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Postby Harbertia » Mon May 18, 2015 7:40 pm

Alright, that's a little too much to ask, I mean, I'd have no issue at all if the brother wasn't actually dead but like, his body was trapped in another dimension (like Alphonse from Full Metal Alchemist). I'm not even sure why the grandparents are dead.
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Postby WHYYYY » Mon May 18, 2015 7:41 pm

Harbertia wrote:
WHYYYY wrote:Yeah, I may not have done the best job of explaining it. The Nayi Ahia basically just allows Adam to exist as a ghost, capable of seeing the world and having the tiniest influence on it (like if he focuses he can just barely push objects). Adam can only be seen by and communicate with Cyrus. That's basically all there is to that. Sorry if I made it overly complex

Can you provide me a kind of mock post with the characters here on this thread so that I may get an idea of Cyrus in this world. Like, him interning at the community college?


Like, just how I'd write for him? Or how he'd relate to other characters?
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Postby WHYYYY » Mon May 18, 2015 7:44 pm

Harbertia wrote:Alright, that's a little too much to ask, I mean, I'd have no issue at all if the brother wasn't actually dead but like, his body was trapped in another dimension (like Alphonse from Full Metal Alchemist). I'm not even sure why the grandparents are dead.


The grandparents are dead from the fire, just so Cyrus could be sent here. And, I had some big long idea about how the brother actually is in another dimension, like dead spirits go to one dimension that is unobservable to the mortal dimension, and the Nayi Ahia keeps the brother in a separate dimension. I figured, in a world where there are witches and jelly creatures, anything's possible.

Edit: ill do the post, it'd give me a good opportunity to get in the feel for this character
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Postby Harbertia » Mon May 18, 2015 7:49 pm

WHYYYY wrote:
Harbertia wrote:Alright, that's a little too much to ask, I mean, I'd have no issue at all if the brother wasn't actually dead but like, his body was trapped in another dimension (like Alphonse from Full Metal Alchemist). I'm not even sure why the grandparents are dead.


The grandparents are dead from the fire, just so Cyrus could be sent here. And, I had some big long idea about how the brother actually is in another dimension, like all dead spirits go to one dimension that is unobservable to the mortal dimension, and the Nayi Ahia keeps the brother in a separate dimension. I figured, in a world where there are witches and jelly creatures, anything's possible.

Edit: ill do the post, it'd give me a good opportunity to get in the feel for this character

Exterminate 'all' from that sentence and I'll be alright, it's best if it's just a dimension with in the Nayi Ahia.
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Postby WHYYYY » Mon May 18, 2015 7:52 pm

Harbertia wrote:
WHYYYY wrote:
The grandparents are dead from the fire, just so Cyrus could be sent here. And, I had some big long idea about how the brother actually is in another dimension, like all dead spirits go to one dimension that is unobservable to the mortal dimension, and the Nayi Ahia keeps the brother in a separate dimension. I figured, in a world where there are witches and jelly creatures, anything's possible.

Edit: ill do the post, it'd give me a good opportunity to get in the feel for this character

Exterminate 'all' from that sentence and I'll be alright, it's best if it's just a dimension with in the Nayi Ahia.


Do you just want the all gone since one spirit didn't go there? Yeah, the brother is more or less trapped in the band, but can still observe the outside world and be visible to Cyrus. I really don't know how to explain this well, like the band keeps the brother in a certain dimension very close to ours, and also gives Cyrus the ability to see into that dimension.
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Postby Harbertia » Mon May 18, 2015 7:53 pm

WHYYYY wrote:
Harbertia wrote:Exterminate 'all' from that sentence and I'll be alright, it's best if it's just a dimension with in the Nayi Ahia.


Do you just want the all gone since one spirit didn't go there? Yeah, the brother is more or less trapped in the band, but can still observe the outside world and be visible to Cyrus. I really don't know how to explain this well, like the band keeps the brother in a certain dimension very close to ours, and also gives Cyrus the ability to see into that dimension.

