Beyond Humanity (OOC/Open)

[Skappola]

Terrorist Group Name: Earth Death
Center of Operations Location: China/India
Primary Source(s) of Income: Drug money
Threat Level: National threat.... as of now.... (there might be some slight groups in other countries)
Short-Term & Long-Term Goals:
Short term goals: Survive the extensive manhunt by Chinese and Indian police, and gain money
Long term goals: take over china and india
History and General Description:
A new age political movement in india and china, they were heavily suppressed by the business friendly india, and the one party China. This hardened the group who then started becoming a criminal organization. They joined with a criminal revivalist group, Death, who killed people then revived them as "zombies" that do what people with a specific tech tell them to do. the Gaians try to use the money they make to fund their biological research, and try to be able to modify peoples DNA while they are alive, so the whole world can be earth friendly. They also have some funding from Greater Germany (though not much)
Faction: Biodirectionists
Subgroup (Optional): Revivalists, and new Gaians
2 Examples of your previous RP experience


I added some more to my other app. Critisism welcome.

I need the 2 RP examples and you should fix the spelling errors. Also - just a suggestion - you could change Earth Death to Dìqiú Sǐwáng. It's the same thing in Chinese - it just sounds better.

[In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam]

Terrorist Group Name: Earth Death
Center of Operations Location: China/India
Primary Source(s) of Income: Drug money
Threat Level: National threat.... as of now.... (there might be some slight groups in other countries)
Short-Term & Long-Term Goals:
Short term goals: Survive the extensive manhunt by Chinese and Indian police, and gain money
Long term goals: take over china and india
History and General Description:
A new age political movement in india and china, they were heavily suppressed by the business friendly india, and the one party China. This hardened the group who then started becoming a criminal organization. They joined with a criminal revivalist group, Death, who killed people then revived them as "zombies" that do what people with a specific tech tell them to do. the Gaians try to use the money they make to fund their biological research, and try to be able to modify peoples DNA while they are alive, so the whole world can be earth friendly. They also have some funding from Greater Germany (though not much)
Faction: Biodirectionists
Subgroup (Optional): Revivalists, and new Gaians
2 Examples of your previous RP experience


I added some more to my other app. Critisism welcome.

I need the 2 RP examples and you should fix the spelling errors. Also - just a suggestion - you could change Earth Death to Dìqiú Sǐwáng. It's the same thing in Chinese - it just sounds better.

Ok. I'll go drag up the RP examples....
what spelling errors?

[Oscalantine]

Awesome~!!

I had a blast making the app. Some peeps may not agree with me on Korea becoming a Promethean society, though... I think that South Korea alone could have definitely become closer to one of the Uploader faction... but given the unification and integration of North Korea... seemed to me that commonality between two of our cultures is to achieve perfection ^^

[Skappola]

I need the 2 RP examples and you should fix the spelling errors. Also - just a suggestion - you could change Earth Death to Dìqiú Sǐwáng. It's the same thing in Chinese - it just sounds better.

Ok. I'll go drag up the RP examples....
what spelling errors?

Wait, sorry, no major spelling errors in that App. Ignore that.

[In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam]

viewtopic.php?f=5&t=329178

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=343548
excuse the lack of emotion.

[Skappola]

http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=329178

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=343548
excuse the lack of emotion.

Okay, your terrorist app is fine. Accepted. I'll look over the country one, but are you sure you want two at once?

[In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam]

http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=329178

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=343548
excuse the lack of emotion.

Okay, your terrorist app is fine. Accepted. I'll look over the country one, but are you sure you want two at once?

I'll do fine...ish....
i'm not good at the economy section....

[Skappola]

Okay, your terrorist app is fine. Accepted. I'll look over the country one, but are you sure you want two at once?

I'll do fine...ish....
i'm not good at the economy section....

I don't have time to look over the whole thing, but you're not really supposed to have more than one faction due to the lore. It's fine to have multiple subgroups as long as they don't conflict, but not really multiple factions. I'll be back later to give a more in depth look over.

