NO MAN's LAND: A Survival RP (OOC/ENDED)

[Sarejo]

I'm talking about if he stayed in San Fran after the Outbreak and tried to have it under Remnant control. Either that, or I can make the Californian Empire be formed at a later date, say, after the Remnants fall. As long as he doesn't touch Portland, Washington, or Vancouver, I have no problems with modifying my Doc.

Ummmm I have no intentions of doing anything of the sort. Just wandering the wastes looking for a community

Okay it's all good Sorry if I seem like an asshole. I don't mean to, I just don't like to out a lot of work into something just to have it ripped apart, ya know? Anyways I wish you luck on your acceptance and welcome to NML

[Beiarusia]

I'm talking about if he stayed in San Fran after the Outbreak and tried to have it under Remnant control. Either that, or I can make the Californian Empire be formed at a later date, say, after the Remnants fall. As long as he doesn't touch Portland, Washington, or Vancouver, I have no problems with modifying my Doc.

Ummmm I have no intentions of doing anything of the sort. Just wandering the wastes looking for a community

Alright. I only ask that you add something about what you've been up to for the last 13 years since the Remnant fell apart. If he's just wandering he would have found a place by now, so he needs a reason to keep risking himself by walking across post-Outbreak America.

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Hm. I suppose that makes sense.

I do like the idea of bullets being a hot commodity though. Something about a guy walking around covered in bandoliers and that meaning he's hot shit in society bemuses me.

Also, I may try to build upon the history of Coors as time goes on, especially that Emperor Roger thing.

Bullets are valuable mainly because you will have a hard time making your own now, something that's likely to get worse over time. So him literally wearing money is amusing in a way.

[Military Democracy of Birtonia]

Ummmm I have no intentions of doing anything of the sort. Just wandering the wastes looking for a community

Alright. I only ask that you add something about what you've been up to for the last 13 years since the Remnant fell apart. If he's just wandering he would have found a place by now, so he needs a reason to keep risking himself by walking across post-Outbreak America.

Fair enough, I can edit something in, in a few hours probably.

EDIT

Since I have the lazies where was the Remnant mainly located? east coast?

[Sarejo]

>SNIP<

Remnants had no control in California. In fact most of the southern west coast was hit hard during the Outbreak so it's unlikely for any major factions to have taken hold until a much later date after things began calming down.

The Californian Empire is a weak faction anyways, so it would make perfect sense with that. It's not quite falling apart at the seams like the VC, but still failing.

[Wallenburg]

Remnants had no control in California. In fact most of the southern west coast was hit hard during the Outbreak so it's unlikely for any major factions to have taken hold until a much later date after things began calming down.

The Californian Empire is a weak faction anyways, so it would make perfect sense with that. It's not quite falling apart at the seams like the VC, but still failing.

BOSTON FOREVER

[Beiarusia]

Alright. I only ask that you add something about what you've been up to for the last 13 years since the Remnant fell apart. If he's just wandering he would have found a place by now, so he needs a reason to keep risking himself by walking across post-Outbreak America.

Fair enough, I can edit something in, in a few hours probably.

EDIT

Since I have the lazies where was the Remnant mainly located? east coast?

Interior. Both coastlines suffered heavily with a few exceptions. Denver was likely under Remnant control at one point in time (but would have been on the edges). The interior had a lesser population so infection wasn't as bad initially.

[Sarejo]

The Californian Empire is a weak faction anyways, so it would make perfect sense with that. It's not quite falling apart at the seams like the VC, but still failing.

BOSTON FOREVER

Did you read the Doc? I'm still working on it here and there, but I'm really proud of it so far. The most work I've put into lore for something so far.

[Beiarusia]

BOSTON FOREVER

Did you read the Doc? I'm still working on it here and there, but I'm really proud of it so far. The most work I've put into lore for something so far.

He ran Boston in Outbreak.

[Sarejo]

Did you read the Doc? I'm still working on it here and there, but I'm really proud of it so far. The most work I've put into lore for something so far.

He ran Boston in Outbreak.

