Gods among Us [Superhero] (OOC/Signup/Open)

[Serah]

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Now with only a few crippling bugs!!

Write like someone who has a braincell!!!

Ward off Grammar Nazis!!!

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I'm not even English and I don't need this. At least I don't think so.

Do I need it?

[Dyelli Beybi]

I was told everyone hated my Posts with a passion and thought they were "you know what", It cost me alot.

In anycase any case, not every posts has to be formed formatted perfectly, like an essay, - with perfect paragraphs, sentences, and such. soem times Sometimes people word thigns diffrently things differently due to Narrative narrative story telling, or maybe thats that's just how their wiritng writing style is (scot's Scot's app Bio bio can be used as an example).

You're Welcome! Sorry, I'm not trying to be rude, I sometimes just can't help myself.

Though in all seriousness, there are many ways to form a sentence that can make it fun and creative. That is style. Then there is bad grammar, misused punctuation and muddled word choices. All of these just confuse people.

[Anowa]

That.......was......abismole

abismole
abismole

ich sayz heer zat ze vord abysmal is spelt as sooch: abysmal
Have a most vonderous day, sir.

[Anowa]

Now introducing the fabulous new...

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I'm not even English and I don't need this. At least I don't think so.

Do I need it?

It seems like everyone who has English as a first language needs a writing crutch, myself included. and honestly it confuses me.

[Confederation of imperial states]

That.......was......abismole

abismole
abismole
ich sayz heer zat ze vord abysmal is spelt as sooch: abysmal
Have a most vonderous day, sir.

I guess i need to.....
*puts on sunglasses*
Concentrate more....
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH

[Serah]

I'm not even English and I don't need this. At least I don't think so.

Do I need it?

It seems like everyone who has English as a first language needs a writing crutch, myself included. and honestly it confuses me.

It confuses me even more than you. But it's not only English, French people are shit at using their own language. It's abysmal how they can fuck up writing their own language. I don't get it.

[Anowa]

abismole
abismole
ich sayz heer zat ze vord abysmal is spelt as sooch: abysmal
Have a most vonderous day, sir.

I guess i need to.....
*puts on sunglasses*
Concentrate more....
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH

I did Nazi that coming, Anne Frank-ly I don't care.

[Serah]

I guess i need to.....
*puts on sunglasses*
Concentrate more....
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH

I did Nazi that coming, Anne Frank-ly I don't care.

Godwin's law has been upheld.

[Anowa]

I did Nazi that coming, Anne Frank-ly I don't care.

Godwin's law has been upheld.

This is getting out of Mein Kampf-ert zone. If it goes on for to long I'll get Fuhrer-ious and Goebbels you up.

[Serah]

Godwin's law has been upheld.

This is getting out of Mein Kampf-ert zone. If it goes on for to long I'll get Fuhrer-ious and Goebbels you up.

Well then, you'll need to take a shower.

[Confederation of imperial states]

This is getting out of Mein Kampf-ert zone. If it goes on for to long I'll get Fuhrer-ious and Goebbels you up.

Well then, you'll need to take a shower.

Heil No, that's Holocaust me a crap ton to pay for the water bill

[Dyelli Beybi]

I'm not even English and I don't need this. At least I don't think so.

Do I need it?

It seems like everyone who has English as a first language needs a writing crutch, myself included. and honestly it confuses me.

Hey, my writing is beautiful!

[Anowa]

Well then, you'll need to take a shower.

Heil No, that's Holocaust me a crap ton to pay for the water bill

I don't know how far down this train of posts we'll go, but I commend both of you for your concentration.

[Serah]

It seems like everyone who has English as a first language needs a writing crutch, myself included. and honestly it confuses me.

Hey, my writing is beautiful!

Well it is rather good. But he probably meant English people in general.

Heil No, that's Holocaust me a crap ton to pay for the water bill

I don't know how far down this train of posts we'll go, but I commend both of you for your concentration.

Well, at least you Jew it.

[Confederation of imperial states]

Heil No, that's Holocaust me a crap ton to pay for the water bill

I don't know how far down this train of posts we'll go, but I commend both of you for your concentration.

Auchwitz! I stubbed my Toe!

as for this Extermination of any consideration for people who are getting out of their Kampffort zone, I can only say one thing.

Jew Mad?

[Anowa]

Hey, my writing is beautiful!

Well it is rather good. But he probably meant English people in general.

I don't know how far down this train of posts we'll go, but I commend both of you for your concentration.

Well, at least you Jew it.

English nationality =/= English speaking.

I mean everyone who has learned English first needs a crutch. (Unless you go to college for English or something.)

[Serah]

Well it is rather good. But he probably meant English people in general.



Well, at least you Jew it.

English nationality =/= English speaking.

I mean everyone who has learned English first needs a crutch. (Unless you go to college for English or something.)

Actually, every french person is so shit at speaking their language or any other language that I feel like I'm actually part of a GLORIOUS ENGLISH SPEAKING MASTER RACE and that the rest of the FRENCH SPEAKING PEASANTS are well... Peasants.

