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Postby Primordial Luxa » Mon Nov 30, 2015 2:48 pm

Remnants of Exilvania wrote:
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Did you want me to let him go?
I was under the impression it was important he be apprehended?

Nono!
It`s okay what you did.
I didn`t point out that he was carrying important documents with him for nothing.


I was actually thinking of "paperclipping" him.
Having him build stuff for the knights in exchange for not getting thrown in a tiny cell.
Does that sound fun?
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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Mon Nov 30, 2015 2:50 pm

Serah wrote:
Anowa wrote:Corporate warfare as in: "I'm stealing your patents kek"
"Nuuuuuuuuu..."


Oh boy, isn't this going to be fun.

I wonder if I should create an XCOM like force.
Plasma/Laser/Ballistic/Electric/Dozens of small alloys type of weapons.
Or people modified to be Metal gears.
Or Psycho Mantis.
Or genetically enhanced soldiers to be able to literally regenerate themselves.

Then again, bringing that would mean bringing up the Chrysalis.
Eh...

Looks like dangerous people...
Better send my N### Zombies after them...
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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Mon Nov 30, 2015 2:51 pm

Primordial Luxa wrote:
Remnants of Exilvania wrote:Nono!
It`s okay what you did.
I didn`t point out that he was carrying important documents with him for nothing.


I was actually thinking of "paperclipping" him.
Having him build stuff for the knights in exchange for not getting thrown in a tiny cell.
Does that sound fun?

Well, the Doctor himself isn`t really a mastermind. Except for the small energy shield device he hasn`t really invented anything. He`s just Dietrich`s personal Doctor.
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Postby Primordial Luxa » Mon Nov 30, 2015 4:09 pm

Remnants of Exilvania wrote:
Primordial Luxa wrote:
I was actually thinking of "paperclipping" him.
Having him build stuff for the knights in exchange for not getting thrown in a tiny cell.
Does that sound fun?

Well, the Doctor himself isn`t really a mastermind. Except for the small energy shield device he hasn`t really invented anything. He`s just Dietrich`s personal Doctor.


What kind of Nazi Doctor isn't also an evil genius?!?
Hmmp.
Alright then I'll drag him off and see if the others still need my help with the portal after wards.

In any case Chicago stuff is getting under way.
We could use a couple more people in the thread to help speed things along either with the Knights or another member of the Quartet.
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Postby Internationalist Bastard » Mon Nov 30, 2015 8:29 pm

Alright I'm pretty new to online rps so bear with me.
Super Identity: Guerrier
Real Identity: Chris Abdul
Age: 26
Gender: Ambiguous
Appearance:

Costume:http://comps.canstockphoto.com/can-stock-photo_csp5567842.jpg Main idea is homemade riot gear

Affiliations: Former GIGN
Morality: Chaotic Good
Powers: Advanced Combat Training
Equipment: Manurhin MR 73 pistol, Balistic Shield
Weakness: Normal Human, alcoholic
Personality: Wants to help others, but is disillusioned by governments everywhere. Took to vigilantism to fight their way.
Background: Born and raised in Lyons, France, Chris had been noticed for two things. A tendency to stand up for people getting picked on, and bashing bullies faces into the cobblestones. After narrowly avoiding a jail sentence, Chris joined the Gendarme, hoping to put those protective instincts to good use. However, their talent for marksmanship didn't go unnoticed, and was ultimatly stuck in GIGN. The events are classified, but after one Op, only Chris came back alive, with a discharge as a reward. Moving to America in hopes of a better life, all they saw was crime being handled horribly. Working a 9 to 5 at a mechanics in the inner city, crime seemed more rampant then ever. So Chris grabbed the old revolver, made a riot shield, and started a crusade.
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Postby Primordial Luxa » Mon Nov 30, 2015 8:33 pm

Internationalist Bastard wrote:Alright I'm pretty new to online rps so bear with me.
Super Identity: Guerrier
Real Identity: Chris Abdul
Age: 26
Gender: Ambiguous
Appearance:

Costume:http://comps.canstockphoto.com/can-stock-photo_csp5567842.jpg Main idea is homemade riot gear

