The Hobbesian Metaphysician wrote:RP ASSISTANCE REQUESTKEYWORD:TEMPY
Omens of the Fatherland
Concept: A privately hired team of experts is sent on a mission past the massive quarantine wall into the tattered ruins of the German Reich in 1980.
Genre(s): Pre-apocalyptic religious horror amidst a land of mutated humans, supernatural trinkets, and mysterious creatures known as omens.
Type (Character/Faction/Nation): Character.
Detailed Description: A team of misfits, greedy assholes, prisoners, and those genuinely experts in their field get an offer they cannot refuse. The corporation run by the German refugees the Rommels (yes those Rommels) has sent for them to find out what caused the explosion in Berlin back in 1970 to spread an unearthly substance known as the blackness across Reich territories. The Reich in the past ten years has turned into a hellhole of factions, mutates, and omens fighting one another while the previous teams sent by the Rommel have either failed or gone rogue. Secessionist movements, famine, plagues, and the Third World War between the U.S, and Japan threaten the world, but this expedition is your second chance.
Oh, and if you go rogue Rommels contacts with the Second League of Nations will send assassins after you, and they aren't new to the areas behind the wall either.
Good luck.
You don't offer very much back story on this. Like why it's 1980 and Stull called the German Reich, why the ancestors of Field Marshal Erwin Rommel are refugees (which is admittedly unimportant) and how a 2nd (and what I can only assume as a less useless) league of nations came to be. Also, what explosion? Why did it explode? What is this mysterious substance? How did a Third World War between the U.S and already crushed Japan start?
This seems like more of a back story to a Alt History nations rp than a character rp to me in a way also.
I won't deny that it's an interesting idea, but it needs work.




