In Memorial of the Fallen [RWBY RP|OOC 2|CLOSED]

[Cybraxia]

-snip-

I do have some issues with your app, particularly with how your semblance is described. There seems to be no clear idea of which power is his semblance, whether it's superhumanly sharp sight, lycanthropy or faster regeneration and physical strength. A semblance tends to be one power, not many, and those with multiple superpowers tend to be maidens or the silver-eyed warriors. Of course, I assume you got the silver eyes thing after watching RWBY's finale and how OP Ruby was after Pyrrha got BBQ'd. Plus, it would be pretty risky to have a semblance that temporarily disables your Aura completely.

True, but he does have regenerative abilities.

As for certain aspects of his abilities, the "Angelic" abilities are legacy traits (again, back in the older days when I was first creating the character).

The Semblance itself would be the physiologies, and the abilities would be results of those physiologies.

If I thought that I could get away with it, I'd put in the ORIGINAL backstory to explain the "double semblance", but I guess I could try the "some myths really are true" excuse and say Werewolves (if that's acceptable).

The "lack of aura" was sort of a balancing idea I cooked up. Mainly, he'd rely on his speed to dodge attacks rather than be able to tank them.

The extent of the "Silver eyes" would be only to the Werewolf Physiology, labeling him as "Not-Grimm". Of course, if that's still a no-go, I can change it into blue eyes.

[Icrum]

I do have some issues with your app, particularly with how your semblance is described. There seems to be no clear idea of which power is his semblance, whether it's superhumanly sharp sight, lycanthropy or faster regeneration and physical strength. A semblance tends to be one power, not many, and those with multiple superpowers tend to be maidens or the silver-eyed warriors. Of course, I assume you got the silver eyes thing after watching RWBY's finale and how OP Ruby was after Pyrrha got BBQ'd. Plus, it would be pretty risky to have a semblance that temporarily disables your Aura completely.

True, but he does have regenerative abilities.

As for certain aspects of his abilities, the "Angelic" abilities are legacy traits (again, back in the older days when I was first creating the character).

The Semblance itself would be the physiologies, and the abilities would be results of those physiologies.

If I thought that I could get away with it, I'd put in the ORIGINAL backstory to explain the "double semblance", but I guess I could try the "some myths really are true" excuse and say Werewolves (if that's acceptable).

The "lack of aura" was sort of a balancing idea I cooked up. Mainly, he'd rely on his speed to dodge attacks rather than be able to tank them.

The extent of the "Silver eyes" would be only to the Werewolf Physiology, labeling him as "Not-Grimm". Of course, if that's still a no-go, I can change it into blue eyes.

Or he can have pink eyes, as blue is a common eye colour.

[Cybraxia]

True, but he does have regenerative abilities.

As for certain aspects of his abilities, the "Angelic" abilities are legacy traits (again, back in the older days when I was first creating the character).

The Semblance itself would be the physiologies, and the abilities would be results of those physiologies.

If I thought that I could get away with it, I'd put in the ORIGINAL backstory to explain the "double semblance", but I guess I could try the "some myths really are true" excuse and say Werewolves (if that's acceptable).

The "lack of aura" was sort of a balancing idea I cooked up. Mainly, he'd rely on his speed to dodge attacks rather than be able to tank them.

The extent of the "Silver eyes" would be only to the Werewolf Physiology, labeling him as "Not-Grimm". Of course, if that's still a no-go, I can change it into blue eyes.

Or he can have pink eyes, as blue is a common eye colour.

Not for Grimm. All grimm eyes are red-orange.

[Neo ORB]

Nach, In case your wondering what i mean by pitied.
In the HCA Industry (HealthCare Assistant), Avena's response is what we call a closed statement which can be inferred by the Receiver as sympathetic, rather then Empathetic.
As "Sympathy" in our industry is the growing of distance (IE. a "Closed" potentially unfeeling response), while empathy is the bridging and closing of that distance between a "sender" and "receiver."
You're "Feedback" was misinterpreted by Yuki as "Sympathy" which is generally bad... XD

EX:
Resident unknown Grandmother: My Grandchild just got killed by a drunk driver
Sympathy: i see, while these things happen, I've lost a friend in a motorcycle accident myself so I know how you feel.
By the way its sandwiches for lunch.

