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Postby Alex Green » Sat Feb 28, 2015 9:20 am

Sorry for that because I am new to rp and dont know much about how to do things so that why I take the idea. Please let me in and teach me .
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Postby Heraklea- » Sat Feb 28, 2015 10:17 am

Alex Green wrote:Sorry for that because I am new to rp and dont know much about how to do things so that why I take the idea. Please let me in and teach me .

Alright, let's do some learning. The first thing to do when you find an RP you are interested in is you've got to read the rules. They're usually in the first few posts.

Rules

1. No Godmodding, Metagaming or Cheating in general.
2. Please listen to the OPs and Co-OPs and their decisions please.
3. No one-liners, good quality RPing. This means there must be at least ninth grade grammar and spelling at least.
4. No flaming.
5. Even if you have 15+ years of combat experience or something like that, no, you're not immortal/unkillable.
6. You are strictly restricted to the city of Lamazanii and its surrounding countryside.
7. Go easy on the brutal details of fights and such.
8. Your character, if he/she is unmarried, may be forcefully married to another family's member for political reasons. This was common during the time we are currently RPing in (High Middle Age) so keep that in mind please :)
9. It's a P2TM RP, not real life. Although we may gun for realism in this RP, don't go that hard to the point where it's stressful for everyone. Have fun.
10. THIS IS A PRETTY IMPORTANT RULE: We are only RPing as Syanlins, NO OTHER FAMILY/OUTSIDERS, so keep it close kin (cousin maximum belonging to the House being the furthest you can get). Sorry for the inconvenience.

Note Rule 10. We are all members of the House Syanlins. We are a family (probably loaded with dysfunction, but isn't that the mark of all great families? ;) ). Your app needs to reflect how you are a member of the House. So, go to the house, take a look at the characters and family history, and then determine how you are related.

"Who Rules the Lamazanii, Rules the Paseral Sea"


Head of House: Aser Syalins
Heir: -TBA-
Strength: About 920 Men (250 part of a retinue) for combat, 3200 sailors, 80 trade ships
Allies: The Vocanni, The Hakisnams [Unofficially]
Rivals: The Camasesi, The Kiriaks
Brief History:

The Syanlins have been the Lamazanii's dominant trade family ever since 689 After Revival (After the Revival of the Kingdom of Artosgome, AR). Ever since the prominent landed noble, Irias Syanlins, founded the house back in 685, the Syanlins had taken advantage of numerous heads to advance their trade power within Lamazanii. Numerous Syanlins have become advisers to the royalty of Artosgome, in return, the king/local count/local duke have given surplus assets for the Syanlins to build themselves upon. Notably would have to be Toeasdem Syanlins, who offered the king at the time, King Arosgam IV, his stewardship in return for military training of numerous Syanlins levies to turn them into professional soldiers.

Notable Members:

Irias Syanlins - Founder of the House - [Dead Since 702 AR, Died of Natural Causes]
Tieasdem Syanlins - Prominent Former Head of House, Established the Syanlins' personal guard - [Dead Since 805 AR, Died of an Infected Wound]
Aser Syalins - Current Head of House
Elisak Vocanni - Wife of Aser

Villem Syalins - Bastard Son of Picarry Syalins and an unknown woman (presumed to be a former servant), half-brother to Aser

Picarry Syanlins - Former Head of House - [Dead Since 987, Died of Slow Fever]
Georgia - Wife of Picarry - Lowborn - [Dead Since 987, Died of Slow Fever]

Job Syanlin - Nephew of Aser - [Unknown Parents]

Blaeing Syanlins - Cousin of Aser - [Status Unknown]
Bjorn Syalins - Extended 2nd Cousin of Aser - [Father's status unknown, unknown mother]

Sigmund Syanlins [Adopted the Vocanni name] - Extended 3rd Cousin of Aser - [Miranda Vocanni & an Unknown Syanlins Father]

Elisabeth Syalin - Cousin of Aser - [Unknown Parents]

Power: The Syanlins' political and social power mostly comes from their brutal reputation to assassinate or murder close kin of people who double cross them. Another way the Syalins' power emerges from would be their powerful personal army, trade fleet and excellent stewardship. The Syanlins have also been known to be just in terms of crimes, preventing crimes at the source by donating food and money to those who would usually resort to stealing. For murderers however, they are usually hunted down and publicly executed by Syanlins soldiers.

A brother, cousin, nephew, uncle or any other close familial relation would be acceptable. Though Onty never touched on it, I'm sure being adopted into the family would also be acceptable, but think hard about it before you choose that route.

