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Alex's Sentry Serum
10
56%
Valka's Mjolnir and Gungnir
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Postby Charmera » Thu Apr 23, 2015 8:58 pm

The Republic of Atria wrote:
Charmera wrote:Yeah, but Green Lanterns and Martians are supposed to be rather adverse to killing.
Though then again, pure blinding rage might throw that out the window for now... I'd imagine she'd still feel quite guilty afterwards.


That would make sense.

I imagine it would be something like. "I killed him..."

Everyone else: "You killed a mass murdering dictator." *Give her accolades.*

Okay...

The Republic of Atria wrote:Alex suddenly snapped awake as his body was now fully rejuvenated and even stronger than ever thanks to a Zenkai. He shot back to Earth almost instantly and saw Frost about to Finish off Arctico. So Alex crashed into him fully force. "Sup Frosty. Not dead. Awesome right? Stronger than ever!" He said flexing. "You ain't gonna kill my team." He said and his eyes flared bright red.

"Your heat vision?" Frost said standing back up. "It didn't work the first time, and even with that power boost, you think it will be enough to actually pierce my skin?" He asked floating into the air and Alex smiled fiendishly.

"Good thing I'm not aiming at your skin..." He trailed off and for a split second Frost wondered what Alex was aiming. Then he felt an extremely painful burning inside his skull and dropped out of the sky like a rock. "Focused my heat vision through your eyes like a scalpel. BOOM. Lobotomy. You're probably going to have some memory issues and some sluggishness. Your brain is remarkably similar to that of a human's. I fried a section of your cerebellum. You're an Arcosian. I know it's going to take more than a botched lobotomy to put you down, but you are going to have a much harder time hitting stuff." Alex said and walked up to Frost casually.

Frost threw as hard as a punch as he could muster into Alex's face, but only to see that it had done pretty much nothing. "No! You worthless hu-"

"Shut up." Alex said and slapped Frost. Hard, enough where some of his teeth flew out of his mouth. Alex slapped him again, and again, and again until he was bleeding from his nose and barely standing. "Not fun when you're the victim huh? No. It's not. I almost feel bad for you... Nah. Not even close." He said and Gave some of his energy to the barely breathing Artico and Hiroshi. "Hey guys. Frost says he wants you to beat the living hell out of him and he won't even fight back, or use Ki!"

Julie's eyes had widened as Artico had fell, pausing and dropping the goon she had in her hand. No... She felt partly responsible for his death, she had wound him up and she hadn't helped him in his fight, when she could have saved him. She had assumed he was like the other Arcosians. Like Frost, but he wasn't. And now his blood was as much on her hands as it was on Frosts. She felt guilt and anger and frustration, directing her rage at frost.

She mentally recited the Lantern oath to stop herself from crying, to remind herself of her duty.

In brightest day, in blackest night,

No evil shall escape my sight.

She suddenly sped towards the galactic tyrant. He's not going to kill another being if I can help it. She was now seeing red, her training and ethics went out the window as she saw only one option. Revenge. For Artico and the countless GL's that were killed going up against his damn PTO.

"let those who worship evil's might," She whispered, now a voice.

She knew her ring would not aid her in what she was about to do, so she concentrated on her martian powers. She made herself invisible, then intangible as she rocketed towards him. She passed through his body, phasing his brain too as she did so. She tore the brain from it's spinal column from the inside, removing the mass of grey matter from it's body.

"Beware my power, Green Lantern's light!!!" She shouted, before hyperventilating. Oh Oa... Oh C'eridyall... forgive me... She thought, her mind racing as she processed it. She realised she was holding the Arcosian's brain in her hands. She immediately regretted her actions, tempted to drop the brain, but for some reason she held onto it, like she could put it back and fix the damage she had done. She felt sick and nauseous and she held it.

