Elepis wrote:ApplePieistan wrote:Were my posts all right? I think they were pretty good.
Like the Turkish player, you need to describe the events in more detail, eg the march on Beijing
describe the communists planning the march
describe the march itself
describe entering Beijing
describe rounding up the nationalists
I thought that everyone just wanted to know what happened without unnecessary fluff. I like that in other people's posts, I thought you did too. Sorry.