Your bio and personality need more. Where did your character come from? What was his story to this point? How does he behave? These will inform the other RPers of how their own characters view and act towards your own. As will your strengths and weaknesses.

Again, as Onty said, provide the link for your other RP experience. Some of us have already been playing together in other RPs and get away with no link since we both have the bookmark already. You don't have that luxury at the moment, so find the link so we can review your work. And finally, grammar. Yours is somewhat lacking. I'm not perfect at writing myself, so do as I do and reread what you intend to post out loud before you click submit. You may not catch everything, but you'll catch most of the mistakes you are about to make. Unless English is a second language, in which case you may want to have someone else proofread for you.

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Postby Alex Green » Sat Feb 28, 2015 10:23 am

Thanks sir , I will be submitting my application till tomorrow.
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Postby Maple Succesors » Sat Feb 28, 2015 1:04 pm

Heraklea- wrote:
"Who Rules the Lamazanii, Rules the Paseral Sea"


Head of House: Aser Syalins
Heir: -TBA-
Strength: About 920 Men (250 part of a retinue) for combat, 3200 sailors, 80 trade ships
Allies: The Vocanni, The Hakisnams [Unofficially]
Rivals: The Camasesi, The Kiriaks
Brief History:

The Syanlins have been the Lamazanii's dominant trade family ever since 689 After Revival (After the Revival of the Kingdom of Artosgome, AR). Ever since the prominent landed noble, Irias Syanlins, founded the house back in 685, the Syanlins had taken advantage of numerous heads to advance their trade power within Lamazanii. Numerous Syanlins have become advisers to the royalty of Artosgome, in return, the king/local count/local duke have given surplus assets for the Syanlins to build themselves upon. Notably would have to be Toeasdem Syanlins, who offered the king at the time, King Arosgam IV, his stewardship in return for military training of numerous Syanlins levies to turn them into professional soldiers.

Notable Members:

Irias Syanlins - Founder of the House - [Dead Since 702 AR, Died of Natural Causes]
Tieasdem Syanlins - Prominent Former Head of House, Established the Syanlins' personal guard - [Dead Since 805 AR, Died of an Infected Wound]
Aser Syalins - Current Head of House
Elisak Vocanni - Wife of Aser

Villem Syalins - Bastard Son of Picarry Syalins and an unknown woman (presumed to be a former servant), half-brother to Aser

Picarry Syanlins - Former Head of House - [Dead Since 987, Died of Slow Fever]
Georgia - Wife of Picarry - Lowborn - [Dead Since 987, Died of Slow Fever]

Job Syanlin - Nephew of Aser - [Unknown Parents]

Blaeing Syanlins - Cousin of Aser - [Status Unknown]
Bjorn Syalins - Extended 2nd Cousin of Aser - [Father's status unknown, unknown mother]

Sigmund Syanlins [Adopted the Vocanni name] - Extended 3rd Cousin of Aser - [Miranda Vocanni & an Unknown Syanlins Father]

Elisabeth Syalin - Cousin of Aser - [Unknown Parents]

Power: The Syanlins' political and social power mostly comes from their brutal reputation to assassinate or murder close kin of people who double cross them. Another way the Syalins' power emerges from would be their powerful personal army, trade fleet and excellent stewardship. The Syanlins have also been known to be just in terms of crimes, preventing crimes at the source by donating food and money to those who would usually resort to stealing. For murderers however, they are usually hunted down and publicly executed by Syanlins soldiers.




Just a bit nit picky of me, but I'm curious as to if Jun is recognized as a member of the family? He wasn't in the family list, and I'm wondering if that's because he hasn't been recognized by his relatives yet?
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Postby Heraklea- » Sat Feb 28, 2015 1:15 pm

Maple Succesors wrote:
Heraklea- wrote:
"Who Rules the Lamazanii, Rules the Paseral Sea"


Head of House: Aser Syalins
Heir: -TBA-
Strength: About 920 Men (250 part of a retinue) for combat, 3200 sailors, 80 trade ships
Allies: The Vocanni, The Hakisnams [Unofficially]
Rivals: The Camasesi, The Kiriaks
Brief History:

The Syanlins have been the Lamazanii's dominant trade family ever since 689 After Revival (After the Revival of the Kingdom of Artosgome, AR). Ever since the prominent landed noble, Irias Syanlins, founded the house back in 685, the Syanlins had taken advantage of numerous heads to advance their trade power within Lamazanii. Numerous Syanlins have become advisers to the royalty of Artosgome, in return, the king/local count/local duke have given surplus assets for the Syanlins to build themselves upon. Notably would have to be Toeasdem Syanlins, who offered the king at the time, King Arosgam IV, his stewardship in return for military training of numerous Syanlins levies to turn them into professional soldiers.