I wouldn't feel right posting this unless it was okay with you Rob and Atria. Let me know if there are any problems or if it doesn't work and I can react, edit or scrap it immediately. If it's too GMish, let me know.
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Postby Rob Halfordia » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:00 pm

Charmera wrote:
Rob Halfordia wrote:ur a faget

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jean_Charles_Faget
So he's a renowned physician? :p

RANT ALERT


No, he's a smug and pretentious asshole, and while, yes, I am too, Finland's is a special type of vanity. The kind that get's a blood rush to his no no place every time he sees himself in the mirror, and has learned to lean his head back next to his ass to smell his own farts. He's damn near hyperbolic in his seemingly endless snarkifying, to the point where I wouldn't be surprised if he lived in San Francisco and drove a Prius to his Gender Studies class everyday. Every time he posts something all I can imagine is Smug Pepe broke out of Mavorpen's basement and got access to a keyboard. And for fuck's sake, you're not Deadpool, Finland, enough with the fourth wall breaks. They aren't funny, they're horribly derailing, and they give the impression that you're simply trying to take up space in as vacuous a way as possible. And hey, ground control to Maj. Finland, using JonTron pictures and clips does not make you inherently funny. In fact, it has quite the opposite effect. It shows just how unfunny you are that you have to use clips and videos from a much funnier person just to seem somewhat witty (and I am liberally using that term). And for fuck's sake nobody gives 3 adjacent angstroms of a fuck about Frenk the Wonder Cunt and his borderline comically powerful abilities. You have the potential to be great, but characters like Frenk and Gogito give off the impression that all you care about is being OP, and will sacrifice anything to achieve this, whether it's having a good character, or a good plot. In fact, I would say that you are at your best when playing mid range characters like Mayla and the White Prince. Stop holding yourself back with these profoundly boring and incredibly powerful assholes, and start focusing on the story.

RANT OVER
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Postby The Republic of Atria » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:02 pm

Charmera wrote:
The Republic of Atria wrote:
That would make sense.

I imagine it would be something like. "I killed him..."

Everyone else: "You killed a mass murdering dictator." *Give her accolades.*

Okay...

The Republic of Atria wrote:Alex suddenly snapped awake as his body was now fully rejuvenated and even stronger than ever thanks to a Zenkai. He shot back to Earth almost instantly and saw Frost about to Finish off Arctico. So Alex crashed into him fully force. "Sup Frosty. Not dead. Awesome right? Stronger than ever!" He said flexing. "You ain't gonna kill my team." He said and his eyes flared bright red.

"Your heat vision?" Frost said standing back up. "It didn't work the first time, and even with that power boost, you think it will be enough to actually pierce my skin?" He asked floating into the air and Alex smiled fiendishly.

"Good thing I'm not aiming at your skin..." He trailed off and for a split second Frost wondered what Alex was aiming. Then he felt an extremely painful burning inside his skull and dropped out of the sky like a rock. "Focused my heat vision through your eyes like a scalpel. BOOM. Lobotomy. You're probably going to have some memory issues and some sluggishness. Your brain is remarkably similar to that of a human's. I fried a section of your cerebellum. You're an Arcosian. I know it's going to take more than a botched lobotomy to put you down, but you are going to have a much harder time hitting stuff." Alex said and walked up to Frost casually.

Frost threw as hard as a punch as he could muster into Alex's face, but only to see that it had done pretty much nothing. "No! You worthless hu-"

"Shut up." Alex said and slapped Frost. Hard, enough where some of his teeth flew out of his mouth. Alex slapped him again, and again, and again until he was bleeding from his nose and barely standing. "Not fun when you're the victim huh? No. It's not. I almost feel bad for you... Nah. Not even close." He said and Gave some of his energy to the barely breathing Artico and Hiroshi. "Hey guys. Frost says he wants you to beat the living hell out of him and he won't even fight back, or use Ki!"