Affiliations: Former GIGN
Morality: Chaotic Good
Powers: Advanced Combat Training
Equipment: Manurhin MR 73 pistol, Balistic Shield
Weakness: Normal Human, alcoholic
Personality: Wants to help others, but is disillusioned by governments everywhere. Took to vigilantism to fight their way.
Background: Born and raised in Lyons, France, Chris had been noticed for two things. A tendency to stand up for people getting picked on, and bashing bullies faces into the cobblestones. After narrowly avoiding a jail sentence, Chris joined the Gendarme, hoping to put those protective instincts to good use. However, their talent for marksmanship didn't go unnoticed, and was ultimatly stuck in GIGN. The events are classified, but after one Op, only Chris came back alive, with a discharge as a reward. Moving to America in hopes of a better life, all they saw was crime being handled horribly. Working a 9 to 5 at a mechanics in the inner city, crime seemed more rampant then ever. So Chris grabbed the old revolver, made a riot shield, and started a crusade.


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Postby Internationalist Bastard » Mon Nov 30, 2015 8:35 pm

Primordial Luxa wrote:
Internationalist Bastard wrote:Alright I'm pretty new to online rps so bear with me.
Super Identity: Guerrier
Real Identity: Chris Abdul
Age: 26
Gender: Ambiguous
Appearance:

Costume:http://comps.canstockphoto.com/can-stock-photo_csp5567842.jpg Main idea is homemade riot gear

Affiliations: Former GIGN
Morality: Chaotic Good
Powers: Advanced Combat Training
Equipment: Manurhin MR 73 pistol, Balistic Shield
Weakness: Normal Human, alcoholic
Personality: Wants to help others, but is disillusioned by governments everywhere. Took to vigilantism to fight their way.
Background: Born and raised in Lyons, France, Chris had been noticed for two things. A tendency to stand up for people getting picked on, and bashing bullies faces into the cobblestones. After narrowly avoiding a jail sentence, Chris joined the Gendarme, hoping to put those protective instincts to good use. However, their talent for marksmanship didn't go unnoticed, and was ultimatly stuck in GIGN. The events are classified, but after one Op, only Chris came back alive, with a discharge as a reward. Moving to America in hopes of a better life, all they saw was crime being handled horribly. Working a 9 to 5 at a mechanics in the inner city, crime seemed more rampant then ever. So Chris grabbed the old revolver, made a riot shield, and started a crusade.


Accepted

Yay
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Postby Internationalist Bastard » Mon Nov 30, 2015 9:32 pm

I just posted, but again I'm new to this so tell me if I fucked up
Call me Alex, I insist
I am a girl, damnit
Slut Pride. So like, real talk, I’m a porn actress. We’re not all bimbos. I do not give out my information or videos to avoid conflict with site policy. I’m happy to talk about the industry or my thoughts on the career but I will not be showing you any goodies. Sorry
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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Tue Dec 01, 2015 7:46 am

Primordial Luxa wrote:
Remnants of Exilvania wrote:Well, the Doctor himself isn`t really a mastermind. Except for the small energy shield device he hasn`t really invented anything. He`s just Dietrich`s personal Doctor.


What kind of Nazi Doctor isn't also an evil genius?!?
Hmmp.
Alright then I'll drag him off and see if the others still need my help with the portal after wards.

In any case Chicago stuff is getting under way.
We could use a couple more people in the thread to help speed things along either with the Knights or another member of the Quartet.

LoL


Who told you he was a N### doctor? Okay, wrong.
Who told Mark Ultra that he is a N### Doctor?
I didn`t see the picture having any signs leading to that belief and my Doctor also didn`t do anything to make it visible he is one.

