Infinite Justice: Beyond (OOC 4, Open)

[Illica Falki]

I expected it to take several hours to find I sword I would like for Nightraven...
Took all of 5 minutes

[The Starlight]

I Want You to Hurt Me: Part One
( One Week After Hiroshi and Claudia Broke Up

Bruh.

That title is terrible. Like terr-ii-ble!

Oh, and you're missing a ).

I expected it to take several hours to find I sword I would like for Nightraven...
Took all of 5 minutes

Nice, though what are all the holes for, on the sheath?

[The Republic of Atria]

Yeah... They never really explained Builder Tech other than it being better than every other type made by most species.

Well, he could start finding a way to make cybernetic prosthetics cheap and readily available. Working on his nanotechnology so that they can fight diseases. Finding a way to either help Mutants who have mutations that are detrimental.

Unrelated, but after the Infinite Crisis, I think we'll start Civil War 2 Electric Boogaloo.

Those are some good suggestions, and I think I'll do those. The nanotechnology he already has down, but the rest should be good.

Or maybe make his nanotechnology function as a dietary supplement. Helping burn off fat and build muscle to combat obesity.

Once that stuff happens. Earth'll be headed to FT territory.

Next step is space exploration.

[Illica Falki]

I Want You to Hurt Me: Part One
( One Week After Hiroshi and Claudia Broke Up

Bruh.

That title is terrible. Like terr-ii-ble!

Oh, and you're missing a ).

I expected it to take several hours to find I sword I would like for Nightraven...
Took all of 5 minutes

Nice, though what are all the holes for, on the sheath?

For the straps probably, so you can put it on how you want it.

[The Starlight]

Those are some good suggestions, and I think I'll do those. The nanotechnology he already has down, but the rest should be good.

Or maybe make his nanotechnology function as a dietary supplement. Helping burn off fat and build muscle to combat obesity.

Once that stuff happens. Earth'll be headed to FT territory.

Next step is space exploration.

Yep. Now I'm imagining little nanite flamethrowers that ignite fat cells.

To the stars! Though Craig is worried about people leaving Earth and not helping to solve Earth's problems. And that their disunity, racism, war, and the rest of the problems will also make it to space.

For the straps probably, so you can put it on how you want it.

That makes sense, actually.

[New Rnclave]

I Want You to Hurt Me: Part One
( One Week After Hiroshi and Claudia Broke Up

Bruh.

That title is terrible. Like terr-ii-ble!

Oh, and you're missing a ).

I expected it to take several hours to find I sword I would like for Nightraven...
Took all of 5 minutes

Nice, though what are all the holes for, on the sheath?

It should make more sense later, and I fixed the spelling

[The Starlight]

It should make more sense later, and I fixed the spelling

Alrighty.

And for you comic book readers, about ANAD Marvel. Do you guys hate New Avengers? I do. I just don't like the art, and I don't really think that Da Costa's team deserved an entire book of their own. They also made the Maker pretty lame, which I was disappointed with. When I first saw it I thought it was gonna be like Hickman's but nope. He would be a good villain for perhaps the Ultimates? And speaking of Avengers titles, I also hate Uncanny Avengers. I liked how Steve Rogers was drawn in Hickman's New Avengers, but now it just looks like he has a million wrinkles and face stuff. It's weird.

Also disappointed about the Illuminati title going to a bunch of villains. Probably fooled lots of people into buying the first issue.

[New Rnclave]

It should make more sense later, and I fixed the spelling

Alrighty.

And for you comic book readers, about ANAD Marvel. Do you guys hate New Avengers? I do. I just don't like the art, and I don't really think that Da Costa's team deserved an entire book of their own. They also made the Maker pretty lame, which I was disappointed with. When I first saw it I thought it was gonna be like Hickman's but nope. He would be a good villain for perhaps the Ultimates? And speaking of Avengers titles, I also hate Uncanny Avengers. I liked how Steve Rogers was drawn in Hickman's New Avengers, but now it just looks like he has a million wrinkles and face stuff. It's weird.

Also disappointed about the Illuminati title going to a bunch of villains. Probably fooled lots of people into buying the first issue.

He's going to be dealing with Tomia's psycho mother, who, due to brainwashing, thinks Hiroshi raped her. There's a lot of issues in their relationship I wanna deal with, while for once not focusing solely on Hiroshi, but Ariel and Tomia.

[The Fallen Jedi]

Hmm, a recent episode of Criminal Minds had me thinking... What If Asumar's son died before his father's eyes?

[New Rob Halfordia]

Hmm, a recent episode of Criminal Minds had me thinking... What If Asumar's son died before his father's eyes?

Then you just ruined the surprise.

[The Fallen Jedi]

Hmm, a recent episode of Criminal Minds had me thinking... What If Asumar's son died before his father's eyes?

Then you just ruined the surprise.

Wha?