Empathy: I don't know what to say...
But I'm glad you told me, would you like to talk about it?

of course in my industry we also use touch so we might gently hold ones hand or lightly touch their shoulder while crouching to eye level...
I love my soon to be new career! XD

[Serah]

Nach, In case your wondering what i mean by pitied.
In the HCA Industry (HealthCare Assistant), Avena's response is what we call a closed statement which can be inferred by the Receiver as sympathetic, rather then Empathetic.
As "Sympathy" in our industry is the growing of distance (IE. a "Closed" potentially unfeeling response), while empathy is the bridging and closing of that distance between a "sender" and "receiver."
You're "Feedback" was misinterpreted by Yuki as "Sympathy" which is generally bad... XD

EX:
Resident unknown Grandmother: My Grandchild just got killed by a drunk driver
Sympathy: i see, while these things happen, I've lost a friend in a motorcycle accident myself so I know how you feel.
By the way its sandwiches for lunch.

Empathy: I don't know what to say...
But I'm glad you told me, would you like to talk about it?

of course in my industry we also use touch so we might gently hold ones hand or lightly touch their shoulder while crouching to eye level...
I love my soon to be new career! XD

Confirmed NEO is best psychotic psychatrist.

Like Charlia with sympathy 10/10 -Rock Paper Explosion

7.8/10 Too much ORB, not enough husbando levels. -IGN

Oh, and I'm just putting this here, Charlia don't read it if you want to keep the surprise.

Theriam WILL die during the attack or at least get deeply wounded.

Heamet will carry on his will by replacing his current sword with Miriel, his eye color will also change due to the death of Theriam, he will also lose one of his eyes and his left arm. (Being a right handed person, he won't really bother with it.)

Ether will disappear (I still have to ponder on whether or not he dies or simply vanishes.)

Leonard will live, but will have massive scars and probably won't fight until a while

Artol is going to protect Heamet as a personal bodyguard and will try to find Vehlto.

Aria will live and be even more mother like.

Though, as the title of the spoiler said, it's only a possible future, not something set in stone for me yet.

[Charlia]

Nach, In case your wondering what i mean by pitied.
In the HCA Industry (HealthCare Assistant), Avena's response is what we call a closed statement which can be inferred by the Receiver as sympathetic, rather then Empathetic.
As "Sympathy" in our industry is the growing of distance (IE. a "Closed" potentially unfeeling response), while empathy is the bridging and closing of that distance between a "sender" and "receiver."
You're "Feedback" was misinterpreted by Yuki as "Sympathy" which is generally bad... XD

EX:
Resident unknown Grandmother: My Grandchild just got killed by a drunk driver
Sympathy: i see, while these things happen, I've lost a friend in a motorcycle accident myself so I know how you feel.
By the way its sandwiches for lunch.

Empathy: I don't know what to say...
But I'm glad you told me, would you like to talk about it?

of course in my industry we also use touch so we might gently hold ones hand or lightly touch their shoulder while crouching to eye level...
I love my soon to be new career! XD

Confirmed NEO is best psychotic psychatrist.

Like Charlia with sympathy 10/10 -Rock Paper Explosion

7.8/10 Too much ORB, not enough husbando levels. -IGN

Oh, and I'm just putting this here, Charlia don't read it if you want to keep the surprise.

Theriam WILL die during the attack or at least get deeply wounded.

Heamet will carry on his will by replacing his current sword with Miriel, his eye color will also change due to the death of Theriam, he will also lose one of his eyes and his left arm. (Being a right handed person, he won't really bother with it.)

Ether will disappear (I still have to ponder on whether or not he dies or simply vanishes.)

Leonard will live, but will have massive scars and probably won't fight until a while

Artol is going to protect Heamet as a personal bodyguard and will try to find Vehlto.

