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Should we make a new OOC to attract new players?

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WHYYYY
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Postby WHYYYY » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:32 pm

Armeia wrote:
Charlia wrote:I don't know... seems a bit too much like Julian.

Does Julian have total recall?


She means the backstory, I think.
Sorry moderators.

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Postby Charlia » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:33 pm

WHYYYY wrote:
Armeia wrote:Does Julian have total recall?


She means the backstory, I think.

I do.

Similar backstories in characters bug me to no end.

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Postby Armeia » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:37 pm

Charlia wrote:
WHYYYY wrote:
She means the backstory, I think.

I do.

Similar backstories in characters bug me to no end.

Hers is different though, a government was trying to turn her into a special agent for black operations, basically a human weapon, while Julian's captors were mainly trying to reproduce his healing abilities.
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Charlia
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Postby Charlia » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:39 pm

Armeia wrote:
Charlia wrote:I do.

Similar backstories in characters bug me to no end.

Hers is different though, a government was trying to turn her into a special agent for black operations, basically a human weapon, while Julian's captors were mainly trying to reproduce his healing abilities.

...

Prometheus.

I rest my case.

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Armeia
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Postby Armeia » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:50 pm

Well, here's the app

Name: Rose Pineda
Gender: Female
Age (most likely 14-16 range): 17
Appearance (image or detailed paragraph): Dark skin, with steel grey eyes. Her eyes aren't typical, but the doctors believe that they're connected with her abilities. Her hair is long but braided, tied back most of the times. She stands at 6'5, however she has a athletic figure and looks thinner than someone at that height.
Powers/Gear: Superhuman reflexes. This ability is strong enough that she can see a bullet coming and step out of the way, and also predict her opponent's moves based off of their body language. She also has total recall, meaning her memory is completely perfect.
Personality: Totally unpredictable, the black operations training broke Rose's spirit and made her liable to lash out at anyone at any time. She's calm a lot of the time, but she gets angry very quickly and when she does, she isn't afraid to use violence. Due to her past, she has a strong hatred of Brazil, and also the Dominican Republic.
Bio: Rose was born in Santo Domingo, and developed her reflex abilities at age three. The local doctors were amazed and showed her to the government, who began to run tests on her searching for a way to reproduce these abilities. However at age six, the Brazilian government stepped in and took over the research, taking her to Brasilia and forcing her into a military training program.

Brazil attempted to turn her into a human weapon, as part of an elite cell in the upper ranks of the Brazilian Special Forces, but to do this they trained her humanity out of her and made her a cold blooded killer. At age twelve, she began to work as an assassin, taking out political enemies with her advanced reflexes, and by the time she was fifteen, she was the top agent in the cell.

She escaped after killing the other fourteen members of the cell, and stealing a military jet and flying back to the Dominican Republic, where she lived on the streets until coming to the school.
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Sporting Achievements: Emperor's Cup I champions, Emperor's Cup II runner ups, U-18 World Cup I Third Place

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Postby WHYYYY » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:55 pm

Armeia wrote:Well, here's the app

Name: Rose Pineda
Gender: Female
Age (most likely 14-16 range): 17
Appearance (image or detailed paragraph): Dark skin, with steel grey eyes. Her eyes aren't typical, but the doctors believe that they're connected with her abilities. Her hair is long but braided, tied back most of the times. She stands at 6'5, however she has a athletic figure and looks thinner than someone at that height.
Powers/Gear: Superhuman reflexes. This ability is strong enough that she can see a bullet coming and step out of the way, and also predict her opponent's moves based off of their body language. She also has total recall, meaning her memory is completely perfect.
Personality: Totally unpredictable, the black operations training broke Rose's spirit and made her liable to lash out at anyone at any time. She's calm a lot of the time, but she gets angry very quickly and when she does, she isn't afraid to use violence. Due to her past, she has a strong hatred of Brazil, and also the Dominican Republic.
Bio: Rose was born in Santo Domingo, and developed her reflex abilities at age three. The local doctors were amazed and showed her to the government, who began to run tests on her searching for a way to reproduce these abilities. However at age six, the Brazilian government stepped in and took over the research, taking her to Brasilia and forcing her into a military training program.

Brazil attempted to turn her into a human weapon, as part of an elite cell in the upper ranks of the Brazilian Special Forces, but to do this they trained her humanity out of her and made her a cold blooded killer. At age twelve, she began to work as an assassin, taking out political enemies with her advanced reflexes, and by the time she was fifteen, she was the top agent in the cell.

She escaped after killing the other fourteen members of the cell, and stealing a military jet and flying back to the Dominican Republic, where she lived on the streets until coming to the school.


I'll think about this, considering I have plenty of time to think about it.

Brief Rant
It irritates me somewhat that almost nobody went with the vibe I was really, really trying to get people to follow. I gave every impression that EVERYONE, including governments, hated superhumans. I was expecting to get apps of characters cast out of home, forced away from loved ones because they were different. Instead, every other character is a super soldier!

