and Claudia all rode upon this attack, hitting Garlic and his hellish vacuum at the right place, and at the right time. The void swirled faster and faster as he drew closer, and for a second, Garlic, in all his confidence and boastful candling, froze in fear before the first Ascended Saiyan in all of history. And in that moment, Hiroshi sneered, before throwing everything he had with one final cry of hatred and fury.

A single sound broke through the the unbearable gusts around them, and for a second, the world slowed around them, as a new source of light was born, born of the hatred and anger of the into Saiyan-Kaioshin in existence.

" GOD'S JUDGEMENT!"

A blindingly gold wave of pure energy cut through reality, more massive then any beam Hiroshi and any being he knew of had handled. The entire mass of swirling has simply stopped in place, it's motion freezing in time itself. The corona seemed to almost break, sending blazing hot gasses in billions of directions. And the wave pierced through the darkness at its core. All at once, the wind stopped and the physics that governed the Earth seemed to crash back into it . Billions of gallons of Water and thousands of tons of broken earth fell helplessly to the earth, scattering across thousands of miles. The rotation of the Earth returned to normal, the orbit seemingly stabilizing, making everything in the following seconds furious and violent.

At the heart of the blackened monster he'd created, Garlic only had time to look into the wave as it descended upon him, seeing the power he'd wanted Hiroshi to give him. It was everything he had, he poured all of his soul into it, and Garlic could reap what he sowed. As soon as it impacted the demon, the unbearable howl of the storm the demon had created was replaced by the immense pulsating noise of the what Garlic could only describe as Gods Judgment itself. A cry of agony, or screams, would have been lost in the wave in seconds.

Without any resistance, the wave continued to curve forward, spilling over the event horizon, and wildly spiraling down into the core of the beast, leaving a spiraling purple corona around the Dead Zone itself. Piercing into the heart of darkness, Hiroshi could feel the edges of reality burning away, as well as the edges of the very fabric of the Dead Zone. As the pillars which held up the dimension eroded, something terrible began to form on the other side of the Dead Zone itself. All of the matter it'd consumed in its very being, began to exist in a small, and smaller state, packing together more and more tightly as his beam cut into the darkness, burning away the only things which kept the emptiness in existence.

Looking on as the swirling purple and black mass began to become less and less stable, Hiroshi's eyes widened when he realized exactly what he'd done. There was so little energy left in his reserves however, he had no ability to raise his defenses. In a blur of motion, he felt someone appear in front of him, feeling a shield expand around him.

Suddenly, the storm of chaotic energy and a dead reality, turned from an eternally dark realm, to pure light. The last thing Hiroshi could remember seeing, was the air itself catching fire, and the seas coming ablaze, before the shock-wave hit the shield. It buckled, and suddenly everything went dark.


That was made on an iPad


Potato.


That was made on a desktop.
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Postby Sanabel » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:05 pm

New Rnclave wrote:
The Eastern Antarctic State wrote:I use an ipad...


Garlic Jr.:

"Why Claudia my dear, And you Garnet, you pretentious wretches, why fight you? Oh no your fate will be much worse." Garlic chuckled darkly, gauging Hiroshi's expression as he dropped the child, letting her bounce across the rocky surface.

Even as a bleeding wreck, that defiant, unbending look was still there. Black energies swirled around him as he began to float, the sky darkening and crackling with the black lightening, the epicenter coming from Garlic himself. Licking his teeth a second later, Garlic started to grin once again, staring down at them all before finally letting loose a howling cackle. This was going to be superb, the greatest example of his mercy on them all. They would all understand the suffering he endured, and they would all receive exactly what they deserved, but most of all, he would see Hiroshi punished for what he'd done to him. He deserved to be punished for believing he could stop him.

"I-I won't give up." Hiroshi huffed, a golden flame wrapping itself around him, sending dust scattering away from him. " No ones unbeatable, especially not someone who has to rely on tricks to win. Your a waste of my time. Your pathetic."

Pathetic?... They call me pathetic. I arrange for Abaddon to be taken out of the picture, and I'm pathetic. I manipulate them all into doing my bidding, and I'm pathetic. I collect the Seven Dragon Balls to obtain enough power to challenge these pitiful Saiyans, and I'm pathetic. I control the fabric of time and space through the Dead Zone... and I'm pathetic?

Rage flooded his veins, the feeling still uncomfortable, as new as these veins were. Everyone who challenged him was going to be punished as they deserved. Hiroshi and these fools would be sent into the abyss for their insolence, then they'd know who was pathetic.

"Every single one of you will pay your resistance." Garlic howled, his features contorted in fury. " You will all know the pain of being locked away for a decade. You will know my fury!"

Slowly, he started to growl as red energy brimmed at the edge of his skin. The world around him began to bend, as space and time were manipulated. In a swirl of blackened energy, the sky itself seemed to rot for a moment, before shards cracked through the very sky. His growl slowly turned into a full scream as he drew in from himself the power needed to not only open a gateway to the Dead Zone, but to open its terrible maw. He would see all of his enemies shown just how pathetic he was.

As if it were glass hit by a rock, the entirety of the sky seemed to shatter, stripping away the blue haze of the Earth's atmosphere, and replacing it with a sole, dark portal. The orb of darkness in the heart of it all began to suck everything in towards it, even light.

Grinning down at the fools below, Garlic just smiled broadly as he started to chuckle.

"The Dead Zone will swallow you up and keep you for all eternity, there's no escape."

()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()

Hiroshi:

Moving quickly, Hiroshi snatched Tomia as quickly as he could, hurrying before Garlic noticed he lost his hold on her, just as he felt a great shift in the balance of the world. Everything seemed to almost be sucking him in towards Garlic, towards the beating black heart of the Dead Zone. It wasn't even that however, it was as if everything was displaced. The edge of the horizon on the 'hole', the sphere of darkness in the air, seem to almost make everything around it fall in towards it. It was as if physics were slowly breaking down, and the only thing unaffected by it, was Garlic himself. His maddened cackle swept out over the landscape as darkened energies rolled over his entire body, feeding into the maw, making it grow ever larger.

Even his maddened laughter seemed delayed and slowed, as though time around them was slowing, it was as though everything was being pulled towards the horrible void Garlic had opened.

Rocketing up, he cradled the girl in his arms, keeping her firmly held so he couldn't be pulled away. There was just shallow breathing from Tomia as she watched with terror filled eyes, she watched the world drain way. The rocks on the earth below, then the earth itself slowly, the rubble of the castle, all flew helplessly towards the void. The clouds themselves drained into the blackened hole, and with wide eyes, Hiroshi watched spirals of ocean water be drawn towards the void, all of these things being drawn towards the Earths new center of gravity.

All around them, beyond the delayed echo of Garlics chuckle, all could be heard was the intense wind. The atoms and energy in the air, as it was drawn towards the Dead Zone.

Looking beyond the blackness, Hiroshi couldn't looks beyond the opening of the void. It was more than a planet that could be destroyed by third class warriors, everything about it reminded him of a Black Hole. In his time as a Special operations warrior in his fathers army, he'd witnessed the devastation and destruction these things could cause. He'd watched an entire system be sucked in from something as simple as a miscalculation in orbit. It had destroyed everything within its orbit, before annihilating itself. What should have taken years, would inly take two days, and even fate couldn't stop the destruction it wrought. As the hole had burned in the galactic sky, a circle of superheated gas burning around it, all of it heated by sheer proximity to the collapsing star. A star with a black heart.

