Compass Books [RP Group]

[Saleon]

"Once upon a time, there was a bookstore."

can you also add my characters to the list on the front page?

[Altito Asmoro]

Well, I sometimes replied here without or showing less emotions.

By here I meant in my entire career in NS.

Atleast you have a career...

And you don't, Donner?

I mean, we both have portfolios. Not that it will be important in RL...not very...

[The Burning Sun]

"Once upon a time, there was a bookstore."

can you also add my characters to the list on the front page?

FUCK

I totally forgot.

[Empire of Donner land]

Atleast you have a career...

And you don't, Donner?

I mean, we both have portfolios. Not that it will be important in RL...not very...

Not... really. I don't think very highly of myself if you can't tell.

I just popped off a shitty character to join the RP, so behold your eyes on the inadequacy that is my writing.

[Charlia]

And you don't, Donner?

I mean, we both have portfolios. Not that it will be important in RL...not very...

Not... really. I don't think very highly of myself if you can't tell.

I just popped off a shitty character to join the RP, so behold your eyes on the inadequacy that is my writing.

You used three paragraphs for the personality.

How is that inadequate?!


Coming from someone with incredibly low self-esteem, DUDE, LOOK AGAIN. You're way NEATer than you think you are, broski. Just... take another look.

[Empire of Donner land]

Not... really. I don't think very highly of myself if you can't tell.

I just popped off a shitty character to join the RP, so behold your eyes on the inadequacy that is my writing.

You used three paragraphs for the personality.

How is that inadequate?!


Coming from someone with incredibly low self-esteem, DUDE, LOOK AGAIN. You're way NEATer than you think you are, broski. Just... take another look.

I've looked, all I see is another shitty character that I've made.

Everyone else's are way better.

[Charlia]

You used three paragraphs for the personality.

How is that inadequate?!


Coming from someone with incredibly low self-esteem, DUDE, LOOK AGAIN. You're way NEATer than you think you are, broski. Just... take another look.

I've looked, all I see is another shitty character that I've made.

Everyone else's are way better.

Not mine, broski. Not mine.

[Empire of Donner land]

I've looked, all I see is another shitty character that I've made.

Everyone else's are way better.

Not mine, broski. Not mine.

Thanks, Char. I guess.

[Altito Asmoro]

You used three paragraphs for the personality.

How is that inadequate?!


Coming from someone with incredibly low self-esteem, DUDE, LOOK AGAIN. You're way NEATer than you think you are, broski. Just... take another look.

I've looked, all I see is another shitty character that I've made.

Everyone else's are way better.

Mine's not long.

And I'm bad at making personality.

[The Burning Sun]

You used three paragraphs for the personality.

How is that inadequate?!


Coming from someone with incredibly low self-esteem, DUDE, LOOK AGAIN. You're way NEATer than you think you are, broski. Just... take another look.

I've looked, all I see is another shitty character that I've made.

Everyone else'sMost of the others are way better.

FTFY

I crie when my character is still not there after a month

[Empire of Donner land]

I've looked, all I see is another shitty character that I've made.

Everyone else'sMost of the others are way better.

FTFY

I crie when my character is still not there after a month

That one is way better than mine imo.

[The Burning Sun]

FTFY

I crie when my character is still not there after a month

That one is way better than mine imo.

Who is it? I don't see an app on the front page.

[Empire of Donner land]

That one is way better than mine imo.

Who is it? I don't see an app on the front page.

It's on 88. I think. If you want to see it.

Edited for my own stupidity.

[The Burning Sun]

Who is it? I don't see an app on the front page.

It's on 87. I think. If you want to see it.

Well, I do, and I have.

...processing app...

Huh, I certainly can't fault you for lack of effort. Have you ever thought about punctuation other than commas and periods? Your style is one of the few that could benefit from some nice colons (not the anal kind), sexy semi's, and maybe some unorthodox ones like the dash I personally use.

[Altito Asmoro]

It's on 87. I think. If you want to see it.

Well, I do, and I have.

...processing app...

Huh, I certainly can't fault you for lack of effort. Have you ever thought about punctuation other than commas and periods? Your style is one of the few that could benefit from some nice colons (not the anal kind), sexy semi's, and maybe some unorthodox ones like the dash I personally use.

A...Anal kind?

[Charlia]

Well, I do, and I have.

...processing app...

Huh, I certainly can't fault you for lack of effort. Have you ever thought about punctuation other than commas and periods? Your style is one of the few that could benefit from some nice colons (not the anal kind), sexy semi's, and maybe some unorthodox ones like the dash I personally use.

A...Anal kind?