I understand that statement.
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Postby WHYYYY » Mon May 18, 2015 8:08 pm

So, arstotzkas has been asking me to invite him... should I? And is it alright for Cyrus to join the RP?
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Postby Harbertia » Mon May 18, 2015 8:17 pm

WHYYYY wrote:So, arstotzkas has been asking me to invite him... should I? And is it alright for Cyrus to join the RP?

I had already invited Ar :palm:

As for Cyrus, since your open to doing the practice post, then please do so.
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Postby Arstotzkas » Mon May 18, 2015 8:21 pm

Harbertia wrote:
WHYYYY wrote:So, arstotzkas has been asking me to invite him... should I? And is it alright for Cyrus to join the RP?

I had already invited Ar :palm:

As for Cyrus, since your open to doing the practice post, then please do so.



Oh, you did?


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Postby Harbertia » Mon May 18, 2015 8:22 pm

Arstotzkas wrote:
Harbertia wrote:I had already invited Ar :palm:

As for Cyrus, since your open to doing the practice post, then please do so.



Oh, you did?


Huh.

Hi Ar, I'm in a poor mood tonight but welcome you hoping to see something worthwhile. Ask questions, look at the app, look at the IC; think the 60s and 80s and you should be jsut fine
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Postby WHYYYY » Mon May 18, 2015 8:25 pm

Harbertia wrote:
Arstotzkas wrote:

Oh, you did?


Huh.

Hi Ar, I'm in a poor mood tonight but welcome you hoping to see something worthwhile. Ask questions, look at the app, look at the IC; think the 60s and 80s and you should be jsut fine


Oh, sorry if I worsened your mood with our talk...

If it's alright, ill put my practice post up tomorrow when I can get on my pc, on the IC. It won't really connect to the plot, just describing things. Is it the first day of school on the IC?
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Postby Harbertia » Mon May 18, 2015 8:26 pm

WHYYYY wrote:Is it the first day of school on the IC?

Unfortunately yes.
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Postby WHYYYY » Mon May 18, 2015 8:34 pm

Harbertia wrote:
WHYYYY wrote:Is it the first day of school on the IC?

Unfortunately yes.


Ill see what I can do tonight, but I'm worried if I delay to post till tomorrow ill miss the first day
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Postby Harbertia » Mon May 18, 2015 8:40 pm

Alright, I need to do something lest I spiral again.

*change music to something not about insanity*

I need to get back to posting as Monica, or to post as one of my other characters.
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Postby Arstotzkas » Mon May 18, 2015 8:51 pm

Name:: Inigo Shadowgrove
Gender:: Male
Age/Age Group:: Teen,
Birthday (Optional):: November 20th
Species/Race: Human
Appearance: (Image or description): http://img.bhs4.com/3d/d/3dd4768f1ed884 ... _large.jpg

Occupation: (Student, Casher, Teacher, etc): Student, Part Time Scientist.
Residency: (Where your character resides, this can be as simple as a township or more specific such as an address and image of the home/apartment): 367 Chip Street, Woodview

Interests:: Exploring, conducting experiments, sculpting, Robotics

Personality:: Cheerful, confident, happy, but can be cold and brutal if made angry,

Background:: Inigo has had a hard life, to an extent. His parents didn't really want him, and as such never really helped him or rooted for him in anything. He has always struggled to get their attention and praise. As such, he is somewhat bitter inside and resentful. However he covers this up with his larger than life personality and optimist nature. Due to discovering many things as a child, he has had a fascination with nature and can often be seen outside, conducting experiments. Due to being obsessed with science, he works part time as a scientist and often mails his results to larger corporations across the country. He is also tinkering with robots, and is always happy to show off his new invention. He is currently attending high school


Do I have to work on the bio any more?


I may work on it while also posting IC.
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Postby Harbertia » Mon May 18, 2015 8:51 pm

-removed post, this can still work, it can still work-
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Postby Arstotzkas » Mon May 18, 2015 9:02 pm

Hey Harb, I finished my app.