Julie's eyes had widened as Artico had fell, pausing and dropping the goon she had in her hand. No... She felt partly responsible for his death, she had wound him up and she hadn't helped him in his fight, when she could have saved him. She had assumed he was like the other Arcosians. Like Frost, but he wasn't. And now his blood was as much on her hands as it was on Frosts. She felt guilt and anger and frustration, directing her rage at frost.

She mentally recited the Lantern oath to stop herself from crying, to remind herself of her duty.

In brightest day, in blackest night,

No evil shall escape my sight.

She suddenly sped towards the galactic tyrant. He's not going to kill another being if I can help it. She was now seeing red, her training and ethics went out the window as she saw only one option. Revenge. For Artico and the countless GL's that were killed going up against his damn PTO.

"let those who worship evil's might," She whispered, now a voice.

She knew her ring would not aid her in what she was about to do, so she concentrated on her martian powers. She made herself invisible, then intangible as she rocketed towards him. She passed through his body, phasing his brain too as she did so. She tore the brain from it's spinal column from the inside, removing the mass of grey matter from it's body.

"Beware my power, Green Lantern's light!!!" She shouted, before hyperventilating. Oh Oa... Oh C'eridyall... forgive me... She thought, her mind racing as she processed it. She realised she was holding the Arcosian's brain in her hands. She immediately regretted her actions, tempted to drop the brain, but for some reason she held onto it, like she could put it back and fix the damage she had done. She felt sick and nauseous and she held it.

I wouldn't feel right posting this unless it was okay with you Rob and Atria. Let me know if there are any problems or if it doesn't work and I can react, edit or scrap it immediately. If it's too GMish, let me know.


Seems awesome to me.

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Postby Finland SSR » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:05 pm

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Postby Rob Halfordia » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:06 pm

Finland SSR wrote:

I have pledged to respond to your rants in no other way than GIFs. I am an Internet Anger Germ Fighter.

A gif you stole from Neros. Not to mention, there was some actual advice in there.
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:07 pm

I'm just going to say that there were some genuinely helpful comments in that rant and it is regretful to have to see it delivered in such a caustic manner.

I know you lot don't always get along and god knows you've been here for much longer than I, which may mean that this is probably far less serious than apparent, but it still makes me wonder, and I say this with utmost respect, could you guys treat each other civilly?

Charmera wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:So with Aeshandra accepted, we only really need Star to greenlight us and we can carry out that Aiuar Invasion story, right? I'm looking forward to introducing Asra. :P

You got any particular ideas in regards to that, Charm?

Perhaps we could work on a post together where Aeshandra sends a team of Vokornians that find him somewhere... then he turns his attention to Aiuar.


Oh, that sounds interesting. I was initially going to suggest that, depending on how Aeshandra's telepathy worked, she could have sensed an evil intent approaching, but I think your idea works out a lot better. Perhaps they find him near a destroyed planet during a state of dormancy (he does this every now and then because of the damaged Power Core), and he either imposes his will on one of them to find out about Aiuar, or follows a survivor there. The latter would reasonably allow the Vokornian to warn Aeshandra with enough time to set up the banishing spell, while the former would let Valka arrive to Aiuar and find stuff partially wrecked as an aftermath of Asra's arrival, before the banishing spell was set up. What do you think?
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Postby Finland SSR » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:08 pm

Rob Halfordia wrote:
Finland SSR wrote:

I have pledged to respond to your rants in no other way than GIFs. I am an Internet Anger Germ Fighter.

A gif you stole from Neros. Not to mention, there was some actual advice in there.

Image
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Postby Rob Halfordia » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:08 pm

Finland SSR wrote:
Rob Halfordia wrote:A gif you stole from Neros. Not to mention, there was some actual advice in there.

Image


Not a proper gif.

Try again nub
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Postby Finland SSR » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:11 pm

Rob Halfordia wrote:
Finland SSR wrote:
Image


Not a proper gif.

Try again nub

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Postby The Republic of Atria » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:11 pm

I wanted to make a member of Thanos' race as a character, but... I can't find any damn pics.

