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Mavorpen wrote:

The Silhouette of Adventure wrote:It's midnight here. Cut me a break.

No.

Anyway, no, Annihilus is dead as well as the Supreme Intelligence. Whom I'm just now realizing is called "High Intelligence" in your post.

The Republic of Atria wrote:

New Neros wrote:
Happy for you, because you don't have to share a page with my much greater post.

I'm enjoying the world building you've been creating, especially the Aquaman-Namor relations!

But Hank Pym seems uncharacteristically asshole-ish. But it sets the mood nicely.

To be fair. Hank doesn't get a lot of respect nowadays... Dude did some pretty crude shit.

The Silhouette of Adventure wrote:

New Neros wrote:
Happy for you, because you don't have to share a page with my much greater post.

I'm enjoying the world building you've been creating, especially the Aquaman-Namor relations!

But Hank Pym seems uncharacteristically asshole-ish. But it sets the mood nicely.

I know, right? It's so good for me!

Thanks! As for Pym, in my Universe he found out he was Scientist Supreme by plot convenience, and he let it go way to his head.

The Silhouette of Adventure wrote:

Mavorpen wrote:No.

Anyway, no, Annihilus is dead as well as the Supreme Intelligence. Whom I'm just now realizing is called "High Intelligence" in your post.

...s***. Anyway, fixing Supreme Intelligence, and I... Actually didn't know that, haha. Anyway, my Universe branched off AGES ago, so they aren't dead in my world. *nods*

New Neros wrote:

The Republic of Atria wrote:
To be fair. Hank doesn't get a lot of respect nowadays... Dude did some pretty crude shit.

Dude beat his wife. Like, legit domestic abuse - no clue how Marvel got away with that shit.

New Neros wrote:

The Republic of Atria wrote:
To be fair. Hank doesn't get a lot of respect nowadays... Dude did some pretty crude shit.

Dude beat his wife. Like, legit domestic abuse - no clue how Marvel got away with that shit.

The Silhouette of Adventure wrote:I know, right? It's so good for me!

Thanks! As for Pym, in my Universe he found out he was Scientist Supreme by plot convenience, and he let it go way to his head.

Things are looking up for ol' Silh!

I see! I can understand now - Hank just gets a big ass ego since he has no other heroes to help shape his moral compass and how not to be a mad scientist.

Mavorpen wrote:

The Silhouette of Adventure wrote:...s***. Anyway, fixing Supreme Intelligence, and I... Actually didn't know that, haha. Anyway, my Universe branched off AGES ago, so they aren't dead in my world. *nods*

I know, I just think it's funny.

Mavorpen wrote:

New Neros wrote:Dude beat his wife. Like, legit domestic abuse - no clue how Marvel got away with that shit.

He didn't actually "beat" her. He backhanded her, which was actually not even meant to happen. The artist fucked up, but it was too late to change it.

The Silhouette of Adventure wrote:

New Neros wrote:Dude beat his wife. Like, legit domestic abuse - no clue how Marvel got away with that shit.



Things are looking up for ol' Silh!

I see! I can understand now - Hank just gets a big ass ego since he has no other heroes to help shape his moral compass and how not to be a mad scientist.

Now I'm imagining him and Stark sitting in High School desks with Beast as their teacher. "Welcome class, to How Not To Be A Mad Scientist, 101!"

New Neros wrote:

Mavorpen wrote:He didn't actually "beat" her. He backhanded her, which was actually not even meant to happen. The artist fucked up, but it was too late to change it.

Looking it up, it seems you're right. Damnit, Jim Shooter! But for real though, you see the Ultimate version of Hank Pym? Literally tried to kill his wife, Wasp, for making him look "small". He attacked his wife with fuckin' ants while she was Wasp-sized. Check it:

Mavorpen wrote:

New Neros wrote:

Looking it up, it seems you're right. Damnit, Jim Shooter! But for real though, you see the Ultimate version of Hank Pym? Literally tried to kill his wife, Wasp, for making him look "small". He attacked his wife with fuckin' ants while she was Wasp-sized. Check it:

Yeah, Ultimate Hank and Reed are assholes.

New Neros wrote:

Mavorpen wrote:Yeah, Ultimate Hank and Reed are assholes.