[The Republic of Atria]

It should make more sense later, and I fixed the spelling

Alrighty.

And for you comic book readers, about ANAD Marvel. Do you guys hate New Avengers? I do. I just don't like the art, and I don't really think that Da Costa's team deserved an entire book of their own. They also made the Maker pretty lame, which I was disappointed with. When I first saw it I thought it was gonna be like Hickman's but nope. He would be a good villain for perhaps the Ultimates? And speaking of Avengers titles, I also hate Uncanny Avengers. I liked how Steve Rogers was drawn in Hickman's New Avengers, but now it just looks like he has a million wrinkles and face stuff. It's weird.

Also disappointed about the Illuminati title going to a bunch of villains. Probably fooled lots of people into buying the first issue.

I'm in the middle. The art style isn't that good. Everyone looks really weird. Like their skin is on too tight. But other than that, I'm going to wait and see what they have planned. Even if the Maker isn't as good as he used to be.

All New Inhumans on the other hand, I'm loving.

[New Neros]

Alrighty.

And for you comic book readers, about ANAD Marvel. Do you guys hate New Avengers? I do. I just don't like the art, and I don't really think that Da Costa's team deserved an entire book of their own. They also made the Maker pretty lame, which I was disappointed with. When I first saw it I thought it was gonna be like Hickman's but nope. He would be a good villain for perhaps the Ultimates? And speaking of Avengers titles, I also hate Uncanny Avengers. I liked how Steve Rogers was drawn in Hickman's New Avengers, but now it just looks like he has a million wrinkles and face stuff. It's weird.

Also disappointed about the Illuminati title going to a bunch of villains. Probably fooled lots of people into buying the first issue.

I'm in the middle. The art style isn't that good. Everyone looks really weird. Like their skin is on too tight. But other than that, I'm going to wait and see what they have planned. Even if the Maker isn't as good as he used to be.

All New Inhumans on the other hand, I'm loving.

Loving Inhumans, but didn't give New Avengers a shot. I guess if Star hates it, then I was right to not pick it up.

I was brainstorming on making Mad City and her inhabitants have more depth, and I thought of making them an Inhuman lineage, or a genetic offshoot like the Eternals, since I'm returning them to an island in the ocean, and naming their country Madworld, so that Max can return. As for the subspecies name, I'm thinking Parahumans. Thoughts?

[New Rob Halfordia]

Then you just ruined the surprise.

Wha?

Well, now, if it were to happen, it's anticipated. The shock and character development value would be effectively lost on most of us, since we'd have prior time to analyze the consequences of such an event.

In other words, you blew it.

[The Fallen Jedi]

Wha?

Well, now, if it were to happen, it's anticipated. The shock and character development value would be effectively lost on most of us, since we'd have prior time to analyze the consequences of such an event.

In other words, you blew it.

I'm considering it, but I need something viable to trigger the event...

[New Rnclave]

Not a lot of action, but how'd everyone like the new post?

[Imperial--japan]

Not a lot of action, but how'd everyone like the new post?

11/10

[New Rob Halfordia]

Well, now, if it were to happen, it's anticipated. The shock and character development value would be effectively lost on most of us, since we'd have prior time to analyze the consequences of such an event.

In other words, you blew it.

I'm considering it, but I need something viable to trigger the event...

What the fuck did you just fucking say about me, you little bitch? I’ll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Navy Seals, and I’ve been involved in numerous secret raids on Al-Quaeda, and I have over 300 confirmed kills. I am trained in gorilla warfare and I’m the top sniper in the entire US armed forces. You are nothing to me but just another target. I will wipe you the fuck out with precision the likes of which has never been seen before on this Earth, mark my fucking words. You think you can get away with saying that shit to me over the Internet? Think again, fucker. As we speak I am contacting my secret network of spies across the USA and your IP is being traced right now so you better prepare for the storm, maggot. The storm that wipes out the pathetic little thing you call your life. You’re fucking dead, kid. I can be anywhere, anytime, and I can kill you in over seven hundred ways, and that’s just with my bare hands. Not only am I extensively trained in unarmed combat, but I have access to the entire arsenal of the United States Marine Corps and I will use it to its full extent to wipe your miserable ass off the face of the continent, you little shit. If only you could have known what unholy retribution your little “clever” comment was about to bring down upon you, maybe you would have held your fucking tongue. But you couldn’t, you didn’t, and now you’re paying the price, you goddamn idiot. I will shit fury all over you and you will drown in it. You’re fucking dead, kiddo.

[New Rnclave]

Not a lot of action, but how'd everyone like the new post?

11/10

Shanks IJ

[The Fallen Jedi]

I'm considering it, but I need something viable to trigger the event...

