Dragon Ball Universe (OOC/Sign-ups) (CLOSED)

[Gurori]

Is the Lieutenant going to respond or just ignore Haddari?

[New Rnclave]

Is the Lieutenant going to respond or just ignore Haddari?

I never saw the edit, but I responded now.

[New Rnclave]

Why would someone attack her? For no reason?

[Gurori]

Why would someone attack her? For no reason?

Bleh, I'll remove that.

I need ideas for Haddari's Elite.

[New Rnclave]

Why would someone attack her? For no reason?

Bleh, I'll remove that.

I need ideas for Haddari's Elite.

Do something Ginyu-Force Esque.

And since when was she Arctica's Elite? I'm not complaining, I just never heard it mentioned

EDIT: Like this maybe.

[Gurori]

Bleh, I'll remove that.

I need ideas for Haddari's Elite.

Do something Ginyu-Force Esque.

And since when was she Arctica's Elite? I'm not complaining, I just never heard it mentioned

EDIT: Like this maybe.

In her app. Heck, Pant even agreed when I did the first draft in which her name was Shalot and she was a saiyan.

[New Rnclave]

Do something Ginyu-Force Esque.

And since when was she Arctica's Elite? I'm not complaining, I just never heard it mentioned

EDIT: Like this maybe.

In her app. Heck, Pant even agreed when I did the first draft in which her name was Shalot and she was a saiyan.

Whoops, I must've missed it. Doesn't matter to me anyways, I'm planning a lot of characters and side plots for this saga, and it'll be nice not to play all the people invovled.

[Gurori]

I name the female one Shanos, the cyborg Mechon and the dinosaurian shall be known as the Beast.

Shanos: 600,000 (She is the fastest.)

Mechon: 750,000 (He is the best with energy attacks.)

The Beast: 1,000,000 (He is the strongest when it comes to durability.)

Haddari: 2,500,000 (The strongest in general and most intelligent.)

[New Rnclave]

I name the female one Shanos, the cyborg Mechon and the dinosaurian shall be known as the Beast.

Shanos: 600,000 (She is the fastest.)

Mechon: 750,000 (He is the best with energy attacks.)

The Beast: 1,000,000 (He is the strongest when it comes to durability.)

Haddari: 2,500,000 (The strongest in general and most intelligent.)

Really don't think any of them should be so far apart in strength

Try:

Shanos: 1,100,0000 ( Speed also requires power )
Beast: 3,000,000 ( He's the strongest, but also the slowest )
Mechon: 1,150,000 ( You could imagine him and Shanos like you would Jeice and Burter )
Haddari: 1,700,000 ( Don't see a point in her being so drastically overpowered. Give them special abilities, not just basic traits )

These are all just suggestions, follow them if you want.

[Gurori]

I name the female one Shanos, the cyborg Mechon and the dinosaurian shall be known as the Beast.

Shanos: 600,000 (She is the fastest.)

Mechon: 750,000 (He is the best with energy attacks.)

The Beast: 1,000,000 (He is the strongest when it comes to durability.)

Haddari: 2,500,000 (The strongest in general and most intelligent.)

Really don't think any of them should be so far apart in strength

Try:

Shanos: 1,100,0000 ( Speed also requires power )
Beast: 3,000,000 ( He's the strongest, but also the slowest )
Mechon: 1,150,000 ( You could imagine him and Shanos like you would Jeice and Burter )
Haddari: 1,700,000 ( Don't see a point in her being so drastically overpowered. Give them special abilities, not just basic traits )

These are all just suggestions, follow them if you want.

That works out.

Shanos and Mechon are gonna be a couple while Beast is like a clothed, reptilian dog to Haddari.

[New Rnclave]

Really don't think any of them should be so far apart in strength

Try:

Shanos: 1,100,0000 ( Speed also requires power )
Beast: 3,000,000 ( He's the strongest, but also the slowest )
Mechon: 1,150,000 ( You could imagine him and Shanos like you would Jeice and Burter )
Haddari: 1,700,000 ( Don't see a point in her being so drastically overpowered. Give them special abilities, not just basic traits )

These are all just suggestions, follow them if you want.

That works out.

Shanos and Mechon are gonna be a couple while Beast is like a clothed, reptilian dog to Haddari.