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Postby Charmera » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:12 pm

Rob Halfordia wrote:
Charmera wrote:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jean_Charles_Faget
So he's a renowned physician? :p

RANT ALERT


No, he's a smug and pretentious asshole, and while, yes, I am too, Finland's is a special type of vanity. The kind that get's a blood rush to his no no place every time he sees himself in the mirror, and has learned to lean his head back next to his ass to smell his own farts. He's damn near hyperbolic in his seemingly endless snarkifying, to the point where I wouldn't be surprised if he lived in San Francisco and drove a Prius to his Gender Studies class everyday. Every time he posts something all I can imagine is Smug Pepe broke out of Mavorpen's basement and got access to a keyboard. And for fuck's sake, you're not Deadpool, Finland, enough with the fourth wall breaks. They aren't funny, they're horribly derailing, and they give the impression that you're simply trying to take up space in as vacuous a way as possible. And hey, ground control to Maj. Finland, using JonTron pictures and clips does not make you inherently funny. In fact, it has quite the opposite effect. It shows just how unfunny you are that you have to use clips and videos from a much funnier person just to seem somewhat witty (and I am liberally using that term). And for nobody give 3 adjacent angstroms of a fuck about Frenk the Wonder Cunt and his borderline comically powerful abilities. You have the potential to be great, but characters like Frenk and Gogito give off the impression that all you care about is being OP, and will sacrifice anything to achieve this, whether it's having a good character, or a good plot. In fact, I would say that you are at your best when playing mid range characters like Mayla and the White Prince. Stop holding yourself back with these profoundly boring and incredibly powerful assholes, and start focusing on the story.

RANT OVER

... Who the hell is Frenk?

The Republic of Atria wrote:
Charmera wrote:Okay...

Julie's eyes had widened as Artico had fell, pausing and dropping the goon she had in her hand. No... She felt partly responsible for his death, she had wound him up and she hadn't helped him in his fight, when she could have saved him. She had assumed he was like the other Arcosians. Like Frost, but he wasn't. And now his blood was as much on her hands as it was on Frosts. She felt guilt and anger and frustration, directing her rage at frost.

She mentally recited the Lantern oath to stop herself from crying, to remind herself of her duty.

In brightest day, in blackest night,

No evil shall escape my sight.

She suddenly sped towards the galactic tyrant. He's not going to kill another being if I can help it. She was now seeing red, her training and ethics went out the window as she saw only one option. Revenge. For Artico and the countless GL's that were killed going up against his damn PTO.

"let those who worship evil's might," She whispered, now a voice.

She knew her ring would not aid her in what she was about to do, so she concentrated on her martian powers. She made herself invisible, then intangible as she rocketed towards him. She passed through his body, phasing his brain too as she did so. She tore the brain from it's spinal column from the inside, removing the mass of grey matter from it's body.

"Beware my power, Green Lantern's light!!!" She shouted, before hyperventilating. Oh Oa... Oh C'eridyall... forgive me... She thought, her mind racing as she processed it. She realised she was holding the Arcosian's brain in her hands. She immediately regretted her actions, tempted to drop the brain, but for some reason she held onto it, like she could put it back and fix the damage she had done. She felt sick and nauseous and she held it.

I wouldn't feel right posting this unless it was okay with you Rob and Atria. Let me know if there are any problems or if it doesn't work and I can react, edit or scrap it immediately. If it's too GMish, let me know.


Seems awesome to me.

Alright.
I still feel strangely uncomfortable with posting this....
Should I wait for an Okay from Rob?

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:I'm just going to say that there were some genuinely helpful comments in that rant and it is regretful to have to see it delivered in such a caustic manner.

I know you lot don't always get along and god knows you've been here for much longer than I, which may mean that this is probably far less serious than apparent, but it still makes me wonder, and I say this with utmost respect, could you guys treat each other civilly?

Charmera wrote:Perhaps we could work on a post together where Aeshandra sends a team of Vokornians that find him somewhere... then he turns his attention to Aiuar.