What the fuck did you just fucking say about me, you little bitch? I’ll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Navy Seals, and I’ve been involved in numerous secret raids on Al-Quaeda, and I have over 300 confirmed kills. I am trained in gorilla warfare and I’m the top sniper in the entire US armed forces. You are nothing to me but just another target. I will wipe you the fuck out with precision the likes of which has never been seen before on this Earth, mark my fucking words. You think you can get away with saying that shit to me over the Internet? Think again, fucker. As we speak I am contacting my secret network of spies across the USA and your IP is being traced right now so you better prepare for the storm, maggot. The storm that wipes out the pathetic little thing you call your life. You’re fucking dead, kid. I can be anywhere, anytime, and I can kill you in over seven hundred ways, and that’s just with my bare hands. Not only am I extensively trained in unarmed combat, but I have access to the entire arsenal of the United States Marine Corps and I will use it to its full extent to wipe your miserable ass off the face of the continent, you little shit. If only you could have known what unholy retribution your little “clever” comment was about to bring down upon you, maybe you would have held your fucking tongue. But you couldn’t, you didn’t, and now you’re paying the price, you goddamn idiot. I will shit fury all over you and you will drown in it. You’re fucking dead, kiddo.

What an interesting way to put it...

[New Rob Halfordia]

By the way, I just realized how hilarious it is that our Australian guy (Zark, right?) is one of the only people who doesn't shitpost.

[New Neros]

By the way, I just realized how hilarious it is that our Australian guy (Zark, right?) is one of the only people who doesn't shitpost.

Zark is Mexican...

[New Neros]

What the fuck did you just fucking say about me, you little bitch? I’ll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Navy Seals, and I’ve been involved in numerous secret raids on Al-Quaeda, and I have over 300 confirmed kills. I am trained in gorilla warfare and I’m the top sniper in the entire US armed forces. You are nothing to me but just another target. I will wipe you the fuck out with precision the likes of which has never been seen before on this Earth, mark my fucking words. You think you can get away with saying that shit to me over the Internet? Think again, fucker. As we speak I am contacting my secret network of spies across the USA and your IP is being traced right now so you better prepare for the storm, maggot. The storm that wipes out the pathetic little thing you call your life. You’re fucking dead, kid. I can be anywhere, anytime, and I can kill you in over seven hundred ways, and that’s just with my bare hands. Not only am I extensively trained in unarmed combat, but I have access to the entire arsenal of the United States Marine Corps and I will use it to its full extent to wipe your miserable ass off the face of the continent, you little shit. If only you could have known what unholy retribution your little “clever” comment was about to bring down upon you, maybe you would have held your fucking tongue. But you couldn’t, you didn’t, and now you’re paying the price, you goddamn idiot. I will shit fury all over you and you will drown in it. You’re fucking dead, kiddo.

What an interesting way to put it...

Jedi, you could always have him fall victim to a Red Lantern Ring after being consumed by his anger. Since the Red Lantern Ring replaces your heart, removing it means death, and Asumar doesn't want to see his son corrupted and used by his own anger. In a tragic moment, Asumar must do the unthinkable, and kill his own son or else he'd unlock his "hidden potential" and wreak havoc across the galaxy.

[Altito Asmoro]

By the way, I just realized how hilarious it is that our Australian guy (Zark, right?) is one of the only people who doesn't shitpost.

He's Mexican.

[Finland SSR]

I'm considering it, but I need something viable to trigger the event...

What the fuck did you just fucking say about me, you little bitch? I’ll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Navy Seals, and I’ve been involved in numerous secret raids on Al-Quaeda, and I have over 300 confirmed kills. I am trained in gorilla warfare and I’m the top sniper in the entire US armed forces. You are nothing to me but just another target. I will wipe you the fuck out with precision the likes of which has never been seen before on this Earth, mark my fucking words. You think you can get away with saying that shit to me over the Internet? Think again, fucker. As we speak I am contacting my secret network of spies across the USA and your IP is being traced right now so you better prepare for the storm, maggot. The storm that wipes out the pathetic little thing you call your life. You’re fucking dead, kid. I can be anywhere, anytime, and I can kill you in over seven hundred ways, and that’s just with my bare hands. Not only am I extensively trained in unarmed combat, but I have access to the entire arsenal of the United States Marine Corps and I will use it to its full extent to wipe your miserable ass off the face of the continent, you little shit. If only you could have known what unholy retribution your little “clever” comment was about to bring down upon you, maybe you would have held your fucking tongue. But you couldn’t, you didn’t, and now you’re paying the price, you goddamn idiot. I will shit fury all over you and you will drown in it. You’re fucking dead, kiddo.

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Those are some good suggestions, and I think I'll do those. The nanotechnology he already has down, but the rest should be good.

Or maybe make his nanotechnology function as a dietary supplement. Helping burn off fat and build muscle to combat obesity.

Once that stuff happens. Earth'll be headed to FT territory.

Next step is space exploration.

FT means shit when we are still a disunited bunch that uses the tech to kill each other, rather than solve problems.