Aria will live and be even more mother like.

Though, as the title of the spoiler said, it's only a possible future, not something set in stone for me yet.

WHAT?

YOU PROMISED! You promised...

You promised he wouldn't die.

Why does this always seem to happen with this sort of ship...

[Sindrya]

Confirmed NEO is best psychotic psychatrist.

Like Charlia with sympathy 10/10 -Rock Paper Explosion

7.8/10 Too much ORB, not enough husbando levels. -IGN

Oh, and I'm just putting this here, Charlia don't read it if you want to keep the surprise.

Theriam WILL die during the attack or at least get deeply wounded.

Heamet will carry on his will by replacing his current sword with Miriel, his eye color will also change due to the death of Theriam, he will also lose one of his eyes and his left arm. (Being a right handed person, he won't really bother with it.)

Ether will disappear (I still have to ponder on whether or not he dies or simply vanishes.)

Leonard will live, but will have massive scars and probably won't fight until a while

Artol is going to protect Heamet as a personal bodyguard and will try to find Vehlto.

Aria will live and be even more mother like.

Though, as the title of the spoiler said, it's only a possible future, not something set in stone for me yet.

WHAT?

YOU PROMISED! You promised...

You promised he wouldn't die.

Why does this always seem to happen with this sort of ship...

Ah.. tragic ship.

My personal favorite kind of ship.

[Neo ORB]

Confirmed NEO is best psychotic psychatrist.

Like Charlia with sympathy 10/10 -Rock Paper Explosion

7.8/10 Too much ORB, not enough husbando levels. -IGN

Oh, and I'm just putting this here, Charlia don't read it if you want to keep the surprise.

Theriam WILL die during the attack or at least get deeply wounded.

Heamet will carry on his will by replacing his current sword with Miriel, his eye color will also change due to the death of Theriam, he will also lose one of his eyes and his left arm. (Being a right handed person, he won't really bother with it.)

Ether will disappear (I still have to ponder on whether or not he dies or simply vanishes.)

Leonard will live, but will have massive scars and probably won't fight until a while

Artol is going to protect Heamet as a personal bodyguard and will try to find Vehlto.

Aria will live and be even more mother like.

Though, as the title of the spoiler said, it's only a possible future, not something set in stone for me yet.

WHAT?

YOU PROMISED! You promised...

You promised he wouldn't die.

Why does this always seem to happen with this sort of ship...

think of it this way Charla... at least you'll have Yuki.... (once they meet XD
dont quite understand what you mean by "husbando" levels serah...
care to explain? (optional)

[Charlia]

WHAT?

YOU PROMISED! You promised...

You promised he wouldn't die.

Why does this always seem to happen with this sort of ship...

Ah.. tragic ship.

My personal favorite kind of ship.

Hey, hey, hey. My first dark and brooding ship, I found out a little ways in that the other guy had a brain something-or-other and was going to die, unless by some miracle it could be fixed.


Then about halfway through the character makes this pact with a weird spooky lake thing and suddenly his death is assured! And I'm like 'SERIOUSLY WHY?!?!?!'


And then... Serah mentioned a while back the possibility of Theriam dying, and it was like 'NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CAN'T' so he promised 'Okay, Theriam won't die. Heamet might though' and I'm like 'whatever don't care about Heamet just NO KILLING THERIAM'

...AND NOW HE'S CONSIDERING BREAKING THAT PROMISE.

THE HATRED FLOWS THROUGH ME.


If Theriam dies, Serah dies. Simple as that.


...This is like that time I thought Merlin was going to die...


WHY DOES EVERYONE DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

WHAT?

YOU PROMISED! You promised...

You promised he wouldn't die.

Why does this always seem to happen with this sort of ship...

think of it this way Charla... at least you'll have Yuki.... (once they meet XD
dont quite understand what you mean by "husbando" levels serah...
care to explain? (optional)

Are you suggesting a ship with Yuki?

[Sindrya]

Ah.. tragic ship.

My personal favorite kind of ship.