Oh, that sounds interesting. I was initially going to suggest that, depending on how Aeshandra's telepathy worked, she could have sensed an evil intent approaching, but I think your idea works out a lot better. Perhaps they find him near a destroyed planet during a state of dormancy (he does this every now and then because of the damaged Power Core), and he either imposes his will on one of them to find out about Aiuar, or follows a survivor there. The latter would reasonably allow the Vokornian to warn Aeshandra with enough time to set up the banishing spell, while the former would let Valka arrive to Aiuar and find stuff partially wrecked as an aftermath of Asra's arrival, before the banishing spell was set up. What do you think?

I have a similar sort of feeling towards these arguments. But I have seen players at each others throats a lot over the course of my rp experience. I've just learnt to accept it most of the time, which saddens me.

Anyhow. I think the latter option would be best, though the former would also be interesting to... The Vokornians of the collective would be able to sense if one of their kind was compromised.
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Postby Finland SSR » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:12 pm

The Republic of Atria wrote:I wanted to make a member of Thanos' race as a character, but... I can't find any damn pics.

Search "Thanos 63" or "Thanos Rule 63"
That should cut it.
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Postby Rob Halfordia » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:13 pm

Finland SSR wrote:
Rob Halfordia wrote:
Not a proper gif.

Try again nub

Image

Better.

But, I really do suggest you take some of the stuff at the end into consideration, because, it was genuine advice.
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Postby Finland SSR » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:14 pm

Charmera wrote:
Rob Halfordia wrote:RANT ALERT


No, he's a smug and pretentious asshole, and while, yes, I am too, Finland's is a special type of vanity. The kind that get's a blood rush to his no no place every time he sees himself in the mirror, and has learned to lean his head back next to his ass to smell his own farts. He's damn near hyperbolic in his seemingly endless snarkifying, to the point where I wouldn't be surprised if he lived in San Francisco and drove a Prius to his Gender Studies class everyday. Every time he posts something all I can imagine is Smug Pepe broke out of Mavorpen's basement and got access to a keyboard. And for fuck's sake, you're not Deadpool, Finland, enough with the fourth wall breaks. They aren't funny, they're horribly derailing, and they give the impression that you're simply trying to take up space in as vacuous a way as possible. And hey, ground control to Maj. Finland, using JonTron pictures and clips does not make you inherently funny. In fact, it has quite the opposite effect. It shows just how unfunny you are that you have to use clips and videos from a much funnier person just to seem somewhat witty (and I am liberally using that term). And for nobody give 3 adjacent angstroms of a fuck about Frenk the Wonder Cunt and his borderline comically powerful abilities. You have the potential to be great, but characters like Frenk and Gogito give off the impression that all you care about is being OP, and will sacrifice anything to achieve this, whether it's having a good character, or a good plot. In fact, I would say that you are at your best when playing mid range characters like Mayla and the White Prince. Stop holding yourself back with these profoundly boring and incredibly powerful assholes, and start focusing on the story.

RANT OVER

... Who the hell is Frenk?

The Republic of Atria wrote:
Seems awesome to me.

Alright.
I still feel strangely uncomfortable with posting this....
Should I wait for an Okay from Rob?

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:I'm just going to say that there were some genuinely helpful comments in that rant and it is regretful to have to see it delivered in such a caustic manner.

I know you lot don't always get along and god knows you've been here for much longer than I, which may mean that this is probably far less serious than apparent, but it still makes me wonder, and I say this with utmost respect, could you guys treat each other civilly?



Oh, that sounds interesting. I was initially going to suggest that, depending on how Aeshandra's telepathy worked, she could have sensed an evil intent approaching, but I think your idea works out a lot better. Perhaps they find him near a destroyed planet during a state of dormancy (he does this every now and then because of the damaged Power Core), and he either imposes his will on one of them to find out about Aiuar, or follows a survivor there. The latter would reasonably allow the Vokornian to warn Aeshandra with enough time to set up the banishing spell, while the former would let Valka arrive to Aiuar and find stuff partially wrecked as an aftermath of Asra's arrival, before the banishing spell was set up. What do you think?

