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by New Grestin » Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:06 pm
Mizrad wrote:Got room for a father/son combo?
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by Mizrad » Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:08 pm

by Feroxi » Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:09 pm
Mizrad wrote:Got room for a father/son combo?
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by New Grestin » Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:09 pm
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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by Mizrad » Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:11 pm

by Feroxi » Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:16 pm
Mizrad wrote:OH LAWDY IT'S FEROXI!
So that's where you've been! Hahaha I was just on the RMB asking if anybody else had heard of this RP and wanted to join it with me.
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by Beiarusia » Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:39 pm
True Refuge wrote:Perhaps I should remove "legendary"
EDIT: I did, I toned his skill down to 'masterful' and his intelligence to 'high' from 'incredible'.
He also no longer "slaughters those in his path", instead he trusts no-one.
How about that?

by New Grestin » Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:43 pm
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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by True Refuge » Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:51 pm
Beiarusia wrote:True Refuge wrote:Perhaps I should remove "legendary"
EDIT: I did, I toned his skill down to 'masterful' and his intelligence to 'high' from 'incredible'.
He also no longer "slaughters those in his path", instead he trusts no-one.
How about that?
ACCEPTED. You're new but you seem like a good writer. Don't become a one man army and I think you'll be fine.

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by Beiarusia » Mon Jul 27, 2015 11:23 pm
New Grestin wrote:So, where exactly would our caravan be going? I'd like to get things underway.

by New Grestin » Mon Jul 27, 2015 11:24 pm
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by Beiarusia » Mon Jul 27, 2015 11:27 pm
New Grestin wrote:I was planning on heading to Junction, I was just hoping to get the story moving.

by Mizrad » Mon Jul 27, 2015 11:29 pm

by New Grestin » Mon Jul 27, 2015 11:31 pm
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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by New Grestin » Tue Jul 28, 2015 12:25 am
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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by Beiarusia » Tue Jul 28, 2015 1:03 am
New Grestin wrote:Posted. Didn't want to do anything drastic, so here's some character development and foreshadowing.

by New Grestin » Tue Jul 28, 2015 1:06 am
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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by Beiarusia » Tue Jul 28, 2015 1:06 am
New Grestin wrote:Beiarusia wrote:Nice. I think Ivana and Wolf were planning to set off in the morning though, using the night as a sort of preparation time.
I figured whenever the caravan decides to leave, you can assume Paulson and Jen are tagging along with everyone else who decides to go.
If nothing else, it'll save me a post of doing nothing.

by New Grestin » Tue Jul 28, 2015 1:09 am
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
Head Bartender for The Pub | The Para-Verse | Writing Advice from a Pretentious Jerk | I write stuff | Arbitrary Political Numbers- Best Worldbuilding - 2016 (Community Choice)
- Best Horror/Thriller RP for THE ZONE - 2016 (Community Choice)

by Beiarusia » Tue Jul 28, 2015 1:11 am
New Grestin wrote:Beiarusia wrote:Fair enough. I'll push ahead things if I need to tomorrow.
Roger that. Now, I just need to think of a good title for this "Skeever" gentleman.
Skeever the Terrible?
Hm. No. I'm thinking he'd be Emperor Bill's right hand man, the motorcycle helmet guy, I just need a really good title.
Skeever the Destroyer? Skeever the Obliterator? Skeever the Great?
Fuck, this is harder than I thought.
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