Hetland 2 wrote:Awww... in the two minutes my new app has been posted no one's commented on it... I even spent all that time making a cool quote and actually finishing it.
What do we say?
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by North America Inc » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:13 am
Hetland 2 wrote:Awww... in the two minutes my new app has been posted no one's commented on it... I even spent all that time making a cool quote and actually finishing it.

by North America Inc » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:13 am
Cainesland wrote:North America Inc wrote:Leopold? Congo? Rubber fields? Hands chopped off? No 19th Century Imperialism reference?
Actually that was one of the inspirations for the character
To be honest my character really should be accused of human rights violations (if those exist). Because he'd probably be convicted.


by Hetland 2 » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:14 am
we will send a air stare on libya if they don't stop their attack
The krang countered the wave with something. And continued to try and take over the decepticon seeker.
Everybody! Can you stop saying that the cargo ship sinking we have done lately was a war crime. We were trying to economically destroy the UK.
Mair glows brightly and transforms in a human, wearing a white cloak, "leave us"
"FIRE IN THE HOE" he bellowed before triggering the explosive.
Julius Ceasar was a normal 14 year old who played Elder Tale in Russia.
We have already established, more powerful beings are not a proper weakness.

by North America Inc » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:17 am

by Hetland 2 » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:18 am
we will send a air stare on libya if they don't stop their attack
The krang countered the wave with something. And continued to try and take over the decepticon seeker.
Everybody! Can you stop saying that the cargo ship sinking we have done lately was a war crime. We were trying to economically destroy the UK.
Mair glows brightly and transforms in a human, wearing a white cloak, "leave us"
"FIRE IN THE HOE" he bellowed before triggering the explosive.
Julius Ceasar was a normal 14 year old who played Elder Tale in Russia.
We have already established, more powerful beings are not a proper weakness.

by North America Inc » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:20 am
by Cainesland » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:20 am
although I think that may have been accomplished while he worked all those outside the nature preservation to the bone.
by North America Inc » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:20 am

by Doughertania » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:21 am
Hetland 2 wrote:Awww... in the two minutes my new app has been posted no one's commented on it... I even spent all that time making a cool quote and actually finishing it.

by Hetland 2 » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:25 am
Doughertania wrote:Hetland 2 wrote:Awww... in the two minutes my new app has been posted no one's commented on it... I even spent all that time making a cool quote and actually finishing it.
She seems like she'll be a really cool character, especially given the quote and complex nature, but I have a few concerns. I don't know about Lith, but I don't know if I like having players in control of WMDs. If there was a bio explanation for it I'd be more inclined to consider it, but there isn't. I think the app needs to be fleshed out more, especially you're elite team.
Does that make sense?
we will send a air stare on libya if they don't stop their attack
The krang countered the wave with something. And continued to try and take over the decepticon seeker.
Everybody! Can you stop saying that the cargo ship sinking we have done lately was a war crime. We were trying to economically destroy the UK.
Mair glows brightly and transforms in a human, wearing a white cloak, "leave us"
"FIRE IN THE HOE" he bellowed before triggering the explosive.
Julius Ceasar was a normal 14 year old who played Elder Tale in Russia.
We have already established, more powerful beings are not a proper weakness.

by North America Inc » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:25 am
Doughertania wrote:Hetland 2 wrote:Awww... in the two minutes my new app has been posted no one's commented on it... I even spent all that time making a cool quote and actually finishing it.
She seems like she'll be a really cool character, especially given the quote and complex nature, but I have a few concerns. I don't know about Lith, but I don't know if I like having players in control of WMDs. If there was a bio explanation for it I'd be more inclined to consider it, but there isn't. I think the app needs to be fleshed out more, especially you're elite team.
Does that make sense?
by Cainesland » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:26 am

by Hetland 2 » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:27 am
we will send a air stare on libya if they don't stop their attack
The krang countered the wave with something. And continued to try and take over the decepticon seeker.
Everybody! Can you stop saying that the cargo ship sinking we have done lately was a war crime. We were trying to economically destroy the UK.
Mair glows brightly and transforms in a human, wearing a white cloak, "leave us"
"FIRE IN THE HOE" he bellowed before triggering the explosive.
Julius Ceasar was a normal 14 year old who played Elder Tale in Russia.
We have already established, more powerful beings are not a proper weakness.