[In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam]

I'll do fine...ish....
i'm not good at the economy section....

I don't have time to look over the whole thing, but you're not really supposed to have more than one faction due to the lore. It's fine to have multiple subgroups as long as they don't conflict, but not really multiple factions. I'll be back later to give a more in depth look over.

ok. Maybe i'll get rid of the human connectionists, which would then mean unrest in the population would be massive. If i did that, could it be ok to have the other two faction?

[Skappola]

I don't have time to look over the whole thing, but you're not really supposed to have more than one faction due to the lore. It's fine to have multiple subgroups as long as they don't conflict, but not really multiple factions. I'll be back later to give a more in depth look over.

ok. Maybe i'll get rid of the human connectionists, which would then mean unrest in the population would be massive. If i did that, could it be ok to have the other two faction?

Yeah, just keep in mind that you would be able to give everyone both cybernetic implants and genetic engineering, you'd have to give them one or the other, or only give a small percentage of the population both.

[In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam]

ok. Maybe i'll get rid of the human connectionists, which would then mean unrest in the population would be massive. If i did that, could it be ok to have the other two faction?

Yeah, just keep in mind that you would be able to give everyone both cybernetic implants and genetic engineering, you'd have to give them one or the other, or only give a small percentage of the population both.

thats what i did.
small parts of the population have both.
the rest are just normal people.

[Skappola]

Yeah, just keep in mind that you would be able to give everyone both cybernetic implants and genetic engineering, you'd have to give them one or the other, or only give a small percentage of the population both.

thats what i did.
small parts of the population have both.
the rest are just normal people.

I know, just take off the connectionists and you'll be fine. Anyway, have to go.

[The Burning Sun]

Terrorist Group Name: Earth Death
Center of Operations Location: China/India
Primary Source(s) of Income: Drug money
Threat Level: National threat.... as of now.... (there might be some slight groups in other countries)
Short-Term & Long-Term Goals:
Short term goals: Survive the extensive manhunt by Chinese and Indian police, and gain money
Long term goals: take over china and india
History and General Description:
A new age political movement in india and china, they were heavily suppressed by the business friendly india, and the one party China. This hardened the group who then started becoming a criminal organization. They joined with a criminal revivalist group, Death, who killed people then revived them as "zombies" that do what people with a specific tech tell them to do. the Gaians try to use the money they make to fund their biological research, and try to be able to modify peoples DNA while they are alive, so the whole world can be earth friendly. They also have some funding from Greater Germany (though not much)
Faction: Biodirectionists
Subgroup (Optional): Revivalists, and new Gaians
2 Examples of your previous RP experience


I added some more to my other app. Critisism welcome.

I need the 2 RP examples and you should fix the spelling errors. Also - just a suggestion - you could change Earth Death to Dìqiú Sǐwáng. It's the same thing in Chinese - it just sounds better.

for knowing Chinese.

Tag BTW, and what a surprise to see you here In Gentem.

[Oscalantine]

for knowing Chinese.

Tag BTW, and what a surprise to see you here In Gentem.

Contrary to popular beliefs, I have seen Sci in FT-genre some times before ^^ I am actually surprised that he likes Civ-like RPs so much.

[Greater Soviet Ukraine]

Old app.

[In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam]

for knowing Chinese.

Tag BTW, and what a surprise to see you here In Gentem.

Contrary to popular beliefs, I have seen Sci in FT-genre some times before ^^ I am actually surprised that he likes Civ-like RPs so much.

they don't have eu4 eps do they?
Hey Burning Sun
hows the rift RPG going?

[The Burning Sun]

Contrary to popular beliefs, I have seen Sci in FT-genre some times before ^^ I am actually surprised that he likes Civ-like RPs so much.

they don't have eu4 eps do they?
Hey Burning Sun
hows the rift RPG going?

Fine, although we still wish you'd have participated.

[Oscalantine]

Btw, Skappola, did you TG old members about the reboot? The Ukraine dude reminded me that we actually had other RPers XDDD

[In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam]

they don't have eu4 eps do they?
Hey Burning Sun
hows the rift RPG going?