But now, as Earths atmosphere was drawn into it, like water down a drain, Hiroshi could truly understand the monster Garlic had unleashed upon not only them, but the entire planet. All noise ceased around them, beyond the howling of matter as it to was drawn in. All around the hole, nitrogen, oxygen, and carbon dioxide accelerated to insane speeds before being pulled into the other dimension. Being pulled so closely to one incredibly powerful point, pulled the matter together, lighting the edges of the hole itself, before it was surrounded by almost a golden fire. The light from the sun itself dimmed, as the brightness of the collision of gases nearly taking place around the core of this hole, took ownership of the sky. But still it grew.

Garlic's blackened energies fed into it more and more as it grew in size, more and more. More of the Earth's surface seemed to be sucked towards it. The seas themselves began to rise beyond just tendrils being drawn in, now it was as if the ocean itself was being lifted into the air. Swirling masses of clouds in the air began to wrapped together, pulling towards the Dead Zone.

Looking to his left, Hiroshi saw similar looks of awe upon the faces of his companions, everyone if them as scared and bewildered as he was. They were short on time, and they needed a plan, quickly.

"How do we stop it?" Hiroshi's mind reached out to Claudia, knowing voice would be useless lost in the vortex of noise now emerging along the surface of the Earth for as far as he could understand.

The entire energy of the Earth seemed to shift, and reality itself seemed to begin to lose control. It was as if the entire Earth and its orbit, as well as its rotation, began to shift and change. It was beginning to modify the entirety of the Earth. Everything would be drawn into the Event Horizon, piece by piece, and destroyed, before being cast into another universe.

"Think of something fast," Hiroshi urged himself, his own eyes scanning over the blinding light and eternal darkness, before seeing something beyond, and he knew Claudia must as seen it as well, or least had a basic understand of it.b

Its being held up, opened, and expanded by Garlic's power.

What was the Dead Zone? Where did it come from? That was the bolder question to ask. To answer it, would lead to something at least.

Killing Garlic jr. wouldn't solve anything, he would simply return, his power would never leave. Throwing him into the Dead Zone wouldn't do anything either. But there was a chance he could attack the Dead Zone itself, the very walls, the very structure of the nightmare could be assaulted. It was nothing but nothingness given form and mass. Even now, he tried to understand where it really was in the darkness, and how much it the event horizon was it. Where was the only structure the Dead Zone ever knew?

Turning his head, he looked at Tomia, who clung desperately as his shredded gi as they floated, gripping tightly with both arms, even her broken one. Despite his efforts, he felt himself hopelessly floating towards the vacuum, and even the brilliant golden fire around him was drawn towards it, itself brilliance paled in comparison to the void before them. There was no time anymore, a decision had to be made, for Tomia and the rest of Earth, and he made it. Staring into the void, he could almost see a demon within, looking past the physical of the vacuum.

'Tomia, Can you hear me?'

There was no response, she was to overwhelmed by the noise, the momentum, and the pure awe of all that was happening around her. But he knew she heard, the girl burying her face in his chest and tightening her eyes.

'Listen to me Tomia. I'm going to stop this here and now, but you need to hold onto my back no matter what, no matter how bad it hurts, you have to keep your grip. Trust me, it'll all be over soon.'

The wind was endless and relentless, his entire body was raw from friction, his ears ached from the ferocity of the noise around him, the howling of matter as it was forcibly drawn to the void. But it a sea of nothingness, he felt something familiar.

"What's this!? How can he just stand there?!"

Garlics words rang in his mind, like a slap to the face, unleashing memories long forgotten. No longer was he the warrior of legend, defending his daughter and his new home planet, he was a four year old, standing before this void once more, as his father battled endlessly against this monster, as well,as his late Uncle and mother. They hung onto life and this dimension for their lives, but they couldn't stop it, no one could.

Now this monster wanted to take everything he'd gained, wanted to destroy the universe, his own plaything in his own mind. And he'd kill Claudia, Garnet and Tomia to do so.

He could see the Dead zone for what it was, as he and before, the first time he'd defeated Garlic.

"Hiroshi!!"

His mothers desperate call echoed through him, his heart leaping in his chest, her and his uncles voices melting together, before becoming something more important.

"DADDY!!"

Even as he was drawn helplessly towards the swirling mass of gas and demonic energy, the Halfling put up his first sign of defiance before its power. Golden fire built around him as he used the vacuum of the void to pull himself into position. Orbiting around it, he felt the swirl grow unbearably hot, at this point it was near impossible to breath, and the wind whipped and cut his face, small insignificant cuts dotting his determined features. The noise grew more wild and rampant, and as it reached unbearable levels, Hiroshi anchored himself, a sphere of golden energies surrounding him, stopping his momentum.

Golden fire rolled off of him as he drew his hands to his center, both hands cupped agaisnt his forehead. All energy he had was drawn towards his center, the pain of defeat, driving him. The fear of death, drawing up into him. Rage at everything Garlic had done to him and the people of Earth, feeding the growing pool of power. And desperation to defend Tomia and Claudia rising past it all, his throat burning as he gulped down one final breath of scalding air.

Pulling back his hands, he was nearly overwhelmed by the burning sensation of the fiery power flowing down his arms. Lightening rolled over his form as his hair spiked backwards, his muscles twitching and expanding, veins pumping out around them, bio-electricity rolling over him, swirling around the sphere of golden fire.

Throwing both hands forward, Hiroshi prepared himself for the final release of power, his body twitching with power. The fate of Tomia, Garnet and Claudia all rode upon this attack, hitting Garlic and his hellish vacuum at the right place, and at the right time. The void swirled faster and faster as he drew closer, and for a second, Garlic, in all his confidence and boastful candling, froze in fear before the first Ascended Saiyan in all of history. And in that moment, Hiroshi sneered, before throwing everything he had with one final cry of hatred and fury.

A single sound broke through the the unbearable gusts around them, and for a second, the world slowed around them, as a new source of light was born, born of the hatred and anger of the into Saiyan-Kaioshin in existence.

" GOD'S JUDGEMENT!"

A blindingly gold wave of pure energy cut through reality, more massive then any beam Hiroshi and any being he knew of had handled. The entire mass of swirling has simply stopped in place, it's motion freezing in time itself. The corona seemed to almost break, sending blazing hot gasses in billions of directions. And the wave pierced through the darkness at its core. All at once, the wind stopped and the physics that governed the Earth seemed to crash back into it . Billions of gallons of Water and thousands of tons of broken earth fell helplessly to the earth, scattering across thousands of miles. The rotation of the Earth returned to normal, the orbit seemingly stabilizing, making everything in the following seconds furious and violent.

At the heart of the blackened monster he'd created, Garlic only had time to look into the wave as it descended upon him, seeing the power he'd wanted Hiroshi to give him. It was everything he had, he poured all of his soul into it, and Garlic could reap what he sowed. As soon as it impacted the demon, the unbearable howl of the storm the demon had created was replaced by the immense pulsating noise of the what Garlic could only describe as Gods Judgment itself. A cry of agony, or screams, would have been lost in the wave in seconds.

Without any resistance, the wave continued to curve forward, spilling over the event horizon, and wildly spiraling down into the core of the beast, leaving a spiraling purple corona around the Dead Zone itself. Piercing into the heart of darkness, Hiroshi could feel the edges of reality burning away, as well as the edges of the very fabric of the Dead Zone. As the pillars which held up the dimension eroded, something terrible began to form on the other side of the Dead Zone itself. All of the matter it'd consumed in its very being, began to exist in a small, and smaller state, packing together more and more tightly as his beam cut into the darkness, burning away the only things which kept the emptiness in existence.

Looking on as the swirling purple and black mass began to become less and less stable, Hiroshi's eyes widened when he realized exactly what he'd done. There was so little energy left in his reserves however, he had no ability to raise his defenses. In a blur of motion, he felt someone appear in front of him, feeling a shield expand around him.