*deep breath*
Okay. Okay.
I vented.
Sorry moderators.

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Charlia
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Postby Charlia » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:55 pm

WHYYYY wrote:
Armeia wrote:Well, here's the app

Name: Rose Pineda
Gender: Female
Age (most likely 14-16 range): 17
Appearance (image or detailed paragraph): Dark skin, with steel grey eyes. Her eyes aren't typical, but the doctors believe that they're connected with her abilities. Her hair is long but braided, tied back most of the times. She stands at 6'5, however she has a athletic figure and looks thinner than someone at that height.
Powers/Gear: Superhuman reflexes. This ability is strong enough that she can see a bullet coming and step out of the way, and also predict her opponent's moves based off of their body language. She also has total recall, meaning her memory is completely perfect.
Personality: Totally unpredictable, the black operations training broke Rose's spirit and made her liable to lash out at anyone at any time. She's calm a lot of the time, but she gets angry very quickly and when she does, she isn't afraid to use violence. Due to her past, she has a strong hatred of Brazil, and also the Dominican Republic.
Bio: Rose was born in Santo Domingo, and developed her reflex abilities at age three. The local doctors were amazed and showed her to the government, who began to run tests on her searching for a way to reproduce these abilities. However at age six, the Brazilian government stepped in and took over the research, taking her to Brasilia and forcing her into a military training program.

Brazil attempted to turn her into a human weapon, as part of an elite cell in the upper ranks of the Brazilian Special Forces, but to do this they trained her humanity out of her and made her a cold blooded killer. At age twelve, she began to work as an assassin, taking out political enemies with her advanced reflexes, and by the time she was fifteen, she was the top agent in the cell.

She escaped after killing the other fourteen members of the cell, and stealing a military jet and flying back to the Dominican Republic, where she lived on the streets until coming to the school.


I'll think about this, considering I have plenty of time to think about it.

Brief Rant
It irritates me somewhat that almost nobody went with the vibe I was really, really trying to get people to follow. I gave every impression that EVERYONE, including governments, hated superhumans. I was expecting to get apps of characters cast out of home, forced away from loved ones because they were different. Instead, every other character is a super soldier!

*deep breath*
Okay. Okay.
I vented.

Hey, both my characters are outcasts!

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Armeia
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Postby Armeia » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:56 pm

The Brazilian government did hate her, that's why they forced her into the military and made her basically a slave, against her will
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Sporting Achievements: Emperor's Cup I champions, Emperor's Cup II runner ups, U-18 World Cup I Third Place

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WHYYYY
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Postby WHYYYY » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:57 pm

Charlia wrote:
WHYYYY wrote:
I'll think about this, considering I have plenty of time to think about it.

Brief Rant
It irritates me somewhat that almost nobody went with the vibe I was really, really trying to get people to follow. I gave every impression that EVERYONE, including governments, hated superhumans. I was expecting to get apps of characters cast out of home, forced away from loved ones because they were different. Instead, every other character is a super soldier!

*deep breath*
Okay. Okay.
I vented.

Hey, both my characters are outcasts!


Hence me saying "almost nobody."


I keep forgetting Hania exists. That'll probably happen with this new character too.
Sorry moderators.

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Taigawa
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Postby Taigawa » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:59 pm

WHYYYY wrote:
Armeia wrote:Well, here's the app

Name: Rose Pineda
Gender: Female
Age (most likely 14-16 range): 17
Appearance (image or detailed paragraph): Dark skin, with steel grey eyes. Her eyes aren't typical, but the doctors believe that they're connected with her abilities. Her hair is long but braided, tied back most of the times. She stands at 6'5, however she has a athletic figure and looks thinner than someone at that height.
Powers/Gear: Superhuman reflexes. This ability is strong enough that she can see a bullet coming and step out of the way, and also predict her opponent's moves based off of their body language. She also has total recall, meaning her memory is completely perfect.
Personality: Totally unpredictable, the black operations training broke Rose's spirit and made her liable to lash out at anyone at any time. She's calm a lot of the time, but she gets angry very quickly and when she does, she isn't afraid to use violence. Due to her past, she has a strong hatred of Brazil, and also the Dominican Republic.
Bio: Rose was born in Santo Domingo, and developed her reflex abilities at age three. The local doctors were amazed and showed her to the government, who began to run tests on her searching for a way to reproduce these abilities. However at age six, the Brazilian government stepped in and took over the research, taking her to Brasilia and forcing her into a military training program.

Brazil attempted to turn her into a human weapon, as part of an elite cell in the upper ranks of the Brazilian Special Forces, but to do this they trained her humanity out of her and made her a cold blooded killer. At age twelve, she began to work as an assassin, taking out political enemies with her advanced reflexes, and by the time she was fifteen, she was the top agent in the cell.