Fine, although we still wish you'd have participated.

I don't like rift.
If you have another one we could do, i could join now.
Anyhow, would you like to join a RPG I'm setting up?
Pascal, would you?

[Skappola]

Old app.

Adding you in

[Skappola]

Btw, Skappola, did you TG old members about the reboot? The Ukraine dude reminded me that we actually had other RPers XDDD

I TGed a small number, but I think I'm going to send out a mass TG later today

[Oscalantine]

Btw, Skappola, did you TG old members about the reboot? The Ukraine dude reminded me that we actually had other RPers XDDD

I TGed a small number, but I think I'm going to send out a mass TG later today

Awesome. If old members join, we can hopefully start sooner ^^
Cannot wait to start RPing!!!

[Skappola]

Country Name: Greater Germany
Location (Please mark on Map): Cant do... I'll find you something else. But here it is. germany, half of poland, austria,
Population: 160 mil sound good?
Government Description:
In Greater Germany at the age of 18, everyone is required to take a IQ test (and various other tests). Those that score in the top 1% are given the best genetically modified bodies (moved through mind uploading), and have moderate cybernetic implants. This is the aristocracy of Germany. The top 0.01% highest scorers are chosen to be part of the government, and are given extensive cybernetic implants. Since there is a slight problem that some of these people don't want to be a part of government, there is also a aspect of Connectionists in there too, making it so they are glad to be a part of government. Since there is slight unrest that dumber people can never be a part of government, the nation puts a lot of money into propaganda and controlling the nation, along with people disappearing. The most used and effective system of nation control is Human Collective Connectionists/semi-True Hivemind Connectionists, which makes it so people are happy with what they have, and also have a bunch of different ideas.

Economy Description: Manufacturing

Military Description: Exactly 1 million regular soldier. All are volunteers. Joining the military is a good idea in Greater Germany, as you gain a extensively modified body, with high abilities than a normal human could hope for, and become human collective (with slight hive mind so they don't run away from certain death) (also some slight cybernetic implants that are designed to be useful in war). Since so many people volunteer for the military, the government chooses the people that will be the most loyal to the cause. Around half the soldiers are used as police to guard the nation, and also keep the separatists in poland... suppressed. The other group are doing their best to destabilize Russia and China.


History and General Description:
With Russia becoming a bully in the eastern european area, those nations started turning towards the west (except Ukraine and Belarus (Russia got hungry). With the threat of Russia invading Poland and the other eastern countries (and Denmark), they got a massive credit downgrading, so the economies of those nations started falling apart. Russia funded Russian separatists in Poland and the baltic countries. Germany intervened, saving Poland, but taking the western half of Poland for itself. This angered most of the world, but over time they accepted it. A wave of Anschluss in Austria caused a referendum in 2040, where 40% voted for Anschluss, and 60% voted against Anschluss. Mainly it was the older generation that was against Anschluss. By 2060, more people wanted Anschluss than not, and so they had a referendum, which narrowly passed. With the diversity of technology in Greater Germany, most people have a slight feeling of rebellion and unrest, with "Future-violence" (i.e. Normals vs Promethians vs others).


Faction:Biodirectionists/Cyberneticists/
Subgroup (Optional): The Promethians/The intellectuals
2 Examples of your previous RP experience:
Ask Pascal
Ask G-tech


BTW: The current Promethian body only came into being 20 years ago, so now people are starting to be able to have kids. only now.

1) Regarding the Population, it should be around 110 Million given the land you've claimed.
2) I don't really mind whether the Economy section is that fleshed out, as long as the rest is fine
3) Other than that, Grammatical & Spelling errors, & connectionist stuff left over in the first paragraph, it seems fine. I would suggest you don't take on multiple factions at once, but that's fine for now. I'll add you in

[Skappola]

I TGed a small number, but I think I'm going to send out a mass TG later today

Awesome. If old members join, we can hopefully start sooner ^^
Cannot wait to start RPing!!!

Cool! Have to go again - just came on to update some stuff.

[The Eden Initiative]

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