I have a similar sort of feeling towards these arguments. But I have seen players at each others throats a lot over the course of my rp experience. I've just learnt to accept it most of the time, which saddens me.

Anyhow. I think the latter option would be best, though the former would also be interesting to... The Vokornians of the collective would be able to sense if one of their kind was compromised.

...Nobody.

I know a Frank, but no Frenk.
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:15 pm

Guess I'm just used to being in more civil environments, Charm.

"Frenk" refers to Fin's old character Frank Mayhem I believe. I know because I saw him in the Battle Dome that Rebel started some time ago.

If you think the latter option would be best, then let's do that. I'm fine with either, really. :P

So how do you think we should work on this post then?
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Postby Finland SSR » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:16 pm

Rob Halfordia wrote:
Finland SSR wrote:

Better.

But, I really do suggest you take some of the stuff at the end into consideration, because, it was genuine advice.

If only you would, you know, not try to make me angry, I could.
Why need to fill up half the paragraph with rants and angry words when you can just do a few lines explaining what could be done better?
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Postby Charmera » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:17 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Guess I'm just used to being in more civil environments, Charm.

"Frenk" refers to Fin's old character Frank Mayhem I believe. I know because I saw him in the Battle Dome that Rebel started some time ago.

If you think the latter option would be best, then let's do that. I'm fine with either, really. :P

So how do you think we should work on this post then?

I think we should perhaps work together on something over TG? I'd imagine it'd be an aliens/horror movie style "Picking them off one by one?" Sorta thing. We should make it kinda scary.
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Postby Rob Halfordia » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:18 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:I'm just going to say that there were some genuinely helpful comments in that rant and it is regretful to have to see it delivered in such a caustic manner.

I know you lot don't always get along and god knows you've been here for much longer than I, which may mean that this is probably far less serious than apparent, but it still makes me wonder, and I say this with utmost respect, could you guys treat each other civilly?

Charmera wrote:Perhaps we could work on a post together where Aeshandra sends a team of Vokornians that find him somewhere... then he turns his attention to Aiuar.


Oh, that sounds interesting. I was initially going to suggest that, depending on how Aeshandra's telepathy worked, she could have sensed an evil intent approaching, but I think your idea works out a lot better. Perhaps they find him near a destroyed planet during a state of dormancy (he does this every now and then because of the damaged Power Core), and he either imposes his will on one of them to find out about Aiuar, or follows a survivor there. The latter would reasonably allow the Vokornian to warn Aeshandra with enough time to set up the banishing spell, while the former would let Valka arrive to Aiuar and find stuff partially wrecked as an aftermath of Asra's arrival, before the banishing spell was set up. What do you think?


Listen bruh. This is how we operate. It's how we've always operated, and it's worked well. The conflict, albeit rather exaggerated, and often not really too serious, keeps the spark alive.

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But in all seriousness, take it lightly, it's usually all in good fun. You'll know when we really have at it. It's around the point when Neros starts wishing death via car crash upon people.

Finland SSR wrote:
Rob Halfordia wrote:Better.

But, I really do suggest you take some of the stuff at the end into consideration, because, it was genuine advice.

If only you would, you know, not try to make me angry, I could.
Why need to fill up half the paragraph with rants and angry words when you can just do a few lines explaining what could be done better?


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Postby The Republic of Atria » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:20 pm

Hm, guess I'll just use Thanos' son as an appearance. Since he only appears like twice and is never seen again.

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:22 pm

Charmera wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Guess I'm just used to being in more civil environments, Charm.

"Frenk" refers to Fin's old character Frank Mayhem I believe. I know because I saw him in the Battle Dome that Rebel started some time ago.

If you think the latter option would be best, then let's do that. I'm fine with either, really. :P

So how do you think we should work on this post then?