...Colon?

...As in, colon cancer, or colonoscopy?

[The Burning Sun]

A...Anal kind?

...Colon?

...As in, colon cancer, or colonoscopy?

This is a colon::

U c wat I did thar?

[Charlia]

...Colon?

...As in, colon cancer, or colonoscopy?

This is a colon::

U c wat I did thar?

I know what a colon is. I know what both kinds are. Alt just seemed a tad confused about what you meant by 'anal kind' so I elaborated.


Although, now that I think about it, it's more likely that it was intended to sound afraid...

[Empire of Donner land]

It's on 87. I think. If you want to see it.

Well, I do, and I have.

...processing app...

Huh, I certainly can't fault you for lack of effort. Have you ever thought about punctuation other than commas and periods? Your style is one of the few that could benefit from some nice colons (not the anal kind), sexy semi's, and maybe some unorthodox ones like the dash I personally use.

I've thought about using dashes. I'll try it more. Never really used colons (other than some dialogue) and semi's. Examples?

My itch with it is I can't seem to make a good character, one that I like atleast.

[The Burning Sun]

This is a colon::

U c wat I did thar?

I know what a colon is. I know what both kinds are. Alt just seemed a tad confused about what you meant by 'anal kind' so I elaborated.


Although, now that I think about it, it's more likely that it was intended to sound afraid...

The answer should probably be obvious, but I have to wonder why you chose two of the worst things that can happen to your colon as examples.

I'm also pretty sure Alt is not a native speaker (maybe?) so I elaborated just in case. Definitely not meant to cause offense.

[Charlia]

I know what a colon is. I know what both kinds are. Alt just seemed a tad confused about what you meant by 'anal kind' so I elaborated.


Although, now that I think about it, it's more likely that it was intended to sound afraid...

The answer should probably be obvious, but I have to wonder why you chose two of the worst things that can happen to your colon as examples.

I'm also pretty sure Alt is not a native speaker (maybe?) so I elaborated just in case. Definitely not meant to cause offense.

Because I'm Charlias Moffatis. I feed off blood, tears, psychological torment, and human souls. I'm the bloody Red Queen, and if I can bring trauma, I will bring trauma.


...In other words, what you just witnessed was what I do when I'm bored. Worst-case scenarios.

[Empire of Donner land]

The answer should probably be obvious, but I have to wonder why you chose two of the worst things that can happen to your colon as examples.

I'm also pretty sure Alt is not a native speaker (maybe?) so I elaborated just in case. Definitely not meant to cause offense.

Because I'm Charlias Moffatis. I feed off blood, tears, psychological torment, and human souls. I'm the bloody Red Queen, and if I can bring trauma, I will bring trauma.


...In other words, what you just witnessed was what I do when I'm bored. Worst-case scenarios.

Here, mine will feed you for atleast 20 years.

[Stormwrath]

The answer should probably be obvious, but I have to wonder why you chose two of the worst things that can happen to your colon as examples.

I'm also pretty sure Alt is not a native speaker (maybe?) so I elaborated just in case. Definitely not meant to cause offense.

Because I'm Charlias Moffatis. I feed off blood, tears, psychological torment, and human souls. I'm the bloody Red Queen, and if I can bring trauma, I will bring trauma.


...In other words, what you just witnessed was what I do when I'm bored. Worst-case scenarios.

And I feed off your blood, tears, psychological torment, and soul. Basically everything about your shitty existence.

I know colon cancer is bad, but colonoscopy?

[Charlia]

Because I'm Charlias Moffatis. I feed off blood, tears, psychological torment, and human souls. I'm the bloody Red Queen, and if I can bring trauma, I will bring trauma.


...In other words, what you just witnessed was what I do when I'm bored. Worst-case scenarios.

And I feed off your blood, tears, psychological torment, and soul. Basically everything about your shitty existence.

I know colon cancer is bad, but colonoscopy?

Oh, it's not the procedure.

It's that there is a song about said procedure. Hear that song once, and it will never leave you.


...Also, excuse me?!

Because I'm Charlias Moffatis. I feed off blood, tears, psychological torment, and human souls. I'm the bloody Red Queen, and if I can bring trauma, I will bring trauma.


...In other words, what you just witnessed was what I do when I'm bored. Worst-case scenarios.

Here, mine will feed you for atleast 20 years.

*eats*

Thanks.

[Stormwrath]

Oh, it's not the procedure.

It's that there is a song about said procedure. Hear that song once, and it will never leave you.


...Also, excuse me?!

Yes, you didn't know? I'M THE QUEEN MOTHER.

That makes you my acolyte, Red Queen.