Suddenly, the storm of chaotic energy and a dead reality, turned from an eternally dark realm, to pure light. The last thing Hiroshi could remember seeing, was the air itself catching fire, and the seas coming ablaze, before the shock-wave hit the shield. It buckled, and suddenly everything went dark.


That was made on an iPad

Go fuck urself and ur anime krap

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Postby The Peoples East Africa » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:05 pm

Franco-Iberie wrote:
New Rnclave wrote:
Garlic Jr.:

"Why Claudia my dear, And you Garnet, you pretentious wretches, why fight you? Oh no your fate will be much worse." Garlic chuckled darkly, gauging Hiroshi's expression as he dropped the child, letting her bounce across the rocky surface.

Even as a bleeding wreck, that defiant, unbending look was still there. Black energies swirled around him as he began to float, the sky darkening and crackling with the black lightening, the epicenter coming from Garlic himself. Licking his teeth a second later, Garlic started to grin once again, staring down at them all before finally letting loose a howling cackle. This was going to be superb, the greatest example of his mercy on them all. They would all understand the suffering he endured, and they would all receive exactly what they deserved, but most of all, he would see Hiroshi punished for what he'd done to him. He deserved to be punished for believing he could stop him.

"I-I won't give up." Hiroshi huffed, a golden flame wrapping itself around him, sending dust scattering away from him. " No ones unbeatable, especially not someone who has to rely on tricks to win. Your a waste of my time. Your pathetic."

Pathetic?... They call me pathetic. I arrange for Abaddon to be taken out of the picture, and I'm pathetic. I manipulate them all into doing my bidding, and I'm pathetic. I collect the Seven Dragon Balls to obtain enough power to challenge these pitiful Saiyans, and I'm pathetic. I control the fabric of time and space through the Dead Zone... and I'm pathetic?

Rage flooded his veins, the feeling still uncomfortable, as new as these veins were. Everyone who challenged him was going to be punished as they deserved. Hiroshi and these fools would be sent into the abyss for their insolence, then they'd know who was pathetic.

"Every single one of you will pay your resistance." Garlic howled, his features contorted in fury. " You will all know the pain of being locked away for a decade. You will know my fury!"

Slowly, he started to growl as red energy brimmed at the edge of his skin. The world around him began to bend, as space and time were manipulated. In a swirl of blackened energy, the sky itself seemed to rot for a moment, before shards cracked through the very sky. His growl slowly turned into a full scream as he drew in from himself the power needed to not only open a gateway to the Dead Zone, but to open its terrible maw. He would see all of his enemies shown just how pathetic he was.

As if it were glass hit by a rock, the entirety of the sky seemed to shatter, stripping away the blue haze of the Earth's atmosphere, and replacing it with a sole, dark portal. The orb of darkness in the heart of it all began to suck everything in towards it, even light.

Grinning down at the fools below, Garlic just smiled broadly as he started to chuckle.

"The Dead Zone will swallow you up and keep you for all eternity, there's no escape."

()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()

Hiroshi:

Moving quickly, Hiroshi snatched Tomia as quickly as he could, hurrying before Garlic noticed he lost his hold on her, just as he felt a great shift in the balance of the world. Everything seemed to almost be sucking him in towards Garlic, towards the beating black heart of the Dead Zone. It wasn't even that however, it was as if everything was displaced. The edge of the horizon on the 'hole', the sphere of darkness in the air, seem to almost make everything around it fall in towards it. It was as if physics were slowly breaking down, and the only thing unaffected by it, was Garlic himself. His maddened cackle swept out over the landscape as darkened energies rolled over his entire body, feeding into the maw, making it grow ever larger.

Even his maddened laughter seemed delayed and slowed, as though time around them was slowing, it was as though everything was being pulled towards the horrible void Garlic had opened.

Rocketing up, he cradled the girl in his arms, keeping her firmly held so he couldn't be pulled away. There was just shallow breathing from Tomia as she watched with terror filled eyes, she watched the world drain way. The rocks on the earth below, then the earth itself slowly, the rubble of the castle, all flew helplessly towards the void. The clouds themselves drained into the blackened hole, and with wide eyes, Hiroshi watched spirals of ocean water be drawn towards the void, all of these things being drawn towards the Earths new center of gravity.

All around them, beyond the delayed echo of Garlics chuckle, all could be heard was the intense wind. The atoms and energy in the air, as it was drawn towards the Dead Zone.

Looking beyond the blackness, Hiroshi couldn't looks beyond the opening of the void. It was more than a planet that could be destroyed by third class warriors, everything about it reminded him of a Black Hole. In his time as a Special operations warrior in his fathers army, he'd witnessed the devastation and destruction these things could cause. He'd watched an entire system be sucked in from something as simple as a miscalculation in orbit. It had destroyed everything within its orbit, before annihilating itself. What should have taken years, would inly take two days, and even fate couldn't stop the destruction it wrought. As the hole had burned in the galactic sky, a circle of superheated gas burning around it, all of it heated by sheer proximity to the collapsing star. A star with a black heart.

But now, as Earths atmosphere was drawn into it, like water down a drain, Hiroshi could truly understand the monster Garlic had unleashed upon not only them, but the entire planet. All noise ceased around them, beyond the howling of matter as it to was drawn in. All around the hole, nitrogen, oxygen, and carbon dioxide accelerated to insane speeds before being pulled into the other dimension. Being pulled so closely to one incredibly powerful point, pulled the matter together, lighting the edges of the hole itself, before it was surrounded by almost a golden fire. The light from the sun itself dimmed, as the brightness of the collision of gases nearly taking place around the core of this hole, took ownership of the sky. But still it grew.

Garlic's blackened energies fed into it more and more as it grew in size, more and more. More of the Earth's surface seemed to be sucked towards it. The seas themselves began to rise beyond just tendrils being drawn in, now it was as if the ocean itself was being lifted into the air. Swirling masses of clouds in the air began to wrapped together, pulling towards the Dead Zone.

Looking to his left, Hiroshi saw similar looks of awe upon the faces of his companions, everyone if them as scared and bewildered as he was. They were short on time, and they needed a plan, quickly.

"How do we stop it?" Hiroshi's mind reached out to Claudia, knowing voice would be useless lost in the vortex of noise now emerging along the surface of the Earth for as far as he could understand.

The entire energy of the Earth seemed to shift, and reality itself seemed to begin to lose control. It was as if the entire Earth and its orbit, as well as its rotation, began to shift and change. It was beginning to modify the entirety of the Earth. Everything would be drawn into the Event Horizon, piece by piece, and destroyed, before being cast into another universe.

"Think of something fast," Hiroshi urged himself, his own eyes scanning over the blinding light and eternal darkness, before seeing something beyond, and he knew Claudia must as seen it as well, or least had a basic understand of it.b

Its being held up, opened, and expanded by Garlic's power.

What was the Dead Zone? Where did it come from? That was the bolder question to ask. To answer it, would lead to something at least.

Killing Garlic jr. wouldn't solve anything, he would simply return, his power would never leave. Throwing him into the Dead Zone wouldn't do anything either. But there was a chance he could attack the Dead Zone itself, the very walls, the very structure of the nightmare could be assaulted. It was nothing but nothingness given form and mass. Even now, he tried to understand where it really was in the darkness, and how much it the event horizon was it. Where was the only structure the Dead Zone ever knew?