Hank is literal scumbag, but Reed is just batshit crazy.

But, crazy enough to survive into the Secret Wars. Loved the little quip where Doom was like "RICHARDS!" and Maker is just like "Dis nigga talking about me?" and Maximus is like "...No, not really."

The Silhouette of Adventure wrote:So does anyone have actual critique for the post, instead of just saying it's good?

New Neros wrote:

The Silhouette of Adventure wrote:So does anyone have actual critique for the post, instead of just saying it's good?

I'd say making larger paragraphs and bits of more detail. Your interactions are good, along with mood, but the setting seems dry and unexplored at times.

The Starlight wrote:

The Silhouette of Adventure wrote:Scorched Earth. Red Sea. Empty Sky.

That's the subtitles of my next No More Heroes post. Sorry for the ominous

That's rather grim.

Question for you all. How do you imagine your characters to sound like, rather, who?

For Craig, Idris Elba. As for the rest, no idea.

Lavan Tiri wrote:

New Rob Halfordia wrote:No...

Just, no.

Yes…

Just, yes.

Mewsland wrote:Do apps go in here or am I missing something in the instructions? Sorry, folks, little confused.

Osnil wrote:Once Quavv and I are finished with Hydra, I plan on doing stuff with the Amazons.

So, who should be the Hydra Commander in China? Any ideas? Preferrably someone-expendable.

The Silhouette of Adventure wrote:

New Neros wrote:I'd say making larger paragraphs and bits of more detail. Your interactions are good, along with mood, but the setting seems dry and unexplored at times.

Hmm. Looking over my writing, I see what you mean. My plan for every future piece of this saga is for it to be longer than the last, and keeping that in mind will probably help that goal, haha.

Mewsland wrote:Alright. Thank you. Will be setting to work on an app here shortly.

Osnil wrote:Once Quavv and I are finished with Hydra, I plan on doing stuff with the Amazons.

So, who should be the Hydra Commander in China? Any ideas? Preferrably someone-expendable.

Osnil wrote:So, after being inspired to create a character with a Mexican accent after watching Puss in Boots, and wishing to create a character for YB, you shall all pray for mercy from:

Name/Alias: Sancho Galan aka the Panther

Gender: Male

Age: 15

Appearance(Pics are fine, include costume if needed!): Normal-without the weapon in his hand
hat
Cape
Shirt
Pants
Winged Panther Form


Species: Mutant

Backstory: Sancho was a normal child. Except for the fact that: an ancient spirit has roamed the Earth for centuries to find those who should possess the power it can grant. Shortly after Sancho was born in Ecuador, the spirit entered him, giving him the Spirit of the Panther. Sancho did not know he held this ancient power until he turned thirteen, and got into a stressful argument which he then turned into a winged panther. He lost control and killed five people. When he was no longer a panther, he found that his normal appearance had changed as well and he held powers that he couldn't control. So, he packed up his feather hat and left for Charles Xavier's School.

He spent much time in Xavier's school trying to hide the beast within him. Many of his teachers explained to him that it was a gift just like the others. He didn't think so. He finally ran away after realizing what they wanted him to do would not help. He spent the year after learning fencing and physical combat.

Personality-wise, Sancho tends to be very egotistical and isn't worried about the odds.

Powers and Abilities:
Humanish form (he's not at full potential, so the list isn't complete)-
Always lands on his feet
He speaks both Spanish and English
Panther form:
Flight

He is also an avid fencer and plays the guitar.

Weaknesses:
When in Panther form, he usually loses control of himself.
His pride is often his biggest weakness.
Destructive Capacity: Street Level

Speed: 10 m/s when in Panther form, 1 m/s when in human form

Durability: Small Building Level

Lifting Strength: Class 5

Striking Strength: Class KJ

Energy Projection

Standard Equipment:
Rapier
Intelligence: Average human

Optional stuff.

Theme song: Mexican Music rocks

Random Facts about your character: He has a very thick Spanish Accent

Altito Asmoro wrote:

Osnil wrote:Once Quavv and I are finished with Hydra, I plan on doing stuff with the Amazons.

So, who should be the Hydra Commander in China? Any ideas? Preferrably someone-expendable.

Dr Fu Manchu?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fu_Manchu