I think we should perhaps work together on something over TG? I'd imagine it'd be an aliens/horror movie style "Picking them off one by one?" Sorta thing. We should make it kinda scary.


Oh, that's the kind of vibe you were going for?

I, uh... Asra's mostly a "kill it with fire" kind of guy. <.<

I'm fine with working on a post over TG, but yeah, there's that issue :P. I think we should work on it strictly through the perspective of the Vokornians. I can always write from Asra's perspective afterwards but I do need to determine his actions for the initial post, and it would work better from the perspective of the victims in this case, I would say.

Rob Halfordia wrote:But in all seriousness, take it lightly, it's usually all in good fun. You'll know when we really have at it. It's around the point when Neros starts wishing death via car crash upon people.


If you say so.
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Postby Charmera » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:26 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Charmera wrote:I think we should perhaps work together on something over TG? I'd imagine it'd be an aliens/horror movie style "Picking them off one by one?" Sorta thing. We should make it kinda scary.


Oh, that's the kind of vibe you were going for?

I, uh... Asra's mostly a "kill it with fire" kind of guy. <.<

I'm fine with working on a post over TG, but yeah, there's that issue :P. I think we should work on it strictly through the perspective of the Vokornians. I can always write from Asra's perspective afterwards but I do need to determine his actions for the initial post, and it would work better from the perspective of the victims in this case, I would say.

Ahhh... that is a bit of a problem. We could focus mainly on the build up in that case or something... we'll figure it out. :p
Alright. Do you want me to write for the squad or would you like to help with that?
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:30 pm

Charmera wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Oh, that's the kind of vibe you were going for?

I, uh... Asra's mostly a "kill it with fire" kind of guy. <.<

I'm fine with working on a post over TG, but yeah, there's that issue :P. I think we should work on it strictly through the perspective of the Vokornians. I can always write from Asra's perspective afterwards but I do need to determine his actions for the initial post, and it would work better from the perspective of the victims in this case, I would say.

Ahhh... that is a bit of a problem. We could focus mainly on the build up in that case or something... we'll figure it out. :p
Alright. Do you want me to write for the squad or would you like to help with that?


Well, I'd like to have part in describing what the squad sees and such, though of course you're free to turn it into terms the Vokornians would use/think in. Aside from that though, while I would like to know how it's coming along, I think you should write the squad's part by yourself.
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Postby Charmera » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:32 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Charmera wrote:Ahhh... that is a bit of a problem. We could focus mainly on the build up in that case or something... we'll figure it out. :p
Alright. Do you want me to write for the squad or would you like to help with that?


Well, I'd like to have part in describing what the squad sees and such, though of course you're free to turn it into terms the Vokornians would use/think in. Aside from that though, while I would like to know how it's coming along, I think you should write the squad's part by yourself.

Alrighty.
Do you want to start or should I? If you do then just TG me the first part of the post.... setting the scene I guess.

Also, decided to post the Julie post... I'm assuming everyone is cool with it.
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:37 pm

Charmera wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Well, I'd like to have part in describing what the squad sees and such, though of course you're free to turn it into terms the Vokornians would use/think in. Aside from that though, while I would like to know how it's coming along, I think you should write the squad's part by yourself.

Alrighty.
Do you want to start or should I? If you do then just TG me the first part of the post.... setting the scene I guess.

Also, decided to post the Julie post... I'm assuming everyone is cool with it.


I think you should start, since I would assume the post would begin with Aeshandra sending the squad out to investigate and such.

An idea I had, perhaps the Vokornians find him just as he is just about to claim his prize after burning the planet's surface. I was thinking he could only just be acquiring his Corruption Infusion for the purposes of the post, I believe it could help craft a tenebrous scene if Asra starts corrupting everything just as the Vokornians see him. What do you think?
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Postby Rob Halfordia » Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:38 pm

Any ideas on a picture for Mason (my new character)?
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