by North America Inc » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:28 am
Cainesland wrote:North America Inc wrote:What exactly are you doing on Mars?
Acting as the colonial governor of the largest and most advanced colony on the planet. Basically he is the representative of the board of governors of sinopec and acts as the head of the executive, legislative, and judiciary systems of the colony. He is there to work the lower classes (almost slaves in all but name) hard in order to generate wealth to send to the board of governors to maintain support and keep his position as has occurred for 90 years now in the ic.

by North America Inc » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:29 am

by Hetland 2 » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:31 am
we will send a air stare on libya if they don't stop their attack
The krang countered the wave with something. And continued to try and take over the decepticon seeker.
Everybody! Can you stop saying that the cargo ship sinking we have done lately was a war crime. We were trying to economically destroy the UK.
Mair glows brightly and transforms in a human, wearing a white cloak, "leave us"
"FIRE IN THE HOE" he bellowed before triggering the explosive.
Julius Ceasar was a normal 14 year old who played Elder Tale in Russia.
We have already established, more powerful beings are not a proper weakness.

by North America Inc » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:32 am

by Hetland 2 » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:34 am
we will send a air stare on libya if they don't stop their attack
The krang countered the wave with something. And continued to try and take over the decepticon seeker.
Everybody! Can you stop saying that the cargo ship sinking we have done lately was a war crime. We were trying to economically destroy the UK.
Mair glows brightly and transforms in a human, wearing a white cloak, "leave us"
"FIRE IN THE HOE" he bellowed before triggering the explosive.
Julius Ceasar was a normal 14 year old who played Elder Tale in Russia.
We have already established, more powerful beings are not a proper weakness.

by North America Inc » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:37 am
by Cainesland » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:39 am
North America Inc wrote:Cainesland wrote:
Acting as the colonial governor of the largest and most advanced colony on the planet. Basically he is the representative of the board of governors of sinopec and acts as the head of the executive, legislative, and judiciary systems of the colony. He is there to work the lower classes (almost slaves in all but name) hard in order to generate wealth to send to the board of governors to maintain support and keep his position as has occurred for 90 years now in the ic.
I know, i meant what do you plan to contribute to the IC so far away from the action?

by Hetland 2 » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:43 am
we will send a air stare on libya if they don't stop their attack
The krang countered the wave with something. And continued to try and take over the decepticon seeker.
Everybody! Can you stop saying that the cargo ship sinking we have done lately was a war crime. We were trying to economically destroy the UK.
Mair glows brightly and transforms in a human, wearing a white cloak, "leave us"
"FIRE IN THE HOE" he bellowed before triggering the explosive.
Julius Ceasar was a normal 14 year old who played Elder Tale in Russia.
We have already established, more powerful beings are not a proper weakness.

by Neema » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:43 am

by Doughertania » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:49 am
Hetland 2 wrote:Doughertania wrote:She seems like she'll be a really cool character, especially given the quote and complex nature, but I have a few concerns. I don't know about Lith, but I don't know if I like having players in control of WMDs. If there was a bio explanation for it I'd be more inclined to consider it, but there isn't. I think the app needs to be fleshed out more, especially you're elite team.
Does that make sense?
Elite team? No, she's just he head of it. As for the WMD part, one, it's heavily miniaturized, so, you know it can fit in the human body and still replace her heart... and while it's powerful... it also kinda destroys her the other reason why its nuclear is that nuclear is an actual power source and not just explosives. I haven't quite figured out why she has it but it seemed like a cool thing to put in TBPH.

by Hetland 2 » Mon Nov 02, 2015 1:07 am
Doughertania wrote:Hetland 2 wrote:
Elite team? No, she's just he head of it. As for the WMD part, one, it's heavily miniaturized, so, you know it can fit in the human body and still replace her heart... and while it's powerful... it also kinda destroys her the other reason why its nuclear is that nuclear is an actual power source and not just explosives. I haven't quite figured out why she has it but it seemed like a cool thing to put in TBPH.
Right I know she's the head, but just like how my character came from an elite team I still fleshed it out. And again, I'll let Lith be the final judge. I'm just a bit weary is all.
And dang it you guys! You've buried my data!
we will send a air stare on libya if they don't stop their attack
The krang countered the wave with something. And continued to try and take over the decepticon seeker.
Everybody! Can you stop saying that the cargo ship sinking we have done lately was a war crime. We were trying to economically destroy the UK.
Mair glows brightly and transforms in a human, wearing a white cloak, "leave us"
"FIRE IN THE HOE" he bellowed before triggering the explosive.
Julius Ceasar was a normal 14 year old who played Elder Tale in Russia.
We have already established, more powerful beings are not a proper weakness.
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