Turning his head, he looked at Tomia, who clung desperately as his shredded gi as they floated, gripping tightly with both arms, even her broken one. Despite his efforts, he felt himself hopelessly floating towards the vacuum, and even the brilliant golden fire around him was drawn towards it, itself brilliance paled in comparison to the void before them. There was no time anymore, a decision had to be made, for Tomia and the rest of Earth, and he made it. Staring into the void, he could almost see a demon within, looking past the physical of the vacuum.

'Tomia, Can you hear me?'

There was no response, she was to overwhelmed by the noise, the momentum, and the pure awe of all that was happening around her. But he knew she heard, the girl burying her face in his chest and tightening her eyes.

'Listen to me Tomia. I'm going to stop this here and now, but you need to hold onto my back no matter what, no matter how bad it hurts, you have to keep your grip. Trust me, it'll all be over soon.'

The wind was endless and relentless, his entire body was raw from friction, his ears ached from the ferocity of the noise around him, the howling of matter as it was forcibly drawn to the void. But it a sea of nothingness, he felt something familiar.

"What's this!? How can he just stand there?!"

Garlics words rang in his mind, like a slap to the face, unleashing memories long forgotten. No longer was he the warrior of legend, defending his daughter and his new home planet, he was a four year old, standing before this void once more, as his father battled endlessly against this monster, as well,as his late Uncle and mother. They hung onto life and this dimension for their lives, but they couldn't stop it, no one could.

Now this monster wanted to take everything he'd gained, wanted to destroy the universe, his own plaything in his own mind. And he'd kill Claudia, Garnet and Tomia to do so.

He could see the Dead zone for what it was, as he and before, the first time he'd defeated Garlic.

"Hiroshi!!"

His mothers desperate call echoed through him, his heart leaping in his chest, her and his uncles voices melting together, before becoming something more important.

"DADDY!!"

Even as he was drawn helplessly towards the swirling mass of gas and demonic energy, the Halfling put up his first sign of defiance before its power. Golden fire built around him as he used the vacuum of the void to pull himself into position. Orbiting around it, he felt the swirl grow unbearably hot, at this point it was near impossible to breath, and the wind whipped and cut his face, small insignificant cuts dotting his determined features. The noise grew more wild and rampant, and as it reached unbearable levels, Hiroshi anchored himself, a sphere of golden energies surrounding him, stopping his momentum.

Golden fire rolled off of him as he drew his hands to his center, both hands cupped agaisnt his forehead. All energy he had was drawn towards his center, the pain of defeat, driving him. The fear of death, drawing up into him. Rage at everything Garlic had done to him and the people of Earth, feeding the growing pool of power. And desperation to defend Tomia and Claudia rising past it all, his throat burning as he gulped down one final breath of scalding air.

Pulling back his hands, he was nearly overwhelmed by the burning sensation of the fiery power flowing down his arms. Lightening rolled over his form as his hair spiked backwards, his muscles twitching and expanding, veins pumping out around them, bio-electricity rolling over him, swirling around the sphere of golden fire.

Throwing both hands forward, Hiroshi prepared himself for the final release of power, his body twitching with power. The fate of Tomia, Garnet and Claudia all rode upon this attack, hitting Garlic and his hellish vacuum at the right place, and at the right time. The void swirled faster and faster as he drew closer, and for a second, Garlic, in all his confidence and boastful candling, froze in fear before the first Ascended Saiyan in all of history. And in that moment, Hiroshi sneered, before throwing everything he had with one final cry of hatred and fury.

A single sound broke through the the unbearable gusts around them, and for a second, the world slowed around them, as a new source of light was born, born of the hatred and anger of the into Saiyan-Kaioshin in existence.

" GOD'S JUDGEMENT!"

A blindingly gold wave of pure energy cut through reality, more massive then any beam Hiroshi and any being he knew of had handled. The entire mass of swirling has simply stopped in place, it's motion freezing in time itself. The corona seemed to almost break, sending blazing hot gasses in billions of directions. And the wave pierced through the darkness at its core. All at once, the wind stopped and the physics that governed the Earth seemed to crash back into it . Billions of gallons of Water and thousands of tons of broken earth fell helplessly to the earth, scattering across thousands of miles. The rotation of the Earth returned to normal, the orbit seemingly stabilizing, making everything in the following seconds furious and violent.

At the heart of the blackened monster he'd created, Garlic only had time to look into the wave as it descended upon him, seeing the power he'd wanted Hiroshi to give him. It was everything he had, he poured all of his soul into it, and Garlic could reap what he sowed. As soon as it impacted the demon, the unbearable howl of the storm the demon had created was replaced by the immense pulsating noise of the what Garlic could only describe as Gods Judgment itself. A cry of agony, or screams, would have been lost in the wave in seconds.

Without any resistance, the wave continued to curve forward, spilling over the event horizon, and wildly spiraling down into the core of the beast, leaving a spiraling purple corona around the Dead Zone itself. Piercing into the heart of darkness, Hiroshi could feel the edges of reality burning away, as well as the edges of the very fabric of the Dead Zone. As the pillars which held up the dimension eroded, something terrible began to form on the other side of the Dead Zone itself. All of the matter it'd consumed in its very being, began to exist in a small, and smaller state, packing together more and more tightly as his beam cut into the darkness, burning away the only things which kept the emptiness in existence.

Looking on as the swirling purple and black mass began to become less and less stable, Hiroshi's eyes widened when he realized exactly what he'd done. There was so little energy left in his reserves however, he had no ability to raise his defenses. In a blur of motion, he felt someone appear in front of him, feeling a shield expand around him.

Suddenly, the storm of chaotic energy and a dead reality, turned from an eternally dark realm, to pure light. The last thing Hiroshi could remember seeing, was the air itself catching fire, and the seas coming ablaze, before the shock-wave hit the shield. It buckled, and suddenly everything went dark.


That was made on an iPad


Potato.


That was made on a desktop.

Oh shit Rnclave, I think you have some competition.

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Postby RNT » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:05 pm

Cabana wrote:
RNT wrote:
Are you talking about mine because those words are Inuit

I looked 'em up and they don't mean anything. The capital should be Kuugjuaq and you can use this for names.


I used these
http://www.wordgumbo.com/ea/can/caninu.htm
And
http://www.behindthename.com/submit/names/usage/inuit

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Postby New Rnclave » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:05 pm

Sanabel wrote:
New Rnclave wrote:
Garlic Jr.:

"Why Claudia my dear, And you Garnet, you pretentious wretches, why fight you? Oh no your fate will be much worse." Garlic chuckled darkly, gauging Hiroshi's expression as he dropped the child, letting her bounce across the rocky surface.

Even as a bleeding wreck, that defiant, unbending look was still there. Black energies swirled around him as he began to float, the sky darkening and crackling with the black lightening, the epicenter coming from Garlic himself. Licking his teeth a second later, Garlic started to grin once again, staring down at them all before finally letting loose a howling cackle. This was going to be superb, the greatest example of his mercy on them all. They would all understand the suffering he endured, and they would all receive exactly what they deserved, but most of all, he would see Hiroshi punished for what he'd done to him. He deserved to be punished for believing he could stop him.

"I-I won't give up." Hiroshi huffed, a golden flame wrapping itself around him, sending dust scattering away from him. " No ones unbeatable, especially not someone who has to rely on tricks to win. Your a waste of my time. Your pathetic."

Pathetic?... They call me pathetic. I arrange for Abaddon to be taken out of the picture, and I'm pathetic. I manipulate them all into doing my bidding, and I'm pathetic. I collect the Seven Dragon Balls to obtain enough power to challenge these pitiful Saiyans, and I'm pathetic. I control the fabric of time and space through the Dead Zone... and I'm pathetic?