And no. The amount of genuises Dietrich employed sunk rapidly after WW2 as most of the ne geniuses didn`t want to have to do anything with the evil N###s. Though he still has some he mainly uses a whole regiment of scientists to do the same what a few genuises with the right education and the right ressources can do.
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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Tue Dec 01, 2015 7:46 am

Primordial Luxa wrote:
Internationalist Bastard wrote:Alright I'm pretty new to online rps so bear with me.
Super Identity: Guerrier
Real Identity: Chris Abdul
Age: 26
Gender: Ambiguous
Appearance:

Costume:http://comps.canstockphoto.com/can-stock-photo_csp5567842.jpg Main idea is homemade riot gear

Affiliations: Former GIGN
Morality: Chaotic Good
Powers: Advanced Combat Training
Equipment: Manurhin MR 73 pistol, Balistic Shield
Weakness: Normal Human, alcoholic
Personality: Wants to help others, but is disillusioned by governments everywhere. Took to vigilantism to fight their way.
Background: Born and raised in Lyons, France, Chris had been noticed for two things. A tendency to stand up for people getting picked on, and bashing bullies faces into the cobblestones. After narrowly avoiding a jail sentence, Chris joined the Gendarme, hoping to put those protective instincts to good use. However, their talent for marksmanship didn't go unnoticed, and was ultimatly stuck in GIGN. The events are classified, but after one Op, only Chris came back alive, with a discharge as a reward. Moving to America in hopes of a better life, all they saw was crime being handled horribly. Working a 9 to 5 at a mechanics in the inner city, crime seemed more rampant then ever. So Chris grabbed the old revolver, made a riot shield, and started a crusade.


Accepted

Did I miss something or when did you become Co-OP?
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Postby Anowa » Tue Dec 01, 2015 7:56 am

Remnants of Exilvania wrote:
Primordial Luxa wrote:
Accepted

Did I miss something or when did you become Co-OP?

Since he took control of the Chicago thread.
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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Tue Dec 01, 2015 8:20 am

Anowa wrote:
Remnants of Exilvania wrote:Did I miss something or when did you become Co-OP?

Since he took control of the Chicago thread.

Ah
okay
it explains everything
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Postby Anowa » Fri Dec 04, 2015 3:35 pm

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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Fri Dec 04, 2015 3:52 pm

Anowa wrote:(Image)

We`re all waiting...
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Postby Bentus » Fri Dec 04, 2015 4:22 pm

Sorry, tons of work in the build up to finals.
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Postby Primordial Luxa » Fri Dec 04, 2015 4:29 pm

Bentus wrote:Sorry, tons of work in the build up to finals.

^this

But what would people like to see in Chicago?
Read as: What can I do to get you people too post in the thread?
Swith Witherward wrote:But I trust the people here. Well, except Prim. He has shifty eyes but his cute smile make up for it.

Monfrox wrote:But it's not like we've known Prim to really stick with normality...

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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Fri Dec 04, 2015 4:37 pm

Primordial Luxa wrote:
Bentus wrote:Sorry, tons of work in the build up to finals.

^this

But what would people like to see in Chicago?
Read as: What can I do to get you people too post in the thread?

You could maybe edit your last post concerning the doctor cause there`s no way that Mark would already know that the doctor is a fascist/N###.
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Postby Primordial Luxa » Fri Dec 04, 2015 4:47 pm

Remnants of Exilvania wrote:
Primordial Luxa wrote:^this

But what would people like to see in Chicago?
Read as: What can I do to get you people too post in the thread?

You could maybe edit your last post concerning the doctor cause there`s no way that Mark would already know that the doctor is a fascist/N###.


I already did, sorry, did I not TG you?
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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Fri Dec 04, 2015 4:58 pm

Primordial Luxa wrote:
Remnants of Exilvania wrote:You could maybe edit your last post concerning the doctor cause there`s no way that Mark would already know that the doctor is a fascist/N###.


I already did, sorry, did I not TG you?

