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by Doughertania » Thu Apr 14, 2016 12:24 am

by Stormwrath » Thu Apr 14, 2016 1:50 am
Doughertania wrote:Alright Ulvenes, Mirakai, here's what I got. http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=374759&p=28386763#p28386763
Is this good enough? Is there something I need to flesh out? I'll take feedback from anyone who's willing to give it.

by The United Remnants of America » Thu Apr 14, 2016 1:51 am
Stormwrath wrote:Doughertania wrote:Alright Ulvenes, Mirakai, here's what I got. http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=374759&p=28386763#p28386763
Is this good enough? Is there something I need to flesh out? I'll take feedback from anyone who's willing to give it.
I don't think it would be a good idea to give it the tag "slice-of-life," as the intro suggests it has more opportunity to GM our own story lines other than just write our chars in their mundane lives. "Sandbox" would be the word you're looking for here.
You also might want to build on the planet where the main setting of your RP is in, since I assume it's going to focus solely on a group of colonists on said planet. What is it like? What facilities were constructed there? What can be found in that planet?

by Stormwrath » Thu Apr 14, 2016 2:02 am
The United Remnants of America wrote:FT slice of life sounds kinda neat, though...


by The United Remnants of America » Thu Apr 14, 2016 2:10 am

by Stormwrath » Thu Apr 14, 2016 2:19 am
The United Remnants of America wrote:.... There are two options here.
1. You can go to sleep. Forget this conversation ever happened. And live the rest of your life in happy, blissful ignorance.
Or.
2. You press this issue. Find out just how deep this rabbit hole takes you. And walk away with more information than you ever asked for.

by Relikai » Thu Apr 14, 2016 2:23 am
Doughertania wrote:Alright Ulvenes, Mirakai, here's what I got. http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=374759&p=28386763#p28386763
Is this good enough? Is there something I need to flesh out? I'll take feedback from anyone who's willing to give it.

by Doughertania » Thu Apr 14, 2016 8:40 am
Stormwrath wrote:Doughertania wrote:Alright Ulvenes, Mirakai, here's what I got. http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=374759&p=28386763#p28386763
Is this good enough? Is there something I need to flesh out? I'll take feedback from anyone who's willing to give it.
I don't think it would be a good idea to give it the tag "slice-of-life," as the intro suggests it has more opportunity to GM our own story lines other than just write our chars in their mundane lives. "Sandbox" would be the word you're looking for here.
You also might want to build on the planet where the main setting of your RP is in, since I assume it's going to focus solely on a group of colonists on said planet. What is it like? What facilities were constructed there? What can be found in that planet?

by Empire of Donner land » Thu Apr 14, 2016 10:56 am
The Collected Entries Of Me In A Nutshell
"Donner: A chill guy who has no chill" - Esgonia
"Everything is wrong. Everything" - URA

by The United Remnants of America » Sat Apr 16, 2016 3:34 pm

by The Templar High Council » Sat Apr 16, 2016 5:35 pm
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by The United Remnants of America » Sat Apr 16, 2016 6:48 pm

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by Shyluz » Sat Apr 16, 2016 7:16 pm
The United Remnants of America wrote:The United Remnants of America wrote:You know what?
I'm a big idea guy, not a detail guy.
We all know this. Detailed URA is bad URA.

by The United Remnants of America » Sat Apr 16, 2016 7:17 pm

by Stormwrath » Mon Apr 18, 2016 7:33 am
The United Remnants of America wrote:A Fire Emblem RP.


by Relikai » Mon Apr 18, 2016 7:38 am

by Mirakai » Mon Apr 18, 2016 2:39 pm

by Saleon » Mon Apr 18, 2016 2:40 pm
My curiosity for what goes on in mira's mind intrigues me.Mirakai wrote:Mira kinda wants to make an RP...

by Doughertania » Mon Apr 18, 2016 2:43 pm
Mirakai wrote:Mira kinda wants to make an RP...

by Mirakai » Mon Apr 18, 2016 3:03 pm
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