Rage flooded his veins, the feeling still uncomfortable, as new as these veins were. Everyone who challenged him was going to be punished as they deserved. Hiroshi and these fools would be sent into the abyss for their insolence, then they'd know who was pathetic.

"Every single one of you will pay your resistance." Garlic howled, his features contorted in fury. " You will all know the pain of being locked away for a decade. You will know my fury!"

Slowly, he started to growl as red energy brimmed at the edge of his skin. The world around him began to bend, as space and time were manipulated. In a swirl of blackened energy, the sky itself seemed to rot for a moment, before shards cracked through the very sky. His growl slowly turned into a full scream as he drew in from himself the power needed to not only open a gateway to the Dead Zone, but to open its terrible maw. He would see all of his enemies shown just how pathetic he was.

As if it were glass hit by a rock, the entirety of the sky seemed to shatter, stripping away the blue haze of the Earth's atmosphere, and replacing it with a sole, dark portal. The orb of darkness in the heart of it all began to suck everything in towards it, even light.

Grinning down at the fools below, Garlic just smiled broadly as he started to chuckle.

"The Dead Zone will swallow you up and keep you for all eternity, there's no escape."

()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()

Hiroshi:

Moving quickly, Hiroshi snatched Tomia as quickly as he could, hurrying before Garlic noticed he lost his hold on her, just as he felt a great shift in the balance of the world. Everything seemed to almost be sucking him in towards Garlic, towards the beating black heart of the Dead Zone. It wasn't even that however, it was as if everything was displaced. The edge of the horizon on the 'hole', the sphere of darkness in the air, seem to almost make everything around it fall in towards it. It was as if physics were slowly breaking down, and the only thing unaffected by it, was Garlic himself. His maddened cackle swept out over the landscape as darkened energies rolled over his entire body, feeding into the maw, making it grow ever larger.

Even his maddened laughter seemed delayed and slowed, as though time around them was slowing, it was as though everything was being pulled towards the horrible void Garlic had opened.

Rocketing up, he cradled the girl in his arms, keeping her firmly held so he couldn't be pulled away. There was just shallow breathing from Tomia as she watched with terror filled eyes, she watched the world drain way. The rocks on the earth below, then the earth itself slowly, the rubble of the castle, all flew helplessly towards the void. The clouds themselves drained into the blackened hole, and with wide eyes, Hiroshi watched spirals of ocean water be drawn towards the void, all of these things being drawn towards the Earths new center of gravity.

All around them, beyond the delayed echo of Garlics chuckle, all could be heard was the intense wind. The atoms and energy in the air, as it was drawn towards the Dead Zone.

Looking beyond the blackness, Hiroshi couldn't looks beyond the opening of the void. It was more than a planet that could be destroyed by third class warriors, everything about it reminded him of a Black Hole. In his time as a Special operations warrior in his fathers army, he'd witnessed the devastation and destruction these things could cause. He'd watched an entire system be sucked in from something as simple as a miscalculation in orbit. It had destroyed everything within its orbit, before annihilating itself. What should have taken years, would inly take two days, and even fate couldn't stop the destruction it wrought. As the hole had burned in the galactic sky, a circle of superheated gas burning around it, all of it heated by sheer proximity to the collapsing star. A star with a black heart.

But now, as Earths atmosphere was drawn into it, like water down a drain, Hiroshi could truly understand the monster Garlic had unleashed upon not only them, but the entire planet. All noise ceased around them, beyond the howling of matter as it to was drawn in. All around the hole, nitrogen, oxygen, and carbon dioxide accelerated to insane speeds before being pulled into the other dimension. Being pulled so closely to one incredibly powerful point, pulled the matter together, lighting the edges of the hole itself, before it was surrounded by almost a golden fire. The light from the sun itself dimmed, as the brightness of the collision of gases nearly taking place around the core of this hole, took ownership of the sky. But still it grew.

Garlic's blackened energies fed into it more and more as it grew in size, more and more. More of the Earth's surface seemed to be sucked towards it. The seas themselves began to rise beyond just tendrils being drawn in, now it was as if the ocean itself was being lifted into the air. Swirling masses of clouds in the air began to wrapped together, pulling towards the Dead Zone.

Looking to his left, Hiroshi saw similar looks of awe upon the faces of his companions, everyone if them as scared and bewildered as he was. They were short on time, and they needed a plan, quickly.

"How do we stop it?" Hiroshi's mind reached out to Claudia, knowing voice would be useless lost in the vortex of noise now emerging along the surface of the Earth for as far as he could understand.

The entire energy of the Earth seemed to shift, and reality itself seemed to begin to lose control. It was as if the entire Earth and its orbit, as well as its rotation, began to shift and change. It was beginning to modify the entirety of the Earth. Everything would be drawn into the Event Horizon, piece by piece, and destroyed, before being cast into another universe.

"Think of something fast," Hiroshi urged himself, his own eyes scanning over the blinding light and eternal darkness, before seeing something beyond, and he knew Claudia must as seen it as well, or least had a basic understand of it.b

Its being held up, opened, and expanded by Garlic's power.

What was the Dead Zone? Where did it come from? That was the bolder question to ask. To answer it, would lead to something at least.

Killing Garlic jr. wouldn't solve anything, he would simply return, his power would never leave. Throwing him into the Dead Zone wouldn't do anything either. But there was a chance he could attack the Dead Zone itself, the very walls, the very structure of the nightmare could be assaulted. It was nothing but nothingness given form and mass. Even now, he tried to understand where it really was in the darkness, and how much it the event horizon was it. Where was the only structure the Dead Zone ever knew?

Turning his head, he looked at Tomia, who clung desperately as his shredded gi as they floated, gripping tightly with both arms, even her broken one. Despite his efforts, he felt himself hopelessly floating towards the vacuum, and even the brilliant golden fire around him was drawn towards it, itself brilliance paled in comparison to the void before them. There was no time anymore, a decision had to be made, for Tomia and the rest of Earth, and he made it. Staring into the void, he could almost see a demon within, looking past the physical of the vacuum.

'Tomia, Can you hear me?'

There was no response, she was to overwhelmed by the noise, the momentum, and the pure awe of all that was happening around her. But he knew she heard, the girl burying her face in his chest and tightening her eyes.

'Listen to me Tomia. I'm going to stop this here and now, but you need to hold onto my back no matter what, no matter how bad it hurts, you have to keep your grip. Trust me, it'll all be over soon.'

The wind was endless and relentless, his entire body was raw from friction, his ears ached from the ferocity of the noise around him, the howling of matter as it was forcibly drawn to the void. But it a sea of nothingness, he felt something familiar.

"What's this!? How can he just stand there?!"

Garlics words rang in his mind, like a slap to the face, unleashing memories long forgotten. No longer was he the warrior of legend, defending his daughter and his new home planet, he was a four year old, standing before this void once more, as his father battled endlessly against this monster, as well,as his late Uncle and mother. They hung onto life and this dimension for their lives, but they couldn't stop it, no one could.

Now this monster wanted to take everything he'd gained, wanted to destroy the universe, his own plaything in his own mind. And he'd kill Claudia, Garnet and Tomia to do so.

He could see the Dead zone for what it was, as he and before, the first time he'd defeated Garlic.

"Hiroshi!!"

His mothers desperate call echoed through him, his heart leaping in his chest, her and his uncles voices melting together, before becoming something more important.

"DADDY!!"

Even as he was drawn helplessly towards the swirling mass of gas and demonic energy, the Halfling put up his first sign of defiance before its power. Golden fire built around him as he used the vacuum of the void to pull himself into position. Orbiting around it, he felt the swirl grow unbearably hot, at this point it was near impossible to breath, and the wind whipped and cut his face, small insignificant cuts dotting his determined features. The noise grew more wild and rampant, and as it reached unbearable levels, Hiroshi anchored himself, a sphere of golden energies surrounding him, stopping his momentum.