Yeah I saw that in his bio and his posts. Good backstory mate

[The Federal Republic of Estovakia]

Name: Brian Grant Nation Name: Estovakia Birthplace: Phoenix, Arizona Ethnicity: Caucasian Age: 27

Pic/Description: Born in 2000 A.D. Brian was born in Christian family. I self tought myself hand to hand combat. I was drafted into the USMC during the war. It lasted,years until the virus came along. I'm an expert in all types of weapons. I love Christian music every song I listened to is written on paper in my backpack. Wears glasses, strong, skinny. Wears a kevlar helmet, vest and A.B.U's.

Occupation: Survivor

Immunity: Gifted

(OPTIONAL) Personality: Kind, Loves Jesus, skilled in hand to hand combat, good at deceiving my enemies and, trustworthy I don't hurt others unless I have too.

Skills: good at hand to hand combat, comforting others, good at finding clues and objects, and good at,maintaining and cleaning weapons very mentally strong.

Likes: The Holy Bible, teamwork, and helping whenever possible.

Dislikes: Killing for sport, making people sad and evil survivalists.
Fears: being left alone, being with a bunch of guys and bugs especially ants.
Bio: Born 2000 A.D. Birthplace Arizona Family is dead onlyt thing to do right now is survive. The rest is unknown like I forgot it overnight. Snap! ”What the Hell” ”Who's there”. Puts Notebook away.

[New Grestin]

Name: Brian Grant Nation Name: Estovakia Birthplace: Phoenix, Arizona Ethnicity: Caucasian Age: 20

Pic/Description: Born in 2000 A.D. Brian was born in Christian family. I self tought myself hand to hand combat. I was drafted into the USMC during the war. It lasted,years until the virus came along. I'm an expert in all types of weapons. I love Christian music every song I listened to is written on paper in my backpack. Wears glasses, strong, skinny. Wears a kevlar helmet, vest and A.B.U's.

Occupation: Survivor

Immunity: None

(OPTIONAL) Personality: Kind, Loves Jesus, skilled in hand to hand combat, good at deceiving my enemies and, trustworthy I don't hurt others unless I have too.

Skills: good at hand to hand combat, comforting others, good at finding clues and objects, and good at,maintaining and cleaning weapons very mentally strong.

Likes: The Holy Bible, teamwork, and helping whenever possible.

Dislikes: Killing for sport, making people sad and evil survivalists.
Fears: being left alone, being with a bunch of guys and bugs especially ants.

Bio: Don't like talking about the past. Only the here and know.

So, numerous problems. Firstly, the bio is skimpy as all hell. Second, there's no RP examples whatsoever, not even a sample. Third, if he has no immunity, he'd be beyond dead and then some by now. Fourthly, the age is wrong. This is twenty seven years after the Outbreak. He'd be twenty seven.

Iron the issues out and work on the grammar, otherwise this is Denied.

[Deramen]

Name: Brian Grant Nation Name: Estovakia Birthplace: Phoenix, Arizona Ethnicity: Caucasian Age: 20

Pic/Description: Born in 2000 A.D. Brian was born in Christian family. I self tought myself hand to hand combat. I was drafted into the USMC during the war. It lasted,years until the virus came along. I'm an expert in all types of weapons. I love Christian music every song I listened to is written on paper in my backpack. Wears glasses, strong, skinny. Wears a kevlar helmet, vest and A.B.U's.

Occupation: Survivor

Immunity: None

(OPTIONAL) Personality: Kind, Loves Jesus, skilled in hand to hand combat, good at deceiving my enemies and, trustworthy I don't hurt others unless I have too.

Skills: good at hand to hand combat, comforting others, good at finding clues and objects, and good at,maintaining and cleaning weapons very mentally strong.

Likes: The Holy Bible, teamwork, and helping whenever possible.

Dislikes: Killing for sport, making people sad and evil survivalists.
Fears: being left alone, being with a bunch of guys and bugs especially ants.

Bio: Don't like talking about the past. Only the here and know.

So, numerous problems. Firstly, the bio is skimpy as all hell. Second, there's no RP examples whatsoever, not even a sample. Third, if he has no immunity, he'd be beyond dead and then some by now. Fourthly, the age is wrong. This is twenty seven years after the Outbreak. He'd be twenty seven.

