Age of Shinobi (Always Open, Naruto, OOC)

[Sonitusia]

I'm rather surprised we don't have any sound ninja. Their powers were always some of the best mechanics wise.

I was thinking of making one (seeing as how sound manipulation is one of my favorite types of powers).

Maybe I will later :3

[Shadowwell]

So Landen when do you want to end this/how.
I am about to counter post

[Atlannia]

I'm rather surprised we don't have any sound ninja. Their powers were always some of the best mechanics wise.

I was thinking of making one (seeing as how sound manipulation is one of my favorite types of powers).

Maybe I will later :3

Dooo iiit. My kirigakure squad needs one more genin on it after Aidannadia nakes theirs so you could fill the last spot.

In unrelated news I found a candy store that appends "Believe it!" To all their sale notices. So like "3 chocolate bars for only 1.99 Believe it!" I couldn't see anyone with spiky blonde hair and an orange jumpsuit though.

[Shadowwell]

I was thinking of making one (seeing as how sound manipulation is one of my favorite types of powers).

Maybe I will later :3

Dooo iiit. My kirigakure squad needs one more genin on it after Aidannadia nakes theirs so you could fill the last spot.

In unrelated news I found a candy store that appends "Believe it!" To all their sale notices. So like "3 chocolate bars for only 1.99 Believe it!" I couldn't see anyone with spiky blonde hair and an orange jumpsuit though.

Would you really buy somethign from a store that went that far.

[United States of Indonesia]

What happened to Naruto's kids? Boruto & Himawari? Where's Sarada? And the rest of the kids of the characters? (i.e, Shikadai, Chouchou, Inojin.) They would've been adults by the time of this RP, right?

[Landenburg]

So Landen when do you want to end this/how.
I am about to counter post

I'd wait for Imp and let Imp end it with a scolding or something like that.

[Shadowwell]

What happened to Naruto's kids? Boruto & Himawari? Where's Sarada? And the rest of the kids of the characters? (i.e, Shikadai, Chouchou, Inojin.) They would've been adults by the time of this RP, right?

This is a while after that i think Neros said 200 years, or someone did.

Ok Landen i will counterpost then you react then we wait. Unless Imp can react in time.

[Sonitusia]

I was thinking of making one (seeing as how sound manipulation is one of my favorite types of powers).

Maybe I will later :3

Dooo iiit. My kirigakure squad needs one more genin on it after Aidannadia nakes theirs so you could fill the last spot.

In unrelated news I found a candy store that appends "Believe it!" To all their sale notices. So like "3 chocolate bars for only 1.99 Believe it!" I couldn't see anyone with spiky blonde hair and an orange jumpsuit though.

I'll get the app up later then

[United States of Indonesia]

What happened to Naruto's kids? Boruto & Himawari? Where's Sarada? And the rest of the kids of the characters? (i.e, Shikadai, Chouchou, Inojin.) They would've been adults by the time of this RP, right?

This is a while after that i think Neros said 200 years, or someone did.

Ok Landen i will counterpost then you react then we wait. Unless Imp can react in time.

Wait, 200 years? I thought that it is written in the first page that this RP is set 100 years after the 4th Ninja War?

[Shadowwell]

This is a while after that i think Neros said 200 years, or someone did.

Ok Landen i will counterpost then you react then we wait. Unless Imp can react in time.

Wait, 200 years? I thought that it is written in the first page that this RP is set 100 years after the 4th Ninja War?

I know jackshit about Naruto, so therefore I shall stalk this thread.

I probs know even less, man, Rob wanted this to happen and I was alright with it as well. That's why it's like, hundreds of years after Naruto. We can just build our own world at this point.

But it says in the OP its a hundred, we will have to verify.

[The Templar High Council]

What happened to Naruto's kids? Boruto & Himawari? Where's Sarada? And the rest of the kids of the characters? (i.e, Shikadai, Chouchou, Inojin.) They would've been adults by the time of this RP, right?

150 years, approximately. Every character seen in the Naruto anime/manga is dead. New generation and all that.

[Aidannadia]

Name:Bachi Buta

Age: 16

Rank: (Academy Student, Genin, Chūnin, Jōnin): Genin

Gender: Male

Native Land/Village: Kirigakure

Current Village of Residence: Kirigakure

Appearance: http://dongbufeng.net/site1/images/stories/pipsqueak.GIF
Imagine this with two huge, long drums on his back for carrying water.

Personality: Bachi is rather slow, but he is also very caring. He finds beauty in simple things. He has a protective nature, as if by instinct, coming to the aid of the needy. He can become confused easily. He is very loyal and loves to follow orders if you ask nicely.