Golden fire rolled off of him as he drew his hands to his center, both hands cupped agaisnt his forehead. All energy he had was drawn towards his center, the pain of defeat, driving him. The fear of death, drawing up into him. Rage at everything Garlic had done to him and the people of Earth, feeding the growing pool of power. And desperation to defend Tomia and Claudia rising past it all, his throat burning as he gulped down one final breath of scalding air.

Pulling back his hands, he was nearly overwhelmed by the burning sensation of the fiery power flowing down his arms. Lightening rolled over his form as his hair spiked backwards, his muscles twitching and expanding, veins pumping out around them, bio-electricity rolling over him, swirling around the sphere of golden fire.

Throwing both hands forward, Hiroshi prepared himself for the final release of power, his body twitching with power. The fate of Tomia, Garnet and Claudia all rode upon this attack, hitting Garlic and his hellish vacuum at the right place, and at the right time. The void swirled faster and faster as he drew closer, and for a second, Garlic, in all his confidence and boastful candling, froze in fear before the first Ascended Saiyan in all of history. And in that moment, Hiroshi sneered, before throwing everything he had with one final cry of hatred and fury.

A single sound broke through the the unbearable gusts around them, and for a second, the world slowed around them, as a new source of light was born, born of the hatred and anger of the into Saiyan-Kaioshin in existence.

" GOD'S JUDGEMENT!"

A blindingly gold wave of pure energy cut through reality, more massive then any beam Hiroshi and any being he knew of had handled. The entire mass of swirling has simply stopped in place, it's motion freezing in time itself. The corona seemed to almost break, sending blazing hot gasses in billions of directions. And the wave pierced through the darkness at its core. All at once, the wind stopped and the physics that governed the Earth seemed to crash back into it . Billions of gallons of Water and thousands of tons of broken earth fell helplessly to the earth, scattering across thousands of miles. The rotation of the Earth returned to normal, the orbit seemingly stabilizing, making everything in the following seconds furious and violent.

At the heart of the blackened monster he'd created, Garlic only had time to look into the wave as it descended upon him, seeing the power he'd wanted Hiroshi to give him. It was everything he had, he poured all of his soul into it, and Garlic could reap what he sowed. As soon as it impacted the demon, the unbearable howl of the storm the demon had created was replaced by the immense pulsating noise of the what Garlic could only describe as Gods Judgment itself. A cry of agony, or screams, would have been lost in the wave in seconds.

Without any resistance, the wave continued to curve forward, spilling over the event horizon, and wildly spiraling down into the core of the beast, leaving a spiraling purple corona around the Dead Zone itself. Piercing into the heart of darkness, Hiroshi could feel the edges of reality burning away, as well as the edges of the very fabric of the Dead Zone. As the pillars which held up the dimension eroded, something terrible began to form on the other side of the Dead Zone itself. All of the matter it'd consumed in its very being, began to exist in a small, and smaller state, packing together more and more tightly as his beam cut into the darkness, burning away the only things which kept the emptiness in existence.

Looking on as the swirling purple and black mass began to become less and less stable, Hiroshi's eyes widened when he realized exactly what he'd done. There was so little energy left in his reserves however, he had no ability to raise his defenses. In a blur of motion, he felt someone appear in front of him, feeling a shield expand around him.

Suddenly, the storm of chaotic energy and a dead reality, turned from an eternally dark realm, to pure light. The last thing Hiroshi could remember seeing, was the air itself catching fire, and the seas coming ablaze, before the shock-wave hit the shield. It buckled, and suddenly everything went dark.


That was made on an iPad

Go fuck urself and ur anime krap

^^made on my cell


Don't challenge me :p
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Postby The Peoples East Africa » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:05 pm

Sanabel wrote:
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Garlic Jr.:

"Why Claudia my dear, And you Garnet, you pretentious wretches, why fight you? Oh no your fate will be much worse." Garlic chuckled darkly, gauging Hiroshi's expression as he dropped the child, letting her bounce across the rocky surface.

Even as a bleeding wreck, that defiant, unbending look was still there. Black energies swirled around him as he began to float, the sky darkening and crackling with the black lightening, the epicenter coming from Garlic himself. Licking his teeth a second later, Garlic started to grin once again, staring down at them all before finally letting loose a howling cackle. This was going to be superb, the greatest example of his mercy on them all. They would all understand the suffering he endured, and they would all receive exactly what they deserved, but most of all, he would see Hiroshi punished for what he'd done to him. He deserved to be punished for believing he could stop him.

"I-I won't give up." Hiroshi huffed, a golden flame wrapping itself around him, sending dust scattering away from him. " No ones unbeatable, especially not someone who has to rely on tricks to win. Your a waste of my time. Your pathetic."

Pathetic?... They call me pathetic. I arrange for Abaddon to be taken out of the picture, and I'm pathetic. I manipulate them all into doing my bidding, and I'm pathetic. I collect the Seven Dragon Balls to obtain enough power to challenge these pitiful Saiyans, and I'm pathetic. I control the fabric of time and space through the Dead Zone... and I'm pathetic?

Rage flooded his veins, the feeling still uncomfortable, as new as these veins were. Everyone who challenged him was going to be punished as they deserved. Hiroshi and these fools would be sent into the abyss for their insolence, then they'd know who was pathetic.

"Every single one of you will pay your resistance." Garlic howled, his features contorted in fury. " You will all know the pain of being locked away for a decade. You will know my fury!"

Slowly, he started to growl as red energy brimmed at the edge of his skin. The world around him began to bend, as space and time were manipulated. In a swirl of blackened energy, the sky itself seemed to rot for a moment, before shards cracked through the very sky. His growl slowly turned into a full scream as he drew in from himself the power needed to not only open a gateway to the Dead Zone, but to open its terrible maw. He would see all of his enemies shown just how pathetic he was.

As if it were glass hit by a rock, the entirety of the sky seemed to shatter, stripping away the blue haze of the Earth's atmosphere, and replacing it with a sole, dark portal. The orb of darkness in the heart of it all began to suck everything in towards it, even light.

Grinning down at the fools below, Garlic just smiled broadly as he started to chuckle.

"The Dead Zone will swallow you up and keep you for all eternity, there's no escape."

()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()

Hiroshi:

Moving quickly, Hiroshi snatched Tomia as quickly as he could, hurrying before Garlic noticed he lost his hold on her, just as he felt a great shift in the balance of the world. Everything seemed to almost be sucking him in towards Garlic, towards the beating black heart of the Dead Zone. It wasn't even that however, it was as if everything was displaced. The edge of the horizon on the 'hole', the sphere of darkness in the air, seem to almost make everything around it fall in towards it. It was as if physics were slowly breaking down, and the only thing unaffected by it, was Garlic himself. His maddened cackle swept out over the landscape as darkened energies rolled over his entire body, feeding into the maw, making it grow ever larger.

Even his maddened laughter seemed delayed and slowed, as though time around them was slowing, it was as though everything was being pulled towards the horrible void Garlic had opened.

Rocketing up, he cradled the girl in his arms, keeping her firmly held so he couldn't be pulled away. There was just shallow breathing from Tomia as she watched with terror filled eyes, she watched the world drain way. The rocks on the earth below, then the earth itself slowly, the rubble of the castle, all flew helplessly towards the void. The clouds themselves drained into the blackened hole, and with wide eyes, Hiroshi watched spirals of ocean water be drawn towards the void, all of these things being drawn towards the Earths new center of gravity.