Notable Members:

Irias Syanlins - Founder of the House - [Dead Since 702 AR, Died of Natural Causes]
Tieasdem Syanlins - Prominent Former Head of House, Established the Syanlins' personal guard - [Dead Since 805 AR, Died of an Infected Wound]
Aser Syalins - Current Head of House
Elisak Vocanni - Wife of Aser

Villem Syalins - Bastard Son of Picarry Syalins and an unknown woman (presumed to be a former servant), half-brother to Aser

Picarry Syanlins - Former Head of House - [Dead Since 987, Died of Slow Fever]
Georgia - Wife of Picarry - Lowborn - [Dead Since 987, Died of Slow Fever]

Job Syanlin - Nephew of Aser - [Unknown Parents]

Blaeing Syanlins - Cousin of Aser - [Status Unknown]
Bjorn Syalins - Extended 2nd Cousin of Aser - [Father's status unknown, unknown mother]

Sigmund Syanlins [Adopted the Vocanni name] - Extended 3rd Cousin of Aser - [Miranda Vocanni & an Unknown Syanlins Father]

Elisabeth Syalin - Cousin of Aser - [Unknown Parents]

Power: The Syanlins' political and social power mostly comes from their brutal reputation to assassinate or murder close kin of people who double cross them. Another way the Syalins' power emerges from would be their powerful personal army, trade fleet and excellent stewardship. The Syanlins have also been known to be just in terms of crimes, preventing crimes at the source by donating food and money to those who would usually resort to stealing. For murderers however, they are usually hunted down and publicly executed by Syanlins soldiers.




Just a bit nit picky of me, but I'm curious as to if Jun is recognized as a member of the family? He wasn't in the family list, and I'm wondering if that's because he hasn't been recognized by his relatives yet?

No data. My guess is Onty just forgot. Are we supposed to know of your existence?

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Postby Maple Succesors » Sat Feb 28, 2015 1:18 pm

Heraklea- wrote:
Maple Succesors wrote:
Just a bit nit picky of me, but I'm curious as to if Jun is recognized as a member of the family? He wasn't in the family list, and I'm wondering if that's because he hasn't been recognized by his relatives yet?

No data. My guess is Onty just forgot. Are we supposed to know of your existence?


Well,I would think that word would have been sent of his birth, as well of his mother's death, considering she was still part of the family, just married off. They wouldn't really know much of him, or that he's down in the south, but they should at least know of his existence if not his name.

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Postby Heraklea- » Sat Feb 28, 2015 1:39 pm

Maple Succesors wrote:
Heraklea- wrote:No data. My guess is Onty just forgot. Are we supposed to know of your existence?


Well,I would think that word would have been sent of his birth, as well of his mother's death, considering she was still part of the family, just married off. They wouldn't really know much of him, or that he's down in the south, but they should at least know of his existence if not his name.

Yeah, then that is probably an oversight on Onty's part. Alternately, he may be considering you a part of your father's house. I'll wait for him to get back, since I can't edit the post, but I'm fairly certain you're part of the House Syanlins.
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Postby Ontorisa » Sat Feb 28, 2015 3:21 pm

Maple Succesors wrote:
Heraklea- wrote:
"Who Rules the Lamazanii, Rules the Paseral Sea"


Head of House: Aser Syalins
Heir: -TBA-
Strength: About 920 Men (250 part of a retinue) for combat, 3200 sailors, 80 trade ships
Allies: The Vocanni, The Hakisnams [Unofficially]
Rivals: The Camasesi, The Kiriaks
Brief History:

The Syanlins have been the Lamazanii's dominant trade family ever since 689 After Revival (After the Revival of the Kingdom of Artosgome, AR). Ever since the prominent landed noble, Irias Syanlins, founded the house back in 685, the Syanlins had taken advantage of numerous heads to advance their trade power within Lamazanii. Numerous Syanlins have become advisers to the royalty of Artosgome, in return, the king/local count/local duke have given surplus assets for the Syanlins to build themselves upon. Notably would have to be Toeasdem Syanlins, who offered the king at the time, King Arosgam IV, his stewardship in return for military training of numerous Syanlins levies to turn them into professional soldiers.