Biography: Bachi was born to the Buta Clan, a clan known for it's intelligence and mud-jutsu, but he definitely sticks out among them. While most seem to have genius level intellect and are known for being overweight, Bachi was born with a learning disability. He was not only not as smart as his clansmen, but he was even not on the level of the average citizen at the same age.

His parents worried, but they also were overcome with love for him and he returned that kindness back. For years, they would tell him stories of the great ninja's that kept Kirigakure safe. He grew up with those stories as a guiding star. After weeks of begging, his parents allowed him to attend the academy.

The problem was that not everyone was as nice as his family. Bachi failed over and over again and received bullying every day at the academy, but he never did beat the other kids for it. His parents began to have their doubts, but Bachi worked hard day in and day out. He worked for hours, too stubborn to quit trying to learn jutsu.

Eventually, after being held back once already, he passed the class with the lowest score possible to pass and never has Bachi ever been so elated as when he learned he could be a ninja. He continues to train in the mud style jutsu of his family, but his skills are limited.

Goals:To help people. To earn favor with people.

Strengths:
Incredibly Strong. This Strength also allows him to propel himself forward at high speed, though turning is an issue. This always makes closing distances easier, as most of his stength relies in beating the enemy.
He's durable and hard to knock down. The guy weighs more than twice what everyone else does and he's always wearing heavy armor. He can soak up blows easily.
He has a protective nature and will not stop until his friends are safe.
Bachi has spent a lot of time training in the mud. Walking, sliding while upright, and standing in it are no problem for him.

Weaknesses:
Not terribly bright. He'll be fooled by almost any genjutsu and any ninjutsu that is countered by something other than a big punch will go over his head.
Not agile. Dodging is an issue for this guy, even if his speed can get ridiculous.
Can intervene in situations to help people when it isn't appropriate.
Can't use jutsu with no water.

Specialty Jutsu(s):
Mud Terrain Technique- Bachi dumps the water on his back onto the ground, soaking much of the immediate area in water.
Mud Release: Mud Restraint Jutsu- The mud pulls the target's ankles under, causing them to be trapped until they can force themselves out. If the user focuses, they can dig the target deeper or even just dig them deeper.
Mud Release: Gunk Shot- Bachi spits a large mound of mud from his mouth, formed from chakra.
Mud Release: Mud Shield- The mud is raised and hardened to deflect an attack.

Kekkei Genkai: Mud Affinity

[Sonitusia]

Name: Heiki Wakana
Age: 14
Rank: Genin
Gender: Female
Native Land/Village: Land of Sound
Current Village of Residence: Kirigakure
Appearance:

Personality: Friendly but at times aloof
Biography:
Born to two ninjas of the Heiki clan, Wakana's family were wanderers who simply did work here and there for random people. Though not much of Wakana's past was really remembered by the girl, she does keep in her heart one moment that would change her life forever.

Blood. Bones. The feeling of horror looking at the body her parents had murdered. The parent's knew what the job entitled, but it was the first time they'd been employed to do something like this. Young Wakana wasn't ready for it, and she ran without thinking. Her bloodline showed itself during this time, and through tears of confusion she played music that would keep her from being found or could keep people away from her. After a few months, she stumbled into the Land of Water, and through weary eyes could see that she was being carried inside by a hunter-nin. Questions were asked, but nothing could be said about what the girl could have possibly been doing.

She was then taken under the care of the hunter-nin that had found her, and she began studying in the village. She proved herself a capable kunoichi, and graduated as one of the top of her class when moving onto genin.
Goals: Has none as of the moment, is simply moving on as life does its work.
Strengths:

• Very good at trapping things.
• Excellent chakra control.
• Can play music very well.

Weaknesses:

• Frail.
• Relatively low chakra reserves.
• Still trying to cope with the thought of killing.

Specialty Jutsu(s):

• Sound Release: Soundwave - A genjutsu technique that makes the opponent feel as if they're melting into a wave of sound, which the source can control at will, making them sharper or turn into a soothing tune. This skill mainly focuses on keeping the target inside, making them feel at ease.
• Sound Release: Sonic Boom - The user will create an extremely pressurized ball of pure sound in their palm, of which they can then use to strike their opponent and send a violent wave of vibration that can severely cripple a part of their body.
• Sound Release: Deafen - A blast of mind-numbing noise, those trapped in this jutsu will lose all sense of hearing.
• Sound Release: Banshee - A high pitch screech will emit, stunning anyone in its path.
• Sound Release: Melody - Allows her to quickly recharge her chakra, at the expense that she cannot use any other justu during the time and her speed is significantly slower. Will emit a calming tune during the time it's used.

Kekkei Genkai: Neton (Sound Release)

[The Rebel Alliances]

What happened to Naruto's kids? Boruto & Himawari? Where's Sarada? And the rest of the kids of the characters? (i.e, Shikadai, Chouchou, Inojin.) They would've been adults by the time of this RP, right?