All around them, beyond the delayed echo of Garlics chuckle, all could be heard was the intense wind. The atoms and energy in the air, as it was drawn towards the Dead Zone.

Looking beyond the blackness, Hiroshi couldn't looks beyond the opening of the void. It was more than a planet that could be destroyed by third class warriors, everything about it reminded him of a Black Hole. In his time as a Special operations warrior in his fathers army, he'd witnessed the devastation and destruction these things could cause. He'd watched an entire system be sucked in from something as simple as a miscalculation in orbit. It had destroyed everything within its orbit, before annihilating itself. What should have taken years, would inly take two days, and even fate couldn't stop the destruction it wrought. As the hole had burned in the galactic sky, a circle of superheated gas burning around it, all of it heated by sheer proximity to the collapsing star. A star with a black heart.

But now, as Earths atmosphere was drawn into it, like water down a drain, Hiroshi could truly understand the monster Garlic had unleashed upon not only them, but the entire planet. All noise ceased around them, beyond the howling of matter as it to was drawn in. All around the hole, nitrogen, oxygen, and carbon dioxide accelerated to insane speeds before being pulled into the other dimension. Being pulled so closely to one incredibly powerful point, pulled the matter together, lighting the edges of the hole itself, before it was surrounded by almost a golden fire. The light from the sun itself dimmed, as the brightness of the collision of gases nearly taking place around the core of this hole, took ownership of the sky. But still it grew.

Garlic's blackened energies fed into it more and more as it grew in size, more and more. More of the Earth's surface seemed to be sucked towards it. The seas themselves began to rise beyond just tendrils being drawn in, now it was as if the ocean itself was being lifted into the air. Swirling masses of clouds in the air began to wrapped together, pulling towards the Dead Zone.

Looking to his left, Hiroshi saw similar looks of awe upon the faces of his companions, everyone if them as scared and bewildered as he was. They were short on time, and they needed a plan, quickly.

"How do we stop it?" Hiroshi's mind reached out to Claudia, knowing voice would be useless lost in the vortex of noise now emerging along the surface of the Earth for as far as he could understand.

The entire energy of the Earth seemed to shift, and reality itself seemed to begin to lose control. It was as if the entire Earth and its orbit, as well as its rotation, began to shift and change. It was beginning to modify the entirety of the Earth. Everything would be drawn into the Event Horizon, piece by piece, and destroyed, before being cast into another universe.

"Think of something fast," Hiroshi urged himself, his own eyes scanning over the blinding light and eternal darkness, before seeing something beyond, and he knew Claudia must as seen it as well, or least had a basic understand of it.b

Its being held up, opened, and expanded by Garlic's power.

What was the Dead Zone? Where did it come from? That was the bolder question to ask. To answer it, would lead to something at least.

Killing Garlic jr. wouldn't solve anything, he would simply return, his power would never leave. Throwing him into the Dead Zone wouldn't do anything either. But there was a chance he could attack the Dead Zone itself, the very walls, the very structure of the nightmare could be assaulted. It was nothing but nothingness given form and mass. Even now, he tried to understand where it really was in the darkness, and how much it the event horizon was it. Where was the only structure the Dead Zone ever knew?

Turning his head, he looked at Tomia, who clung desperately as his shredded gi as they floated, gripping tightly with both arms, even her broken one. Despite his efforts, he felt himself hopelessly floating towards the vacuum, and even the brilliant golden fire around him was drawn towards it, itself brilliance paled in comparison to the void before them. There was no time anymore, a decision had to be made, for Tomia and the rest of Earth, and he made it. Staring into the void, he could almost see a demon within, looking past the physical of the vacuum.

'Tomia, Can you hear me?'

There was no response, she was to overwhelmed by the noise, the momentum, and the pure awe of all that was happening around her. But he knew she heard, the girl burying her face in his chest and tightening her eyes.

'Listen to me Tomia. I'm going to stop this here and now, but you need to hold onto my back no matter what, no matter how bad it hurts, you have to keep your grip. Trust me, it'll all be over soon.'

The wind was endless and relentless, his entire body was raw from friction, his ears ached from the ferocity of the noise around him, the howling of matter as it was forcibly drawn to the void. But it a sea of nothingness, he felt something familiar.

"What's this!? How can he just stand there?!"

Garlics words rang in his mind, like a slap to the face, unleashing memories long forgotten. No longer was he the warrior of legend, defending his daughter and his new home planet, he was a four year old, standing before this void once more, as his father battled endlessly against this monster, as well,as his late Uncle and mother. They hung onto life and this dimension for their lives, but they couldn't stop it, no one could.

Now this monster wanted to take everything he'd gained, wanted to destroy the universe, his own plaything in his own mind. And he'd kill Claudia, Garnet and Tomia to do so.

He could see the Dead zone for what it was, as he and before, the first time he'd defeated Garlic.

"Hiroshi!!"

His mothers desperate call echoed through him, his heart leaping in his chest, her and his uncles voices melting together, before becoming something more important.

"DADDY!!"

Even as he was drawn helplessly towards the swirling mass of gas and demonic energy, the Halfling put up his first sign of defiance before its power. Golden fire built around him as he used the vacuum of the void to pull himself into position. Orbiting around it, he felt the swirl grow unbearably hot, at this point it was near impossible to breath, and the wind whipped and cut his face, small insignificant cuts dotting his determined features. The noise grew more wild and rampant, and as it reached unbearable levels, Hiroshi anchored himself, a sphere of golden energies surrounding him, stopping his momentum.

Golden fire rolled off of him as he drew his hands to his center, both hands cupped agaisnt his forehead. All energy he had was drawn towards his center, the pain of defeat, driving him. The fear of death, drawing up into him. Rage at everything Garlic had done to him and the people of Earth, feeding the growing pool of power. And desperation to defend Tomia and Claudia rising past it all, his throat burning as he gulped down one final breath of scalding air.

Pulling back his hands, he was nearly overwhelmed by the burning sensation of the fiery power flowing down his arms. Lightening rolled over his form as his hair spiked backwards, his muscles twitching and expanding, veins pumping out around them, bio-electricity rolling over him, swirling around the sphere of golden fire.

Throwing both hands forward, Hiroshi prepared himself for the final release of power, his body twitching with power. The fate of Tomia, Garnet and Claudia all rode upon this attack, hitting Garlic and his hellish vacuum at the right place, and at the right time. The void swirled faster and faster as he drew closer, and for a second, Garlic, in all his confidence and boastful candling, froze in fear before the first Ascended Saiyan in all of history. And in that moment, Hiroshi sneered, before throwing everything he had with one final cry of hatred and fury.

A single sound broke through the the unbearable gusts around them, and for a second, the world slowed around them, as a new source of light was born, born of the hatred and anger of the into Saiyan-Kaioshin in existence.

" GOD'S JUDGEMENT!"

A blindingly gold wave of pure energy cut through reality, more massive then any beam Hiroshi and any being he knew of had handled. The entire mass of swirling has simply stopped in place, it's motion freezing in time itself. The corona seemed to almost break, sending blazing hot gasses in billions of directions. And the wave pierced through the darkness at its core. All at once, the wind stopped and the physics that governed the Earth seemed to crash back into it . Billions of gallons of Water and thousands of tons of broken earth fell helplessly to the earth, scattering across thousands of miles. The rotation of the Earth returned to normal, the orbit seemingly stabilizing, making everything in the following seconds furious and violent.

At the heart of the blackened monster he'd created, Garlic only had time to look into the wave as it descended upon him, seeing the power he'd wanted Hiroshi to give him. It was everything he had, he poured all of his soul into it, and Garlic could reap what he sowed. As soon as it impacted the demon, the unbearable howl of the storm the demon had created was replaced by the immense pulsating noise of the what Garlic could only describe as Gods Judgment itself. A cry of agony, or screams, would have been lost in the wave in seconds.