Notable Members:

Irias Syanlins - Founder of the House - [Dead Since 702 AR, Died of Natural Causes]
Tieasdem Syanlins - Prominent Former Head of House, Established the Syanlins' personal guard - [Dead Since 805 AR, Died of an Infected Wound]
Aser Syalins - Current Head of House
Elisak Vocanni - Wife of Aser

Villem Syalins - Bastard Son of Picarry Syalins and an unknown woman (presumed to be a former servant), half-brother to Aser

Picarry Syanlins - Former Head of House - [Dead Since 987, Died of Slow Fever]
Georgia - Wife of Picarry - Lowborn - [Dead Since 987, Died of Slow Fever]

Job Syanlin - Nephew of Aser - [Unknown Parents]

Blaeing Syanlins - Cousin of Aser - [Status Unknown]
Bjorn Syalins - Extended 2nd Cousin of Aser - [Father's status unknown, unknown mother]

Sigmund Syanlins [Adopted the Vocanni name] - Extended 3rd Cousin of Aser - [Miranda Vocanni & an Unknown Syanlins Father]

Elisabeth Syalin - Cousin of Aser - [Unknown Parents]

Power: The Syanlins' political and social power mostly comes from their brutal reputation to assassinate or murder close kin of people who double cross them. Another way the Syalins' power emerges from would be their powerful personal army, trade fleet and excellent stewardship. The Syanlins have also been known to be just in terms of crimes, preventing crimes at the source by donating food and money to those who would usually resort to stealing. For murderers however, they are usually hunted down and publicly executed by Syanlins soldiers.




Just a bit nit picky of me, but I'm curious as to if Jun is recognized as a member of the family? He wasn't in the family list, and I'm wondering if that's because he hasn't been recognized by his relatives yet?


Oh fuck me that's what I missed. I'll edit right now.

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Postby Aden Protectorate » Sat Feb 28, 2015 3:39 pm

Interested. Very, interested.

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Postby Slakonian » Sat Feb 28, 2015 4:31 pm

mature content, that reminds me the Borgias a bit(because is pretty family based) :p , hope my language on my posts won't cause any trouble :)
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Postby Aden Protectorate » Sat Feb 28, 2015 4:49 pm

Not sure what my char should be like.

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Postby Heraklea- » Sat Feb 28, 2015 4:59 pm

Aden Protectorate wrote:Not sure what my char should be like.

Well, we have more fighters than we can shake a stick at at this point. A few more business men or diplomats wouldn't go wrong for a merchant house. He doesn't have to be completely incompetent as a fighter, but be focused in another direction.

Or do something completely different. Or the same.
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Postby Ontorisa » Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:10 pm

Slakonian wrote:mature content, that reminds me the Borgias a bit(because is pretty family based) :p , hope my language on my posts won't cause any trouble :)


*cough* They're the reasons *cough*

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Postby Aden Protectorate » Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:18 pm

Heraklea- wrote:
Aden Protectorate wrote:Not sure what my char should be like.

Well, we have more fighters than we can shake a stick at at this point. A few more business men or diplomats wouldn't go wrong for a merchant house. He doesn't have to be completely incompetent as a fighter, but be focused in another direction.

Or do something completely different. Or the same.

Perhaps someone similar to Enrico Dandolo except in a more diplomatic role. Yes I like.

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Postby Ontorisa » Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:28 pm

Aden Protectorate wrote:
Heraklea- wrote:Well, we have more fighters than we can shake a stick at at this point. A few more business men or diplomats wouldn't go wrong for a merchant house. He doesn't have to be completely incompetent as a fighter, but be focused in another direction.

Or do something completely different. Or the same.

Perhaps someone similar to Enrico Dandolo except in a more diplomatic role. Yes I like.


Who?

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Postby Lunas Legion » Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:30 pm

Character Name: Kathrina Syanlins

Nickname (If Any): Kat

Titles (If Any): None.

Age: 11

Appearance: Kathrina is rather short, standing roughly 4 and a half foot, with long blond hair and icy blue eyes. She lacks curves of any significance, which annoys her somewhat as a sign of her immaturity, and weighs roughly 75 lb.

Personality: Kathrina has a waspish tongue, quick to insult or harm others if the opportunity is presented, but otherwise is normally rather quiet and reserved, preferring to remain in the background unless an opportunity presents itself due to her extremely cautious and meticulous nature.

Strengths:

-Age- Although also her greatest weakness, Kathrina's age means that others often overlook her and that she can sneak around easily, allowing her to overhear many things she otherwise wouldn't.