In all seriousness though, with me, you've stumbled upon a very rare species of English/German/Italian speaking french person.

[Dyelli Beybi]

English nationality =/= English speaking.

I mean everyone who has learned English first needs a crutch. (Unless you go to college for English or something.)

Actually, every french person is so shit at speaking their language or any other language that I feel like I'm actually part of a GLORIOUS ENGLISH SPEAKING MASTER RACE and that the rest of the FRENCH SPEAKING PEASANTS are well... Peasants.

In all seriousness though, with me, you've stumbled upon a very rare species of English/German/Italian speaking french person.

Learning a foreign language makes you much more aware of constructs in your own language - I speak Castilian Spanish and bits and pieces of quite a few other languages. That has definitely helped my English.

[Serah]

Actually, every french person is so shit at speaking their language or any other language that I feel like I'm actually part of a GLORIOUS ENGLISH SPEAKING MASTER RACE and that the rest of the FRENCH SPEAKING PEASANTS are well... Peasants.

In all seriousness though, with me, you've stumbled upon a very rare species of English/German/Italian speaking french person.

Learning a foreign language makes you much more aware of constructs in your own language - I speak Castilian Spanish and bits and pieces of quite a few other languages. That has definitely helped my English.

And here we see the elusive foreign language speaking people.
"They've spot us! Let's not make a noise!"
Majestic they are.

[Scotatrova]

Learning a foreign language makes you much more aware of constructs in your own language - I speak Castilian Spanish and bits and pieces of quite a few other languages. That has definitely helped my English.

And here we see the elusive foreign language speaking people.
"They've spot us! Let's not make a noise!"
Majestic they are.

Made a short response to your post in the IC

[Serah]

And here we see the elusive foreign language speaking people.
"They've spot us! Let's not make a noise!"
Majestic they are.

Made a short response to your post in the IC

Well actually, I thought Heamet trapped the whole Axis in the barrier.

[Scotatrova]

Made a short response to your post in the IC

Well actually, I thought Heamet trapped the whole Axis in the barrier.

He did, the Darach isn't with the Axis. It's basically a lady with glowing eyes passing through the barrier and approaching Heamet and the Axis.

[The V O I D]

Not sure if I received an answer or not; but can I re-app as a new char? I'm finally unbusy... for the most part.

[Dyelli Beybi]

Go for it

[Syrixces]

My App:

Super Identity: The Animal

Real Name: Ezekiel (Zeke) Daniels

Identity is private

Villain

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Appearance: In Suit: Dark, purple black, form fitting exo skeleton. Body type on suit is like that of ultron. The head is completely flat, with three glowing red rectangles, in a triangle formation. The suit has a large back, for arms, and shins and feet, but other wise, is around human size. The metal is a deep black - purple, and is banded, horizontally. The head has no features, other than the three red rectangles.

Out of Suit: Zeke is paralyzed from the waist down, Caucasian, and very thin, 90 pounds, 5 foot 10. Black eyes, black, wild hair. Very thin, bony body, very weak. Rolls around in black, steel rimmed wheelchair.

Affiliation: None so far, will apply later.

Legal Sanctions: Wanted for Murder, and an attempt to take over the USA

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

Powers: None

Equipment: Zeke possesses an extremely powerful exo skeleton, created out of an Neocrite. Neocrite, is an otherworldly alloy, of which the recipe is known to Zeke, and Zeke alone. Neocrite, is almost indestructible, can only be melted within a nuclear furnace, and can withstand tactical missiles, and extreme conditions. The suit enhances Zeke's strength (Max 10 tons), speed (Max 60 mph), enables nuclear fueled flight, can shoot purified Neocrite energy from his visor (the three red rectangles spin and release this beam after a 2 second delay), and contains 2 Neocrite short swords, one in each fore arm, that are released upon an arm movement. The helmet contains a HUD, and the suit is fitted for life support, and can support Zeke fragile body for 10 years without resupply or power.

Origin: Created by Zeke

Weaknesses: Once out of his suit, Zeke is very fragile, and can be killed very easily. The suit does run on a limited nuclear supply, and the energy beams can be directed back and used against him.

Personality: Zeke, as a result of his traumatic past, suffers from delusions. He is severely schizophrenic, and is afraid to leave his suit. He is obsessive, over money, clearing his name, revenge, and primarily, his vision of beauty. The animal is deeply in love with a dead women, Diana. He motivates most of his actions towards her. He is also obsessive with protecting his life's work, Neocrite.

Bio: A victim of an abusive childhood, Zeke was left paralyzed and sickly after a local thug planted a car bomb in his girlfriends (Diana) car. He survived in critical condition, she did not. He went insane, and struggling with his mobility, and created his suit. He killed the thug, and the entire gang, and went onto pursue his lifes work, creating more Neocrite, and fashioning a metal body for his now deceased Diana, believing that he could rebuilt her in robot form. He turned to theft, and mercenary work. Eventually, his delusions led to him attempting an armed take over of the United states. He is currently on the run.