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Postby Confederation of imperial states » Sat May 16, 2015 5:58 pm

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well from what happens with the edits, Black sees the grenade, dive rolls out into cover, james gets out but catches a shrapnel to the arm, and (hopefully) Neo gets out into cover

it's non-lethal, but Black and Neo don't know that


well theres this certain allure with a grenade when you see one without a pin you better run to the nearest solid cover
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Postby Anowa » Sat May 16, 2015 5:59 pm

Confederation of imperial states wrote:
Anowa wrote:it's non-lethal, but Black and Neo don't know that


well theres this certain allure with a grenade when you see one without a pin you better run to the nearest solid cover

Also the posts aren't fixed yet and your following a fucked up plotline still

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"Just your average, ordinary, everyday, superhero..."

BENJAMIN called out from the darkness to the shooter, his negotiation skills came into play.

"Hey! We're not you're enemy! You're here for the hostages, right? We are here to help free the hostages too. So lets work together here. It's four against two, it can't be that hard." He stood up, now with a shield ready. His exosuit had scrapes and dust all over it from the excitement today and all Benjamin wanted to do now was to get that hostage free at all costs. This little sidestep was taking too much time, and the villians had probably escaped by now. He turned with his flashlight to Black Hand.

"Come on, we got to get moving. They could be hiding anywhere and if we sit on our asses now, their gonna get away with that hostage." Benjamin couldn't live with himself if that happened, he began to scan the area with his flashlight in some vague attempt to spot where they were in the darkness.

this is the first post that needs to be fixed. Fix it, the grenade landed before this, James it isn't a lethal grenade it has rubber pellets not shrapnel, I've explained this.
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Postby Talion Union » Sat May 16, 2015 6:03 pm

I thought about Ghost causing the helicopter to crash near everyone else. Would that be too much?
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Postby Confederation of imperial states » Sat May 16, 2015 6:05 pm

Talion Union wrote:I thought about Ghost causing the helicopter to crash near everyone else. Would that be too much?


well considering a good portion of the area is already f*cked and currently a bit of a warzone, i think it'd be normal

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Postby Anowa » Sat May 16, 2015 6:06 pm

Confederation of imperial states wrote:
Talion Union wrote:I thought about Ghost causing the helicopter to crash near everyone else. Would that be too much?


well considering a good portion of the area is already f*cked and currently a bit of a warzone, i think it'd be normal

No.
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Postby Charlia » Sat May 16, 2015 6:06 pm

Ah, boredom...
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Postby Confederation of imperial states » Sat May 16, 2015 6:06 pm

i don't see how it'd be a bit f*cked up, Black hand saw a grenade, his instinct was to dive out. even if it wasn't non lethal, it still looked like a grenade
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Postby Confederation of imperial states » Sat May 16, 2015 6:07 pm

Anowa wrote:
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well considering a good portion of the area is already f*cked and currently a bit of a warzone, i think it'd be normal

No.


No as in not too much, or no as in it wouldn't be normal. because right now an area of 3+ blocks around the plaza is pretty, well, screwed

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Postby Talion Union » Sat May 16, 2015 6:08 pm

Anowa wrote:
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well considering a good portion of the area is already f*cked and currently a bit of a warzone, i think it'd be normal

No.


So it would be okay to have the helicopter crash in the area?
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Postby Anowa » Sat May 16, 2015 6:09 pm

Talion Union wrote:
Anowa wrote:No.


So it would be okay to have the helicopter crash in the area?

No.
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Postby Anowa » Sat May 16, 2015 6:11 pm

Confederation of imperial states wrote:
Anowa wrote:No.


No as in not too much, or no as in it wouldn't be normal. because right now an area of 3+ blocks around the plaza is pretty, well, screwed

No. as in it's not related to current events at all, it'll just add more confusion
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Postby Talion Union » Sat May 16, 2015 6:11 pm

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So it would be okay to have the helicopter crash in the area?

No.


I guess I could have it crash somewhere close but not right in the middle of it.
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Postby Anowa » Sat May 16, 2015 6:14 pm

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Anowa wrote:No.


I guess I could have it crash somewhere close but not right in the middle of it.

