Razonica wrote:FATED Contestant Profile --
Name: Baldric, meaning, The One With Power
Age: 19
Appearance:(Image)
(That's what he looks like, he doesn't have a pet dragon...unless he can...
Gender|Sexuality:Male heterosexual
Allegiance: Mercurius
Uniform:(Image)
Class|Subclass: Battle Mage
General Skills: Arcane Arts (Fireball, Magic Missile, Ghoul Touch etc.), expert with wands, crossbow and a sickle (swordfighting etc)
Class Specific Skills: (basic skill, and then super skill, think this out thoroughly!)
Weapon: Crossbow (and sickle) (Sword, flail, mace, etc)
Personality: Friendly but reserved
How You Died: Baldric was never who who liked to push his luck. Being charismatic his entire life he could usually persuade others leave him be without insulting them. He had a few very close friends but liked reading alone most of the time. One rainy night he was making a left turn when he was driving. He hated driving at night, specially in the rain. As he turned a speeding car, who hadn't seen him, smashed into him, sending his car into a tree. (bio, in essence)
RP Example:https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=348232
Here's a little help
Name - I don't think anybody cares what it means.
General skills - magic in this category should be cantrip type stuff (if you play D&D) and possibly some sort of static ability which technically counts as magic (Sophia can fly, but that's because she couldn't even walk in life), creating magic lights, minor telekinesis (mage hand equivalent) would go in here.
Class Skills - this is where you should be putting your major damage and attack spells. Figure out some sort of magical skill you want that should be your primary attack, and than decide how it works. Next figure out a super attack related to your basic attack and make it, also remember that it should have some sort of long cooldown or something preventing it from being constantly used (Sophia's super attack requires that she doesn't use her basic attacks directly before hand and for a while after, however getting hit by it is not going to be pleasant).
Finally you should fix up the coding, and your bio needs a little more consistency. If he didn't like driving on rainy nights, than why was he speeding on a rainy night around a bend?