-Birth- As the eldest child of the current head of the house, and depending on the method of succession used possibily the heir, Kathrina can usually use this to obtain whatever she wants within the house, as long as it isn't too dangerous, stupid or overridden by another member of the house.

-Planning- Due to her extremely cautious nature, Kathrina has mastered the art, as far as she is concerned, of modifying plans on the fly and making them. Although probably unable to outmanuver those with far more experience than herself in intrigue, she relies on that they underestimate her to ensure she doesn't become a target.

Weaknesses (Minimum 2):

-Age/Sex- Her young age and gender means that few people are likely to take her views particularly seriously on any matter than is vaguely seriously, and often ignore her altogether.

-Cruelty- Katrina is unable to resist taking a jab at someone, even when circumstances suggest otherwise, and this can and will get her into trouble.

Equipment (If Any): A jewelled knife.

Biography: Kathrina is the eldest (and currently only) child of Aser Synalins, head of the House Synalins. This has, so far, resulted in her being overly spoiled, with a former diplomat as her personal tutor, which has also resulted in her being rather intelligent for her age, if somewhat isolated socially, and with an expectation of if she wants something, she'll get her way. Eventually.

She doesn't really care for the various uncles and cousins scattered around; she pays nosy no attention, them being too old, too serious or too boring for her to bother with, and those few that aren't are normally too busy dealing with something else for them to be involved with her.

Relation to the Syanlins Family: Daughter of Aser Synalins and Elisak Vocanni

RP Examples:

Anything else we should know?
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Postby Ontorisa » Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:32 pm

Lunas Legion wrote:Snip


Nice to see that you don't need any examples :P

Thoughts about the age though. Aser is only 29 years old which means he would have had a kid when he was 15. Sorry, but unlikely. Tone her age down Lunas and I'll look at it again.

Sorry :(

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Postby Lunas Legion » Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:34 pm

Ontorisa wrote:
Lunas Legion wrote:Snip


Nice to see that you don't need any examples :P

Thoughts about the age though. Aser is only 29 years old which means he would have had a kid when he was 15. Sorry, but unlikely. Tone her age down Lunas and I'll look at it again.

Sorry :(


Dropped the age down to 11.
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Postby Ontorisa » Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:35 pm

Lunas Legion wrote:
Ontorisa wrote:
Nice to see that you don't need any examples :P

Thoughts about the age though. Aser is only 29 years old which means he would have had a kid when he was 15. Sorry, but unlikely. Tone her age down Lunas and I'll look at it again.

Sorry :(


Dropped the age down to 11.


Looks good. You gonna do the bio, right?

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Postby Lunas Legion » Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:37 pm

Ontorisa wrote:
Lunas Legion wrote:
Dropped the age down to 11.


Looks good. You gonna do the bio, right?


Yup. Since I have nothing better to do (beyond sleep, but sod that), and I'm waiting for other people to post in other RPs, and there's only 11 years to cover in terms of bio (which means it probably isn't going to be that long, since there isn't much to cover) it shouldn't take that long to write.
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Postby Ontorisa » Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:40 pm

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Looks good. You gonna do the bio, right?


Yup. Since I have nothing better to do (beyond sleep, but sod that), and I'm waiting for other people to post in other RPs, and there's only 11 years to cover in terms of bio (which means it probably isn't going to be that long, since there isn't much to cover) it shouldn't take that long to write.


Gotcha, I'll wait for the completed app then :)

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Postby Heraklea- » Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:43 pm

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Aden Protectorate wrote:Perhaps someone similar to Enrico Dandolo except in a more diplomatic role. Yes I like.


Who?

Doge of Venice in the 12th century, sacked Constantinople during the Fourth Crusade 'cause fuck the Orthodox Church.

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Postby Aden Protectorate » Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:43 pm

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Aden Protectorate wrote:Perhaps someone similar to Enrico Dandolo except in a more diplomatic role. Yes I like.


Who?

A Blind Venetian Doge who lived to the age of 90 something, who was known for his shrewd, calculating and diplomatic mind. And for leading the Sack of Constantinople during the Fourth Crusade, when he was 90.

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Postby Ontorisa » Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:44 pm

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Ontorisa wrote:
Who?

A Blind Venetian Doge who lived to the age of 90 something, who was known for his shrewd, calculating and diplomatic mind. And for leading the Sack of Constantinople during the Fourth Crusade, when he was 90.


What a baller.

Anyways, so you're going for a blind cousin or something? :P

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