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EVERYTHING.

Serah wrote:EVERYTHING.

Shit.....

Icrum wrote:

Serah wrote:EVERYTHING.

Shit.....

We got past the speech the headmaster makes and are now in the ballroom scene.

Aidannadia wrote:

Icrum wrote:Shit.....

We got past the speech the headmaster makes and are now in the ballroom scene.

Ballroom scene?

Icrum wrote:

Aidannadia wrote:We got past the speech the headmaster makes and are now in the ballroom scene.

Ballroom scene?

In the show, they all slept in the ballroom on the first night before they got their dorms and were assigned teams.

We need to descend further into the RP. We are not far enough, we're not even knee deep in that story.

It may not be the place, but I feel like the people in this Rp are like one big family. Stormwrath is like the parent that always wants to be around but cannot because various problems, Icrum is the away for work parent, Nachfolgia is the big brother in college with little to not time on his hands, Taigawa is that sibling who was in a coma with Zharjan for two years and just woke up, I'm that weird little kid playing around trying to keep everyone together, Aidannadia is the honorary family member who comes and tries to help around, Arvenia is like the edgy cousin and Neo ORB is like that uncle whom you can joke with all day.

Serah wrote:It may not be the place, but I feel like the people in this Rp are like one big family. Stormwrath is like the parent that always wants to be around but cannot because various problems, Icrum is the away for work parent, Nachfolgia is the big brother in college with little to not time on his hands, Taigawa is that sibling who was in a coma with Zharjan for two years and just woke up, I'm that weird little kid playing around trying to keep everyone together, Aidannadia is the honorary family member who comes and tries to help around, Arvenia is like the edgy cousin and Neo ORB is like that uncle whom you can joke with all day.

You forgot Kal.

Well you missed the amphitheater scene and now we are in the ballroom scene.

Stormwrath wrote:Well you missed the amphitheater scene and now we are in the ballroom scene.

I finally got all my work out of the way and I shouldn't experience a distraction like this until finals, that being said I still have to make an appearance. I'll try to make it look as though I'm late but need to make sure that's ok for the purposes of the RP. >.>

Taigawa wrote:

Taigawa wrote:

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CHARACTER INFORMATION
Name: Kayla Disan
Age: 18
Sex: Female
Race: [ ] Human [X ] Faunus
Animal Traits (Omit if human): Cat ears, Paw-like hands, retractable claws and a Tail
Biography:
Kayla Disan is the heiress to the Disan family fortune and is a friend of Morila Siari, having finacially supported the White Fang and Morila's family while the former was part of the organisation and it was still peaceful. When the White Fang became violent, she withdrew her funding of the organisation and continued to support Morila and her father as the latter spent his funds to aquire the materials used to construct Morila's Silver-steel alloy Greatsword. She also used her family connections to help get herself sent to Beacon Acdemy in order to accompny Morila and introduce herself to the fox-like Faunus in person, which led to their budding friendship. She maintains close ties with her family and contacts them whenever possible.

She knows the danger posed by the Grimm to the stability, peace, and safety of civilization and seeks to defend the kingdom of Vale from it's enemy. Like her friend Morila, she studied enchantment and used the knowledge gained from those studies to improve her weapon's abilities and damage. Unlike the former however, she learned healing magic and, although her skill in that particular ability is rather weak, she seeks to use it in defense of those she holds dear.

Appearance:
5' 7" tall with white cat ears, red hair with green eyes, Paw-like hands hiding retractable claws, slight muscular build with a long white tail.

COMBAT INFORMATION
Weapon: Mechanized trasformable Shotgun/blade (Godhammer)
Appearance:The Shotgun form is tripple berreled, with the berrel itself being plated with gold, with the but of the rifle being made of mahogany. The Blade for resembles a traditional longsword with the handle being gold-plated and inlaid with a saphire.
Capabilities: The weapon is great for close combat in either form, though at a distance the Shotgun's damage is minimal at best. However, It is a versitile weapon, being able to quickly switch from ranged to close combat within seconds.

The regular form of this weapon generates noticable recoil when fired that can knock an weaker-then-average person to the ground.

Semblance: Healing Life drain

Kayla can heal allies close to her of minor wounds; the amount healed is directly proportional to the damage she does in battle. However, while healing allies, Kayla can only focus her attacks on a single target, leaving herself vulnarable to being flanked.

OOC INFORMATION
RP Activity: High, On Daily.
RP Example (link or one shot):
Did you read the rules? Yes

#RWBY RP Application
Do not remove this tag. It helps us find apps.

This is my app to replace Lingria's role in team TAMK.

Age edited.

Anything else I should change in this?

Taigawa wrote:

Taigawa wrote:Age edited.

Anything else I should change in this?

Ummm, semblance. I don't see how negating gun recoil is a semblance.

Stormwrath wrote:

Taigawa wrote:Anything else I should change in this?

Ummm, semblance. I don't see how negating gun recoil is a semblance.

In that case I will have to Change it. Maybe add something like I did to my main character. I will do that and then see.

And additional effect added. Is that good or should I change it again?

Taigawa wrote:

Stormwrath wrote:Ummm, semblance. I don't see how negating gun recoil is a semblance.

In that case I will have to Change it. Maybe add something like I did to my main character. I will do that and then see.

