A New Creation (OOC/CLOSED/God-RP)

[The NAR]

What did he do to Adrian??

Nothing as far as I'm aware...

He said: "After what he did to Adrian"

[Bentus]

Nothing as far as I'm aware...

He said: "After what he did to Adrian"

He tried to app for him in the archive no biggie. At the moment nothing has happenned to Adrian IC-wise unless you guys have agreed on something.

[The NAR]

He said: "After what he did to Adrian"

He tried to app for him in the archive no biggie. At the moment nothing has happenned to Adrian IC-wise unless you guys have agreed on something.

He made an app for Adrian? Fuck no he can't do that

[Bentus]

He tried to app for him in the archive no biggie. At the moment nothing has happenned to Adrian IC-wise unless you guys have agreed on something.

He made an app for Adrian? Fuck no he can't do that

I've got to come up with a better name for these things than 'app'.

It's more of a fictional encyclopedia entry? Maybe? Doesn't have the same ring to it. He can't RP as the character, it's just a little synopsis about him. Although I would rather it came from the person who created the char in the first place. Could have more detail that way.

[Kaoiluja]

He made an app for Adrian? Fuck no he can't do that

I've got to come up with a better name for these things than 'app'.

It's more of a fictional encyclopedia entry? Maybe? Doesn't have the same ring to it. He can't RP as the character, it's just a little synopsis about him. Although I would rather it came from the person who created the char in the first place. Could have more detail that way.

how about NC entry for those things you are talking about. its a shortened version of Encyclopedia entry.

[JRolo]

Sorry, I wasn't intending on owning the character, just archiving him. I deleted the post, just in case.

[The NAR]

Ill make one

[Bentus]

Sorry, I wasn't intending on owning the character, just archiving him. I deleted the post, just in case.

No harm done. And I think will start using 'NC entry' The idea is that the 'apps' get accepted in the OOC and then stashed in the archive along with other little background information that we come up with to fluff things out.

[quote=Dragonreach's TG'd app]
Aragorox Morz
God's Powers- Protector(this is basically Athena in War terms, in Contrast to More Aggresive ares, in short Ares=offensive war Athena=self defence war)And Freedom
Mortal Form:
Click to hide...
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Divine Form
Click to hide...
(http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb2013 ... irness.jpg )

God's Bio: Aragorox was born of Turmoil and Opression, He was born as effort of universe to balance things , and thefore born as opposite of these. His followers are Protected an Guided when needed, but he trust them to choose their own way as long as its in compliance with Freedom and Protection.always removes them when he finds out. He is snarky,But Determined and Caring.
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Ok, accepted - but like we talked about, use this as a chance to work on your writing Practice makes perfect.
And everyone else, if you've got advice for DragonReach whilst we're moving along - feel free to lay it on him.

[The NAR]

(Changing his name)

Demigod Name: Perseus (Percy) Maxon
Mortal Parent: Sonna
Godly Parent: Ashur
Description:
Nation/Faction: Septiman Empire
Homeland/City: Thessia
Role: Legate in the Imperial 1st Legion
Powers: Blessing of Ashur, gives him the ability to change into the Werewolf. Intense Military Expertise, Combat Prowess, great hunting abilities, a telepathic connection to all animals.
Bio:

Percy was born in the powerhouse of the Western Provinces: Thessia. His mother, Sonna, a poor floor-sweeper, fell in love with the God of the Hunt, Ashur, while he was visiting the city. One thing led to another, and Sonna would become pregnant with the son of Ashur. 9 Months later, Sonna would give birth to the child that would be named Perseus. Over the next 5 months, Sonna and Ashur would raise their son together, but it would soon become apparent that Ashur was too attached to his son and mistress, and was neglecting his duties as a God. Ashur had no option but to abandon Percy and his mother.

Sonna would soon fall into a deep depression and die when Percy was merely a year old. Motherless, Percy was accepted into Thessia's Maxon Clan, and soon was accepted as part of the Maxon Clan. The Maxon Clan was a heavy supporter of Imperial Rule over Thessia. This was important because during this time, some Thessians wanted to revolt and leave the Empire. Their opposing Clan, the Hardin Clan, supported the Independence of Thessia. The tensions during Percy's childhood and teenage years would shape him as a person.

By age 13, Percy was deeply in love with a girl named Jenna. She was his age and absolutely beautiful. They spent each day together, visiting the Waterfall or the fountains, or going up and looking at the Castle and talking to the Guards. The only problem was that Jenna was the daughter of Omar Hardin, the Clan Chief of the Hardin Clan. When he discovered that his daughter and a Maxon were in love, he forbid his daughter from seeing Percy. Maxon Chief Marcus felt sorry for Percy, who was ripped away from love, but if he didn't forbid it, there would be a War between the Maxon and Hardin Clans.