Have it not crash and wait until your character is relevant, if their not involved with the Napulium, then they don't belong, this was said when the new IC thred was made, and you were there and agreed to it so you know what your doing is wrong
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Postby Anowa » Sat May 16, 2015 6:17 pm

Confederation of imperial states wrote:i don't see how it'd be a bit f*cked up, Black hand saw a grenade, his instinct was to dive out. even if it wasn't non lethal, it still looked like a grenade

I'm aware of that, Krako's post is still a continuity error as the grenade landed before Neo began speaking
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Postby Talion Union » Sat May 16, 2015 6:17 pm

Anowa wrote:
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I guess I could have it crash somewhere close but not right in the middle of it.

Have it not crash and wait until your character is relevant, if their not involved with the Napulium, then they don't belong, this was said when the new IC thred was made, and you were there and agreed to it so you know what your doing is wrong


Ok trying to make my character relevant, but I'm not trying to force it, that's why I was fucking asking.
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Postby Anowa » Sat May 16, 2015 6:20 pm

Talion Union wrote:
Anowa wrote:Have it not crash and wait until your character is relevant, if their not involved with the Napulium, then they don't belong, this was said when the new IC thred was made, and you were there and agreed to it so you know what your doing is wrong


Ok trying to make my character relevant, but I'm not trying to force it, that's why I was fucking asking.

have it crash in beverly hills then and have ghost come in later then, right now shits already confusing to the point that someone posted a continuity error and people are following it and the norm.
EDIT: i've edited the grenade out
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Postby Talion Union » Sat May 16, 2015 6:24 pm

Anowa wrote:
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Ok trying to make my character relevant, but I'm not trying to force it, that's why I was fucking asking.

have it crash in beverly hills then and have ghost come in later then, right now shits already confusing to the point that someone posted a continuity error and people are following it and the norm.
EDIT: i've edited the grenade out


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Postby Anowa » Sat May 16, 2015 6:39 pm

The grenade never existed
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Postby Confederation of imperial states » Sat May 16, 2015 6:53 pm

Anowa wrote:
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Ok trying to make my character relevant, but I'm not trying to force it, that's why I was fucking asking.

have it crash in beverly hills then and have ghost come in later then, right now shits already confusing to the point that someone posted a continuity error and people are following it and the norm.
EDIT: i've edited the grenade out


I've changed it. Black hand through some smoke pellets to create a smoke screen whereby him, neo, and James were able to rush to cover outside the elevator. he's currently behind a concrete wall

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Postby Anowa » Sat May 16, 2015 6:58 pm

Confederation of imperial states wrote:
Anowa wrote:have it crash in beverly hills then and have ghost come in later then, right now shits already confusing to the point that someone posted a continuity error and people are following it and the norm.
EDIT: i've edited the grenade out


I've changed it. Black hand through some smoke pellets to create a smoke screen whereby him, neo, and James were able to rush to cover outside the elevator. he's currently behind a concrete wall

K so here's the list of actions now: Atlas shoots Black, Neo replies, James shoots Orbs, Black thows smoke, Atlas shoots James
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Postby Confederation of imperial states » Sat May 16, 2015 7:01 pm

Anowa wrote:
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I've changed it. Black hand through some smoke pellets to create a smoke screen whereby him, neo, and James were able to rush to cover outside the elevator. he's currently behind a concrete wall

K so here's the list of actions now: Atlas shoots Black, Neo replies, James shoots Orbs, Black thows smoke, Atlas shoots James


well the part where Atlas shoots james is quesitonable, james could've ducked behind cover considering he still has yet to change the post according to the genade being redacted. so it's more like Atlas shot at james.

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Postby Anowa » Sat May 16, 2015 7:03 pm

Confederation of imperial states wrote:
Anowa wrote:K so here's the list of actions now: Atlas shoots Black, Neo replies, James shoots Orbs, Black thows smoke, Atlas shoots James


well the part where Atlas shoots james is quesitonable, james could've ducked behind cover considering he still has yet to change the post according to the genade being redacted. so it's more like Atlas shot at james.

I never said they hit so it's fine
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Postby Arstotzkas » Sat May 16, 2015 7:04 pm

What should I change the post to?
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Postby Anowa » Sat May 16, 2015 7:05 pm

Arstotzkas wrote:What should I change the post to?

probably
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Postby Confederation of imperial states » Sat May 16, 2015 7:06 pm

Anowa wrote:
Arstotzkas wrote:What should I change the post to?

probably


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