I am now conflicted, I am glad some of my favorite ships are now canon, but the names are absolutely horrible. At least in English. I mean...Boruto? Shikadai? Inojin? Really? And all the crap Sasuke pulls and he still gets Sakura? It should have been Rock Lee. In fact, I dont think Lee got anyone.

So, apparently it was
Naruto-Hinata(This or you were wrong!)
Sasuke-Sakura(I really...dont like this pairing. Seems like domestic violence and 50 shades too grey to me)
Shikamaru-Temari(Everyone shipped this, only other possibility was Shoho, which I would not have been mad at)
Ino-Sai(I shipped this, so I am happy)
Choji-Kurai(This one really shocked me, I expected the Ramen shop girl)

But seeing Kakashi become the sixth Hokage is cool, no big surprise there. Guess Might Guy did 10,000 laps that day.

But, I suppose the ending is not so bad overall, biggest complaint is those kids names. Think God the main series was not called 'Boruto'.

[Sonitusia]

Guess Might Guy did 10,000 laps that day.

That might've been hard...

[The Rebel Alliances]

Guess Might Guy did 10,000 laps that day.

That might've been hard...

Nah, Guy does that on his hands for a warm up.

But I just found out...that the third teammate for Boruto and Sarada is the child of Orochimaru....

I am sooo....disappointed. That, makes no sense. I mean, they make a new Ino-Shika-Cho and when it came time to find a third member for the new 'Team 7' so to speak, they just invented a child for a failed and bland villain. Anybody would have been better, Akarmaur's pup would have been better.

Not even Kabuto, the deceased Orochimaru who had no family. The wiki even states, no one knows where this child came from. Watch it be a clone....or Anko is somehow the mom. If they do that to her, that will just...it's too bad to contemplate.

[Sonitusia]

That might've been hard...

Nah, Guy does that on his hands for a warm up.

You do realize he's a cripple, right?

[The Rebel Alliances]

Nah, Guy does that on his hands for a warm up.

You do realize he's a cripple, right?

You say it like it is a handicap. Not for him. But yeah, just a reference to his self challenges.

Just read more on Mitsuki...must....not....

Apparently, Mitsuki had the audacity to say that his 'father' still no idea how on earth this occurred. Is more powerful than Naruto and Sasuke. I mean, the crap had me raging. Orochimaru is not worthy to be called a Sanin. His feats are minimal and non existent when compared to most comparable characters, and a quick sum up.

Naruto
-Mastered Sage Jutsu
-Defeated the Six Pains
No more feats are needed and that is just to the invasion of Pain arc, I dont even know what he does after.

Sasuke
-Killed Danzo
-Battled Killer B(Lost but still went toe to toe)
-Went toe to toe with Itachi(Who Orochimaru could not defeat if he was dreaming it)
-Battled all five Kage
And again, this is not even all of the feats and only goes up to around the same point I believe.

Now, for all I can think of for Orochimaru
-Caused the Death of 3rd Hokage(He killed himself, and he was far from his prime, and Orochimaru was in his prime, I think)
-Battled Jiraiya and Tsunade(While he was crippled, Jiraiya was poisoned and I think Tsunade was healthy)
-Failed to gain Itachi's Body
-Akatsuki drop out
-Failed to gain Sasuke's body
-Killed By Sasuke
-Trained, and abandoned Anko(Seriously, best part about his character was Anko)

Orochimaru was barely a decent opening villain. I, just really dislike his character, and inventing a child for him and throwing him in the story was just...laziness.

[Sonitusia]

You do realize he's a cripple, right?

You say it like it is a handicap. Not for him. But yeah, just a reference to his self challenges.

But being confined to a wheelchair isn't a handicap, that's just something he can't avoid anymore.

[Atlannia]

Okay here's the completed app. Besides adding the pictures I added few fire jutsus to combo with the alcohol thing.


Name: Momo Umewari
Age: 28
Rank: jonin
Gender: female
Native Land/Village: Kirigakure
Current Village of Residence: Kirigakure
Appearance:

Personality: Lazy, carefree and more interested in fishing and drinking then fighting or training her students. When riled up Momo has a fiery temper however, especially when the few people she holds dear are threatened.
Biography: Momo was born to a simple fishing family in a simple fishing village and frankly would have preferred it if her life never got more complicated than that. She like fishing, liked the roar of the ocean in her ears and the solitude, the feeling of being incomprehensibly small compared to something incomprehensibly vast. She was already noted as one of the finest fishers and sailors in the village when her Father lost the family boat in an ill-advised game of dice. With the family bankrupt, Momo reluctantly announced her intention to become a shinobi in order to earn enough money to buy back their boat. She entered the Kirigakure's academy at the age of twelve and got off to what is universally considered a bad start. Her fellow students considered her an uppity peasant who should know her place, she considered them a bunch of uppity twerps who hadn't worked a real day in their life. This friction combined with Momo's temper was more than enough to start plenty of fights, especially when her carefree attitude caused her to sleep in class, neglect her training but somehow still get above average marks, infuriating her class mates. A gang of academy students ambushed her after class one day, with the attention of dumping her in the ocean she seemed so fond of, but there attack revealed something interesting.