However, both Jenna and Percy continued to see each other, which led to Jenna becoming pregnant. Her father found out, and in a rage, killed set Clan House Maxon ablaze, and soon amassed his followers to begin the revolution against the Empire. The Maxons and the Hardins went to war, and blood filled the streets while Imperial and Rebel armies clashed around Thessia. The fate of the Revolution depended on victory INSIDE Thessia's walls...

In the midst of the chaos, as war terrorized everyone, Percy watched a Maxon Arrow accidentally hit the love of his life... killing her. Percy lost his unborn child and Jenna as well. Enraged, Percy went berserk, transforming into the very Divine Form of his father: the Werewolf. Almost completely by himself, he slaughtered over 100 Hardins and their followers; this included Omar Hardin. The beast being released scared everyone, yet it ensured that the Empire held onto Thessia.

When the dust settles, and the bloodshed ended, the Maxons would make one final step towards stomping out Rebellion: he would set fire to the Hardin Clan House, and it would burn to the ground along with any hope of an independent Thessia. Despite his actions that helped a Maxon Clan Victory, Percy was largely blamed for the outbreak of the conflict that became known to the entire world as the "Thessian Civil War". Clan Chief Marcus was angered, yet proud of Percy. He wanted to grant him a pardon, but most others believed he should be punished.

Marcus gave the 17 year old boy two options: Abandon the Maxon name and leave Thessia forever, or enlist in the Imperial Legion and regain his respect and honor. With his beloved and baby dead, the Clan was all that Percy had left, and he didn't want to abandon it. He enlisted in the Imperial Legion as the Giants began to rise in the north.

Percy, a simple Legionaire, was sent with the 1st Legion to fight a large band of giants that were attacking and destroying entire villages in the Northeast Provinces, mainly "Daxtra". This conflict turned out to be very bloody when an Army of O'lum worshippers supporting the Giants clashed with the Imperial Legionaires. 2 years of war followed, but Percy would kill the Chieftain of the Giants and defeat the Army of Death. He returned to Thessia with the rank of Centurion, and was widely celebrated. He had regained his city's respect, and had gained honor from the Clan.

For 4 years, Percy remained in Thessia, serving as a Maxon Clan Elder, member of the city council, and Thessian Guard. He was, quite frankly, a hero. However, 4 years after his return to Thessia, he was requested personally by the Emperor himself to return to duty with the rank of Legate, and serve as a Battlefield Commander, leading a Division of Legionaires of the 1st Legion into the Desert Tribelands to obliterate the growing Vampire Army which threatened the safety of the Empire and all other nations. This war took 2 years and cost 6,000 Imperial lives, but Percy saw to it that their leader, the Dark Lord Destro, was killed.

With victory, Percy was given the highest metal of merit by the Emperor: The Golden Claw. He came home to Thessia, where he is now, a hero to the core. However, he hates taking credit for actions and victories that his men, the Legionaires, claimed...

Now, with the Gods nearly at War, and the Empire at risk, Percy will do anything to protect the Empire...

WIP

[In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam]

Artefact Name: Hell's teeth
Creator Deity: O'lim
Artefact Description: O'lim's Plague to humanity for their hubris
Generates a army of undead warriors. They have no mind, and can barely use their weapons. Basically slightly intelligent Zombies.

Artefact Name: Life eater
Creator Deity: O'lim
Artefact Description:
This turns souls into pure god energy. The soul can never go to heaven/hell.

Artefact Name:
Creator Deity:
Artefact Description:

I have a artefact.


Demigod Name: o'lim o'g'li/Xudo, shoh
Mortal Parent: Unknown
Godly Parent: O'lim
Description: White hair. Pitch black skin. Completely white eyes. 6'3"
Nation/Faction: Elder One empire
Homeland/City: R'yleh
Role:Leader/highest priest
Powers: Cannot be killed. Can kill people and use their power. Some power of destruction.
Bio:

o'g'li was born in R'yleh to an unknown parent. He is so different from his fellow Elder Ones, and his early accident, where he fell into a fire, but was completely unharmed, attracted much attention from the fellow Elder Ones. When he turned 7 he was offered the opportunity to become a high priest. When he turned 20 he completed his training. At this point O'lim came and told the high priests that he was his son. HE ascended to the throne at age 25. He looks like what he was at 27, even though he is 200 years old.

[Bentus]

Artefact Name: Hell's teeth
Creator Deity: O'lim
Artefact Description: O'lim's Plague to humanity for their hubris
Generates a army of undead warriors. They have no mind, and can barely use their weapons. Basically slightly intelligent Zombies.