Oh, damn!
And no, you didn`t TG me but atleast now I know.
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Postby Roikstead » Tue Dec 08, 2015 10:11 am

Super Identity:brawn
Real Identity:gethian ro
Is the true identity public knowledge or private?very private
Hero, Villain, or Neutral?wrong place wrong time sort deal on villain side
Age:22
Gender:male
Appearance: 13 foot blue all hairless pure white eyes giant






D&D Alignment: neutral but is forced to do bad things just to get food because of powers and his look
Powers:enhanced strength enhanced endurance a little over average speed and releases a scent that triggers fear in certain people and his skin is like bio armor but it is easy to get thru if shot enough
Equipment:
Power Origin:he just sort changed at the age of 15
Weaknesses: my stupidly/easy to trick
Personality:nice lay back guy but can get serious about certain things
Background:when he was 12 and he was in church he started to feel sick but it stopped after a few more minutes he started to feel intense pain and his skin felt like it was exploding and when it stopped he hear he was screaming so he covered his mouth but then he realized that no one was saying anything and when he went out the door there were cops and the service outside but they just started shooting the instant they saw him and after that it is all history

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Postby Anowa » Tue Dec 08, 2015 1:18 pm

Roikstead wrote:Super Identity:brawn
Real Identity:gethian ro
Is the true identity public knowledge or private?very private
Hero, Villain, or Neutral?wrong place wrong time sort deal on villain side
Age:22
Gender:male
Appearance: 13 foot blue all hairless pure white eyes giant






D&D Alignment: neutral but is forced to do bad things just to get food because of powers and his look
Powers:enhanced strength enhanced endurance a little over average speed and releases a scent that triggers fear in certain people and his skin is like bio armor but it is easy to get thru if shot enough
Equipment:
Power Origin:he just sort changed at the age of 15
Weaknesses: my stupidly/easy to trick
Personality:nice lay back guy but can get serious about certain things
Background:when he was 12 and he was in church he started to feel sick but it stopped after a few more minutes he started to feel intense pain and his skin felt like it was exploding and when it stopped he hear he was screaming so he covered his mouth but then he realized that no one was saying anything and when he went out the door there were cops and the service outside but they just started shooting the instant they saw him and after that it is all history

It won't get accepted.
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Postby Primordial Luxa » Tue Dec 08, 2015 2:02 pm

Anowa wrote:
Roikstead wrote:Super Identity:brawn
Real Identity:gethian ro
Is the true identity public knowledge or private?very private
Hero, Villain, or Neutral?wrong place wrong time sort deal on villain side
Age:22
Gender:male
Appearance: 13 foot blue all hairless pure white eyes giant






D&D Alignment: neutral but is forced to do bad things just to get food because of powers and his look
Powers:enhanced strength enhanced endurance a little over average speed and releases a scent that triggers fear in certain people and his skin is like bio armor but it is easy to get thru if shot enough
Equipment:
Power Origin:he just sort changed at the age of 15
Weaknesses: my stupidly/easy to trick
Personality:nice lay back guy but can get serious about certain things
Background:when he was 12 and he was in church he started to feel sick but it stopped after a few more minutes he started to feel intense pain and his skin felt like it was exploding and when it stopped he hear he was screaming so he covered his mouth but then he realized that no one was saying anything and when he went out the door there were cops and the service outside but they just started shooting the instant they saw him and after that it is all history

It won't get accepted.


Hes right. Perhaps you could add a bit more. Its very bare bones and their is a lot more detail that I would need to see before I'm willing to accept it.
Others might however but my suggested is more backstory and personality.
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Postby Anowa » Tue Dec 08, 2015 5:19 pm

Primordial Luxa wrote:
Anowa wrote:It won't get accepted.


Hes right. Perhaps you could add a bit more. Its very bare bones and their is a lot more detail that I would need to see before I'm willing to accept it.
Others might however but my suggested is more backstory and personality.

Oh no, it isn't so much about the details. It's about the distinct lack of punctuations and RP experience/example.
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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Wed Dec 09, 2015 8:13 am

Anowa wrote:
Primordial Luxa wrote:
Hes right. Perhaps you could add a bit more. Its very bare bones and their is a lot more detail that I would need to see before I'm willing to accept it.
Others might however but my suggested is more backstory and personality.

Oh no, it isn't so much about the details. It's about the distinct lack of punctuations and RP experience/example.

You bring it on the point.
It was the thing giving me a weird feeling when reading the app.
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Postby Roikstead » Wed Dec 09, 2015 9:52 am

i got that character out of a book so not my fault that it is just bare bones i just thought it be nice to rp as him and plus i act more stuff out then i put in certain application

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