She escaped after killing the other fourteen members of the cell, and stealing a military jet and flying back to the Dominican Republic, where she lived on the streets until coming to the school.


I'll think about this, considering I have plenty of time to think about it.

Brief Rant
It irritates me somewhat that almost nobody went with the vibe I was really, really trying to get people to follow. I gave every impression that EVERYONE, including governments, hated superhumans. I was expecting to get apps of characters cast out of home, forced away from loved ones because they were different. Instead, every other character is a super soldier!

*deep breath*
Okay. Okay.
I vented.

And Amelia lost her family because of this.
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Charlia
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Postby Charlia » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:59 pm

WHYYYY wrote:
Charlia wrote:Hey, both my characters are outcasts!


Hence me saying "almost nobody."


I keep forgetting Hania exists. That'll probably happen with this new character too.

Eh, you forget Ethan exists--I can't really be upset.

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WHYYYY
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Postby WHYYYY » Thu Jul 23, 2015 7:00 pm

Taigawa wrote:
WHYYYY wrote:
I'll think about this, considering I have plenty of time to think about it.

Brief Rant
It irritates me somewhat that almost nobody went with the vibe I was really, really trying to get people to follow. I gave every impression that EVERYONE, including governments, hated superhumans. I was expecting to get apps of characters cast out of home, forced away from loved ones because they were different. Instead, every other character is a super soldier!

*deep breath*
Okay. Okay.
I vented.

And Amelia lost her family because of this.


So I've heard. That was kinda the stuff I was looking for. But pickiness doesn't get me anywhere, so whatever.
Sorry moderators.

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WHYYYY
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Postby WHYYYY » Thu Jul 23, 2015 7:00 pm

Charlia wrote:
WHYYYY wrote:
Hence me saying "almost nobody."


I keep forgetting Hania exists. That'll probably happen with this new character too.

Eh, you forget Ethan exists--I can't really be upset.


Well that's because I'm playing... 5 characters? XD
Sorry moderators.

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Armeia
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Postby Armeia » Thu Jul 23, 2015 7:01 pm

WHYYYY wrote:
Taigawa wrote:And Amelia lost her family because of this.


So I've heard. That was kinda the stuff I was looking for. But pickiness doesn't get me anywhere, so whatever.

Hey you also forgot that Justice was thrown out of her family's house and had to live in a trailer park because people hate supers
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Sporting Achievements: Emperor's Cup I champions, Emperor's Cup II runner ups, U-18 World Cup I Third Place

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Postby WHYYYY » Thu Jul 23, 2015 7:29 pm

Armeia wrote:
WHYYYY wrote:
So I've heard. That was kinda the stuff I was looking for. But pickiness doesn't get me anywhere, so whatever.

Hey you also forgot that Justice was thrown out of her family's house and had to live in a trailer park because people hate supers


I NEVER EVEN TRIED TO NAME THE CHARACTERS. I DON'T NEED TO KNOW EVERY SINGLE ONE.
Sorry moderators.

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Postby Dilange » Thu Jul 23, 2015 8:39 pm

This is how the Marshall vs. Hooded Man should go:http://castercomix.com/page/2

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Postby WHYYYY » Thu Jul 23, 2015 8:41 pm

Dilange wrote:This is how the Marshall vs. Hooded Man should go:http://castercomix.com/page/2


Marshall is offended. Forget what hooded man's powers were.
Sorry moderators.

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Postby Arstotzkas » Thu Jul 23, 2015 8:48 pm

Uh, hi.

What's going on?
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Postby Shadowwell » Thu Jul 23, 2015 9:20 pm

My guy was sold by his family like a slave to the Government who did experiments on him trying to replicate his powers to use for assassination. don't know if this would fall under those that have irked you.
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Postby Dilange » Fri Jul 24, 2015 5:05 am

WHYYYY wrote:
Dilange wrote:This is how the Marshall vs. Hooded Man should go:http://castercomix.com/page/2


Marshall is offended. Forget what hooded man's powers were.

Super strength and iron skin.

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Postby Syrixces » Fri Jul 24, 2015 5:34 am

WHYYYY wrote:
Charlia wrote:Hey, both my characters are outcasts!


Hence me saying "almost nobody."


I keep forgetting Hania exists. That'll probably happen with this new character too.


Ray is hunted by the gov

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Postby Arstotzkas » Fri Jul 24, 2015 6:40 am

Hi. What's up?
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WHYYYY
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Postby WHYYYY » Fri Jul 24, 2015 6:41 am

OKAY. If ONE MORE PERSON says why their character is an outcast or whatever, I'm quitting nationstates forever (jk)


but I will be irritated.
Sorry moderators.

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Postby Arstotzkas » Fri Jul 24, 2015 7:36 am

Hmmm, what should I post? I'm confused.
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