Artefact Name: Life eater
Creator Deity: O'lim
Artefact Description:
This turns souls into pure god energy. The soul can never go to heaven/hell.

Artefact Name:
Creator Deity:
Artefact Description:

I have a artefact.


Demigod Name: o'lim o'g'li/Xudo, shoh
Mortal Parent: Unknown
Godly Parent: O'lim
Description: White hair. Pitch black skin. Completely white eyes. 6'3"
Nation/Faction: Elder One empire
Homeland/City: R'yleh
Role:Leader/highest priest
Powers: Cannot be killed. Can kill people and use their power. Some power of destruction.
Bio:

o'g'li was born in R'yleh to an unknown parent. He is so different from his fellow Elder Ones, and his early accident, where he fell into a fire, but was completely unharmed, attracted much attention from the fellow Elder Ones. When he turned 7 he was offered the opportunity to become a high priest. When he turned 20 he completed his training. At this point O'lim came and told the high priests that he was his son. HE ascended to the throne at age 25. He looks like what he was at 27, even though he is 200 years old.

I've got some issues with the 'Cannot be killed' bit. I know O'lim is the God of Death, but it strikes me having a ton of OP-potential. Out of curiosity too, what do the Elder Ones look like? When you said fungal reproduction I thought Orks but not 100% sure.

[In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam]

I have a artefact.


Demigod Name: o'lim o'g'li/Xudo, shoh
Mortal Parent: Unknown
Godly Parent: O'lim
Description: White hair. Pitch black skin. Completely white eyes. 6'3"
Nation/Faction: Elder One empire
Homeland/City: R'yleh
Role:Leader/highest priest
Powers: Cannot be killed. Can kill people and use their power. Some power of destruction.
Bio:

o'g'li was born in R'yleh to an unknown parent. He is so different from his fellow Elder Ones, and his early accident, where he fell into a fire, but was completely unharmed, attracted much attention from the fellow Elder Ones. When he turned 7 he was offered the opportunity to become a high priest. When he turned 20 he completed his training. At this point O'lim came and told the high priests that he was his son. HE ascended to the throne at age 25. He looks like what he was at 27, even though he is 200 years old.

I've got some issues with the 'Cannot be killed' bit. I know O'lim is the God of Death, but it strikes me having a ton of OP-potential. Out of curiosity too, what do the Elder Ones look like? When you said fungal reproduction I thought Orks but not 100% sure.

I could have it be he can be reborn.


What about my artifacts?

[The Forsworn Knights]

Where is this archive you people speak of?

[In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam]

Nation/Faction name: Free Shogoth Empire
Race(s): Shogoth
Patron God(s): O'lim, Brynja, Syeli, Havh
Current Leader(s): Hive mind
Brief History:
Shogoths are telepathic
created by the Elder Ones, they were servants. Some broke free form the chains and fled. They created their civ in the most hellish place they could find. They have no natural reproduction, but Artificial is very, very easy (because they are basically protists).
They trekked from the step-natus area to their current home, taking 10 years to do so. When they got there they found some native tribes, which they had to exterminate. As they were weak in numbers that took around 10 years to do so. They have had some trouble with wandering nomads, and they are bad at creating cities so they mostly live in underground cities.

Geographical area and key features:
Big hellish area above the easter city states
Other details: (i.e. government structure, military, preferred neighbours, interesting culture, use this section however you want)
Miners
Industrialized (kinda)


Nation/Faction name: Mi-go Empire
Race(s): Mi-go
Patron God(s): O'lim, Cthulhu
Current Leader(s): Chraxz The XIV
Brief History:
The Mi-Go are the closest living relatives to the Elder Ones. They came to Earth with the Elder Ones but they differed in where they lived so they started changing in the way they looked. They are not as much of sea farers as the Elder Ones, but they do, do some. They have an intense rivalry with the grecian city states.
Geographical area and key features:
Bottom of the world, connect to western ocean.
Other details: (i.e. government structure, military, preferred neighbours, interesting culture, use this section however you want)

[Bentus]

I've got some issues with the 'Cannot be killed' bit. I know O'lim is the God of Death, but it strikes me having a ton of OP-potential. Out of curiosity too, what do the Elder Ones look like? When you said fungal reproduction I thought Orks but not 100% sure.

I could have it be he can be reborn.


What about my artifacts?

How on Earth does one of those things have white hair...

The Life Eater looks alright (I'm assuming there's only one at this point), but don't over-estimate the amount of power that it would give you. For it to have a major, long-lasting effect for a God you'd have to kill a lot of people. Emphasis on 'a lot'. Having a dedicated life-long follower would give you more power than simply killing some random dude with it overall.