Hey, hey, hey. My first dark and brooding ship, I found out a little ways in that the other guy had a brain something-or-other and was going to die, unless by some miracle it could be fixed.


Then about halfway through the character makes this pact with a weird spooky lake thing and suddenly his death is assured! And I'm like 'SERIOUSLY WHY?!?!?!'


And then... Serah mentioned a while back the possibility of Theriam dying, and it was like 'NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CAN'T' so he promised 'Okay, Theriam won't die. Heamet might though' and I'm like 'whatever don't care about Heamet just NO KILLING THERIAM'

...AND NOW HE'S CONSIDERING BREAKING THAT PROMISE.

THE HATRED FLOWS THROUGH ME.


If Theriam dies, Serah dies. Simple as that.


...This is like that time I thought Merlin was going to die...


WHY DOES EVERYONE DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Because you're not being broken enough, Charlia.

In order to create the ultimate kind of Red Queen, we need to break you, over and over, each time harder than the previous.

*folds hands while sitting behind a table*

Now, please sit back. The keikaku is going smoothly.

[Charlia]

Hey, hey, hey. My first dark and brooding ship, I found out a little ways in that the other guy had a brain something-or-other and was going to die, unless by some miracle it could be fixed.


Then about halfway through the character makes this pact with a weird spooky lake thing and suddenly his death is assured! And I'm like 'SERIOUSLY WHY?!?!?!'


And then... Serah mentioned a while back the possibility of Theriam dying, and it was like 'NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CAN'T' so he promised 'Okay, Theriam won't die. Heamet might though' and I'm like 'whatever don't care about Heamet just NO KILLING THERIAM'

...AND NOW HE'S CONSIDERING BREAKING THAT PROMISE.

THE HATRED FLOWS THROUGH ME.


If Theriam dies, Serah dies. Simple as that.


...This is like that time I thought Merlin was going to die...


WHY DOES EVERYONE DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Because you're not being broken enough, Charlia.

In order to create the ultimate kind of Red Queen, we need to break you, over and over, each time harder than the previous.

*folds hands while sitting behind a table*

Now, please sit back. The keikaku is going smoothly.

Screw your plan! I break people around here!

[Sindrya]

Because you're not being broken enough, Charlia.

In order to create the ultimate kind of Red Queen, we need to break you, over and over, each time harder than the previous.

*folds hands while sitting behind a table*

Now, please sit back. The keikaku is going smoothly.

Screw your plan! I break people around here!

Now now. Should a subject be rebelling against its master?

[Sonitusia]

I'm honestly lost with what's happening at the moment, Clover being at the library, but then the woman (Malidia) acting like nothing happened and is currently showing off what seems to be a comic book collection.

[Neo ORB]

I'm honestly lost with what's happening at the moment, Clover being at the library, but then the woman (Malidia) acting like nothing happened and is currently showing off what seems to be a comic book collection.

to be honest i completely missed it, however with Erde's personality i'm currently IC wise ignoring the new "Arrival".
After all, Erde is in sales mode currently.

[Serah]

Confirmed NEO is best psychotic psychatrist.

Like Charlia with sympathy 10/10 -Rock Paper Explosion

7.8/10 Too much ORB, not enough husbando levels. -IGN

Oh, and I'm just putting this here, Charlia don't read it if you want to keep the surprise.

Theriam WILL die during the attack or at least get deeply wounded.

Heamet will carry on his will by replacing his current sword with Miriel, his eye color will also change due to the death of Theriam, he will also lose one of his eyes and his left arm. (Being a right handed person, he won't really bother with it.)

Ether will disappear (I still have to ponder on whether or not he dies or simply vanishes.)

Leonard will live, but will have massive scars and probably won't fight until a while

Artol is going to protect Heamet as a personal bodyguard and will try to find Vehlto.

Aria will live and be even more mother like.

Though, as the title of the spoiler said, it's only a possible future, not something set in stone for me yet.

WHAT?

YOU PROMISED! You promised...

You promised he wouldn't die.

Why does this always seem to happen with this sort of ship...