EDIT: Never mind, I need to add something unique I think.
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Postby Harbertia » Mon May 18, 2015 9:05 pm

Arstotzkas wrote:Name:: Inigo Shadowgrove
Gender:: Male
Age/Age Group:: Teen,
Birthday (Optional):: November 20th
Species/Race: Human
Appearance: (Image or description): http://img.bhs4.com/3d/d/3dd4768f1ed884 ... _large.jpg

Occupation: (Student, Casher, Teacher, etc): Student, Part Time Scientist.
Residency: (Where your character resides, this can be as simple as a township or more specific such as an address and image of the home/apartment): 367 Chip Street, Woodview

Interests:: Exploring, conducting experiments, sculpting, Robotics

Personality:: Cheerful, confident, happy, but can be cold and brutal if made angry,

Background:: Inigo has had a hard life, to an extent. His parents didn't really want him, and as such never really helped him or rooted for him in anything. He has always struggled to get their attention and praise. As such, he is somewhat bitter inside and resentful. However he covers this up with his larger than life personality and optimist nature. Due to discovering many things as a child, he has had a fascination with nature and can often be seen outside, conducting experiments. Due to being obsessed with science, he works part time as a scientist and often mails his results to larger corporations across the country. He is also tinkering with robots, and is always happy to show off his new invention. He is currently attending high school


Do I have to work on the bio any more?


I may work on it while also posting IC.


XD he seems datable by Blair's Standards :lol:

You should add as you post on the IC, I'm not sure what to make of him, but I'm in that 'tell all come clean treat well start fresh' moods that tells me that he's perfectly fine.
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Postby Harbertia » Mon May 18, 2015 9:06 pm

Arstotzkas wrote:EDIT: Never mind, I need to add something unique I think.

He's already unique.
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Tomorrow is made today.
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Postby Arstotzkas » Mon May 18, 2015 9:08 pm

Harbertia wrote:
Arstotzkas wrote:EDIT: Never mind, I need to add something unique I think.

He's already unique.




Oh.

Thanks, I was just unsure. Bio is still WIP though.


Actually, I feel like changing his race to vampire might be suited....

Whadda you think?
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Postby Harbertia » Mon May 18, 2015 9:12 pm

Arstotzkas wrote:
Harbertia wrote:He's already unique.


Oh.

Thanks, I was just unsure. Bio is still WIP though.

Actually, I feel like changing his race to vampire might be suited....

Whadda you think?

I think it's a needless addition and that your better off making a different character to be a vampire.
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Postby Arstotzkas » Mon May 18, 2015 9:14 pm

Harbertia wrote:
Arstotzkas wrote:
Oh.

Thanks, I was just unsure. Bio is still WIP though.

Actually, I feel like changing his race to vampire might be suited....

Whadda you think?

I think it's a needless addition and that your better off making a different character to be a vampire.



Yeah, you're right.

I'll leave it as it is, just paranoid over uniqueness.
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Postby WHYYYY » Tue May 19, 2015 4:45 am

I may make a character that is a wizard, but outcast from his group.
Two questions:
1: Can a wizard focus on one type of magic (such as fire)
2: Can basic spells be cast through thought (this has been in many books, like eragon I think, we're talking so basic like making just a cold breeze, those kinds of spells)
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Postby Harbertia » Tue May 19, 2015 9:24 am

WHYYYY wrote:I may make a character that is a wizard, but outcast from his group.
Two questions:
1: Can a wizard focus on one type of magic (such as fire)
2: Can basic spells be cast through thought (this has been in many books, like eragon I think, we're talking so basic like making just a cold breeze, those kinds of spells)

1. Yes they can have their specialization while still having the ability to branch out if they so desire.
2. No, because we often think before we reason which means that if thought was all that was needed then the area around someone with such magic would be chaotic. More then thought is needed.
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Postby Arstotzkas » Tue May 19, 2015 9:31 am

Hey Harb, was my app accepted?
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