Iron the issues out and work on the grammar, otherwise this is Denied.

Also changes from first person to third randomly.

[Sarejo]

Name: Brian Grant Nation Name: Estovakia Birthplace: Phoenix, Arizona Ethnicity: Caucasian Age: 20

Pic/Description: Born in 2000 A.D. Brian was born in Christian family. I self tought myself hand to hand combat. I was drafted into the USMC during the war. It lasted,years until the virus came along. I'm an expert in all types of weapons. I love Christian music every song I listened to is written on paper in my backpack. Wears glasses, strong, skinny. Wears a kevlar helmet, vest and A.B.U's.

Occupation: Survivor

Immunity: None

(OPTIONAL) Personality: Kind, Loves Jesus, skilled in hand to hand combat, good at deceiving my enemies and, trustworthy I don't hurt others unless I have too.

Skills: good at hand to hand combat, comforting others, good at finding clues and objects, and good at,maintaining and cleaning weapons very mentally strong.

Likes: The Holy Bible, teamwork, and helping whenever possible.

Dislikes: Killing for sport, making people sad and evil survivalists.
Fears: being left alone, being with a bunch of guys and bugs especially ants.

Bio: Don't like talking about the past. Only the here and know.

So, numerous problems. Firstly, the bio is skimpy as all hell. Second, there's no RP examples whatsoever, not even a sample. Third, if he has no immunity, he'd be beyond dead and then some by now. Fourthly, the age is wrong. This is twenty seven years after the Outbreak. He'd be twenty seven.

Iron the issues out and work on the grammar, otherwise this is Denied.

Actually I have a really good question. What year was the Outbreak anyways?

[New Grestin]

Actually I have a really good question. What year was the Outbreak anyways?

Forgive me if I might answer this, but I'd assume 2015.

[Beiarusia]

Name: Brian Grant Nation Name: Estovakia Birthplace: Phoenix, Arizona Ethnicity: Caucasian Age: 20

Pic/Description: Born in 2000 A.D. Brian was born in Christian family. I self tought myself hand to hand combat. I was drafted into the USMC during the war. It lasted,years until the virus came along. I'm an expert in all types of weapons. I love Christian music every song I listened to is written on paper in my backpack. Wears glasses, strong, skinny. Wears a kevlar helmet, vest and A.B.U's.

Occupation: Survivor

Immunity: None

(OPTIONAL) Personality: Kind, Loves Jesus, skilled in hand to hand combat, good at deceiving my enemies and, trustworthy I don't hurt others unless I have too.

Skills: good at hand to hand combat, comforting others, good at finding clues and objects, and good at,maintaining and cleaning weapons very mentally strong.

Likes: The Holy Bible, teamwork, and helping whenever possible.

Dislikes: Killing for sport, making people sad and evil survivalists.
Fears: being left alone, being with a bunch of guys and bugs especially ants.

Bio: Don't like talking about the past. Only the here and know.

What Grestin said: DENIED.

1) Fix the format. It's minor but yours makes everything jumbled.
2) If he was born in 2000 he would be in his late 40's by now and would never have joined the USMC or any military as the world would have collapsed when he was about 15 or so.
3) No Immunity is extremely rare and we already have 2 people with No Immunity already (if I recall correctly).
4) Have a general dislike for soldier characters so by no means is he gonna be allowed to have been Navy SEALS or anything extreme.
5) You need a bio (AA was the only exception due to issues). If you do not have RP examples then make the bio really good.

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Actually I have a really good question. What year was the Outbreak anyways?

It was never stated officially but OUTBREAK was set in current times for the most part. So it would currently be somewhere in the 2040's by now.

[Sarejo]

Name: Brian Grant Nation Name: Estovakia Birthplace: Phoenix, Arizona Ethnicity: Caucasian Age: 20

Pic/Description: Born in 2000 A.D. Brian was born in Christian family. I self tought myself hand to hand combat. I was drafted into the USMC during the war. It lasted,years until the virus came along. I'm an expert in all types of weapons. I love Christian music every song I listened to is written on paper in my backpack. Wears glasses, strong, skinny. Wears a kevlar helmet, vest and A.B.U's.