And additional effect added. Is that good or should I change it again?

Change it again. Having enchanted rounds doesn't make as much difference as having Dust rounds.

Though, what may be a problem is that the person who was supposed to be the A in my team hasn't been posting at all. He posted one reply and that was it, shall I do another app to make up for the free space? I already have one character that I was working one for my other story and I just have to twist around some of his powers but that will be rather easy.
I'm saying this because we are getting closer and closer to the team naming and the introduction.

Icrum wrote:

Serah wrote:It may not be the place, but I feel like the people in this Rp are like one big family. Stormwrath is like the parent that always wants to be around but cannot because various problems, Icrum is the away for work parent, Nachfolgia is the big brother in college with little to not time on his hands, Taigawa is that sibling who was in a coma with Zharjan for two years and just woke up, I'm that weird little kid playing around trying to keep everyone together, Aidannadia is the honorary family member who comes and tries to help around, Arvenia is like the edgy cousin and Neo ORB is like that uncle whom you can joke with all day.

You forgot Kal.

I don't know him enough to make assumptions that could be even remotely precise. I apologize.

Stormwrath wrote:

Taigawa wrote:In that case I will have to Change it. Maybe add something like I did to my main character. I will do that and then see.

And additional effect added. Is that good or should I change it again?

Change it again. Having enchanted rounds doesn't make as much difference as having Dust rounds.

Change it to what? Only difference between her and my other character now is weapon choice, background and her being feline-based...

I want to avoid making her and Morila have essentially the same abilities seperated only by weapon choice.

Any suggestions on how to improve it are welcome.

Taigawa wrote:

Stormwrath wrote:Change it again. Having enchanted rounds doesn't make as much difference as having Dust rounds.

Change it to what? Only difference between her and my other character now is weapon choice, background and her being feline-based...

I want to avoid making her and Morila have essentially the same abilities seperated only by weapon choice.

Any suggestions on how to improve it are welcome.

A semblance usually has something to do with the theme or personality of the character, so if you could kind of describe Kayla perhaps you could find something that fit?

Aidannadia wrote:

Taigawa wrote:Change it to what? Only difference between her and my other character now is weapon choice, background and her being feline-based...

I want to avoid making her and Morila have essentially the same abilities seperated only by weapon choice.

Any suggestions on how to improve it are welcome.

A semblance usually has something to do with the theme or personality of the character, so if you could kind of describe Kayla perhaps you could find something that fit?

I will try since apparently ten lines were not enough. That and I have more Ideas for her now.

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CHARACTER INFORMATION
Name: Kayla Disan
Age: 18
Sex: Female
Race: [ ] Human [X ] Faunus
Animal Traits (Omit if human): Cat ears, Paw-like hands, retractable claws and a Tail
Biography:
Kayla Disan is the heiress to the Disan family fortune and is a friend of Morila Siari, having finacially supported the White Fang and Morila's family while the former was part of the organisation and it was still peaceful. When the White Fang became violent, she withdrew her funding of the organisation and continued to support Morila and her father as the latter spent his funds to aquire the materials used to construct Morila's Silver-steel alloy Greatsword. She also used her family connections to help get herself sent to Beacon Acdemy in order to accompny Morila and introduce herself to the fox-like Faunus in person, which led to their budding friendship. She maintains close ties with her family and contacts them whenever possible.

She knows the danger posed by the Grimm to the stability, peace, and safety of civilization and seeks to defend the kingdom of Vale from it's enemy. Like her friend Morila, she studied enchantment and used the knowledge gained from those studies to improve her weapon's abilities and damage. Unlike the former however, she learned healing magic and, although her skill in that particular ability is rather weak, she seeks to use it in defense of those she holds dear.

Appearance:
5' 7" tall with white cat ears, red hair with green eyes, Paw-like hands hiding retractable claws, slight muscular build with a long white tail.

COMBAT INFORMATION
Weapon: Mechanized trasformable Shotgun/blade (Godhammer)
Appearance:The Shotgun form is tripple berreled, with the berrel itself being plated with gold, with the but of the rifle being made of mahogany. The Blade for resembles a traditional longsword with the handle being gold-plated and inlaid with a saphire.
Capabilities: The weapon is great for close combat in either form, though at a distance the Shotgun's damage is minimal at best. However, It is a versitile weapon, being able to quickly switch from ranged to close combat within seconds.

The regular form of this weapon generates noticable recoil when fired that can knock an weaker-then-average person to the ground.

Semblance: Healing Life drain

Kayla can heal allies close to her of minor wounds; the amount healed is directly proportional to the damage she does in battle. However, while healing allies, Kayla can only focus her attacks on a single target, leaving herself vulnarable to being flanked.

OOC INFORMATION
RP Activity: High, On Daily.
RP Example (link or one shot):
Did you read the rules? Yes

#RWBY RP Application
Do not remove this tag. It helps us find apps.[/box]
Better or should I change it more?

And still, with the same problem, no one posted anything.

Hey man I've been working.
I have the next one almost done.

Ah, I apologize, I just found it weird that not even the admins posted anything. I'm sorry if it sounded aggressive. Also, I do know that you are working, I'm not going to blame you for living your life.

I made a new post on the IC.

No one-liners.