As for the Hell's teeth, accepted but don't use it excessively. You can't spawn endless hordes using it as an excuse, others may get their hands on it, and bring in a weakness - say if the person wielding it dies, so to do the hordes. And the size of the army depends upon the strength of the person wielding it, so that means it can't form an entire army capable of conquering a nation on its own by a long shot.

Nation/Faction name: Free Shogoth Empire
Race(s): Shogoth
Patron God(s): O'lim, Brynja, Syeli, Havh
Current Leader(s): Hive mind
Brief History:
Shogoths are telepathic
created by the Elder Ones, they were servants. Some broke free form the chains and fled. They created their civ in the most hellish place they could find. They have no natural reproduction, but Artificial is very, very easy (because they are basically protists).
They trekked from the step-natus area to their current home, taking 10 years to do so. When they got there they found some native tribes, which they had to exterminate. As they were weak in numbers that took around 10 years to do so. They have had some trouble with wandering nomads, and they are bad at creating cities so they mostly live in underground cities.

Geographical area and key features:
Big hellish area above the easter city states
Other details: (i.e. government structure, military, preferred neighbours, interesting culture, use this section however you want)
Miners
Industrialized (kinda)


Nation/Faction name: Mi-go Empire
Race(s): Mi-go
Patron God(s): O'lim, Cthulhu
Current Leader(s): Chraxz The XIV
Brief History:
The Mi-Go are the closest living relatives to the Elder Ones. They came to Earth with the Elder Ones but they differed in where they lived so they started changing in the way they looked. They are not as much of sea farers as the Elder Ones, but they do, do some. They have an intense rivalry with the grecian city states.
Geographical area and key features:
Bottom of the world, connect to western ocean.
Other details: (i.e. government structure, military, preferred neighbours, interesting culture, use this section however you want)

I don't like the references to worlds beyond the one that the RP focuses on, I know it's been done before - just saying that I don't like it and would prefer not to have it.

Also, no referencing Cthulhu as a patron God unless someone makes one with that name

[In Gentem Et De Libris Scientiam]

Your god is basically Cthulhu..
So are the civilizations accepted?
The thing is that the son of death IS NOT a elder One. He's an ordinary human.
Im thinking about having 2 life eaters. One for the sun of god, one for god.

[Kalbana]

So much stuff is happening...

I'm barely even keeping up...

Can somebody please explain to me all that has happened so far!

[Bentus]

Your god is basically Cthulhu..
So are the civilizations accepted?
The thing is that the son of death IS NOT a elder One. He's an ordinary human.
Im thinking about having 2 life eaters. One for the sun of god, one for god.

Two life eaters are fine. As for the civilizations, don't see why not - so accepted. Just don't make them too overpowered And could you describe the other one physically a bit? Just so that I have a bit of a mental image of what to imagine during posts and the like.

And really? Cthulhu? Never read any of the stories or background surrounding that. I'll be sure to give it a glance. In that case your guys can refer to her as 'Cthulhu' - no problem calling a God by another name - but just make it explicit in the app that it's refering to Ornara.

[The Starlight]

I would like the idea of a poll, so if you could put that up in the archive, Bentus, that would be great.

[Bentus]

I would like the idea of a poll, so if you could put that up in the archive, Bentus, that would be great.

Done. I've set it to run for a day and haven't included everybody - if you'd like someone else included just bring them up here.

Also, it's for OOC voting purposes. For example, IC Ornara is supporting Lodav, but OOC I'm voting Vardaelia and Terengeryell (please tell me I got that right).

[The Starlight]

I would like the idea of a poll, so if you could put that up in the archive, Bentus, that would be great.

Done. I've set it to run for a day and haven't included everybody - if you'd like someone else included just bring them up here.

Also, it's for OOC voting purposes. For example, IC Ornara is supporting Lodav, but OOC I'm voting Vardaelia and Terengeryell (please tell me I got that right).

Almost!
You got Vardaelia right, but the T god is Tengeryel, I think.
That one's tough.

[Kalbana]

Okay, I didn't really know what to post, so I just had Keralia materialize in Caelum's throne room

[Aden Protectorate]

Done. I've set it to run for a day and haven't included everybody - if you'd like someone else included just bring them up here.

Also, it's for OOC voting purposes. For example, IC Ornara is supporting Lodav, but OOC I'm voting Vardaelia and Terengeryell (please tell me I got that right).

Almost!
You got Vardaelia right, but the T god is Tengeryel, I think.
That one's tough.

It's Tengeryel, but Tengeryell is close enough.

[Bentus]

Almost!
You got Vardaelia right, but the T god is Tengeryel, I think.
That one's tough.

It's Tengeryel, but Tengeryell is close enough.

[Aden Protectorate]

It's Tengeryel, but Tengeryell is close enough.

There, there. You'll get it next time.