Occupation: Survivor

Immunity: None

(OPTIONAL) Personality: Kind, Loves Jesus, skilled in hand to hand combat, good at deceiving my enemies and, trustworthy I don't hurt others unless I have too.

Skills: good at hand to hand combat, comforting others, good at finding clues and objects, and good at,maintaining and cleaning weapons very mentally strong.

Likes: The Holy Bible, teamwork, and helping whenever possible.

Dislikes: Killing for sport, making people sad and evil survivalists.
Fears: being left alone, being with a bunch of guys and bugs especially ants.

Bio: Don't like talking about the past. Only the here and know.

What Grestin said: DENIED.

1) Fix the format. It's minor but yours makes everything jumbled.
2) If he was born in 2000 he would be in his late 40's by now and would never have joined the USMC or any military as the world would have collapsed when he was about 15 or so.
3) No Immunity is extremely rare and we already have 2 people with No Immunity already (if I recall correctly).
4) Have a general dislike for soldier characters so by no means is he gonna be allowed to have been Navy SEALS or anything extreme.
5) You need a bio (AA was the only exception due to issues). If you do not have RP examples then make the bio really good.

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Actually I have a really good question. What year was the Outbreak anyways?

It was never stated officially but OUTBREAK was set in current times for the most part. So it would currently be somewhere in the 2040's by now.

I'm surprised you let my soldier guy through.

[The Federal Republic of Estovakia]

What are RP Examples.

[New Grestin]

What are RP Examples.

Basically, you would provide links to Roleplays that you were previously involved in.

Failing that, you could provide a brief writing sample in the form of your character's biography.

[Beiarusia]

I'm surprised you let my soldier guy through.

If I recall, he wasn't US military. He was militia and, for the most part, a civilian unaligned to any major government. As such I feel his training, while similar, would be different to enough of an extent to not make him overpowered. Long story short, he's not a Army Ranger fighting Iraqis for four years only to kill zombies with his useful set of skills.

[The Federal Republic of Estovakia]

[quote="The Federal Republic of Estovakia";p="25415547"]Name: Brian Grant Nation Name: Estovakia Birthplace: Phoenix, Arizona Ethnicity: Caucasian Age: 27

Pic/Description: Born in 2013 A.D. Brian was born in Christian family. I self tought myself hand to hand combat. I was drafted into the USMC during the war. It lasted,years until the virus came along. I'm an expert in all types of weapons. I love Christian music every song I listened to is written on paper in my backpack. Wears glasses, strong, skinny. Wears a kevlar helmet, vest and A.B.U's.

Occupation: Survivor

Immunity: Gifted

(OPTIONAL) Personality: Kind, Loves Jesus, skilled in hand to hand combat, good at deceiving my enemies and, trustworthy I don't hurt others unless I have too.

Skills: good at hand to hand combat, comforting others, good at finding clues and objects, and good at,maintaining and cleaning weapons very mentally strong.

Likes: The Holy Bible, teamwork, and helping whenever possible.

Dislikes: Killing for sport, making people sad and evil survivalists.
Fears: being left alone, being with a bunch of guys and bugs especially ants.
Bio: Born 2013 A.D. Birthplace Arizona Family is dead onlyt thing to do right now is survive. The rest is unknown like I forgot it overnight. Snap! ”What the Hell” ”Who's there”. Puts Notebook away. But I do have a picture of my family, Mom, Grandma and me they loved me so much. So caring until the virus. In 2010 I moved to Brazil got drafted and killed,my first human. I ran and we moved back to the U.S.A..

[Beiarusia]

What are RP Examples.

What Grestin said. Provide examples (links or even the name) of previous RP's you've taken part in. If you don't have any then go all out with your bio. It's essentially to gauge and get a feel of your writing skills as we expect some competency for the most part. Such as if you only ever wrote one liners you would probably not be accepted based on skill.

[Sarejo]

I'm surprised you let my soldier guy through.