Nobody could seem to hit her. A childhood spent with almost as much time on boats as on the land had left the fisherman's daughter with an amazing sense of balance and she had learned to fight by watching her Father and other drunken sailors brawl in the village tavern. Her fighting style was unpredictable and difficult to hit, reminiscent of the drunken fist. Momo left the "ambush" completely untouched while the rest of the students were left unconscious. When almost half of the class turned up to class the next day covered in bruises the staff quickly pieced together what had happened and discovered that the lazy looking girl was something of a prodigy.

Momo would easily pass her exams and start taking on more dangerous and important missions. In fact she very quickly earned the money she needed to buy a boat and did so, but was persuaded to stay on as a shinobi by the prospect of eventually buying an even better boat. Every time she would get bored and try to leave her superiors would talk her out of it, sweet talking her with visions of the greatest fishing boat the world had ever seen. In the mean time she continued refining her taijutsu, turning it onto a unique style she named the drunken fisherman style, eventually incorporating the unorthodox weapon of a fishing rod into it after she carried hers into battle when she was suddenly called upon while fishing and being too lazy to drop it off at home on the way there. She was on the verge of retiring for good however when the Mizukage came up with a solution. Teaching. Although she acts grumpy towards them, Momo secretly likes children and she was promised that teaching would be far less effort than going on normal missions so, with a token amount of grumbling, she accepted this new mission, though not without her fishing rod and a bottle of sake by her side.
Goals: Drink, fish retire to drink and fish even more. Momo prefers to get by in life with as little effort as possible so it’s not exactly accurate to describe her as having goals.
Strengths: Momo is a dangerous master of taijutsu, her unique, drunken fisherman style is unpredictable and almost impossible to pin down, using the rolling motions of the waves to avoid blows and redirect enemy force. In addition she also wields two unusual weapons: a specially modified fishing rod, its hook is capable of knocking out of the air or even catching projectiles and can tear vicious wounds in the enemy's flesh and a bottle of sake which she can, you know, hit people with. She also uses the bottle as the base for her special Sake Release techniques.
Momo has a natural affinity for water release style jutsus, having mastered many advanced ones and can also throw around a pretty decent fire release jutsu. This seems like a counter productive combination until one realises Momo has discovered how to manipulate alcohol with her water jutsus, a favourite tactic is to douse her enemies with booze and then light them on fire with a basic fire jutsu, or use the liquid to amplify her more powerful jutsus.
Weaknesses: Aside form obvious elemental weaknesses, Momo's major vulnerability is that she isn't particularly fast. She relies on efficient, unpredictable movements and reading her opponent to stay ahead of them but this leaves her at a disadvantage against long range attacks and very fast, skilful opponents.
Specialty Jutsu(s):
Drunken Fisherman style taijutsu
water release: water clone technique
water release: water gun technique
water release: hiding in rain technique
water release: exploding water colliding wave
sake release: Infinitely full sake bottle technique
Highly flammable sake clone technique
sake release: Highly flammable exploding sake colliding wave
fire release: fire dragon bullet
fire release: running fire
fire release: hiding in ash and dust technique
Kekkei Genkai: Sake Release: Not a true Kekkei Genkai as it relies only on Momo's mastery of water release: however it only unlocks its full potential when combined with her fire release jutsus and it seems to be unique to Momo, or at least; no one else has bothered to master such an odd technique. As the name implies, Momo can manipulate alcohol the same way other shinobi manipulate water, even converting her chakra into additional alcohol as the tactical situation (or her thirst) dictates. Highly lethal when combined with fire.

[New Rob Halfordia]

Any thoughts on my post?

[Atlannia]

you talking to the people involved in the scene or just looking for general comments?

[New Rob Halfordia]

you talking to the people involved in the scene or just looking for general comments?

General comments.

[New Rob Halfordia]

Edited muh post. I forgot to mention that Akira is the one who told Kaizo to protect Akiko.

[Atlannia]

Okay, the actions clean and easy to follow, the use of the booulder jutsus was fun. I don't really have any improvements to suggest. If you wanted to extend it you could do a little more introspection or plan a counter attack but it's fine as is.