I said POSSIBLE future.

And there is always the possibility that he will just get deeply wounded.

[Charlia]

WHAT?

YOU PROMISED! You promised...

You promised he wouldn't die.

Why does this always seem to happen with this sort of ship...

I said POSSIBLE future.

And there is always the possibility that he will just get deeply wounded.

Yeah, well since YOU PROMISED, I'd say it's either deeply wounded, or nothing.

Because I don't take kindly to people who break promises. OR KILL OFF MY SHIPS.

[Icrum]

Heh, you guys don't know what I have planned.

And I'm not saying it here. If you really want to know, TG me and I'll tell you.

I said POSSIBLE future.

And there is always the possibility that he will just get deeply wounded.

Yeah, well since YOU PROMISED, I'd say it's either deeply wounded, or nothing.

Because I don't take kindly to people who break promises. OR KILL OFF MY SHIPS.

I lost my favorite ship after someone broke a promise. RIP USS Arizona, killed by Japanese fighters.

See, we all suffer.

[Charlia]

Heh, you guys don't know what I have planned.

And I'm not saying it here. If you really want to know, TG me and I'll tell you.

Yeah, well since YOU PROMISED, I'd say it's either deeply wounded, or nothing.

Because I don't take kindly to people who break promises. OR KILL OFF MY SHIPS.

I lost my favorite ship after someone broke a promise. RIP USS Arizona, killed by Japanese fighters.

See, we all suffer.

Oh, believe me.

If Serah goes through with killing him off, he's going to suffer, all right. I will creep into his house while he is asleep, shackle him to the wall, and proceed to torture him slowly until he dies.

[Serah]

Heh, you guys don't know what I have planned.

And I'm not saying it here. If you really want to know, TG me and I'll tell you.

I lost my favorite ship after someone broke a promise. RIP USS Arizona, killed by Japanese fighters.

See, we all suffer.

Oh, believe me.

If Serah goes through with killing him off, he's going to suffer, all right. I will creep into his house while he is asleep, shackle him to the wall, and proceed to torture him slowly until he dies.

Good luck with that, given how weird as fuck my walls are.

But I'll see to it myself, whether or not he dies or just retires is going to be up to me.

[Charlia]

Oh, believe me.

If Serah goes through with killing him off, he's going to suffer, all right. I will creep into his house while he is asleep, shackle him to the wall, and proceed to torture him slowly until he dies.

Good luck with that, given how weird as fuck my walls are.

But I'll see to it myself, whether or not he dies or just retires is going to be up to me.

...Retiring works... I guess... But this ship must be eternal!

Remember? We already talked about ship plans for the future and stuff. Remember that discussion?

[Serah]

Good luck with that, given how weird as fuck my walls are.

But I'll see to it myself, whether or not he dies or just retires is going to be up to me.

...Retiring works... I guess... But this ship must be eternal!

Remember? We already talked about ship plans for the future and stuff. Remember that discussion?

Yeah, I do remember that.

But as I said, I'll see to it myself.

[Charlia]

...Retiring works... I guess... But this ship must be eternal!

Remember? We already talked about ship plans for the future and stuff. Remember that discussion?

Yeah, I do remember that.

But as I said, I'll see to it myself.

*grabs collar*

You'd better not kill him.


Or else there will be consequences.



As in, consequences for Charlotte.

[Serah]

Yeah, I do remember that.

But as I said, I'll see to it myself.

*grabs collar*

You'd better not kill him.


Or else there will be consequences.



As in, consequences for Charlotte.

My characters act as their own entities, but I still have Author's authority upon them.
Just like everyone here.

[Charlia]

*grabs collar*

You'd better not kill him.


Or else there will be consequences.



As in, consequences for Charlotte.

My characters act as their own entities, but I still have Author's authority upon them.
Just like everyone here.

Let's just say, if he dies...


Hmm. How much do you know about Sailor Moon?

[Icrum]

Also I've dropped spoilers for all my characters in previous posts, and no one has said anything about them. Don't you want to know my plans?