As for abilities and powers. Shanos and Mechon could probably warp the reality around them with sheer speed and technological advantage, and Haddari could be a gravity manipulator. Meaning anything she touched could become thousands of times more heavy, or become weightless.

[Gurori]

I'm going to do a quick statistics list.

Beast: 5,000,000

Haddari: 2,500,000

Mechon: 2,000,000

Shanos: 1,500,000

Beast is the strongest and most durable but is also the slowest, making him a living tank.

Mechon can electrocute his enemies and can analyse his opponents.

Shanos is the fastest but also the weakest of them all, she is a good speed fighter and has a slower perception of time.

Haddari can enter a state that makes her muscles grow slightly, boosts her power by 10 and has a huge strain (like the Kaioken) called Semi-Super Feli-jin. Her people are capable of unlocking a form that may rival a Super Saiyan but it requires weeks of training while in Semi-Super Feli-jin and she'd probably die during said training. She rarely uses the Semi-Super Feli-jin form because she isn't used to the strain it puts on her. Semi-Super Feli-jin looks like this.


(Last one is an idea which I'd like feedback to.)

[New Rnclave]

I'm going to do a quick statistics list.

Beast: 5,000,000

Haddari: 2,500,000

Mechon: 2,000,000

Shanos: 1,500,000

Beast is the strongest and most durable but is also the slowest, making him a living tank.

Mechon can electrocute his enemies and can analyse his opponents.

Shanos is the fastest but also the weakest of them all, she is a good speed fighter and has a slower perception of time.

Haddari can enter a state that makes her muscles grow slightly, boosts her power by 10 and has a huge strain (like the Kaioken) called Semi-Super Feli-jin. Her people are capable of unlocking a form that may rival a Super Saiyan but it requires weeks of training while in Semi-Super Feli-jin and she'd probably die during said training. She rarely uses the Semi-Super Feli-jin form because she isn't used to the strain it puts on her. Semi-Super Feli-jin looks like this.


(Last one is an idea which I'd like feedback to.)

What's your obsession with transformations? Why cant they be moderately strong fighters with awesome abilities? I took a long time thinking up the gravity manipulation ability and you tossed it to the wayside because "powar gaiz, onle powur materrs."

[Gurori]

I'm going to do a quick statistics list.

Beast: 5,000,000

Haddari: 2,500,000

Mechon: 2,000,000

Shanos: 1,500,000

Beast is the strongest and most durable but is also the slowest, making him a living tank.

Mechon can electrocute his enemies and can analyse his opponents.

Shanos is the fastest but also the weakest of them all, she is a good speed fighter and has a slower perception of time.

Haddari can enter a state that makes her muscles grow slightly, boosts her power by 10 and has a huge strain (like the Kaioken) called Semi-Super Feli-jin. Her people are capable of unlocking a form that may rival a Super Saiyan but it requires weeks of training while in Semi-Super Feli-jin and she'd probably die during said training. She rarely uses the Semi-Super Feli-jin form because she isn't used to the strain it puts on her. Semi-Super Feli-jin looks like this.


(Last one is an idea which I'd like feedback to.)

What's your obsession with transformations? Why cant they be moderately strong fighters with awesome abilities? I took a long time thinking up the gravity manipulation ability and you tossed it to the wayside because "powar gaiz, onle powur materrs."

Because she'd then be able to just walk up to the Lieutenant and make gravity crush him.

[New Rnclave]

What's your obsession with transformations? Why cant they be moderately strong fighters with awesome abilities? I took a long time thinking up the gravity manipulation ability and you tossed it to the wayside because "powar gaiz, onle powur materrs."

Because she'd then be able to just walk up to the Lieutenant and make gravity crush him.

No you see, because she has to be fast enough to hit him. Gravity manipulation makes her a more daunting foe, the ridicouls power up you gave her is stupid and useless.

[Gurori]

Because she'd then be able to just walk up to the Lieutenant and make gravity crush him.

No you see, because she has to be fast enough to hit him. Gravity manipulation makes her a more daunting foe, the ridicouls power up you gave her is stupid and useless.

I plan on having her revived after the Arctica saga. She'd need some form of power to allow her to keep up. Heck, it could even be the only powerup she has.

[New Rnclave]

No you see, because she has to be fast enough to hit him. Gravity manipulation makes her a more daunting foe, the ridicouls power up you gave her is stupid and useless.