If I recall, he wasn't US military. He was militia and, for the most part, a civilian unaligned to any major government. As such I feel his training, while similar, would be different to enough of an extent to not make him overpowered. Long story short, he's not a Army Ranger fighting Iraqis for four years only to kill zombies with his useful set of skills.

If you want to get technical, he was a Naval Officer for a Post-Apoc nation, but I won't press it any further, lest I change your mind

[Beiarusia]

Name: Brian Grant Nation Name: Estovakia Birthplace: Phoenix, Arizona Ethnicity: Caucasian Age: 27

Pic/Description: Born in 2000 A.D. Brian was born in Christian family. I self tought myself hand to hand combat. I was drafted into the USMC during the war. It lasted,years until the virus came along. I'm an expert in all types of weapons. I love Christian music every song I listened to is written on paper in my backpack. Wears glasses, strong, skinny. Wears a kevlar helmet, vest and A.B.U's.

Occupation: Survivor

Immunity: Gifted

(OPTIONAL) Personality: Kind, Loves Jesus, skilled in hand to hand combat, good at deceiving my enemies and, trustworthy I don't hurt others unless I have too.

Skills: good at hand to hand combat, comforting others, good at finding clues and objects, and good at,maintaining and cleaning weapons very mentally strong.

Likes: The Holy Bible, teamwork, and helping whenever possible.

Dislikes: Killing for sport, making people sad and evil survivalists.
Fears: being left alone, being with a bunch of guys and bugs especially ants.
Bio: Born 2000 A.D. Birthplace Arizona Family is dead onlyt thing to do right now is survive. The rest is unknown like I forgot it overnight. Snap! ”What the Hell” ”Who's there”. Puts Notebook away.

Still needs a lot of work. He would never have been drafted to fight in the war before the Outbreak if he was born in 2000. Actually there's not even a draft anymore. At the same time this is set 27 years after the Outbreak began so he never would have known about the previous world or government. Bio is still pretty weak and you change between 1st and 3rd person while writing.

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If I recall, he wasn't US military. He was militia and, for the most part, a civilian unaligned to any major government. As such I feel his training, while similar, would be different to enough of an extent to not make him overpowered. Long story short, he's not a Army Ranger fighting Iraqis for four years only to kill zombies with his useful set of skills.

If you want to get technical, he was a Naval Officer for a Post-Apoc nation, but I won't press it any further, lest I change your mind

I mean he simply isn't a one man death machine which is all that matters. A lot of characters in Outbreak (many soldiers included) were simply overpowered, so I'm trying to force people to be weak to a degree and cutting off an abundance of soldiers is one way to do that.

[The Federal Republic of Estovakia]

Today I found a,military base it was my lucky day I found 10 cans of beans, 3 bottles of water, I found an M4 Carbine with a suppressor, acog scope and 4 mags fully stocked with ammo in a small crack in the wall with a note that said ”good someone found it use your ammo wisely” I also found a young girl her age is 27 we don't talk much but it's probably the hormones running through our bodies. At least I have The Holy Bible. I wonder if it was fate that Brough me to this base anyway this will help rebuild civilization. I think. Enough writing. It's almost night fall and we need to set up our tent.

[Beiarusia]

Today I found a,military base it was my lucky day I found 10 cans of beans, 3 bottles of water, M4 Carbine with a suppressor, acog scope and 4 mags fully stocked with ammo. I also found a young girl her age is 27 we don't talk much but it's probably the hormones running through our bodies. At least I have The Holy Bible. I wonder if it was fate that Brough me to this base anyway this will help rebuild civilization. I think. Enough writing. It's almost night fall and we need to set up our tent.

1) If you wanted to use that as an RP Example then put it in the App, not as a separate post.
2) The year is not 2027 but 27 years after the Outbreak, which happened in current time IRL, so it would be in the 2040's.
3) You need to work heavily on your grammar. I must ask, is English your first language, because if not then I won't be as harsh.
4) This is being picky but it's unlikely that he'd find so much just sitting around without it either being bad or damaged. Guns (especially military grade) are somewhat uncommon as ammo is hard to come by.