Without any resistance, the wave continued to curve forward, spilling over the event horizon, and wildly spiraling down into the core of the beast, leaving a spiraling purple corona around the Dead Zone itself. Piercing into the heart of darkness, Hiroshi could feel the edges of reality burning away, as well as the edges of the very fabric of the Dead Zone. As the pillars which held up the dimension eroded, something terrible began to form on the other side of the Dead Zone itself. All of the matter it'd consumed in its very being, began to exist in a small, and smaller state, packing together more and more tightly as his beam cut into the darkness, burning away the only things which kept the emptiness in existence.

Looking on as the swirling purple and black mass began to become less and less stable, Hiroshi's eyes widened when he realized exactly what he'd done. There was so little energy left in his reserves however, he had no ability to raise his defenses. In a blur of motion, he felt someone appear in front of him, feeling a shield expand around him.

Suddenly, the storm of chaotic energy and a dead reality, turned from an eternally dark realm, to pure light. The last thing Hiroshi could remember seeing, was the air itself catching fire, and the seas coming ablaze, before the shock-wave hit the shield. It buckled, and suddenly everything went dark.


That was made on an iPad

Go fuck urself and ur anime krap

^^made on my cell

Dude Anime's great. Cory in the House and Seinfeld are some of the greatest works of television ever made.

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Postby The Peoples East Africa » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:06 pm

New Rnclave wrote:
Sanabel wrote:Go fuck urself and ur anime krap

^^made on my cell


Don't challenge me :p

Yeah man Goku's tough to beat. He only died like twice or something.

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Postby Sanabel » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:07 pm

New Rnclave wrote:
Sanabel wrote:Go fuck urself and ur anime krap

^^made on my cell


Don't challenge me :p

Here's a challenge, punk.

Danger 5 is the best anime ever made.
The Peoples East Africa wrote:
Sanabel wrote:Go fuck urself and ur anime krap

^^made on my cell

Dude Anime's great. Cory in the House and Seinfeld are some of the greatest works of television ever made.
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Postby Ficiscia » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:07 pm

Sanabel wrote:
Ficiscia wrote:
The Repost you asked for :)

Accepted! You're Swiss irl?


Yep (see my sig) but IRL highly anti-nationalist for Swiss standards. However, having CH under foreign rule in the 19th century (under HABSBURG rule after all o.O) without resistance would be, no offense, the most unrealistic thing I ever read in a AH ^^ so I knew what I had to do... our nation's whole founding myth is based on resistance against Habsburg after all.

PS @Italy and Bill Cosby: Did you realize you annexed Switzerland/parts of it? Because I can't see anything about it in your history, so I was wondering if you actually noticed ^^ conquering Switzerland is quite an achievement, those mountains are damn hard to control if you don't know them, so respect!

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Postby New Rnclave » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:09 pm

The Peoples East Africa wrote:
New Rnclave wrote:
Don't challenge me :p

Yeah man Goku's tough to beat. He only died like twice or something.


That's gohan
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Postby Ficiscia » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:09 pm

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Swiss Austria-Hungary wrote:ugh. yay for me. :unsure:


It sucks yeah but you need to build up some expirence before you join higher level rp's


And then you got me, starting with RoN without any complaints so far :P (and some sports RP)
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Postby The Peoples East Africa » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:11 pm

New Rnclave wrote:
The Peoples East Africa wrote:Yeah man Goku's tough to beat. He only died like twice or something.


That's gohan

I assume Goku would assist his son. It's not like he'd ever leave him all alone against a villain right...

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Postby Reatra » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:12 pm

Ficiscia wrote:
Sanabel wrote:Accepted! You're Swiss irl?


Yep (see my sig) but IRL highly anti-nationalist for Swiss standards. However, having CH under foreign rule in the 19th century (under HABSBURG rule after all o.O) without resistance would be, no offense, the most unrealistic thing I ever read in a AH ^^ so I knew what I had to do... our nation's whole founding myth is based on resistance against Habsburg after all.

PS @Italy and Bill Cosby: Did you realize you annexed Switzerland/parts of it? Because I can't see anything about it in your history, so I was wondering if you actually noticed ^^ conquering Switzerland is quite an achievement, those mountains are damn hard to control if you don't know them, so respect!

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I never understood that. Like, they only kill two Germans or something?
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Postby Sanabel » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:13 pm

Ficiscia wrote:
Sanabel wrote:Accepted! You're Swiss irl?


Yep (see my sig) but IRL highly anti-nationalist for Swiss standards. However, having CH under foreign rule in the 19th century (under HABSBURG rule after all o.O) without resistance would be, no offense, the most unrealistic thing I ever read in a AH ^^ so I knew what I had to do... our nation's whole founding myth is based on resistance against Habsburg after all.

PS @Italy and Bill Cosby: Did you realize you annexed Switzerland/parts of it? Because I can't see anything about it in your history, so I was wondering if you actually noticed ^^ conquering Switzerland is quite an achievement, those mountains are damn hard to control if you don't know them, so respect!

Image

True in almost every time ;)

Cool. My uncle lives in Lausanne and has for about...20 years. He's got a Swiss family and citizenship, so I guess he's almost Swiss himself. Anyway, just don't see many Swiss on here. Coolio man.
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Postby The Eastern Antarctic State » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:17 pm

Ficiscia wrote:
Sanabel wrote:Accepted! You're Swiss irl?


Yep (see my sig) but IRL highly anti-nationalist for Swiss standards. However, having CH under foreign rule in the 19th century (under HABSBURG rule after all o.O) without resistance would be, no offense, the most unrealistic thing I ever read in a AH ^^ so I knew what I had to do... our nation's whole founding myth is based on resistance against Habsburg after all.

PS @Italy and Bill Cosby: Did you realize you annexed Switzerland/parts of it? Because I can't see anything about it in your history, so I was wondering if you actually noticed ^^ conquering Switzerland is quite an achievement, those mountains are damn hard to control if you don't know them, so respect!

Image

True in almost every time ;)

I did not, actually.
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Postby Mangjukoia » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:18 pm

Reatra wrote:
Ficiscia wrote:
Yep (see my sig) but IRL highly anti-nationalist for Swiss standards. However, having CH under foreign rule in the 19th century (under HABSBURG rule after all o.O) without resistance would be, no offense, the most unrealistic thing I ever read in a AH ^^ so I knew what I had to do... our nation's whole founding myth is based on resistance against Habsburg after all.

PS @Italy and Bill Cosby: Did you realize you annexed Switzerland/parts of it? Because I can't see anything about it in your history, so I was wondering if you actually noticed ^^ conquering Switzerland is quite an achievement, those mountains are damn hard to control if you don't know them, so respect!

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I never understood that. Like, they only kill two Germans or something?

I think they're referring to the excellent shots that the Swiss are, with each of the quarter million firing twice, one for each target, 500k bullets taking out 500k Germans from 250k Swiss.

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The Peoples East Africa wrote:
New Rnclave wrote:
That's gohan

I assume Goku would assist his son. It's not like he'd ever leave him all alone against a villain right...


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Postby Sanabel » Wed Dec 16, 2015 4:21 pm

New Rnclave wrote:
The Peoples East Africa wrote:I assume Goku would assist his son. It's not like he'd ever leave him all alone against a villain right...


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New Rnclave wrote:
The Peoples East Africa wrote:I assume Goku would assist his son. It's not like he'd ever leave him all alone against a villain right...


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