I plan on having her revived after the Arctica saga. She'd need some form of power to allow her to keep up.

Again. Gravity Manipulation. No one can really focus on fighting when one arm ways thousands of tons, or their leg is constantly floating upwards. To counter the whole idea of being able to automatically crush someone, think of it like this:

For everytime she lands a punch or a kick, the gravity exerted on the point of contact on her opponent increased tenfold. So say she's fighting Oozak, if she punched him in the chest, the rest of his body would feel the same, but his chest would feel ten times heavier then before, which might not be a big deal at first, but is certainly disorienting.

And that's before she lands more hits.

[Gurori]

I plan on having her revived after the Arctica saga. She'd need some form of power to allow her to keep up.

Again. Gravity Manipulation. No one can really focus on fighting when one arm ways thousands of tons, or their leg is constantly floating upwards. To counter the whole idea of being able to automatically crush someone, think of it like this:

For everytime she lands a punch or a kick, the gravity exerted on the point of contact on her opponent increased tenfold. So say she's fighting Oozak, if she punched him in the chest, the rest of his body would feel the same, but his chest would feel ten times heavier then before, which might not be a big deal at first, but is certainly disorienting.

And that's before she lands more hits.

I think I'll stick to the form concept but with only one form.
Though I could give her a weapon that changes gravity...

[New Rnclave]

Again. Gravity Manipulation. No one can really focus on fighting when one arm ways thousands of tons, or their leg is constantly floating upwards. To counter the whole idea of being able to automatically crush someone, think of it like this:

For everytime she lands a punch or a kick, the gravity exerted on the point of contact on her opponent increased tenfold. So say she's fighting Oozak, if she punched him in the chest, the rest of his body would feel the same, but his chest would feel ten times heavier then before, which might not be a big deal at first, but is certainly disorienting.

And that's before she lands more hits.

I think I'll stick to the form concept but with only one form.
Though I could give her a weapon that changes gravity...

Your obsession with power play over story telling is ridiculous.

[Gurori]

I think I'll stick to the form concept but with only one form.
Though I could give her a weapon that changes gravity...

Your obsession with power play over story telling is ridiculous.

I know but as the protagonists and antagonists get stronger it'd leave her behind.

[New Rnclave]

Your obsession with power play over story telling is ridiculous.

I know but as the protagonists and antagonists get stronger it'd leave her behind.

Yes because everyone under the sun can handle thousands of tons of pressure exerted against them. You're right, stop the presses. You know why it won't work? Because you don't want it to

[Gurori]

I know but as the protagonists and antagonists get stronger it'd leave her behind.

Yes because everyone under the sun can handle thousands of tons of pressure exerted against them. You're right, stop the presses. You know why it won't work? Because you don't want it to

I don't exactly want gravity manipulation but if nobody wants a transformation then there will be no transformation.

[New Rnclave]

Yes because everyone under the sun can handle thousands of tons of pressure exerted against them. You're right, stop the presses. You know why it won't work? Because you don't want it to

I don't exactly want gravity manipulation but if nobody wants a transformation then there will be no transformation.

Then say that! Find another power I don't care, but stop the god damn power play. Everytime we turn around one of your characters gets a power up. Give them a personality, give them some new power.

Also, I think I'm gonna use the image of the squad I posted, but I'll help you find another one

[Gurori]

I don't exactly want gravity manipulation but if nobody wants a transformation then there will be no transformation.

Then say that! Find another power I don't care, but stop the god damn power play. Everytime we turn around one of your characters gets a power up. Give them a personality, give them some new power.

Also, I think I'm gonna use the image of the squad I posted, but I'll help you find another one

Finding another group with a Dinosaurian, a Female and a Cyborg would be difficult y'know.

[New Rnclave]

Then say that! Find another power I don't care, but stop the god damn power play. Everytime we turn around one of your characters gets a power up. Give them a personality, give them some new power.

Also, I think I'm gonna use the image of the squad I posted, but I'll help you find another one

Finding another group with a Dinosaurian, a Female and a Cyborg would be difficult y'know.

Change the team.

This also brings me to something else I thought about. How big the X Fighters will be when we return. Tabbis and Senera will come back, Haddari ( And her team? ) Kolra will be returning a few months down the road, Kale eventually. We're getting really big